Raiton with a new Senpai

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Alright, we will come back to it later on.

Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user brings their hands together and an electrical energy will begin to crackle around them. They will then slam their hands to the ground to send an electric current racing through the earth. When the current approaches its target, it can split into multiple tendrils to attack separate targets individually.



Bring both of your hands together and concentrate your raton chakra on them. Keep doing it until you an electrical energy around them. Once that's done, I want you to slam your hands on the ground in front of my 3 clones that are evenly spaced out.

*creates clones*
 

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Advantage

  • - If the opponent is standing on water, this techniques is unavoidable, and it will render many Earth Release Techniques useless, if a large-scale Earth Release Technique is used, this would be a near perfect counter, and can also be used as a starting Technique -
Disadvantage

  • - I'm really, really bad in noticing a disadvantage, can't we delete this and put Defense here .-.? -
Defense

  • - A fast Wind Release Technique to stop the jutsu before it goes any further, Also, Mokuton>>>>>>> All -
Description
I bring my hands together infront of my chest, i afterwards concentrate my Raiton chakra into them, i keep concentrating my chakra into my hands, until i see that the ground around me is starting to crackle a tad, as i see that happen, i slam my hands into the ground, sending all the accomulated Raiton chakra into the ground, the Raiton chakra travells at high speeds to the clones that are spaced out from eachother, the chakra hits them all at the same time from below, the three clones get shocked, and afterwards disperse.
 

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I wouldn't recommend slamming your electrical infused hand on water lol. If you're standing on water then don't use this at all. And no we can't. If you don't learn the disadvantages now then how will you fully understand the jutsus?
It's why I stressed earlier with asking questions now, i'm here for an obvious reason. Anyhow one disadvantage that we can already establish clearly sense we're on that topic via the advantage that you gave would be that this jutsu can pretty much be performed only if you're on ground. True your fights take mostly take place on the ground, but for the few times that you don't or you're on the air this jutsu won't be really available to you. Now another disadvantage to this jutsu is the fact that one can pretty much avoided simply by going into the air or stopping the lightning from traveling with a rather C or higher wind jutus. So yea, basic stuff that's simple, but it needed to be stated.

Now then do you have ANY questions whats so ever?

Looks at the Template and thinks back*

You know that looks almost exactly like what I use to have you reply with Leader back when I trained you
Sorry for the spam
Come to think of it yea a lil lol
But yea, you were a good teacher man.
 

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Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user raises their hands to the air to draw in lightning chakra from the sky and then shoot the lightning energy at the enemy target.



Draw lightning chakra from the sky and manipulate it to form lightning and strike my clone.

*creates clone*
 

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Chidori+Hiraishin= Kirin?

Advantage

  • - A fast attack, it can be used in many situations as long as the sky is clear, and that you can move your hand, and is a simple jutsu -
Disadvantage

  • - It is a rather simple-advanced jutsu, something in between, a disadvantage is if there is a roof, it's risky as you cannot aim -
Defense

  • - Kamui Hurricane fist ._.... -
Description
I throw a Kunai behind a clone, and teleport behind it, finishing it with a Gash on its back... Oh uh? Wrong jutsu o_O?
I raise my hand up into the sky, as i look up, i manipulate the clouds to make lightning strike at the clone, the clone gets shockes, and disperses.

Needed no description really ._.
 

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It's good that you're thinking like this, but think to yourself, there is one out of however many jutsu there are for whoever who's trying to use this jutsu to get blinded by a dust cloud.
Let me ask you this and be honest with me, but did you notice the range of this jutus before this msg?
 

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Ah, well it's short range. Here's a lesson for you. Part of figuring out a counter /or a disadvantage to a jutsu is knowing the range of it. For example, this jutsu we're currently looking at only has short range capabilities meaning that in order to counter it one must have the quickest counters available because that gap between you is close, so you don't have much to react upon. So in essence, this jutsu biggest disadvantage is it's small ratio effect (being short range), very limited really.


Now do you have any clarifications that you need or questions about anything relating to lightning really?
 

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No, it can reach all the way to long ranges, but it's way more difficulty performing Kirin than hiraishin.

Here it is, see long range.
(Raiton: Kirin) - Lightning Release: Kirin
Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: After using a fire jutsu to heat the atmosphere and create thunderclouds in the sky, the user will use Chidori to take control of the lightning above. They can then make the lightning strike an opponent in the blink of an eye.
Note: Can only be avoided with time/space techniques or otherwise absolute defenses.
Note: Can only be used once per battle.
Note: In the turn before the use of Kirin, the user must have used at least a B-Rank, Long Range Fire (Katon) technique directed at the sky.
Note: User needs to post Chidori, meaning that in the turn Kirin is used, the user spends 2 moves.


Any questions?
 

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(Raiton: Horyu Raika no Jutsu) โ€“ Lightning Release: Discharge Lightning Calamity Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user will create a field of water under the opponent before shocking them with a lightning attack.

Any questions on this jutsu?
AND I MEAN ANYTHING!!!!
 

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I believe you do because normally you can't just create with free form lol. However i'll ask around to be sure and touch base with you again.

Next jutsu

Rank: B
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user generates lightning-based chakra in his/her palms that they can whip around in order to attack their opponent.



Oki. Generate lightning chakra into your palms and manipulate until you can whip it around with ease. Once you've done that, beat my clone (slave) with your whip.

*creates clone*
 
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