[Doton] Rock 'n' Roll with Khalil senpai

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After an ackownledging nod Tenten runs in the bunshins direction, after doing a rat seal rock sections form around him, constantly spinning, forming a living wall, leaving him no way to escape but up.

Ehhh! I won't let ya!

As soon as the bunshin jumps upwards Tenten concetrates a respectable amount of chakra to her hands, the rock wall sides suddenly burst twice the size, seemingly crushing the bunshin from all sides, in an remarkable speed.


(Doton: Ganban Kyu) - Earth Release: Bedrock Coffin

Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: After performing the Rat hand seal, the user to control multiple sections of rock and move them around their opponent. The user then forms two gigantic sections that crush the opponent.

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How can the technique be used in battle (combos with other moves/skils, creative use, etc):


For me it seems like a great finisher against lower ranked opponents, in a collaboration with a restriction jutsu where my bunshin pulls the oponents legs and torso underground.

Advatanges:

Strong against katon/suiton. Effective against drained out and restricted opponents.

Dis:


Weak against raiton/higher rank doton, higher rank fuuton and cancelled out by same rank fuuton. Can be anticipated by higher ranked shinobis since it requires a handseal.

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Tenten stops for a brief moment, noticing that the bunshin is moving and he is still intact
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Hmm, enormous rocks crushing him down didn't stop his bunshin...Well he is a top tier shinobi afterall.

Hmm. Let's try this!


She points towards the bunshin which is jumping upwards on the rock debris the jutsu left behind.

She concetrates doton chakra to entirety of her body, rapidly sinking into the ground.


I can sense senpai and his bunshin..Heh, over there!


(Doton: Moguragakure no Jutsu) – Earth Release: Hiding like a mole technique

Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user changes earth into fine sand by channeling chakra into it, allowing the user to dig through it like a mole. While underground one can sense what is happening on the surface and use the information to launch a surprise attack on the enemy. Once can also hide deep in the ground, escaping to a depth where the enemy cant reach. It also appears that after digging, the ground can be returned to its original state, leaving no trace of where the user entered the earth. While inside the earth, the user cannot make handseals and can only use Earth techniques below C-Rank. If he tries to do a higher ranked technique, he'll disrupt the Hiding like a mole technique and be left crushed.

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How can the technique be used in battle (combos with other moves/skils, creative use, etc):


It is a great sensor/stealth tech for doton masters, since the user can sense opponents and move freely underground.

Advatanges:

Great stealth technique. One can easily make way and hide. As an attack tech it's only strong in collaboration with other techniques.

Dis:

Weak against raiton and other doton users, if countered with the simplest raiton tech the user can be crushed or stuck underground.

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Tenten digs her way underneath the bunnshin, silently emerging from the ground few meters behind him, connecting her right palm with the ground.

Few spikes erupt from the ground beneath the bunshin, immediatly poofing him out.

(Doton: Ganchūsō) - Earth Release: Stone Spikes

Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: This technique lets the user create a few rock pillars that will protrude from the ground to skew the target. The rock pillars will even pass through obstacles to reach their target if these are less dense. The pillars/spikes can be done in any earthen surface, including other earth techniques of the user.

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How can the technique be used in battle (combos with other moves/skils, creative use, etc):


In a collab with bunshin whom pulls the opponent in the ground, holding his head above. While I impale the opponents head with spikes.

Advatanges:

A good suprise attack, good to use also as a finisher against a restricted opponent. Strong against katon/suiton or below C-ranked doton

Dis:

Easily nullified by raiton, or canceled/shattered by high rank fuuton.

She walks towards her senpai with her thumbs up.

Ehhh senpaii, easy, peasy
 

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Awesome! no questions?


another easy jutsu
(Doton: Yochi no Douyou) - Earth Release: World Shaking
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will concentrate and release their chakra into the ground to create a small tremer that can result in making the enemies lose their footing and fall to ground or miss the aim of a given technique.

Send doton chakra into the ground and cause the ground to shake it a little bit. Could be a nice move to interrupt someone's move. Try it on me. I will run towards you, trying to punch you, and you cause the ground to shake to knock me off balance.


(Doton: Dorosandan) – Earth Release: Mudshot
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 10
Description: The user spits a thick globule of mud at the target. If aimed correctly, it can blind the target's vision and choke them. It can also be used to create a sticky patch on the ground.
Build up doton chakra in your mouth, but in such a way to create a thick blob of mud. Spit it out, blinding my clone and cause him to choke.




(Doton: Iwa Yado Kuzushi) - Earth Release: Stone Lodging Destruction
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Descripton: This technique allows the ninja to control nearby stone and rock. This can be especially useful if in a cave or a stone lodging. The technique can loosen the rocks and cause them to come raining down on whomever is trapped inside.
Next, send channel doton chakra into and manipulate the rock in the ceiling of this cave to separate the rocks holding up the ceiling. This will make them come loose an cause the entire ceiling to collapse and fall on anyone inside. This iis the jutsu that 'killed' obito.Try this out with my clone who is standing in the cave over there!

 

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Right after his instructions, senpai's bunshin proceeds running towards Tenten. She crouches down connecting both of her palms to the ground. Momentarily mini tremors occur' causing the bunshin to loose footing on his right foot, falling backwards.

(Doton: Yochi no Douyou) - Earth Release: World Shaking

Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will concentrate and release their chakra into the ground to create a small tremer that can result in making the enemies lose their footing and fall to ground or miss the aim of a given technique.

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How can the technique be used in battle (combos with other moves/skils, creative use, etc):


The collab with the second jutsu we learned today. Mudshot seems awesome, after restricting the opponent with Mudshots I can deliver a finisher.

Advatanges:

A good disrupt/distract jutsu, usable in collab with alot of jutsus and freeform.

Dis:

Weak against simplest raiton attacks.

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As the bunshin is off balance, Tenten fires a thick ball of mud from her mouth, followed by two more. First wraps around the bunshins neck choking him, second one blinds him hitting his eyes, while he is going backwards in a momentary panick, he is shown entering a small cave, the third mudshot hits his feet, restricting his movements.


(Doton: Dorosandan) – Earth Release: Mudshot

Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 10
Description: The user spits a thick globule of mud at the target. If aimed correctly, it can blind the target's vision and choke them. It can also be used to create a sticky patch on the ground.

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How can the technique be used in battle (combos with other moves/skils, creative use, etc)


Also usable in collab with multitude of jutsus, a respectable restriction technique.

Advatanges:


Strong against katon/suiton, could probably be a finisher move against low ranked opponents, choking one to death.

Dis:


C+ doton users and raiton/fuuton techs nullify/counter this.

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Tenten smirks from the cave's entrance.

She jumps on the cave's roof.

After placing her palm on the rock, the structure is clearly seen loosening up, after a few moments of crack sounds, the entirety of the cave collapses, poofing the bunshin out.


(Doton: Iwa Yado Kuzushi) - Earth Release: Stone Lodging Destruction
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Descripton: This technique allows the ninja to control nearby stone and rock. This can be especially useful if in a cave or a stone lodging. The technique can loosen the rocks and cause them to come raining down on whomever is trapped inside.

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How can the technique be used in battle (combos with other moves/skils, creative use, etc)


The particular collab with 2 of todays jutsu's was interesting. Also a collab with Mudshot seems good enough. Restricting the opponents movements while tons of rocks come crushing down on him.

Advatanges:

Strong against katon/suiton users which do not have a counter, if a suprise factor is big enough it can be a finisher, leaving the user no time to react,

Dis:


Weak against doton users whom can travel trough the ground, raiton and doujutsus such as Kamui or Minato's interdimensional fuuinjutsus / hiraishin.

Also, this jutsu biggest dis is that it's extremely terrain dependable.

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Tenten safely lands near Khallil -sama.


Awesome jutsu's senpai. I can't wait to use them in battle!
 

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Awesome!

(Doton: Doryū Taiga) - Earth Release: Earth Flow River
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After forming the needed hand seal (Tiger), the user transforms the ground underneath their opponent into a river of mud that throws them off balance and carries them away from the user. The mud created by this technique can also be used as a medium for the Earth Release: Earth Dragon Bullet technique.
(Doton: Doryudan) - Earth Release: Earth Dragon Bullet
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: When used with Earth Release: Earth Flow River, the user will then perform the Ram → Horse → Dragon they can create a dragon-like head that fires concentrated mud bullets at an opponent. This can also be combined with a fire jutsu to shoot lava toward an opponent. The dragon can be created from other mud techniques as along as a mud source is available.
Learn these 2 jutsus with a nice combo. Perform the tiger handseal and manipulate the earth chakra beneath my clone, causing the ground to turn into a river of mud. This will throw my clone off balance, and carry him away. Then perform 3 handseals and create a dragon head out of the mud river, shooting mud bullets towards my clone.

these 2 jutsus are a given combination. Try to think of for each jutsu another combination. Btw, just fill out the regular template, but this time instead of two, I only need 1, big, combined description.




(Doton: Ganchūrō no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Rock Pillar Prison Technique
Rank: C
Type: Defence/supplementary
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After performing the required hand seals Rat → Horse → Dog → Snake and they then create a large amount of rock pillars to rise from under ground. They can then be controlled to surround their opponent and create a bamboo-like prison of rock.
Perform a small sequence of ahndseals, and by manipulating doton chakra, creat a large amount of rock pillars, erupting out of the ground. Control the rock pillars and surround my clone with those pillars. Easy U_U

 
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As Khallil senpai produces a new clone, Tenten jumps backwards, with a prepared Tiger handseal. A flowing river of mud is immediatly produced beneath the clone which is trying to escape the muddy lake but looses it's balance.

(Doton: Doryū Taiga) - Earth Release: Earth Flow River

Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After forming the needed hand seal (Tiger), the user transforms the ground underneath their opponent into a river of mud that throws them off balance and carries them away from the user. The mud created by this technique can also be used as a medium for the Earth Release: Earth Dragon Bullet technique

Tenten continues with a new sequence of handseals which are now Ram -> Horse -> Dragon.

Where are u going buddy boy? Stay put!

A Mud Dragon Head is emerging behind the clone, immediatly firing 3 mud balls towards the clone.

(Doton: Doryudan) - Earth Release: Earth Dragon Bullet

Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: When used with Earth Release: Earth Flow River, the user will then perform the Ram → Horse → Dragon they can create a dragon-like head that fires concentrated mud bullets at an opponent. This can also be combined with a fire jutsu to shoot lava toward an opponent. The dragon can be created from other mud techniques as along as a mud source is available.
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How can....:

This jutsus are obviously easily countered by Raiton C and above techs, and nullified by any rank of Raiton techs. Countered/nullified with Fuuton C and above jutsus, and Doton

Combo with Earth shaking seems nice aswell as with Mudshot as the first combo can throw the opponent off balance with tremors before producing the mud river, and the mudshot can immobilize the opponents feet/choke him.

Adv: Fantastic if on a mud terrain, easening the toll on users chakra reserves. Strong combo against suiton / katon users below C rank.

Dis: Weak against raiton, and nullified by C+ fuuton, doton
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2 hit him, while he evades the third one, the clone does a handseal, obviously preparing a [counter. Tenten looks towards the clone and than towards senpai with a wide grin.

Hehe, you're done for.


Tenten reacts faster, and combines a new sequence of handseals with an insane reaction time. She performs 4 seals Rat -> Horse -> Dog -> Snake. While doing the seals, she spits two balls of mud towards the clone, one sticks to his feet, immobilizing his movement, while the other wraps around his palms, making him unable to make a seal.



(Doton: Dorosandan) – Earth Release: Mudshot


Oh, don't even think about it!


(Doton: Ganchūrō no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Rock Pillar Prison Technique

Rank: C
Type: Defence/supplementary
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After performing the required hand seals Rat → Horse → Dog → Snake and they then create a large amount of rock pillars to rise from under ground. They can then be controlled to surround their opponent and create a bamboo-like prison of rock.

All of the surrounding mud solidifies, also capturing the clones legs and immobilizing it even more, expression on Tenten's face is showing her bulged up veins, giving her all into this last jutsu, box like form is taking a shape, completely surrounding the clone, thick rock pillars form from all sides of the clone, effectively "capturing" it.
Tenten falls on her knees visibly exhausted.

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How can...: Best combo I can think of is the one I presented here, incapacitating the opponent with Mudshots, while capturing him within the rock prison.

Adv: Effective defence jutsu even against higher rank opponents, a pretty hood stalling jutsu/combo, allowing me to escape or hide like a mole. :D

Dis: Except the obvious element disadvantages, the big one is the longer sequence of seals, leaving a small window for the enemy's quick reaction. But that doesen't bother Tenten, since she makes hseals at an insane speed. :D

She puts herself back on her feet, cofidently crossing her arms.

Let's move on senpai!
 
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I train in an RP fashion, so please bear with me :sweat:

Let's have some fun :)

Oh, and congrats on being the first training session I use Onoki in xD




Onoki, the Third Tsuchikage, entered the training ground to find an Iwa shinobi waiting for a new teacher. Hm. She seemed competent, although of course, she was still learning. He looked forward to this; Earth was his trademark element, after all.

"Let's continue, then. Save your introductions until you finish this set of techniques." he said with a no-nonsense and gruff tone.

"Slam your hands downward onto the ground and apply Earth chakra alongside shape manipulation. Force a wall of Earth to rise upward, perpendicular to the ground. It acts as a wall to protect yourself."

"Otherwise, you can also form two slabs to push away from each other, forming a hole in the ground that your target will fall into."

"Try both."


(Doton: Doroku Gaeshi) - Earth Release: Earth Shore Return
Rank: C
Type: Defence
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After striking the ground with their hands, the user manipulates the ground in front of him to form a slab that tilts upwards, up to 90º, creating a wall of earth that can defend from incoming frontal attacks. In addition, the user can also create 2 slabs that will rise and tilt to the sides in front of him, as if "opening up" the ground. This can be done to create a clear path if anything hazardous is above the ground in that specific area.

"Then, raise your hand upward and summon a river of mud in front of you. It's an advanced type of manipulation, but discussing it would take too long. If you combine it with a Suiton jutsu, the speed of the mud bath's flow increases."

"Form a hole with the first jutsu, and use a water-mud combination to fill that hole."


(Doton: Doro Hōshi) - Earth Release: Mud Spore
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: This technique lets the user summon a river of mud infront of them by lifting one of their hands in the air. This technique can have water added to it to speed up the flow and increase its power.

Onoki started floating and stroked his beard, waiting for his student to continue.
 
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Tenten starts to mold earth chakra, redirecting it to the palms of her hands, slamming both of her hands on the ground. A huge chunk of ground rises up in the air at a 90º, Tenten is keeping her palms on the ground, obviously forcing more earth chakra to surge trough; she is obviously strained a bit by this technique as sweatdrops are seen running trough her forehead, every vein on her face has bulged up.

Suddenly the huge doton wall infront of her sinks back into the ground, immediatly afterwards ripping apart, forming a huge hole.

Arrrghgh. Theeere we go!

Rank: C
Type: Defence
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After striking the ground with their hands, the user manipulates the ground in front of him to form a slab that tilts upwards, up to 90º, creating a wall of earth that can defend from incoming frontal attacks. In addition, the user can also create 2 slabs that will rise and tilt to the sides in front of him, as if "opening up" the ground. This can be done to create a clear path if anything hazardous is above the ground in that specific area.



Tenten stands up, lifting her right hand infront of her, inverting her palm outwards; ground infront of her turns to mud and starts to flow as a slope down the hole;

Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: This technique lets the user summon a river of mud infront of them by lifting one of their hands in the air. This technique can have water added to it to speed up the flow and increase its power.



Suddenly the before made hole in the ground's bottom starts to become muddy, slowly filling up. Tenten than raises her left hand, gradually releasing streams and waves of water to the before created muddy river, increasing it's speed and quantity.


Rank: D
Type: Supplementary/Attack/Defence
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points:20
Description: Creates small waves of water,small blasts, and small shields of water.
Note: Doesn't require a water source but can be used to manipulate existing water.



Within about 20 mins of intense chakra bursts, she falls on the ground exhausted, seemingly whispering something towards Oonoki-sama, while he is seen floating towards her, silent weeps are heard from almost passed out Tenten's direction. She shown opening and closing her eyelids from her point of view,

You're insane, ojisan. Give me wa...t.e.r, foo.hoo.d *coughs* *passes out*



So, short pro's-con's;


The jutsus are obviously a package, though first is a great defence jutsu on itself, you can lift the wall for defense from incoming jutsus, attacks, you can tilt it upwards to lift the opponent along with it, afterwards infusing it with raiton chakra for example; the other would definetly also be a great defence, taking out the opponents footing, dropping him few dozen feet under, with immediate mud bath, gg, also, we could take out the suiton infusion, and bomb it with a Katon jutsu perhaps? Than cool it to achieve it's solidification to immobilize our opponent. :/

Weak to raiton, strong Fuuton, strong Doton users.
 
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Excellent, you provided a pros/cons section for me! Some great insights too. I don't require you list those (because it's just extra work for both of us xD), and my style is pretty informal; enjoy the character interactions.

However, if you have any questions, always ask. No such thing as a stupid question, after all :)




Onoki floated over to the passed out Tenten. He looked at her combination jutsus. It wasn't half bad; in fact, she had put in a lot of effort to create a good-sized muddy hole.

He bopped her on the head.

"Get up!"

"That was fine. Here."


He hands her some water.

"Over time you'll learn to increase your own endurance as we perform more and more techniques. It should be natural... otherwise you'll have to suck it up."

Stroking his beard, he continued talking.

"This next technique has you channeling Earth chakra throughout your body to 'melt' into the ground, becoming one with it. You travel slowly while merged, can't go deeper than 3 meters, and you can still be sensed or detected. However, what might be an advantage of this jutsu, you think?"

(Doton: Dochū Eigyo no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Underground Projection Fish Technique
Rank: C
Type: Defence/Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Using this jutsu, a person can hide underground until they're ready to attack an opponent by merging with the ground itself. By utilizing earth-chakra, the person can stealthily emerge from the ground without disrupting the ground around him. The disadvantage with this technique is that merging with the ground is rather slow and while perfomring the technique, the user is vulnerable to high ranked Earth techniques. The user isn't hidden from doujutsu or sensory ninjas and cannot travel beyond the 3 meter deep mark. Moving around in the ground is slow and the user cannot sense very well what is happening above.

"Once you've emerged from the ground, I'll have you weaving a set of six handseals and molding Earth chakra to slam your hands, pumping tons of Earth chakra through it. This chakra will cause the ground to bulge at certain areas, forming 'Dragon's Veins', which look like channels running through. Try manipulating the veins to move around, and when you force the veins to deflate with your chakra, the Earth will split at the location the vein is."

"Form a Dragon's Vein between us as a line, then force the Earth to split."


(Doton: Doryūkatsu) - Earth Release: Earth Flow Divide
Rank: C-A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 15-30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will first perform the required hand seals Rabbit → Boar → Rat → Horse → Tiger → Snake and slamming the hands on the ground, the user can, by flowing concentrated chakra into the Dragon Veins flowing underground, tear the earth apart, creating large chasms by raising the earth in two oposite sides in the desired location and then splitting that piece of earth through the center. The length, width, direction, and curve of the chasm are all up to the user. Manipulating the Dragon Veins requires fine chakra control, but if one has such skill, they can use this technique to divide the space between the enemy and their own team in two, destroy enemy camps or defences, and even to attack.
Note: This does not split the earth appart directly to cause opponents to fall in the fissure.
 
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After patiently and observantly listening to what Oonoki-sama had to say, Tenten starts to channel Doton chakra troughout her body, slowly melting into the ground beneath, swiftly jumping out of it afterwards, landing on one knee than standing up.

Rank: C
Type: Defence/Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Using this jutsu, a person can hide underground until they're ready to attack an opponent by merging with the ground itself. By utilizing earth-chakra, the person can stealthily emerge from the ground without disrupting the ground around him. The disadvantage with this technique is that merging with the ground is rather slow and while perfomring the technique, the user is vulnerable to high ranked Earth techniques. The user isn't hidden from doujutsu or sensory ninjas and cannot travel beyond the 3 meter deep mark. Moving around in the ground is slow and the user cannot sense very well what is happening above.



Hmm, well this jutsu does seem vulnerable, and it is, but it's a good stealth jutsu for fighting non sensor and non doujutsu shinobis, can be combined with a pletora of other jutsus, especially Raiton natured ones. Downside is slow moving and slow performance of the jutsu.

Ok sensei, let's see if I can handle the next one.

Tenten proceeds to weave a set of handseals Rabbit → Boar → Rat → Horse → Tiger → Snake, slamming her hands onto the ground infront of her, immediatly after her palms touched the ground a what appears to be a vein of earth has bulged up between Tenten and Oonoki sensei, the vein proceeds to move a bit from left to right, harshly stoping it's movement in a form of a straight line between Tenten and her sensei; suddenly they seemingly deflate and the ground between forcefully splits. Tenten now drops her right hand down, lifting some of the scrolls she left nearby earlier, proceeding to walk towards the former dusting of her palms;

I think that would be it ojisan, can we move on? ^^


Rank: C-A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 15-30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will first perform the required hand seals Rabbit → Boar → Rat → Horse → Tiger → Snake and slamming the hands on the ground, the user can, by flowing concentrated chakra into the Dragon Veins flowing underground, tear the earth apart, creating large chasms by raising the earth in two oposite sides in the desired location and then splitting that piece of earth through the center. The length, width, direction, and curve of the chasm are all up to the user. Manipulating the Dragon Veins requires fine chakra control, but if one has such skill, they can use this technique to divide the space between the enemy and their own team in two, destroy enemy camps or defences, and even to attack.
Note: This does not split the earth appart directly to cause opponents to fall in the fissure.

 

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She was very enthusiastic, asking him to move on...

"Next, form the snake handseal and slam your hands onto the ground. You'll turn up the earth to form small eruptions, form holes, escape routes, or destroy structures. It's a versatile jutsu with plenty of usages. Try it, and tell me how you'd use it."

(Doton: Tsuchi Douyou no Hira) – Earth Release: Earth Shaking Palm
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary/Offensive/Defensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: After performing snake hand seal the user slams their hand on the ground. The result is that the ground becomes heavily turned up with chunks of rubble popping out of the ground. This technique is used as a means to distract opponents to either create an escape or follow through with a surprise attack although it can also do some damage or be udes to destroy enemy earth techniques of equal rank and bellow.

Rubbing his back while floating, Onoki stretched a little and continued.

"I used this jutsu back in the days of war... quite a story. Weave the snake and seal of confrontation, channeling your Doton chakra through your dominant arm. Your arm will become encased in rock, which you can use to beat up your enemies. Hit those targets over there. Note the difference in power between using this jutsu versus a regular punch."

There were a few practice dummies set up that looked like missing-nins U_U

(Doton: Kengan no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Fist Rock Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: After performing the snake → Seal of Confrontation and then by encasing their arm in rock, the user can deal a powerful hardened punch against an opponent while being protected from direct contact with their target. If necessary, the weight of the rock can be increased to further increase the punch's destructive power through the Earth Release: Added Weight Technique or the Earth Release: Super Added Weight Technique.
 

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Listening to ojisan elaborate input, Tenten is already molding up chakra, upon her sensei's final thoughts, she makes a single Snake handseal, afterwards slamming her palms onto the ground. Concetrating onto the presented training dummy's, the earth beneath them starts seemingly "breathing" with small chukse of rubble erupting from the ground, dislodging the ground they are set in, tilting them slightly;



Rank: C
Type: Supplementary/Offensive/Defensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: After performing snake hand seal the user slams their hand on the ground. The result is that the ground becomes heavily turned up with chunks of rubble popping out of the ground. This technique is used as a means to distract opponents to either create an escape or follow through with a surprise attack although it can also do some damage or be udes to destroy enemy earth techniques of equal rank and bellow.



Immediatly afterwards she lifts her right hand while running towards the dummys, weaving snake+seal of confrontation handseals; her right hand which she already motioned backwards in a punch delivering position has slowly started to encase itself in a rock solid "glove" armor, at point blank range she takes a step right, delivering a mindblowing punch to the first dummy from the left, taking all three in one swift punch, literally crumbling all of the dummys to smitherins and splinters from the brutal force of the impact.


Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: After performing the snake → Seal of Confrontation and then by encasing their arm in rock, the user can deal a powerful hardened punch against an opponent while being protected from direct contact with their target. If necessary, the weight of the rock can be increased to further increase the punch's destructive power through the Earth Release: Added Weight Technique or the Earth Release: Super Added Weight Technique.




Tenten walks towards Oonoki-sama who seems to be experiencing back pain again. While on the approach she is licking the blood from her arm, caused by splinters and one huge splinter sticking out of her shoulder. She pulls it out dropping on one knee.

Hey, old man. Give me a bandage so we can carry on. Umph; about the first jutsu; I would probably use it like I did now. It seems as an awesome suplementary and defensive tech, combinable with other immobilisation/distraction doton jutsus.. E tet te te.

She now drops on both knees, blood is slowly dripping from the hole that left after extracting the splinter.

The other technique is an awesome tech when combined with taijutsu, and with combining it with Earth Release: Super Added Weight Technique. I think this tech iff being used intelligently enough, it can be used in a finishing blow combo.

She lifts her view towards Oonoki-sama whom is floating near her again, covered in blood she insists on more training.

Ojisan, lets.....continue.
 

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HAPPY NEW YEAR!! :x3:

Free jutsu round (we will continue in character after this post):

(Doton: Ton'neru chika no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Tunneling Technique
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user after performing the required hand seals Ram → Dog → Rat → Bird is able to create a wide tunnel in the ground, this cannot travel through rock though or anything with a high density. The large tunnel that is created allows the user to transport others without detection.
Note: The initial entry of the technique is short range.

(Doton: Dāchiganshō) - Earth Release: Ground Bedrock
Rank: C
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: After forming the necessary seal Snake, the user creates two walls of earth and traps their target in between them, crushing them.

(Doton: Hokoriheki no Jutsu ) - Earth Release: Dust Wall Technique
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will manipulate their chakra releasing it into the ground and with a wave of their arm or through the application of a weapon can cause a small wall of dust particles and sand to rise up from the ground and thrusting forwards. This technique creates a simple dust screen that will fade away after 3 turns.

Any questions on these jutsus? Insights?
 
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#1 This tech would be quite useless in a battle imo; though it's a great jutsu to overcome obstacles, or to help your comrades to escape.

#2 A stronger version of the simmillar named jutsu; I would use this as a distraction, or as a finishing move when the opponent is pinned down and restricted; though, when I master Doton, I'll rather use the Mountain Smash x.x

#3 Awesome distraction/hiding tech, simmilar to Kirigakure no Jutsu; I would use this against doujutsu users; actually it is awesome to use it against anyone to obscure the users vision. Maybe even a combo of the Mist and this on the first move.

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"Surge your Doton chakra through the ground and use it to dislodge a large rock that you will allow to float, and squash a target of your choice. Simple."

( Doton: Rokkuhanmā ) - Earth Release: Rock Hammer
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user manipulates their chakra and creates a huge rock from the ground that will rise up, hammering the opponent by slamming it down from above them.

"Then, gather more Earth chakra in a hand of your choice and form a rock in your hand, which you will then 'shoot' at a target much like a projectile. You can alternatively spit the rock as a mud ball that hardens while it flies through the air."

( Doton: Iwa Dangan ) - Earth Release: Rock Bullet
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user manipulating their chakra will point their palm or fist at the opponent, creating a large rock on it which he then sends at the opponent. Alternatively, the user can "spit" the rock. In this case he will spit a large globule of mud which hardens mid way towards the opponent into a large rock.
 
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Tenten momentarily starts molding doton chakra, a vast amount of it; afterwards she surges it trough the ground beneath her in one big surge; suddenly a huge chunk of ground rips off; on a simple tilt of Tenten's head to the her right, the rock slams onto the mountain side, crumbling to pieces from the impact force


Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user manipulates their chakra and creates a huge rock from the ground that will rise up, hammering the opponent by slamming it down from above them.



She immediatly turns her attention to a huge chunk of rock that landed between her and Onoki-sama, first inverting her palm upwards and concetrating her view on it; she again molds a respectable amount of earthen chakra, concetrating it and compresing it onto the palm of her dominant, right hand; she lifts her hand towards the rock, instantly shooting out a tennis-ball sized earth projectile; shaped like a bullet. A split second later a respectable sfx *boom is heard* while the rock that was in the way shatters to a pile of rubble.

Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user manipulating their chakra will point their palm or fist at the opponent, creating a large rock on it which he then sends at the opponent. Alternatively, the user can "spit" the rock. In this case he will spit a large globule of mud which hardens mid way towards the opponent into a large rock.



Tenten now turns her attention to ojisan, whom again seems to be experiencing back pain; she walks few steps towards him.

Oi! Sensei, do you need a break?

She sits onto the ground beneath him, while assembling a short insight on the learnt techniques.

The first technique is an decent addition to close up fights, tai/ken combos, in combo with other elemental binding jutsus, or with a binding genjutsu. The usuall elemental pros and cons stand.

Now, I adore the second technique, first cuz it's instant and does not require handseals; and for elemental combos to be precise; either firing the bullet first, after which enveloping it in a stream of a katon jutsu, increasing it's heat and destructive power, or firing the earthen bullet followed by my Hydrification bullet when I master it; or firing the bullet followed by the raiton hound. It's good for close ups, but it's also a great long ranged/distract jutsu. Elemental pros and cons apply.
 

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Onoki grumbled, being his usual stubborn self.

"I'm fine, thank you." he said bluntly.

His back then cracked as his face comically contorted into an expression of pain z.z

"Ouch! Damn."

"... anyway, clap your hands together and force two rocks to rise up from your enemy's sides, pushing them backwards."

"Here's a handy tip. You can form this mid-range if your opponent is there, and push them back to long range."


( Doton: Jōshō Iwa ) - Earth Release: Rising Rocks
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user claps their hands together and then unleashes two huge rocks from the ground on either side of the enemy to send the opponent flying backwards.

"Stomp the ground and break it apart, causing jagged rocks to rise up and hit your target with blunt damage. One unique property of this jutsu is that it pushes an enemy upward."

"... these are the last of the C-rank jutsus."


( Doton: Gizagiza no Iwajin ) - Earth Release: Jagged Rock Formation
Rank: C
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will manipulate their chakra and stomps the ground. By doing so, he causes small fractures to rip through the ground, which will then force fragments of earth and rock to rise up from the ground like protruding rock formations to then deal blunt force damage to the opponent and can raise them up into the air.
 

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Onoki grumbled, being his usual stubborn self.

"I'm fine, thank you." he said bluntly.

His back then cracked as his face comically contorted into an expression of pain z.z

"Ouch! Damn."

"... anyway, clap your hands together and force two rocks to rise up from your enemy's sides, pushing them backwards."

"Here's a handy tip. You can form this mid-range if your opponent is there, and push them back to long range."


( Doton: Jōshō Iwa ) - Earth Release: Rising Rocks
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user claps their hands together and then unleashes two huge rocks from the ground on either side of the enemy to send the opponent flying backwards.

"Stomp the ground and break it apart, causing jagged rocks to rise up and hit your target with blunt damage. One unique property of this jutsu is that it pushes an enemy upward."

"... these are the last of the C-rank jutsus."


( Doton: Gizagiza no Iwajin ) - Earth Release: Jagged Rock Formation
Rank: C
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will manipulate their chakra and stomps the ground. By doing so, he causes small fractures to rip through the ground, which will then force fragments of earth and rock to rise up from the ground like protruding rock formations to then deal blunt force damage to the opponent and can raise them up into the air.
Tenten molds a vast amount of doton chakra, after which she claps both of her hands together, unleashing two large rocks from the ground on two sides infront of Onoki-sama's bunshin on mid range, pushing it to long range with it's movement.


Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user claps their hands together and then unleashes two huge rocks from the ground on either side of the enemy to send the opponent flying backwards.



Well this one is a pretty straightforward attack and gape-earning tech. I like it.

She walks few steps forward untill reaching mid-range from the bunshin; stomping her right leg on the ground, causing fractures to rip trough the ground, afterwards few fragments of earth erupt underneath the bunshin, poofing it out.

She tuns her attention towards sensei;



Rank: C
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will manipulate their chakra and stomps the ground. By doing so, he causes small fractures to rip through the ground, which will then force fragments of earth and rock to rise up from the ground like protruding rock formations to then deal blunt force damage to the opponent and can raise them up into the air.



This is an ok supplementary jutsu. Nice to use in a elemental combo or before binding an oponnent. Usuall elemental pros and cons, no questions.
 

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"Now for the B-ranks!"

"This one has you surrounding yourself with Earth in the immediate area around you. You can use your shape manipulation to change it into most formations of your desire. For example, you can allow it to form a complete dome around you, or a shelter with openings to be able to view the outside."

"Perform this, please, and tell me what you think the dome is capable of defending from. Like, for example, it can defend from up to B-rank wind, and so on and so forth."


(Doton: Iwa no Hogo) - Earth Release: Earth Shelter Technique
Rank: B
Type: Defensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user surrounds themselves with earth, taken from the immediate vicinity, in order to fabricate a formation of rock that is capable of protecting both the user and others in close proximity, if desired. Doing so, seemingly leaves the surrounding terrain unaltered, even when the quantity of earth used is enough to form a complete dome around multiple individuals as seen when Ittan used this technique. The user can also manipulate the resulting shelter to have openings in it so as to be able to observe outside, as demonstrated when used by Kitsuchi.

"The next technique has similar properties to the first jutsu, except it only covers the front. Quite straightforward, but how would you counter this, knowing that it only protects your opponent's front?"

(Doton: Iwa Enchou no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Earth Dome Technique
Rank: B
Type: Defensive, Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description:The user slams his hands on the ground and creates a 1/4 dome of earth, which protects them from frontal external attacks. The domes shape is in a similar fashion to wood release: wood locking walls.
 
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