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Great story man can't wait till next chapter
When naruto called Hinata babe in my head I imagined a small tap on here ass lol but any keep it up man I'm lovin this so far
When naruto called Hinata babe in my head I imagined a small tap on here ass lol but any keep it up man I'm lovin this so far

The story is nice and I'm looking forward for the next chapter
make an empty line after each dialogue so it would be easier to read ^^ (sorry I'm not good myself but that's the only advice I can give ^^ )