Prodigies Reborn!: Chapter 1

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Great story man can't wait till next chapter
When naruto called Hinata babe in my head I imagined a small tap on here ass lol but any keep it up man I'm lovin this so far
 

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nicely done .... m waiting for the epicness ....please do send me the futher links
Thanks man. Will do:)
Your off to an amazing start mate I really liked it :D!
Cant wait for next chapters :)!!!:overjoy:
Thanks dude. I appreciate your complimentsxd
Great story man can't wait till next chapter
When naruto called Hinata babe in my head I imagined a small tap on here ass lol but any keep it up man I'm lovin this so far
Haha lmao. Imagination really helps when you're reading FFs, being that there's no pictures or animation:)
The story with adopted brothers seems original:)
Great story......but it would have been nice if naruto n hinata still called kakashi 'sensei'
N hey did u mentioned about daily training to kumo?.....lol that in narutoverse aint possible...u know.........
Well, they're all so close to each other that they forget the honorifics sometimes. But, I'll have them call him sensei every now and then. Kakashi, Shindo, and Aizu are all remarkable shinobi, so means of transportation aren't that difficult for them. Plus, Kakashi overdoes it nowadays when it comes to training his students. Also, Tigris can reach speeds up to 600 mph. She's no normal tiger, she is the Hatake/Inuzuka's family tiger. So, distances aren't really a problem for her.
 
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Hey, sorry for reading it late :shy: The story is nice and I'm looking forward for the next chapter :D

The only advice I can give you is to space it out a bit more :hint: make an empty line after each dialogue so it would be easier to read ^^ (sorry I'm not good myself but that's the only advice I can give ^^ )
 

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Hey, sorry for reading it late :shy: The story is nice and I'm looking forward for the next chapter :D

The only advice I can give you is to space it out a bit more :hint: make an empty line after each dialogue so it would be easier to read ^^ (sorry I'm not good myself but that's the only advice I can give ^^ )
Thanks, man. But that'll make the OP so long.
 

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Things I wished for: Naruto to have 2 sons, 2 adopted. Kakashi was still sensei :p. Also wished Naruto was Hokage.

Nevertheless, I liked the progression and really wanna see the back story of Naruto's sons. And maybe a little glimpse into a Naruto flashback as well? Also nice reference's to Minato when Kakashi thought about his sense and Killer bee as well :)!

This really set the stage for a great and long series :D Hoping it will surpass the Shinigami realm xD Can't wait for a new one!!!!!!! Also sorry for the late read. I've been really really busy! +rep, excellent and you deserved it!
 

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Things I wished for: Naruto to have 2 sons, 2 adopted. Kakashi was still sensei :p. Also wished Naruto was Hokage.

Nevertheless, I liked the progression and really wanna see the back story of Naruto's sons. And maybe a little glimpse into a Naruto flashback as well? Also nice reference's to Minato when Kakashi thought about his sense and Killer bee as well :)!

This really set the stage for a great and long series :D Hoping it will surpass the Shinigami realm xD Can't wait for a new one!!!!!!! Also sorry for the late read. I've been really really busy! +rep, excellent and you deserved it!
I will have Naruto and Hinata call Kakashi "sensei". I just didn't want to confuse the readers. Kakashi is only literally a sensei to Shindo and Aizu.

Itachi has been with Naruto since he was a baby, so he's pretty much his actual son.

Don't worry, you will get plenty of backstories and flashbacks.:)

Thanks. I wonder how many rep bars I've got from you lol:D
 

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I will have Naruto and Hinata call Kakashi "sensei". I just didn't want to confuse the readers. Kakashi is only literally a sensei to Shindo and Aizu.

Itachi has been with Naruto since he was a baby, so he's pretty much his actual son.

Don't worry, you will get plenty of backstories and flashbacks.:)

Thanks. I wonder how many rep bars I've got from you lol:D
This got me hella excited :D Hopefully a lot, but repped you too much so my rep didn't work for a bit :p hehe
 
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