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Just L

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minus border, at least that kind of border
kill text or replace it
its placed kinda wrong
mask sharpen a little
erase some space stock parts its literally everywhere
blur these cyan things
damn they remind me of something xd
it will give you little more depth
do not know why you did make this so big
if you make art big you must make every detail perfect and its harder
also im not fan of light sources in corners :\
but its not so bad for this one
overall shading/highlighting is good
good work)
 

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minus border, at least that kind of border
kill text or replace it
its placed kinda wrong
mask sharpen a little
erase some space stock parts its literally everywhere
blur these cyan things
damn they remind me of something xd
it will give you little more depth
do not know why you did make this so big
if you make art big you must make every detail perfect and its harder
also im not fan of light sources in corners :\
but its not so bad for this one
overall shading/highlighting is good
good work)
So much complain, eh? Everyone has there own taste you know.xdThanks by the way.
 

Just L

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So much complain, eh? Everyone has there own taste you know.xdThanks by the way.


theres no point to write 'this is awesome' or something like that
that will make no sense
nothings perfect and cnc is the way to be as close to perfection as possible
 

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I can give you the .psd file, that is if you can teach me how to upload it. xd
email me @ [email protected]

u just attach the file :)

minus border, at least that kind of border
kill text or replace it
its placed kinda wrong
mask sharpen a little
erase some space stock parts its literally everywhere
blur these cyan things
damn they remind me of something xd
it will give you little more depth
do not know why you did make this so big
if you make art big you must make every detail perfect and its harder
also im not fan of light sources in corners :\
but its not so bad for this one
overall shading/highlighting is good
good work)
i agree with some of these things...your right about the text and the light source... also good to see that its been put positively (thanks for the link - read it - makes good sense)... hahahaha sperm....

So much complain, eh? Everyone has there own taste you know.xdThanks by the way.
in regards to Just L's comment - hes just helping you out :) your not gonna improve if all you get is 'good job'. Listen to what he says and make it better next time :)
 
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Well let's see, I don't mean to be rude or anything but basically it's just a bunch of things simply thrown together. Idk where to start..quite messy, no flow, no depth... xD You need to do a lot better than that.
 
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