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Sempai* U__U

To start off I'd like you to tell me the following;

- What is Chakra?
- What is Ninjutsu?
- What do you know about the Lightning Element?
- What are the strengths and weaknesses of the Lightning Element?

Use Wikia and I'll kill you <_<
 
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Quick question: What is the difference between a sensei and a sempai? Just starting out with RP. :ghehe: One more thing, my responses might be a little late until the weekend due to work, so I just wanted to let you know.
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Alrighty then!

- Chakra is the resource in which all living organisms have during their lifetime, in relation to the Narutoverse. It's used to perform even the most basic of techniques and circulates around the body just like blood. Chakra may be replenish-able and can even be manipulated into physical shapes with various sizes as well.
- Ninjutsu is more or less the techniques that a ninja utilizes in order to perform or create things that would otherwise be impossible to do in our world.
- Hmmm, I know little about the lightning element, other then the fact that most techniques that involve raiton are quite fast and have to do with piercing the enemy or piercing through the enemies defenses.
- Lightning is strong against earth because it is able to pierce through the earth matter and weak against wind because it acts as an insulator for all things electrical. (Think you meant to say lightning on your first post)
 

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@Question: Hmm.. well a sempai is only allowed to teach the basic 5 elements and each sensei can pick one sempai, while senseis are able to teach pretty much anything they know and also conduct battle tests and are qualified to judge fights. And it's okay ^^

Anyway, excellent description. Though you forgot to mention that lightning is also used to electrocute or simply numb others :p

Let's proceed with the first technique;


Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will manipulate their chakra to create small bolts of lightning to attack their target.



Gather chakra within one of your hands and focus on the properties of lightning, mainly the many vibrations that occur in lightning and the high energy that dwells within it. Take those properties and through concentration give them to your chakra in order to utilize lightning natured chakra and then slowly channel the chakra outward and as soon as the lightning materializes mold it and shoot a bolt of lightning towards the tree over there --->
 

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*I nod with stern confidence and begin to prepare to execute the move by taking on a more balanced and tense stance. I proceed by assimilating my chakra within my right hand and close my eyes in order to better execute the task at hand and, as I'm doing this, I begin to not only visualize the properties of raiton, of it's bright, intimidating presence, but I go even further by attempting to imagine the heat that the property emits, of the quickly vibrating molecules allowing this to happen and of the energy and destruction that I may yet hold at the palm of my hand. As I do this, I focus strongly on replicating these feelings of the vibrations, of the energy, and of the heat onto my hand and suddenly, as I channel the chakra outward carefully, the chakra takes on the form of lightning. I then utilize shape manipulation in order to mold the protruding chakra into a bolt of lightning. Finally, as I do this, I turn to the right steadily, and lock my eyes unto the green tree just several meters in front of me. I launch the lightning projectile and as it reaches it's target the resulting interaction causes the tree to not only be split in half, where the initial contact point of the lightning bolt had occurred, but the tree also becomes consumed by a flame ignited by the projectile. I then relax, and begin to catch my breath.*
 
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Excellent! Let's continue;


Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will concentrate their chakra and slam their hand on the ground to release a surge of lightning across the ground to the opponents feet to shock them.



This time mold lightning chakra within both your hands and then proceed by slamming your hands onto the ground. Upon contact with the ground release lightning from your hands and have it travel across the ground towards my clone's feet in order to shock him from below -creates a clone-

Perform it and list it's advantages/disadvantages.
 

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*I turn, so that I am directly looking towards the clone, and begin to mold lightning chakra from within both of my hands. After I've felt as if I've built up enough chakra, I quickly slam both of my hands unto the ground and I release my lightning chakra. I then manipulate the lightning, making it travel toward the clone and, as the lightning makes contact with the clone's feet, the clone is shocked painfully. The clone then disperses with a "poof" noise.*

Advantages: This jutsu is a great way to harm the user's opponent if the opponent were at close range and the user wanted to stop their opponent in there tracks.

Disadvantage: This jutsu has a short range and so if the user's opponent is a long ranged fighter then this jutsu would be ineffective. Furthermore, the user needs enough time to concentrate to direct the lightning at their opponent and so it would not be wise to utilize this jutsu if the user's opponent were on the offensive move.
 
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Excellent, moving on;


Rank: D
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: The user hits the opponent with an electric field shield that covers the users body.


Gather your lightning chakra throughout your entire body and mold it. Then channel the chakra outward and cover with an electric field and once you've done that charge towards my clone in order to attack him, causing the electic shield covering you to shock him.

List this technique's advantages/disadvantages.




Rank: D
Type: Attack
Range:Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: Hits opponent with an electric field shield that explodes and can blow back the enemy.


For this technique gather lightning chakra within one of your hands and then hold it outward and form an electric field shield before you and have it explode outwards upon contact with your target, causing them to be blown backward.

List this technique's advantages/disadvantages.
 

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Right!

*I begin to prepare to execute the jutsu by gathering my lightning chakra, dispersing it evenly across my entire body. Once I've gathered enough, I mold the chakra and expel it outwards steadily, creating an electric field. Once I've done this, I lock unto the clone, and charge at it viciously. Once I've made contact with the clone, I tackle it in the mid section, causing the electrical field around me to shock the clone violently. After I've done this, the clone then "poofs" away.*

Advantages: Great jutsu to use in a close quarters combat situation. Also a good jutsu to use if the user wants to get their opponent to back off, seeing as to how if the enemy were to use taijutsu on the user, they would be shocked.

Disadvantages: This jutsu has a short range, and if the user's opponent were to use a long ranged, say wind oriented technique, keeping their distance, then this jutsu would be difficult to execute.

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*In preparation to execute this move, I commence by gathering my lightning chakra into my right hand. Once I've gathered enough I then hold my hand outwards and use shape manipulation to form a field of electricity in front of me, acting as a shield. I quickly head towards the clone and once I'm right in front of him, I make the shield explode outwards, damaging the clone and blowing it backwards at a significant distance. The clone then disperses with a "poof noise.*

Advantages: This jutsu not only causes damage, it also has the ability to shield the user from small attacks. Furthermore, it is also able to blast the target backwards, creating some distance between the user and their opponent. This leaves room for the user to perform a technique that would take longer to prepare at a safe distance.

Disadvantages: Once again, a short distance limits this jutsu's potential and so a user going up against a long range oriented opponent will have some trouble executing this technique.
 

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Good job, moving on;


Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user fires a wave of lightning bolts at the opponent.



For this technique gather lightning chakra in your hands and hold them outward as you mold the chakra. Then channel the chakra outward and materialize a wave of several lightning bolts and direct those bolts towards my clone.
 

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*I begin by gathering my lightning chakra into both of my hands, my hands held outwards in front of me. As I'm doing this I mold the chakra outwards as well and begin to materialize it into several lightning bolts. Once they have fully materialized I then take aim at the clone, about 5 meters away from me, and launch the wave of lightning bolts towards it. Upon contact with the clone the lightning bolts pierce through the clone multiple times across it's chest, the clone then dispersing with a "poof" noise.*

Advantages: No hand seals required, so it's a pretty quick technique to execute. There are also multiple bolts being thrown at the opponent and so the likeliness of the attack injuring the target is increased significantly.

Disadvantages: This jutsu has a short range, and so the user must be weary of how far away they are when attempting to use this technique.
 

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Great, done with D-Ranks but before we move on I want you to create a move as though you were making the opening move in a battle using atleast one of the Lightning techs you've learned so far and anything else you have learned.
 

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Alright, here we go!

*I lock my eyes upon you menacingly and proceed to gather my suiton chakra quickly, once I've done this I then expel the chakra and use shape manipulation in order to create a thick white mist. The mist soon blankets both me and you from about a 10 meter radius in the surrounding area so that you are unable to see me and once the mist has settled in I then silently re position myself so that I'm right behind you from 5 meters away. I then gather my suiton chakra up and proceed to release it from my mouth, creating a wave of water directing itself towards you and as it's doing this, I quickly build up my futon chakra and blow out a gust of wind that combines with the wave of water on it's way toward you and enhances the water's destructive capability. Once the wave makes contact with you it thrashes your body around, cutting you in several places and injuring you more so then an average wave of water would due to the wind infusion, covering and surrounding you with water as well. As you're attempting to recover from the attack I finally gather up my raiton chakra into both of my hands and once I've gathered enough I slam my hands into the ground, causing a surge of lightning to release it self and head towards you. As the lightning surge makes contact you are then shocked severely, this damage being amplified by the water acting as a conductor.*

(Kirigakure No Jutsu) - Hidding in Mist Jutsu
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This displacement technique creates a thick mist to spring forth by lifting up some water from either a pre-existing source or expelled from their mouth, then goes in and out of sight at will from within the pearly-white realm. The mist's thickness is controlled by the amount of chakra kneaded into it. It can't fool the Byakugan, but, due to the mist being created with the user's chakra, any Sharingan and Rinnegan-user will see the mist coloured by their opponent's chakra, which will effectively hide the user from the dōjutsu.*
Note: Can be created through releasing from mouth or manipulating a nearby water source.
(Fūton: Fūsui Ranha no Jutsu) -Wind Release: Wind Water Wild Wave Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user will first release a wave of water at the opponent, and then the user will enhance the wave's destructive capacity with wind.

Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will concentrate their chakra and slam their hand on the ground to release a surge of lightning across the ground to the opponents feet to shock them.


How'd I do? ._.
First time doing one of those.
 
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Let's see.. you used the hidden mist technique yet you didn't take any advantage out of it, a wild wave of water makes alot of sound so the opponent wouldn't have trouble noticing it. If you obstruct the opponent's vision try using a technique which causes little to no sound so that you can catch him by surprise.. for example you could've used the C-Rank water whip to catch him and then use a lightning technique guided through the whip to electrocute him, just a very simple example. But I suppose if succesfull the lightning damage would be amplified because the opponent is left soaked, so you did that right.

Let's proceed with C-Ranks;
(Raiton: Jibashi) - Lightning Release: Electromagnetic Murder
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30 (+5 if used in conjunction with a water jutsu)
Description: This jutsu allows the user to create a wave of electricity from the user's hands. This jutsu can vary in power from a small surge to shock an opponent to a powerful stream of lightning capable of ripping through solid rock. It is ideal to use in conjunction with a water jutsu.
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Hold out your hands and gather lightning chakra within them, then simply release a wave of lightning from your hands which can reach upto short range but is best used when combined with a water technique.

(Raiton: Raikyu) - Lightning Release: Lightning Ball
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: By gathering chakra in their hands, the user can create a ball of electrical energy and launch it at the enemy.
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Hold out both hands once again with your palms facing eachother and gather lightning chakra within them. Then channel the chakra outward through your palms and mold the chakra inbetween them and create a single ball of lightning.
 

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I see, I understand. I'll do it better when the opportunity presents itself. :scorps:
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*I begin by gathering my raiton chakra, and once I've gathered enough I then proceed to release the chakra into a wave of lightning. The wave travels a very short distance before striking a tree that is right in front of me, splitting it in half and igniting it.*

Advantages: Great jutsu to use in combination with any water technique such as the Water Whip that you had mentioned above. It also has the ability to increase in power in order to destroy objects that surround the battle area which could be advantageous for the user.

Disadvantages: This technique has a short range of 0-5 meters and although it's possible to use a water jutsu in conjunction with this one, if the user doesn't know any water techniques then they'd be missing out on a good combo attack.
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*I commence by holding out both of my hands in front of me with my palms facing each other, and start to assimilate raiton chakra within both of them. Once I've gathered enough I then proceed to channel the chakra outwards through my palms and use shape manipulation in order to mold the chakra in between them to create a ball of lightning. I then throw the ball of lightning at a nearby rock structure, the resulting impact tears through the rock easily leaving only pieces of the earth left.*

Advantages: Has a great range of 0-10 meters mid range and causes a good amount of damage. The shape of the projectile being a ball may also prove beneficial in that the user may have better precision then with lightning surge attacks.

Disadvantages: The user must use both of their hands in order to properly execute this technique and so the user must be weary of their enemy's location and be careful that they're not trying to execute a quick attack on them while preparing this technique.
 

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Moving on;

(Raiton: Raigeki no Yoroi) - Lightning Release: Lightning Strike Armour
Rank: C
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user surrounds themselves with electricity. The intense electric field protects them by electrocuting anyone who comes into contact with it, but only works for one attack.
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Focus lightning chakra throughout your body and channel it outward, mold the chakra around your body and materialize it forming an armor of lightning around your entire body.

(Raiton: Iwa Nadare) - Lightning Style: Stone Avalanche
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Descripton: By forming hand seals Snake → Upside down Tiger → Hands clapped together and running up a cliff face, the user causes stone and rock above him to become dislodged and rain down past him onto his opponents below by releasing a wave of electrical energy. However, this is extremely location-based and needs to be done uphill of a mountain for it to work.
Focus chakra beneath the soles of your feet and run up that cliff over there ---> then gather your lightning chakra and perform the handseals Snake → Upside down Tiger and finally clap your hands together and while you keep them clapped together release a constant wave of electrical energy from your hands which rips through the face of the cliff causing stones and such to rain down upon whoever is below you.
 

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*I begin by gathering my raiton chakra, dispersing it evenly across my entire body. Once I've gathered enough I then proceed to channel the chakra outward, materializing it into a field of lightning surrounding my entire body.*

Advantages: Good jutsu to use when the user is going on the defensive route. This technique costs little chakra and protects the user by electrocuting anyone who comes into contact with the lightning. This jutsu requires no hand seals, therefore the user may use this as a quick protection against an incoming attack.

Disadvantages: This technique's best quality, the protection aspect, may only block ONE attack from the enemy. The user must take this into consideration because if the enemy launches multiple attack in quick succession then this technique won't protect them for very long.Furthermore, if the enemy uses long ranged based techniques then they will not be injured, as they will see no need to get near the electrical field.
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*I commence by assimilating chakra into the soles of my feet, and once I have gathered enough I then proceed to run up the large cliff to my right. Once I've done this I quickly gather my raiton chakra and perform the required hand seals Snake → Upside down Tiger and proceed to clasp my hands together, holding them tightly. As I'm doing this, a continuous wave of electrical energy begins to tear through the face of the cliff causing a large quantity of rock pieces to rain down upon the earth below me. The stones appear to be falling quick enough to do some serious damage.*

Advantages: This jutsu has a great range of 0-10 meters, costs little chakra and does a decent amount of damage to the user's opponent. This technique may best be utilized as a means to shake off an enemy that is chasing after the user, as the user may be able run up and perform this technique to injure or gain some distance.

Disadvantages: As stated in the description, this technique heavily relies on the location of the battle and so if there are no rock cliffs to run up upon, then this jutsu may not be used. Hand seals are also required to execute this technique and so this may extend the prep. time for execution.
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Let me know if you want me to add more RP/Details in the descriptions. ^_^
 

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You're doing fine o-o let's continue;

(Raiton: Shuurai Rappa no Jutsu) - Lightning Release: Lightning Strike Horn Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will raise their hand infront of them like a sword and it will begin glowing a pale yellow before releasing bolts of lightning in the shapt of a horn that spread outwards allowing it to attack multiple targets.
Raise one of your hands infront of you like a sword and gather lightning chakra within that hand. Then channel that lightning outward and mold it around your hand until it begins glowing in pale yellow and then strike your hand down and release bolts of lightning in the shape of a horn.

( Raiton: Inazuma ken Fudou ) - Lightning Release: Lightning Blades Levitation
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will channel their lightning chakra into their sword to increase its cutting capabilities, and then levitate it in front of them. They will then multiply the sword creating two extra physical copies which are then all manipulated to spin rapidly and are controlled to fly towards and cut through the opponent/s.
For this technique I'll go ahead and assume you have a sword, take out your sword and channel your lightning chakra into it increasing it's cutting capabilities due to the vibrations produced by the lightning. Then levitate the sword infront of you and create two physical copies of that sword. Then proceed to manipulate the sword and the copies to spin rapidly and have them attack my clone -creates a clone-

List this technique's advantages/disadvantages.
 
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*I begin by raising my right hand out in front of me and start to gather my raiton chakra. Once I've gathered enough I then channel the lightning outwards and mold it around my hand. As I'm doing this it begins to glow a pale yellow and once I take note of this I proceed to strike my hand down, releasing bolts of lightning in what appears to be the shape of a horn.*

Advantages: This technique has a range of 0-10 meters which is very good. It requires no hand seals to perform and so the prep time is kept at a minimum because of this and furthermore, the attack spreads outwards, which increases the amount of targets it can make contact with at that given time.

Disadvantages: The user is not able to manipulate the bolts of lightning in any way and so this means that the user must take their time to aim to ensure that the projectile(s) is launched in the correct location(s).
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*I begin unsheathing my sword, and commence by channeling my raiton chakra into the weapon. Once I've done this I then levitate the sword in mid air, and proceed to create two more exact physical copies of the weapon. Once I've done this I then turn towards the clone, and send the swords at it, as they slash rapidly towards their victim. Upon contact, the clone is cut all over it's body severely due to the lightning augmentation. The clone then disperses with a "poof" noise.*

Advantages: This technique has a great range, enhances the cutting capabilities of the sword, and creates two more physical manifestations that, most importantly, are able to be manipulated by the user towards anywhere they would wish. This opens the user up to many advantages in battle.

Disadvantages: This jutsu seems to have a slightly longer prep time, although not as significant as techniques that require hand seals. The big downer of this technique is that the user would be vulnerable to quick counterattacks of the enemy because the user would have to divert their full attention towards manipulating the blades.
 

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Good job, moving on;

( Raiton: Denki Railanshō ) - Lightning Release: Electric Discharge Palm
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short – Mid (Short range for the discharge)
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will manipulate their lightning chakra in their dominant hand generating electrical bolts of lightning around their forearm and they then jump into the air. The user will then land slamming their palm onto the ground causing the electrical energy to become discharged sending out bolts of lightning into the ground and around them up to 5 meters.
Manipulate lightning chakra in your dominant hand and generate bolts of lightning around your forearm. Then jump forward towards your target and as you land(within short range) on the ground slam your palm down onto it causing the bolts to discharge into the ground spreading out across an area of five meters around you.

List this technique's advantages/disadvantages.
 
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