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(Your avatar is gonna give me a seizure LOL)


"Now for the B-ranks!"

"This one has you surrounding yourself with Earth in the immediate area around you. You can use your shape manipulation to change it into most formations of your desire. For example, you can allow it to form a complete dome around you, or a shelter with openings to be able to view the outside."

"Perform this, please, and tell me what you think the dome is capable of defending from. Like, for example, it can defend from up to B-rank wind, and so on and so forth."


(Doton: Iwa no Hogo) - Earth Release: Earth Shelter Technique
Rank: B
Type: Defensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user surrounds themselves with earth, taken from the immediate vicinity, in order to fabricate a formation of rock that is capable of protecting both the user and others in close proximity, if desired. Doing so, seemingly leaves the surrounding terrain unaltered, even when the quantity of earth used is enough to form a complete dome around multiple individuals as seen when Ittan used this technique. The user can also manipulate the resulting shelter to have openings in it so as to be able to observe outside, as demonstrated when used by Kitsuchi.

"The next technique has similar properties to the first jutsu, except it only covers the front. Quite straightforward, but how would you counter this, knowing that it only protects your opponent's front?"

(Doton: Iwa Enchou no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Earth Dome Technique
Rank: B
Type: Defensive, Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description:The user slams his hands on the ground and creates a 1/4 dome of earth, which protects them from frontal external attacks. The domes shape is in a similar fashion to wood release: wood locking walls.
Hey! Yours is seizure-ish too! :)


As Onoki-sama has finished up with his instructions, Tenten molds a vast amount of earthen chakra, promptly redirecting it troughout her legs and hands; she crouches down connecting both of her palms with the ground. A thick and solid earth dome is made around Tenten, a small window instantly forms and Tenten's hands and head emerge trough it, she leans trough the made window, giving a short insight of the learnt technique to ojisan;


Rank: B
Type: Defensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user surrounds themselves with earth, taken from the immediate vicinity, in order to fabricate a formation of rock that is capable of protecting both the user and others in close proximity, if desired. Doing so, seemingly leaves the surrounding terrain unaltered, even when the quantity of earth used is enough to form a complete dome around multiple individuals as seen when Ittan used this technique. The user can also manipulate the resulting shelter to have openings in it so as to be able to observe outside, as demonstrated when used by Kitsuchi.



As you said, it's weak to B+ wind, it can sustain even bigger ranked suiton attacks since earth absorbs water, it can somewhat defend from lower katon untill it starts to melt out/crumble, and it is intensively weak to raiton techniques of any rank. Also it's weak to stronger doton techs and users which can phase trough the dome with usage of earth chakra. I like this jutsu cuz it's usable in so many different situations, for example, a close up short ranged combat, If I manage to bind my opponent somehow, I can entrap him in the dome with me afterwards, escape trough means of Mogarakure no jutsu, than protrude him with countless pillars within the dome. I got no further questions about this tech, but do correct me or tell me If I have missed something sensei.

The earthen dome disperses, Tenten takes a few steps forward, slamming her palms on the ground again, now a 1/4 of the dome emerges infront of her, immediatly dispersing afterwards; she turns to Onoki-sama whom was on her right again;

I would counter this def with attacks from below, above, sides (slamming the opponent with 2 rock formations) or a quick switcharoo to the back of the opponent, for example with one of Hozuki's Hydrification jutsu: Torrent. The same usuall elemental pros and cons stand.


Rank: B
Type: Defensive, Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description:The user slams his hands on the ground and creates a 1/4 dome of earth, which protects them from frontal external attacks. The domes shape is in a similar fashion to wood release: wood locking walls.


 

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Onoki's previous inflection in the previous set of techniques aggravated his back. Jeez... back in the day he could proudly declare and express himself without such pain.

Such was life, he supposed.

"Yes, you are mostly correct, but to put it into a simple way, if the element is neutral to earth, it can take up to B-rank, so equal... wind, Earth, and fire falls into this category. If the element is strong to Earth, it can take up to C-rank before dispersing. Any raiton above C-rank will continue onward to you past your defense. For elements weak to Earth, these B-ranked Earth domes can tank up to A-rank Suiton."

"For this next exercise, follow precisely what I say. Understood?"

"First, mold your Doton chakra and spit out stones that take your shape. This is a simple rock clone... so all the rules of clones apply. They can use up to C-rank Earth jutsus ONLY and can take up to B-rank taijutsu before breaking."

"You will make that clone go inside a cave I'll make over there."


Onoki molds Doton chakra and causes the Earth to emerge, forming a small cave mid-range from Tenten and himself.

(Doton: Iwa Bunshin) - Earth Release: Rock Clone Technique
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user creates their clone out of stone that he spits from his mouth. Unlike other types of clones the rock clones don’t disappear after being defeated but rather crumble like rubble. These clones can also be used to create a clone of other people than themselves but do not take on the abilities of the copied person. They can use up to C-Rank Earth techniques and are very resistant to physical damage such as that from Taijutsu which they can endure up to B-Rank.

"Then, once your clone is inside, surge Doton chakra through the Earth and form four spikes around her that will erupt and impale her. You can counter by jumping upwards, but since she's in a cave, there's little chance of escaping."

( Doton: Dosekidake no Jutsu ) - Earth Release: Earth and Stone Bamboo Shoot Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user of this technique condenses the soil and rock in the area to sprout out in the form of four large spikes which attack the target from four separate directions to make it harder to evade. However, it can be easilty avoided by escaping upwards.

"Finally, weave two handseals and place your hand on the ground, causing the area around the cave to begin spiraling inward on itself, much like an Earth Toilet flushing itself. This is one of the better Earth techniques since it creates both a trap and is hard to dodge if your opponent is enclosed by something."

(Doton: Retsudo Tenshō) - Earth Release: Tearing Earth Turning Palm
Rank: B-Rank
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: After performing the required hand seals Boar → Ox → placing hand on the ground, the user causes the ground surrounding the enemy to spiral inwards on itself, burying them alive or crushing them in a mayhem of jagged rocks. This technique is capable of causing quite a bit of damage to a large area. This technique is much more damaging if used in rocky mountainous areas, or inside a cave.

"Note the effects of each jutsu and how they work. Ask questions if you must."
 
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Onoki's previous inflection in the previous set of techniques aggravated his back. Jeez... back in the day he could proudly declare and express himself without such pain.

Such was life, he supposed.

"Yes, you are mostly correct, but to put it into a simple way, if the element is neutral to earth, it can take up to B-rank, so equal... wind, Earth, and fire falls into this category. If the element is strong to Earth, it can take up to C-rank before dispersing. Any raiton above C-rank will continue onward to you past your defense. For elements weak to Earth, these B-ranked Earth domes can tank up to A-rank Suiton."

"For this next exercise, follow precisely what I say. Understood?"

"First, mold your Doton chakra and spit out stones that take your shape. This is a simple rock clone... so all the rules of clones apply. They can use up to C-rank Earth jutsus ONLY and can take up to B-rank taijutsu before breaking."

"You will make that clone go inside a cave I'll make over there."


Onoki molds Doton chakra and causes the Earth to emerge, forming a small cave mid-range from Tenten and himself.

(Doton: Iwa Bunshin) - Earth Release: Rock Clone Technique
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user creates their clone out of stone that he spits from his mouth. Unlike other types of clones the rock clones don’t disappear after being defeated but rather crumble like rubble. These clones can also be used to create a clone of other people than themselves but do not take on the abilities of the copied person. They can use up to C-Rank Earth techniques and are very resistant to physical damage such as that from Taijutsu which they can endure up to B-Rank.

"Then, once your clone is inside, surge Doton chakra through the Earth and form four spikes around her that will erupt and impale her. You can counter by jumping upwards, but since she's in a cave, there's little chance of escaping."

( Doton: Dosekidake no Jutsu ) - Earth Release: Earth and Stone Bamboo Shoot Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user of this technique condenses the soil and rock in the area to sprout out in the form of four large spikes which attack the target from four separate directions to make it harder to evade. However, it can be easilty avoided by escaping upwards.

"Finally, weave two handseals and place your hand on the ground, causing the area around the cave to begin spiraling inward on itself, much like an Earth Toilet flushing itself. This is one of the better Earth techniques since it creates both a trap and is hard to dodge if your opponent is enclosed by something."

(Doton: Retsudo Tenshō) - Earth Release: Tearing Earth Turning Palm
Rank: B-Rank
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: After performing the required hand seals Boar → Ox → placing hand on the ground, the user causes the ground surrounding the enemy to spiral inwards on itself, burying them alive or crushing them in a mayhem of jagged rocks. This technique is capable of causing quite a bit of damage to a large area. This technique is much more damaging if used in rocky mountainous areas, or inside a cave.

"Note the effects of each jutsu and how they work. Ask questions if you must."
After hearing up the last of Onoki-sama's instructions, Tenten molds up a respectable amount of earthen chakra; redirecting the entirety of it up trough her mouth, the very next moment she literally spits out a stone clone of her self, which instantly afterwards livens up and starts running towards the cave that sensei mentioned.

Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user creates their clone out of stone that he spits from his mouth. Unlike other types of clones the rock clones don’t disappear after being defeated but rather crumble like rubble. These clones can also be used to create a clone of other people than themselves but do not take on the abilities of the copied person. They can use up to C-Rank Earth techniques and are very resistant to physical damage such as that from Taijutsu which they can endure up to B-Rank.



While the bunshin is going towards the cave, Tenten gives a short insight of the performed technique;

Yuuuck! Well most definetly, the main disadvantage of this tech is it's aftertaste, the taste that it leaves in the mouth! Yuck, yuck yuck!!!
I think it's absolutely awesome that it can use up to C doton, and defend up to B tai; I have some ideas of combining it with the raiton bunshin as a distraction combo vs someone. The usuall elemental pros and cons apply.


As the bunshin is on the cave's entrance, the real Tenten is proceeding behind it; coming up-to mid-range of the cave; the bunshin enters, while the real Tenten crouches down, connecting both of her palms with the ground; she releases a vast amount of doton chakra to the soil; the chakra is seen traveling towards the cave in insane speed, the line of ground between real Tenten and the cave appears as if breathing; the moment it reaches the cave; it manifestes itself inside the cave as 4 huge, wide and thick earthen spikes protruding from the cave's celling and 3 different sides towards Tenten's bunshin, pushing her deeper into the cave in her effort to avoid it;


Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user of this technique condenses the soil and rock in the area to sprout out in the form of four large spikes which attack the target from four separate directions to make it harder to evade. However, it can be easilty avoided by escaping upwards.



Instantly after delivering the pillars Tenten quickly waves 2 handseals, Boar and Ox, placing her palms on the ground again; momentarily afterwards a notable earthquake is felt as the entirety of the area surrounding the cave and the cave itself spirals down as the loud crumbling sfx is heard; the bunshin and the rocky cave are literally sucked into the ground with this last technique;

As the cave is getting obliterated and vanishing away, Tenten is coughing up the insight of the last two jutsus; barely having the strength to speak anymore;

The first technique is a great tech to be combined with other earthen techniques, or perhaps with the raiton binding ones such as the binding pillars, obviously it's best to use it in confined spaces; it is a great combo with the last technique as a distraction before obliterating the opponent and taking away the ground beneath him. Main disadvantage is that it requires handseals, and it seems to be alot terrain dependable; i mean it is awesome when used near or in a cave, or at a mountain terrain; but on some regular flat terrains I would rather use the antilion technique that we still didn't learn. Though the big advantage of this technique is it's long range aswell. The usual elemental pros and cons.

Rank: B-Rank
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: After performing the required hand seals Boar → Ox → placing hand on the ground, the user causes the ground surrounding the enemy to spiral inwards on itself, burying them alive or crushing them in a mayhem of jagged rocks. This technique is capable of causing quite a bit of damage to a large area. This technique is much more damaging if used in rocky mountainous areas, or inside a cave.



Tenten stands up and exhaustedly turns her attention towards her sensei whom is floating few meters to her left

This was an intense session Onoki-san, please don't hesitate with more of these...hehehe; Tenten smirks before blacking out and falling unconcious.
 
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An hour later, Tenten regains her consciousness to see Old Man Onoki sitting cross-legged, eyes closed and in a meditative position. He opens one eye and speaks.

"Focus on conserving chakra... mold your techniques with the least amount possible, but use that small amount of chakra to create the best effect. That's what the 'quality' of your chakra implies. You should be getting the hang of it, otherwise you'll keep passing out."

"Two jutsus for this round so that we don't overdo it."
he said in such a way that almost seemed concerned, but was in fact challenging Tenten to take his advice seriously.

"The mudshot jutsu, the C-rank one... mold multiple mudshots and fire them from either a mud source or from your mouth. Excellent range and coverage."


(Doton: Fukusuu no Dorosandan) - Earth Release: Multiple Mudshot Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage point: 40
Description: This jutsu is basically a widespread version of the Mudshot Technique; allowing the user to fire at multiple targets.

"Weave three handseals and form a wave of earth you'll ride on top of. This is a good escape or dodging jutsu and you can send the wave crashing into enemies. Alternatively, you can form the wave around an enemy to restrain them."

"Note that you can't form the wave short-range from you. It's much too large for that."


(Doton: Doryūha) - Earth Release: Earth Flow Wave
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: After performing the required hand seal sequence Rat → Snake → Tiger the user creates and rides a wave of earth that can branch of to attack from a distance. The user can also use the technique to manipulate the terrain and trap the target by wrapping earth round their legs preventing them from moving
 
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As she wakes up, Tenten spots Onoki san in an meditative position across her, taking a sip of water she listens to senseis concerned observation and the instructions for the next set of techniques. She bursts on her feet with a wide smirk on her face. Crushing a small rock trough her fist with a confident perception.

Don't worry Onoki-san; I will be more refined and conservative with my chakra from now on. It would be an utter disgrace to disgrace my will of rock here, especially infront of a legend like him; she thinks to herself.

She turns to her right and few training dummies Onoki-san pointed out in the vicinity; after molding up a sufficient amount of earthen chakra, she redirects it to her mouth shooting out 3 globules of mud towards 3 training dummies; headshoting all three effectively.

Hell yeah!


Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage point: 40
Description: This jutsu is basically a widespread version of the Mudshot Technique; allowing the user to fire at multiple targets.



She remains concetrated on the three dummies she just took shots at at long range from her; again molding up a decent amount of doton chakra while weaving a short sequence of handseals; Rat-Snake-Tiger to be exact; as soon as she connects the sequence; a wave of earth erupts on long range from beneath the dummies, connecting in a line between the dummies and Tenten; the "tail" off this earthen wave that erupted from beneath the dummies wraps around the dummies foundation entrapping them; while the wave's "head" lifts Tenten in the air from beneath her feet, branching off into the air and lifting her some 10 meters above the dummy; as she is lifted she takes out 8 shurikens from her pouch hitting the dummies from several angles in an vertical arc as she is getting lifted in the air. She than makes a single handsign and the technique disperses as she lands infront of ojisan.

Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: After performing the required hand seal sequence Rat → Snake → Tiger the user creates and rides a wave of earth that can branch of to attack from a distance. The user can also use the technique to manipulate the terrain and trap the target by wrapping earth round their legs preventing them from moving



Pretty decent jutsus jiji, the first one is more effective than the lower ranked one. I like it cuz it does not require handseals and it's a decent distraction or restriction tech.

The second technique is awesome cuz of it's long range and versatility, can be used both to restrict the opponent, widen the gap, afflict damage or defend. The usuall elemental pros and cons apply for both techniques.
 

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(That was actually pretty good, using the end of the Earth Flow Wave to throw you up into the air. Just be careful how you word it if you use it that way in a real fight ^^ and apologies, been sick z.z)

Onoki hands Tenten some scrolls.

"Those are special weapons scrolls, so I'm sure you'll like them. You don't have to perform this one so I'll just explain how they work."

"By inputting your Earth chakra into those scrolls, they'll form traps. When your opponents step on them and activate it, mud wolves will burst outward and attack them from the scroll. They can reform after being damaged, and you can create up to three. There are further instructions on the scroll if you need them."


(Doton: Doro Ookami) - Earth Release: Mud Wolves
Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20 (+10 per reformed wolf)
Damage points: 10 damage per wolf attack
Description: A trap technique in which the user will place somewhere and is activated upon contact with the opponent's chakra. The user uses a scroll to lay the trap in which releases mud that forms into the shape of wolves that will attack the enemy target/s. Despite being damaged the wolves can reform which can keep the enemy occupied to allow the enemy make a getaway. (Can only create a maximum of 3 mud wolves)
Note: Takes one turn to set the trap up and wolves only last two turns

"When you're done with that, you'll be learning this defensive jutsu. It's an Earth armor where you coat your body with stones, adding taijutsu power but costing chakra to maintain per turn. You can defend yourself from any basic jutsu, elemental or not, up to B-rank. However, Lightning jutsus will tear you apart. Note that this armor even allows you to change what you look like on the outside."

"Try changing how you look with this technique."


(Doton no Yoroi) - Earth Release Armor
Rank: B
Type: Defensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20 (-15 per turn to remain active)
Damage points: N/A (+10 to taijutsu moves)
Description: This Technique coats the users body with stones, making them much more resistant to attacks, at the cost of their speed. Whilst using this technique, the user can even change their appearance, but once the technique is either defeated or worn off the users original appearance is shown. The user whilst in this armor is resistant to B rank ninjutsu techniques but is vulnerable to Lightning Techniques.
 
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(That was actually pretty good, using the end of the Earth Flow Wave to throw you up into the air. Just be careful how you word it if you use it that way in a real fight ^^ and apologies, been sick z.z)

Onoki hands Tenten some scrolls.

"Those are special weapons scrolls, so I'm sure you'll like them. You don't have to perform this one so I'll just explain how they work."

"By inputting your Earth chakra into those scrolls, they'll form traps. When your opponents step on them and activate it, mud wolves will burst outward and attack them from the scroll. They can reform after being damaged, and you can create up to three. There are further instructions on the scroll if you need them."


(Doton: Doro Ookami) - Earth Release: Mud Wolves
Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20 (+10 per reformed wolf)
Damage points: 10 damage per wolf attack
Description: A trap technique in which the user will place somewhere and is activated upon contact with the opponent's chakra. The user uses a scroll to lay the trap in which releases mud that forms into the shape of wolves that will attack the enemy target/s. Despite being damaged the wolves can reform which can keep the enemy occupied to allow the enemy make a getaway. (Can only create a maximum of 3 mud wolves)
Note: Takes one turn to set the trap up and wolves only last two turns

"When you're done with that, you'll be learning this defensive jutsu. It's an Earth armor where you coat your body with stones, adding taijutsu power but costing chakra to maintain per turn. You can defend yourself from any basic jutsu, elemental or not, up to B-rank. However, Lightning jutsus will tear you apart. Note that this armor even allows you to change what you look like on the outside."

"Try changing how you look with this technique."


(Doton no Yoroi) - Earth Release Armor
Rank: B
Type: Defensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20 (-15 per turn to remain active)
Damage points: N/A (+10 to taijutsu moves)
Description: This Technique coats the users body with stones, making them much more resistant to attacks, at the cost of their speed. Whilst using this technique, the user can even change their appearance, but once the technique is either defeated or worn off the users original appearance is shown. The user whilst in this armor is resistant to B rank ninjutsu techniques but is vulnerable to Lightning Techniques.

So sorry for the hold up man. >.<



Tenten grabs the scrolls Onoki sama threw while listening to his elaborate explanation of the techniques, evidently satisfied with her progress since he even didn't ask her to perform the following jutsus, upon hearing out last of his words, she decides to give her humble opinion of the 2 strong earth techniques;

Hmm, the first technique seems pretty neat, gives me many options in short-mid combat, using this traps in correspondence with lightning pillars and earthen pillars seems neat too. Usual elemental pros and cons apply,

The second technique is awesome cuz it's so versatile, I see myself using it in unlimited amount of situations in offensive and defensive purposes; whether for a simple def from elemental attacks and weaponry or in a close up taijutsu. Usual elemental pros and cons apply. I got no further questions involving this 2 learnt techniques ojisan.

Tenten proceeds to put away the scrolls, eagerly awaiting for the rest of the training session. Taking an appearance of the sensei himself while walking towards him.
 

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"Now, form the snake seal and channel Doton throughout your body, hardening it and turning it black, much like steel. This increases your defense and physical attacks... you may have heard of it: Kakuzu's Earth Spear."

(Doton: Domu) – Earth Release: Earth Spear Technique
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A (+10 to physical attacks)
Description: After performing the Snake hand seal the user will channel their chakra throughout their entire body, which then hardens their skin to a steel-like quality. This increases their defensive power to the utmost limits. The user’s skin also becomes much darker, an almost black colour. The destructive power of physical attacks is increased, making this a great, all purpose technique. But this technique when activated leaves the user vulnerable to lightning based techniques.
Note: Kakuzu bios can use this technique without the need for handseals

"Use that jutsu to defend yourself from this!"

Without warning, the old man slammed his hands on the ground, forming rocks that rose up from the ground, intending to hit Tenten. Hopefully her reactions were fast enough...

(Doton: Iwa Keiro) – Earth Style: Rock Trail
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user slams their hands on the ground and giant rocks rise up and jag the opponent from underneath.
 
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As the old man utters his last words of his jutsu explanation, he slams both of his hands on the ground, while fully concetrated 1010 is shown with a formed Snake seal, as the ground beneath her starts to tremble and rocks start to jag up, she expells a massive surge of chakra troughout her body, her skin taking a metallic black appearance; completely unphased she smirks to Oonoki sama, while effortlessly stomping few first rocks jaging up from the ground, she instantly concetrates the entire amount of chakra she was currently controling into her right leg, leaping of the ground with a huge momentum, crushing another surfacing rock in the process of jumping up.


pe: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A (+10 to physical attacks)
Description: After performing the Snake hand seal the user will channel their chakra throughout their entire body, which then hardens their skin to a steel-like quality. This increases their defensive power to the utmost limits. The user’s skin also becomes much darker, an almost black colour. The destructive power of physical attacks is increased, making this a great, all purpose technique. But this technique when activated leaves the user vulnerable to lightning based techniques.
Note: Kakuzu bios can use this technique without the need for handseals

Gosh old man, what's next? Paper tag bombs? *sigh*


Hey, remember this jutsu, it's also that relic's Kakuzu tech, but a more rafined version; 1010 smirks as she starts to plunge right in the middle of the jagging up rocks with her left hand extended and her other hand forming another Snake seal, momentarily before hitting the ground a lighting spear forms around her extended hand and the massive amount of chakra expelled forms a spear alike cloak on 1010.


(Raiton: Gian) - Lightning Style: False Darkness
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Descripton: The user, after performing the Snake hand seal, emits lightning in the shape of a spear from their hands or mouth which then pierces the enemy. Kakuzu, the original user, shoots the technique from his Lightning mask's mouth. Its destructive power is great enough to even pierce through rock; meaning it has a high killing potential. The user can increase the number of spears to attack multiple enemies by branching the main spear. This, coupled with the sheer speed of the lightning, makes it a difficult technique to evade. This strong attack can be defended against by an equally strong attack of the same element such as Raikiri.

A large boom sfx is heard along with the chirping lighting and 1010 yelling Giaaaan! A flash of light makes Oonoki san to cover his eyes while the blast blows him several hundred meters back, he is shown floating over a just made crater, as the smoke disperses he spots 1010 all bruised up, looking up in his direction.

This is a good defensive jutsu pops. I would perhaps use it offensively in combo with high ranked tai blows. Can we pick it up?
 

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Onoki gets vaporized by the epic overkill T_T

Ok. I have a proposal for you. Would you like to keep the RP-style training, or switch to a discussion-based one? The latter allows us to go over more jutsus at once but may be a little more repetitive. The RP-style is more detailed character-wise, but it won't be as fast, admittedly. And I'll be switching bios since I don't have the old man as one anymore :lol
 

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Onoki gets vaporized by the epic overkill T_T

Ok. I have a proposal for you. Would you like to keep the RP-style training, or switch to a discussion-based one? The latter allows us to go over more jutsus at once but may be a little more repetitive. The RP-style is more detailed character-wise, but it won't be as fast, admittedly. And I'll be switching bios since I don't have the old man as one anymore :lol
The latter, faster one ofc.
 

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Alright! I'll just be going over the jutsus with you. Don't worry about performing them, etc. Just ask questions if you have any. And I'll also be asking your opinion on the techniques, and sometimes quiz you with some questions U_U

Sound good?

These next two jutsus are similar in function such that they create "openings" in the sky from which Earth falls out from down towards the ground. The first technique uses mud, and the second is a dome/lid-shaped section of Earth.

Couple of questions:

1. What's the main advantage of using these jutsus versus other earth techniques? Hint: it has to do with how Earth jutsus form and are sourced from.

2. For the Dropping Lid, when would you use the Hollow version of the Lid vs. the complete one?

(Doton: Nentsuchi Otoshi) – Earth Release: Sticky Earth Drop
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user does 2 handseals (Ram → Snake) and creates an opening within the sky, which drips down onto the opponent a large amount of sticky mud (in all similar to that of Swamp of the Underworld Technique), covering them. The mud is very heavy and thick as well as adhesive, making it impossible to move if caught and easily crushing an enemy underneath. It’s normally followed up by Lightning release: sixteen pillar bind to create a giant oven around the opponent and then using Fire release: Firing biscuit technique to ignite the oven, hardening the mud and immobilizing the enemy target.
(Doton: Otoshibuta) – Earth Release: Dropping Lid
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: After doing the Snake handseal and slamming his hands on the ground, he user creates a portal above the target, high in the sky from which a giant, boar-shaped, earthen lid drops and falls on the target, trapping it underneath. The lid can be hollow or solid, depending on if the user wants to deal damage to the enemy or not. Because of its size, to safely used, the lid has to be created at least mid range from the user otherwise he will also be caught inside. The biggest lid can dwarf a boss summon like Nagato's Dog or Gamabunta.
 
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Alright! I'll just be going over the jutsus with you. Don't worry about performing them, etc. Just ask questions if you have any. And I'll also be asking your opinion on the techniques, and sometimes quiz you with some questions U_U

Sound good?

These next two jutsus are similar in function such that they create "openings" in the sky from which Earth falls out from down towards the ground. The first technique uses mud, and the second is a dome/lid-shaped section of Earth.

Couple of questions:

1. What's the main advantage of using these jutsus versus other earth techniques? Hint: it has to do with how Earth jutsus form and are sourced from.

2. For the Dropping Lid, when would you use the Hollow version of the Lid vs. the complete one?

1. The main advantage of both jutsus is that they're not formed underneath the opponent/on the ground, but in form of overhead portals. If played/contexed out correctly, the opponent will not see these jutsus coming.

2. Instead of the complete one? Perhaps if my opponent uses a fire tech up to rank B, I would entrap him with the hollow lid and follow it up with a swamp beneath his feet, ergo make him bake himself. The raiton binding pillars may also follow up in the combo.
 

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Awesome!

Let's go over four jutsus next, to make up for lost time. The first is a Shadow Clone made of Earth. Self-explanatory in the description itself, I think. The mud that forms after the clone is defeated can serve as a mud source for other mud-based jutsus :)

The next three all rely on manipulating the ground directly below and around the target. Devouring Earth forms the ground into large 'jaws' that 'eat' their targets. Earth Corridor forms a large cavern that surrounds and traps the enemy. Antlion causes the Earth to 'flush' inwards on itself, much like water flowing down a toilet xd

Note that Antlion can only be formed in mid-range or longer, because if you do it short range, you'll be trapped in the swirling, and you're gonna have a bad time after that U_U

(Doton Kage Bunshin) – Earth Release Shadow Clone
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: This technique creates a clone made of mud. Since its made of mud, it can continue to reform and mold itself back to its original shape even after taking physical damage (up to C-Rank). An unique use is that after reverting to mud, it can hold the opponent in place as a binding technique. They can also use up to C rank earth techniques.
(Doton: Musaborudzuchi) – Earth Release: Devouring Earth
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user performs the Ram → Horse → Tiger → Rabbit → Snake and slams their palm on the ground. Instantly, the ground to the sides of the opponent take the shape of huge jaws and attempt to crush and stab him between them. The size of the jaws can be adjusted to fit the size of the opponent or other uses.
(Doton: Tsuchi Kairō) - Earth Release: Earth Corridor
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will first perform the snake hand seal and then cause the earth in the surrounding area to rise up and over a target and create a cavern, imprisoning the target. The user can leave an opening to allow attacks to go in to strike down the trapped adversaries, or close it up completely to prevent escape.
(Doton: Arijigoku no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Antlion Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user performs the Ram hand seal and causes causes the ground and everything on and around it to be sucked in towards the middle of a large pit, much like the method an antlion uses to catch prey. Upon being dragged to the centre, the victim will then be sucked underground. There the victim, depending on how deep the user makes them sink, will be trapped and/or suffocated. The range of the pit is determined by how much chakra is put into the technique.
 
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