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Advantage: Since the hound is attached to you by a lighting chakra line, you can manipulate it to go where ever you want it to go.
Disadvantage: You have to be connected with the hound so if the hound calms close to attack but the opponent does a jutsu to stop the lighting hound or damage it, you as well can be damaged and also be vulnerable to a next attack.

I focus on my chakra and begin to use nature manipulation to make the chakra form into lighting chakra. I channel the lighting chakra into my right hand, I release the chakra forward onto the ground. While the lighting is on the ground i begin to manipulate its form, I start to think about wolfs and I make the shape of the lighting look similar. While the wolf is attached to me I make the wolf run towards your clone. In no time at all the wolf tackles the clone shocking him badly.
 

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Advantage: Since the hound is attached to you by a lighting chakra line, you can manipulate it to go where ever you want it to go.
Disadvantage: You have to be connected with the hound so if the hound calms close to attack but the opponent does a jutsu to stop the lighting hound or damage it, you as well can be damaged and also be vulnerable to a next attack.

I focus on my chakra and begin to use nature manipulation to make the chakra form into lighting chakra. I channel the lighting chakra into my right hand, I release the chakra forward onto the ground. While the lighting is on the ground i begin to manipulate its form, I start to think about wolfs and I make the shape of the lighting look similar. While the wolf is attached to me I make the wolf run towards your clone. In no time at all the wolf tackles the clone shocking him badly.
Great. Next..

(Raiton: Gian Yari) - Lightning Style: False Darkness Spear
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user emits a spear of lightning from their mouth. The spear can then split apart to strike multiple enemies.

Focus a large amount of lightning chakra into your mouth, and then release it forwards at my clones. As you release the chakra, shape it into a long, thin spear. Make one spear, and split it apart into three to strike all of my clones.

-Creates 3 clones-
 

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Great. Next..

(Raiton: Gian Yari) - Lightning Style: False Darkness Spear
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user emits a spear of lightning from their mouth. The spear can then split apart to strike multiple enemies.

Focus a large amount of lightning chakra into your mouth, and then release it forwards at my clones. As you release the chakra, shape it into a long, thin spear. Make one spear, and split it apart into three to strike all of my clones.

-Creates 3 clones-
Advantage: Can strike multiple targets at once with immense speed. Works for all distances.
Disadvantage: Since it takes alot of chakra it would some time to perform this technique perfectly.

I focus my overall chakra and use nature manipulation to turn it into lighting chakra. I channel my chkra to my mouth and begin to focus on it. I release the lighting chakra froward. I start to manipulate the lighting into a spear, after this i manipulate it again and split the spear into 3 parts all aiming towards the clones. With amazing speed it reaches the clones piercing them and shocking them badly.
 

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Advantage: Can strike multiple targets at once with immense speed. Works for all distances.
Disadvantage: Since it takes alot of chakra it would some time to perform this technique perfectly.

I focus my overall chakra and use nature manipulation to turn it into lighting chakra. I channel my chkra to my mouth and begin to focus on it. I release the lighting chakra froward. I start to manipulate the lighting into a spear, after this i manipulate it again and split the spear into 3 parts all aiming towards the clones. With amazing speed it reaches the clones piercing them and shocking them badly.
With no hand seals, and the speed of the spear when it's traveling, this is a very fast technique which doesn't require much time.
 

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OOO i just thought since it requires a lot of chakra.
Disadvantage: Well it can be blown away easily with wind.

Can you give me any other good disadvantage to this jutsu i think mine was not that creative.
 

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OOO i just thought since it requires a lot of chakra.
Disadvantage: Well it can be blown away easily with wind.

Can you give me any other good disadvantage to this jutsu i think mine was not that creative.
So, if you are splitting technique up to hit multiple people, each spear is weaker. For example, one spear is B-ranked. But if you split it apart to hit two people, both spears are individually C-ranked. Make sense? C+C = B-rank
 

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wow did not think of that o_O
thanks :D
Welcome. :D Next up..

(Raiton: Raiton Kage Bunshin) - Lightning Release: Lightning Shadow Clone
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: User creates a Shadow Clone of himself infused with his lighting chakra. When the clone gets hit he will return to its previous state of pure lighting chakra. The clone has a physical substance and therefor is able to use ninjutsu and taijutsu techniques as well as he has all the normal moves the user has.
Note: Can only use lightning based techniques up to B rank.

Focus your chakra evenly throughout your entire body, and then focus on your physical characteristics. Then create a lightning clone of yourself, that carries the exact same characteristics. The clone should be a mirror image of yourself.
 

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Advantage: Great to use for tactical purposes. The clone can distract the opponent while you try to perform a jutsu that takes a little longer. Able to use ninjutsu and taijutsu.
Disadvantage: Only knows B-rank jutsu's. A clone in general is weak because it takes up only a small portion of your chakra. So with a simple hit it will disappear.

I begin to focus on my lighting chakra. I start to channel it all around my body. I start thinking of my physical traits.
Tall,fairly skinny, medium length blond hair,Light blue eyes, pale skin. I start to release my lighting chakra and when i do it forms a clone that looks identical to me in every way.
 

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Advantage: Great to use for tactical purposes. The clone can distract the opponent while you try to perform a jutsu that takes a little longer. Able to use ninjutsu and taijutsu.
Disadvantage: Only knows B-rank jutsu's. A clone in general is weak because it takes up only a small portion of your chakra. So with a simple hit it will disappear.

I begin to focus on my lighting chakra. I start to channel it all around my body. I start thinking of my physical traits.
Tall,fairly skinny, medium length blond hair,Light blue eyes, pale skin. I start to release my lighting chakra and when i do it forms a clone that looks identical to me in every way.
Now, have the clone run at me.
 

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I begin to think about the clone's physical abilities and how it has to match mine in everything, speed,strength,endurance, and etc. I start to focus hard. I begin to try to manipulate the clone, I start to think about how i run, and try to copy this to my clone. I manipulate the clone exactly how my thoughts are. It first starts off slow but the clone gradually increases its speed. It begins running straight towards you.
 

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I begin to think about the clone's physical abilities and how it has to match mine in everything, speed,strength,endurance, and etc. I start to focus hard. I begin to try to manipulate the clone, I start to think about how i run, and try to copy this to my clone. I manipulate the clone exactly how my thoughts are. It first starts off slow but the clone gradually increases its speed. It begins running straight towards you.
You don't need to manipulate the clone, he acts on his own will. :p
 

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lets see then....
My clone is finally formed. I look at him and he looks at me. He doesn't move at first, he just stands their waiting. I tell him to run towards you but he judge looks at me and doesn't do anything. I'm confused but then i think to myself this clone is me in every way, right? So he will respond how i would respond. I give it a try again ... I yell at him " Look you see that man he wants to destroy the village ! " Then he dashes towards you !
 

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lets see then....
My clone is finally formed. I look at him and he looks at me. He doesn't move at first, he just stands their waiting. I tell him to run towards you but he judge looks at me and doesn't do anything. I'm confused but then i think to myself this clone is me in every way, right? So he will respond how i would respond. I give it a try again ... I yell at him " Look you see that man he wants to destroy the village ! " Then he dashes towards you !
As the clone lunges forward, I plunge a kunai into his heart. What happens to your clone, and how is it useful?
 

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What to the clone is it will be killed by your kunai most likely, but its an advantage to me because the clone distracts you and afterwards leaves you open.
This can give me the time and space to perform a jutsu more powerful that takes a longer time perform, this can finish you off.
 

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What to the clone is it will be killed by your kunai most likely, but its an advantage to me because the clone distracts you and afterwards leaves you open.
This can give me the time and space to perform a jutsu more powerful that takes a longer time perform, this can finish you off.
In the technique, it says, "When the clone gets hit he will return to its previous state of pure lighting chakra." Now, how is this useful in close combat?
 

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Well since its pure lighting i can manipulate the lighting to attack my opponent who is off guard and stun/paralysis him.
So if im in close distance and he is stunned then i can perform another jutsu.

Is this what you are talking about??
 

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Well since its pure lighting i can manipulate the lighting to attack my opponent who is off guard and stun/paralysis him.
So if im in close distance and he is stunned then i can perform another jutsu.

Is this what you are talking about??
Exactly that. ^^

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(Chō Biburāto Raitontō) - Super Vibrating Lightning Release Sword
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A (+15 to kenjutsu and standard attacks)
Description: The user channels their lightning chakra into a blade, increasing its vibrating frequency and giving it more cutting power than standard wind techniques.

Channel your chakra into your arm, and then release it into the sword in one of your hands. As you channel the chakra into the sword, it should begin to glow a yellow/blue color, and is able to cut more than normal.

-Throws a good sized boulder at you-
 
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