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( Sandāu~ēbu ) - Thunderwave
Type: Tool
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: N/A ( - 5 per turn when used )
Damage: N/A
Description: Thunderwave is a basic chest plate outfitted with a surround sound speaker system, and a microphone. It can be used to play music or make noises more audible than normal similar to a karaoke machine. It is able to produce sound louder than most techniques or the clashing of techniques and can be much louder than the user or opponent can scream. In essence it can act like the (Utsusemi no Jutsu) - Empty Cicada Shell Technique passively at all times being louder and stronger than even that basic technique. It comes pre-loaded with all of the wielder's favorite songs. In battle it can be used to play theme music or it can make the user louder as it has a built in microphone system connected to the speaker system.
The primary use of Thunderwave as mentioned above is the ability to play music with the offshoot of this being the ability to cancel sound waves with sound waves while playing music. This is similar to the Scientific Ninja Tool: Shijima and works like a noise-cancellation speaker. The system can emit a sound wave with the same amplitude but with inverted phase also known as antiphase to the original sound. The waves combine to form a new wave, in a process called interference, and effectively cancel each other out. This effect is called destructive interference and is able to nullify sound techniques in equal rank. The sound can encompass a short - long range area around the user being louder the closer to the user the people who can hear it are and due to this it has a dampening system as to not harm the users ears or cause them any undue problems. It can be fine tuned to look different depending on the wielder's appearance or preference.
Note: Sound techniques can only be canceled once per turn three times per battle.
With those two techniques out of the way and their basic abilities explained I can extrapolate and show you some of the principles you can actually use when creating your own techniques from these basic functions. Because let's be honest, you're not going to use these techniques excluding the Poison Hidden Mist on occasion and another technique I'll be teaching you down the line. Even I don't fucking use these techniques and you've watched me talk about them for hours now. Anyway, with the Black Hand Skill, you should have learned that you are able to produce poison from your limbs and excrete it from the pores of your skin through chakra usage. Then with the Nerve Agent Technique, you should have learned that you can create toxins that directly attack the sensory and muscular nerves. For example, the spasming and twitching you were subjected to earlier, by the way when we're completed with this training you'll be immune to all of those techniques. Now combining those principles, and adding your own flare to it as a demonstration you can birth new and actually useful abilities like this one called The Phantom Pain I helped create.

Sado was speaking with a more elaborate and excited tone wanting to grab the student's interest and attention. He had basically sidetracked the training to leap ahead and show the student what she could eventually do with poison should she actually take an interest in it and put effort and time into it. He didn't want her thinking it was all just useless techniques that didn't deal damage or cause any varying effects because a lot of the techniques he was teaching her were plain and mundane compared to the amazing things poison could really do. He would course poison natured chakra through his legs as he released from his skin a green tinted liquid poison. Each leg would begin to give off a repugnant green fume as the poison was gradually vaporized becoming gaseous plumes that was reminiscent of the opening of the Eight Gates making it slightly deceptive in nature. I think this technique would be more your speed. With how you keep mentioning taijutsu and close quarters combat.
Sado would say with a small sneer as he kicked outward turning his body away from his student and toward a rock far off in the distance as music began to passively burst forth from his body as he performed a few motions. He would spin his body releasing the poison while in unison supplementing the basic chakra primarily used with the Leaf Dragon God technique with poison natured chakra. As the wind picked up, something strange happened instead of being the air from the environment the gaseous poison was funneled into the formation of the technique itself.
The green dragon began to whip outward roaring forth slamming forward and completely obliterating the rock. The technique seemed to empower the Leaf Dragon God to a whole new level. What usually was a rather devastating technique in its own right became an even more brutal version which seemed to share the strengths and weaknesses of poison rather than the normal strengths and weaknesses it had. When the wind died off Sado turned back to his student.

(Dokuton: Gentsū) - Poison Ninjutsu: The Phantom Pain
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The Phantom Pain is a poison that mimics fasciculin a toxic protein that attacks sensory nerves and motor nerves causing neuropathic pain and intense muscle twitching and spasms. It is found in select strains of snake venom including the mamba. Neuropathic pain is pain that isn't exactly connected to an outside injury but instead injuries to the nerves themselves and due to this fact mimic the pain caused by genjutsu induced injury. This poison is administered by coating the hands or feet in the poison and then causing it to create an aura that surrounds the entire limb by partially vaporizing the poison causing gaseous plumes of green poison to fume from the hands. Then through a taijutsu action or just attacking in a free form way the user is able to increase the level of pain felt by attacks by applying the poison to the body through additional offensive actions. In essence the user is able to supplement basic chakra from taijutsu with poison causing more damage than it usually would have on it's own. An example of what this can do is if it is used alongside something like (Konoha Ryūjin ) - Leaf Dragon God instead of using the basic chakra they release to create gale winds and an air current based dragon through the initial kick they can release poison with the kick creating a poison based dragon in it's stead. Once applied to the skin the poison will pass through the pores latching to the nerves of the body causing first a slight numbness that radiates from the point of contact out a few inches before inducing a strong abrupt rush of intense pain that continues to radiate throughout the body as long as the poison is attached to the nerves causing ten additional damage per turn for two turns. As mentioned above this damage is similar to the pain induced by genjutsu thus it on it's own isn't able to break the effected person out of genjutsu as it's basically pain created by tricking the brain into believing damage has been taken.
This pain increases the rank of non-elemental taijutsu techniques by one up to S rank with S ranks it increases the damage by ten. It can additionally be controlled to extend the users reach up to mid range by having the poison burst forward but only works with freeform attacks needing direct taijutsu techniques to still hit their mark to deal the initial damage of that technique.
Note: Can be used twice per battle and the aura lasts three turns
( Konoha Ryūjin ) - Leaf Dragon God
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: A-rank ( S )
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30 ( 40 )
Damage: 60 ( 80 )
Description:
This is an ultimate taijutsu technique created by the legendary taijutsu master Chen. It appears to be initiated by an upward spin kick at which point it quickly becomes like tornado. Forming into a dragon with long whiskers, it attacks the target aiming to swallow them, at which point they are cut by the razor sharp air currents inside the attack. After initiating the attack, the user appears to remain shielded within the base of the tornado as the outward surface of the dragon seems to be solid enough for a person to impact and rebound off of, making the only way to enter the technique once it has been initiated is by being swallowed. However, there is one distinct weakness to the technique. Since the Dragon God's real form (and what it basically is) is that of an ordinary tornado, though cosmetically shaped into a dragon, its attack power is based on rotation. If one enters the attack's centre (Dragon's Eye) while rotating at high speed, such as Lee's One-Man Front Lotus, it can be dispersed without inflicting damage. The technique, while seemingly similar to Wind Release, is actually just the users own physical power (through the use of the spinning kick) shaping the air into currents through movement. It is, however, enough to fight off elemental ninjutsu of the same rank and below.
Note: Can only be used by Taijutsu Specialists and EIG users
Though that kind of application is a ways away. I mainly just wanted to show you that it's not all just poison from the mouth. Your body can be used as a conduit for your techniques just like elemental ninjutsu or basic chakra. You can release poison from the pores of your skin, from the mouth, from the nose, you can form it from a source, can manipulate a dying technique, or inert poison just around the field that you've left behind. It has all the best qualities of water being adaptive and ever flowing, all the best qualities of wind with the potential to be sharp, and forceful, and some bits of earth release thrown in via dust and solids that you could build off of. Let's move onto the next technique. Sorry I get distracted easily-...
Sado would shake his head back and forth as if trying to push away the more manic nature he was currently in. He tried to return to a more serious tone as he thought about the next technique. It was actually one he had based another ability off of. At least the fact that it had dual natures, with dual strengths and weaknesses embedded into it. It was a rather basic technique just like the rest with nothing special about it but that one fact. He inhaled lightly as he formed the Hare hand seal. He did this all deliberately so that his student could watch and see what he was doing.
After taking a deep breath and molding his chakra he exhaled hard releasing five liquid balls of a gooey substance. As he released the substance he quickly pulled out some smoke bombs from his pouch tossing them in unison creating a fast scenario where the goo surrounded the bombs. They traveled for a distance before the substance collided with the ground the bomb inside exploding in a flurry of gas. It didn't seem anywhere as showy or extravagant as the combination he had performed earlier but if the student was listening, paying attention and actually listened when her first sensei taught her the strengths and weaknesses of poison she'd know that liquid poison is strong to fire, and gaseous poison is strong to lightning.

So this technique shows us that we can make techniques that exploit the dual nature of poison. This is shown in this technique with it being a heterogeneous combination of poison in it's liquid and gaseous states The strengths and weaknesses are adaptive and relative. We can change them by changing the consistency of the poison changing its state of matter. A lot of the basic techniques come in liquid or gas being static and set in their form. I believe these techniques were made to show us what we can do with our own abilities-... not to use them actively in battle because each technique has its own doctrine and that doctrine makes it weaker than the property it's showing us or the sum of its parts. Like I showed you before, it's all about finding what these techniques teach us, then taking that property and making it better, making it truly useful. Any thoughts so far? Next is a really good one that breaks this preconception.

(Dokuton: Mahi Doku Bakuha no Jutsu)- Poison Release: Paralysis Poison Blast Technique
Rank: B-Rank
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: A technique that is based off somewhat on the Phoenix Flower Jutsu. The user exhales five blasts of poison after inhaling and doing the Hare handseal. In the center of these blasts of guey poison are poison smoke bombs that the user threw at the same time, both aspects of the technique containing the same poison, albeit in different forms (liquid and mist). Upon impact, the liquid poison will enter the targets pores, being absorbed through the skin, causing high levels of physical pain (albeit no damage) while the poison bombs will detonate the mist, which, if inhaled, will cause motor paralyzation (1 turn).

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Sado spoke with a cadence that showed he felt like he was getting to the nitty-gritty parts of Poison Ninjutsu as a whole. He was really driving home the idea that these techniques were just a jumping off point. However, that didn't mean she should just pass them up. She needed to think about them, dissect them and find what was useful, reject what wasn't and adapt it all to her own style and make it her own. It's what he had done and it was what made poison so interesting for him.
He wanted to pass on this notion to his student and help her see what she could do, what she could make and how she could incorporate it into whatever style of fighting she used already. That was why he showed her the taijutsu combination. She had basically pushed the taijutsu angle for a while and he wanted her to see it wasn't all just gas from the mouth.​
 
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She was taking more of an interest the more enthusiasm her sensei showed, his power and tempo rising the more he explained about the poison techniques, catching onto her and increasing her excitement as well. She had already begun formulating ideas of incorporating poison into her taijutsu now, something that would surely be beneficial to her fighting style shooting out poisoned gusts of wind instead of just pure blunt force wind. Something like a secondary effect or even punching out pure poison with such strength that it could overwhelm her opponents. As he demonstrated the Poisoned Leaf Dragon God, she had thoughts of something similar, sending out cresent shaped blades of poison with her kicks, adapting and increasing the strength of her taijutsu. Something she was still trying to figure was a way to combat elemental techniques with her taijutsu and this may provide her with some base.

As he explained the next technique, she was slowly formulating more and more ideas based on previous techniques she already had whereby incorporating poison into them.

I think the more we go into this, the more im getting an understanding of just what poison is and can do. while obviously the medical effects of it are an important part, the actual nature of poison being a liquid form or gas form can also be important too. Everyone has their own style, prefering something like gas based attacks like wind or liquid like water or solid like earth etc. Each has their own strengths and weakness, but poison has the advantage of being able to morph its nature to liquid or gas. Im sure some clever ninja has also found a way to make solid poison, something akin to like perhaps a radioactive material that is not only dangerous to be around but poisonous to the touch.
 

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She was taking more of an interest the more enthusiasm her sensei showed, his power and tempo rising the more he explained about the poison techniques, catching onto her and increasing her excitement as well. She had already begun formulating ideas of incorporating poison into her taijutsu now, something that would surely be beneficial to her fighting style shooting out poisoned gusts of wind instead of just pure blunt force wind. Something like a secondary effect or even punching out pure poison with such strength that it could overwhelm her opponents. As he demonstrated the Poisoned Leaf Dragon God, she had thoughts of something similar, sending out cresent shaped blades of poison with her kicks, adapting and increasing the strength of her taijutsu. Something she was still trying to figure was a way to combat elemental techniques with her taijutsu and this may provide her with some base.

As he explained the next technique, she was slowly formulating more and more ideas based on previous techniques she already had whereby incorporating poison into them.

I think the more we go into this, the more im getting an understanding of just what poison is and can do. while obviously the medical effects of it are an important part, the actual nature of poison being a liquid form or gas form can also be important too. Everyone has their own style, prefering something like gas based attacks like wind or liquid like water or solid like earth etc. Each has their own strengths and weakness, but poison has the advantage of being able to morph its nature to liquid or gas. Im sure some clever ninja has also found a way to make solid poison, something akin to like perhaps a radioactive material that is not only dangerous to be around but poisonous to the touch.
Idk, I was just doing it to give you a heads-up for when I reply.


Iunno, but it sounds like a good idea, maybe you should pay someone for it. Alright, this next one needs you to have a source of poison to work with. Luckily you're a medical ninja so I can provide you with a sample of Med Toxin to use for this and subsequently any technique that can be used with, or that would require a source. I want you to study its effects using your medical training to break down the poison and tell me what it does, what each effect means and what you can use it for. Take your time and actually study the substance, test it on yourself if you need to get a more hands-on experience. Sado would lift his right hand wrapping his fingers around something. He gripped a small glass vial that hung from his neck on a thin line holding it for a moment before performing an abrupt motion. With the vial firmly in his right hand, he would pull on it breaking the string that held it in place.
Next to it was a sample of another orange-black poison probably the one he had used earlier. Sado would throw his hand forward tossing the substance toward his student in a sealed glass vial. The few drops of poison sloshed around in the vial as it tumbled through the air toward her giving her a chance to catch it. This should probably have been given to her from her main sensei but since he didn't see her using it or asking about it he figured she had never gotten it.
Upon inspection with just the eyes, it would seem innocuous enough just a strange substance in a vial. It would take inspection with actual medical ninjutsu to gauge just what it was and what it could do. "Just an ordinary gas cloud, but watch out because that's no ordinary gas cloud." He would give her the time needed to inspect it and tell him about it.

Med Toxin
Type: Neurological
Description and Effects: Med nin with poison specialty are able to produce a incredibly potent poison, which is capable of making the entirety of a victim's body numb just moments after inhalation and may eventually prove fatal. This toxin causes partial paralysis after exposure, reducing the victim's movement and reaction speeds by 25%. After 4 turns untreated, this will result in near total paralysis as the victim loses almost complete motor control. Will cause fainting 6 turns after exposure due to lack of oxygen.

Symptoms are:
1: Difficulty breathing, loss of balance. Effects take place after 1 turn.
2: Dizziness and mental disability; their mind becomes hazed as do the senses. Inability to perform 4 or more handseals or complex techniques. Diminished reactions and speed reduced by 25%. Effects take place after 2 turns.
3: Near complete paralysis: The target becomes almost fully paralyzed, moving at 75% their speed and their reactions reduced at the same level. Effects take place after 4 turns.
4: Knockout: Muscles shut down, the body shutting down as well causing the target to pass out. Effects take place after 6 turns.
Anyway onto the technique. You'll take your chakra and use it to manipulate the source I just gave you using it as a template to increase its quantity to produce more from it. This is similar to water release where you manipulate and use an existing source. It's basically the second truly useful technique you'll learn and this one has a versatility not seen in any other poison technique thus far. You are able to create various objects or creations and this technique is limited mainly by your imagination. It can turn a single drop of poison on your person into a small ocean worth allowing you to defend and attack in tandem and overwhelm a chunin or below opponent rather easily due to its extremely versatile nature. With the right arsenal, it can put your Poison Ninjutsu, just your Poison Ninjutsu with nothing else, no elements, no extra additions on par with any elemental release if not being strong to it. This technique is special because it has multiple strengths and weaknesses as I've mentioned various times in our training session. For example, if you create a gaseous gust of poison you can defend from S rank lightning nullifying it, while completely overpowering A-rank lightning leaving a poison technique for them to deal with. The same is true for S rank fire if you use liquid there's something cunningly tricky you can do.

Sado would ramble off various S-rank fire techniques explaining them and how they'd interact with liquid poison. His tone was continuing to grow as he knew they were coming up on the last few techniques. He was manic, so into what he was saying that he went onto a tangent and began a full-fledged lecture. It was almost as if he was lost to his own ideas, to his own thoughts. It was almost like the student wasn't there, he was focused on his words and how they sounded and passing along knowledge.
It was what he would have wanted the person who taught him Poison Ninjutsu to teach him. Instead, he had to learn these things on his own through experimentation and trial and error. It was plain that he at least knew what he was talking about. It would seem like everything before this had lead up and into this, as he spoke with a fervent tone. His words were fast and fluid almost like he was used to speaking in fast raps or fast flows. When he continued he pointed out two specific techniques from the pool he had spoken about.

Say for example your opponent uses any of the following techniques;
(Katon: Gōen no Jutsu) - Fire Release: Great Flame Technique
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user does one handseal and inhales while molding a great amount of chakra into their lungs and expelling a large stream of flames from their mouth. The user has control over the concentration of the technique, being able to produce a narrow jet of flames, highly concentrated or one that will widen along its range. The flames are hot enough to quickly evaporate large quantities of water within a relatively short amount of time.


(Katon: Bakuryūgeki) - Fire Release: Exploding Dragon Strike
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user through use of one their scrolls will summon a large flame dragon that is directed towards the enemy target and explodes upon impact.


(Katon: Gōka Mikkyaku) - Fire release: Great Fire Majestic AnnihilationType: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: A technique where the user makes the horse hand seal and then kneads chakra inside his body which is then converted into fire and expelled from the mouth as a massive wall of intense flames, which covers an expansive range in both vertical and horizontal dimensions, making it extremely difficult to avoid. However, due to its massive width and height, the technique is not one of the fastest seen so far.


( Katon: Shinku Kaen ) - Fire Release: Crimson Flame Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Mid - Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user forms three handseals and accumulates fire and/or lava chakra in his hand and triggers a series of large fiery flame projectiles. After colliding against the target, it will explode in red flame blasts. This technique is powerful enough to demolish an entire area, causing a massive mid ranged explosion. The more blasts the user makes, the smaller the ensuing explosions becomes.
Especially (Katon: Gōka Mekkyaku) - Fire release: Great Fire Majestic Annihilation and (Katon: Gōen no Jutsu) - Fire Release: Great Flame Technique where your opponent needs to exhale you can use a wave of liquid poison not only to nullify those types of techniques you can trap your opponent. Meaning when your liquid poison technique collides with and stalemates the fire technique what will remain is a massive cloud of inert gaseous poison that can still affect your opponent and taking into consideration the fact that your opponent had just exhaled and a lot of wind techniques requires your opponent to inhale-.. well it traps them into using something specific and creates a scenario where you can bait out a specific response and controlling the flow of battle is key in winning. This is exceptionally true for poison where your goal isn't just to defend but to put your opponent on the defensive you always want them reacting to what you're putting out. That inert poison could then be used for other techniques to attack further and pierce through that veil of wind your opponent used to deal with the inert substance surrounding them. I want you to try it. Create several attacks from what I've said including both gaseous and liquid variations then form a clone and try the fire and poison interaction.

This was basically the first time he had told her to do something. He wanted to see for sure that she had gotten everything up until this point. He was rather relaxed in his stance but his fast speech and movements showed he was glad they had finally made it to this technique. It was one of the two useful techniques he believed the basics had. Even though he had made a better version it was still the basis for a lot of his abilities. It was the diamond in the rough, the technique that stood out from the rest and proved that poison didn't have to just be non-damaging techniques with subtle side effects.
It could be so much more with time, effort, and work. Sado would lift his arm upward in a quick arc toward her as a gust of gaseous poison rushed forward toward her from the source on his neck. It was orange and sloshed forward toward her in a quick abrupt motion. It was a surprise attack but he wanted her to defend from it with just her poison. The technique he specifically mentioned. He was about five meters away from her so it gave her time to react.

(Doku Sōzō) Poison Creation
Type: Offensive
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A (60 possible physical damage on impact, rest depends on the poison)
Description:
The user is able to take an existing sample of a given poison and manipulate it with his chakra, increasing is quantity and replicating it. Basically, much like one does with water release an a water source, the user is able to use a small sample of poison to, from it, create waves, projectiles, etc if the poison is liquid or a dust, clouds, gusts, mists, etc if the poison is a gas. This technique, however, cannot create poison out of nothing, only manipulate existing poison from a sample or source.
Note: the original sample or source needs to be within short range of the user.
 
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Catching the vial, she looked upon it closely as the small sample given to her seemed to be holding such potential. She remembered studying this toxin, if it was the same one that was shown to her in class, being a neurotoxin that affected the opponents muscles. It was fairly fast to act, causing eventual paralysis and shut down of muscles leaving the opponent effectively at your mercy.

I remember this, it was the most basic poison they taught us to create in class. an effective simple but deadly poison that does exactly what it needs to do, shutting down an opponent. Completely different experiences to the poison you had used on me before...

She flashed back to the horro and fear that the gas cloud of poison had put her through. Something truly unique that had been unlocked through this mans dedication to his craft. As he went into a speech about the interaction of poisons with techniques, she couldn't help but had admiration for the teacher as he talked about the craft. He knew almost everything (seemingly) there was to use about poison. Sure there were probably ever evolving techniques, but fundamentally he knew the conceptuals about how it worked and possibly the full potential it could be. She was truly lucky to be taught by a master of his craft.

Snapping back to reality she caught wind of his last few sentences asking her to perform a few techniques of what they had just learnt.

Concentrating her chakra through her fist, she uncorked the poison allowing her chakra to manipulate it to dance around her body much like a wave, every bend and twist around a joint stretching and forming a larger and longer wave of poison, much like a dance with water. Punching her fist forward towards a tree, a rush of liquid poison streamed out from the circling stream around her body. Thinking a bit more, she repeated the punch again but this time forming a fist to wrap around the tree itself, breaking its branches. Focusing a bit more about herself, she began to quickly increase the speed of the poison racing around her body, to the point where it became effectively a spherical shield. Taking deep breathes as the dark orange circled her, she manipulated the poison to lose its liquid like state to form itself into gas, the streams of poison surrounding her now wispy and leaving streams the flew off around her. Raising the gas cloud above her he clenched her fist as the bubble of gas poison exploded spreading out over a distance slowly falling down onto the battlefield. Moving her arms once again, she collected the poison gas up streaming it around her body like a sash, revolving around her joins ever moving.Taking the poison away, she would place a sample back into the vile, allowing the poison cloud to drift away slightly while she made a seal for a clone. popping into view, the original collected up the poison again with a few strokes of her arms. With a simple guesture she formed the poison back to a liquid like state, compressing the gas as it bound together decreasing in size but it a small push of her chakra much like stretching some taffy, it grew in size. Moving the poison over towards the tree again with broken branches, she wrapped it in a bubble of poison, as he clone spat upwards a ball of fire. The fire itself flew over in an arc, landing directly on the poison as it ignited and exploded, burning the tree to cinders but additionally popping the bubble of liquid poison, a gas cloud now spreading from the tree, hiding the fire from view.

Simple I know, but just trying to get the hang of it.
 

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Catching the vial, she looked upon it closely as the small sample given to her seemed to be holding such potential. She remembered studying this toxin, if it was the same one that was shown to her in class, being a neurotoxin that affected the opponents muscles. It was fairly fast to act, causing eventual paralysis and shut down of muscles leaving the opponent effectively at your mercy.

I remember this, it was the most basic poison they taught us to create in class. an effective simple but deadly poison that does exactly what it needs to do, shutting down an opponent. Completely different experiences to the poison you had used on me before...

She flashed back to the horro and fear that the gas cloud of poison had put her through. Something truly unique that had been unlocked through this mans dedication to his craft. As he went into a speech about the interaction of poisons with techniques, she couldn't help but had admiration for the teacher as he talked about the craft. He knew almost everything (seemingly) there was to use about poison. Sure there were probably ever evolving techniques, but fundamentally he knew the conceptuals about how it worked and possibly the full potential it could be. She was truly lucky to be taught by a master of his craft.

Snapping back to reality she caught wind of his last few sentences asking her to perform a few techniques of what they had just learnt.

Concentrating her chakra through her fist, she uncorked the poison allowing her chakra to manipulate it to dance around her body much like a wave, every bend and twist around a joint stretching and forming a larger and longer wave of poison, much like a dance with water. Punching her fist forward towards a tree, a rush of liquid poison streamed out from the circling stream around her body. Thinking a bit more, she repeated the punch again but this time forming a fist to wrap around the tree itself, breaking its branches. Focusing a bit more about herself, she began to quickly increase the speed of the poison racing around her body, to the point where it became effectively a spherical shield. Taking deep breathes as the dark orange circled her, she manipulated the poison to lose its liquid like state to form itself into gas, the streams of poison surrounding her now wispy and leaving streams the flew off around her. Raising the gas cloud above her he clenched her fist as the bubble of gas poison exploded spreading out over a distance slowly falling down onto the battlefield. Moving her arms once again, she collected the poison gas up streaming it around her body like a sash, revolving around her joins ever moving.Taking the poison away, she would place a sample back into the vile, allowing the poison cloud to drift away slightly while she made a seal for a clone. popping into view, the original collected up the poison again with a few strokes of her arms. With a simple guesture she formed the poison back to a liquid like state, compressing the gas as it bound together decreasing in size but it a small push of her chakra much like stretching some taffy, it grew in size. Moving the poison over towards the tree again with broken branches, she wrapped it in a bubble of poison, as he clone spat upwards a ball of fire. The fire itself flew over in an arc, landing directly on the poison as it ignited and exploded, burning the tree to cinders but additionally popping the bubble of liquid poison, a gas cloud now spreading from the tree, hiding the fire from view.

Simple I know, but just trying to get the hang of it.
OOC: Something I should point out. You can't change the consistency of poison like that without a technique that specifically states it can. You would need it to be a gaseous or liquid source or sample that you merely increase the quantity to perform the attacks. For training purposes it's fine, but out in battle, you could get quoted for it. For example, I do all of my nature shifting through my Triple Point technique. You can have a liquid and gaseous sample of the poison you pull on and use separately but you can't just convert gaseous poison to liquid and back again as you did when you stated "With a simple guesture she formed the poison back to a liquid like state" you would have to pull on a different source if you wanted to perform a different attack. This is why a lot of people who have a custom poison mention that it can be in a liquid or gaseous state for their samples. Like mine has a water-like state, a tar-like state and a gaseous state in the poison description itself.


Sado couldn't really show this one to her, because it had the potential to be deadly.

This next one I won't use on you or put you through. We're getting to the point where these techniques are becoming deadly. This one has the potential to kill rather easily. Its damage is cumulative, growing in potential if we gave it a numerical value it would be twenty at first, forty after a few moments and sixty before it ended. The poison is produced with a simple touch, you literally create poison inside of the cells of your opponent by manipulating the toxins found in their body and the waste products produced by their body. An example is carbon dioxide created through respiration. This is another good example of using the subtle substances in the body as a poison, but this time you're using your opponent's body against them. Try it on a clone.

Instead, he explained it to her and told her how to pollute the opponent's body with poison.​
(Dokuton: Soeki no Jutsu) - Poison Release: The Plague Technique
Rank: A-Rank
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A (20*X per turn for 3 turns, X being the number of the turn in question)
Description: A technique which is a very deadly dokuton skill which can render even the strongest shinobi helpless with an extreme pain. By infusing highly concentrated poison chakra into one part of the persons body through direct contact, the poison begins to spread causing purple dots to appear all over the body. As they spread over the body, they constantly cause more and more pain as time goes on (lasts 3 turns). The effect is achieved by using the users chakra to create poison inside the enemy's cells through direct contact and using only the normal toxins and byproducts of the enemy's metabolism as source. The chakra will potentiate these toxins and multiply them, creating a cascading effect of increasing toxicity which can culminate in the enemy's death if he doesn't stop the spreading of the technique or receives treatment.
Note: Usable once every 4 turns
 

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Ohhh right ok, understood, thank you for point out.

As her teacher explained the next technique, she realized how dangerous the technique could be, considering unless one was completely sterile, anything could be used as a toxin inside ones body as he pointed out, carbon dioxide. Even a build up of that insied a body would make someone collapse and pass out.

As he directed her to try it on her clone, she concentrated on the cells that were producing the carbon dioxide within her clones skin, the ones directly outside of her body. As the produced more she amplified the effect with her chakra, upon her touch, spreading it internally to her organs, as very quickly the clone burst, as a puff of smoke evaporated away.

Another close technique, but i bet with the right tools it could be applied from afar...
 

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Ohhh right ok, understood, thank you for point out.

As her teacher explained the next technique, she realized how dangerous the technique could be, considering unless one was completely sterile, anything could be used as a toxin inside ones body as he pointed out, carbon dioxide. Even a build up of that insied a body would make someone collapse and pass out.

As he directed her to try it on her clone, she concentrated on the cells that were producing the carbon dioxide within her clones skin, the ones directly outside of her body. As the produced more she amplified the effect with her chakra, upon her touch, spreading it internally to her organs, as very quickly the clone burst, as a puff of smoke evaporated away.

Another close technique, but i bet with the right tools it could be applied from afar...
OOC: Something I didn't mention outright, these techniques deal damage in a weird way all of the ones that state "X being the number of turns after exposure." This is because of how whoever wrote them, worded them, and gave them their damage values. They haven't been abused much and I'd suggest against abusing them because it'll probably get them edited or nerfed, but "X being the number of turns after exposure" basically means on turn three, you calculate the damage as 40 x 3 = 120. No one explained this to me, but it's how the equation would be performed. If it was merely 40 per turn, then the equation wouldn't be needed a simple "40 per turn" would suffice. Btw since this is the first time I've taught Poison Ninjutsu feel free to give me any criticism or thoughts on the methods. If you think there's anything I could do to improve the experience for others or help them understand things better I wouldn't mind hearing your thoughts. Anyway moving onto the last two techniques.


Sado seemed to be slowing down but kept talking and explaining as he had the entire time. It may seem like they were nearing the end of their training. This meant there wasn't much else he could teach his student beyond the last few techniques. The next one was one he had never vibed with. It had potential, but it never fit for him. It's potential for biological damage was immense one of the strongest and most deadly poison techniques but its means of delivery was plain and easily defendable. Especially with wind or other similar techniques.
He went into explaining it and how it could be produced. He also explained that at the moment it was a technique only medical shinobi like they were could use. This made it a technique that normal poison users couldn't obtain without the additional training to understand and use it. However, it was lackluster in his opinion as a lot of the other techniques.

We're coming up on the last few techniques so I'm going to just teach them to you in tandem. This first one is the mainstay of poison the thing everyone thinks of when you mention poison release and you only can learn it because you're a medical shinobi. Regular poison users wouldn't be able to learn this one. You'll knead chakra inside of your body similar to fire, or earth or any other element you release from the mouth and convert that chakra into a substance that is released from the mouth. When that substance combines with the ambient air it is converted into a massive, deadly, poison cloud. Even breathing in a small amount can instigate the symptoms which for most ends in death unless they have some way to mitigate the growing damage. It shows us that chemistry is an integral part of Poison Ninjutsu, and is what differentiates it from ninjutsu like Wind Release or any other elemental release. Like the Plague Technique and other techniques, I've taught you the damage is cumulative depending upon the length of being poisoned. Giving it a numerical value like before at first this technique would deal forty damage, about the level of a B rank, a few moments later the damage would ramp up to about eighty or the damage that could be dealt with an S rank and finally after the poison has made its way through the body and completely set itself into motion it would be dealing a cumulative one-hundred and twenty damage at one time. A fair amount stronger than even a forbidden rank. This can be dangerous to anyone if you can get it to hit.

(Ninpou: Dokugiri) - Ninja Art: Poison Mist
Rank: S-rank
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A (40*X damage per turn, X being the number of turns after exposure)
Description: Chakra is kneaded within the body and then changed into special chemical substances which is then ejected through the mouth in the form of a massive poison cloud. When this substance comes in contact with the air outside the body, it instantly changes and is transformed into a mist of deadly poison. The poison's ability to kill is tremendous, as even just breathing in a small amount will mean the end of the target's life. As this technique combines ninjutsu, chemistry, and medical knowledge, using it requires fine chakra control and advanced ability in medical ninjutsu.
Note: Can only be used by those with Medical Training in Poison techniques.
It was the final technique. The end of their training together, and it wasn't a great one in his opinion. It was showy and large and that made it rather aesthetically cool but its usability was heavily restricted by its inability to deal significant damage. The most it could do was shoot off C-rank blasts of poison which wasn't spectacular unless you were able to get the Hydra to have numerous additional heads. Which thinking back on it gave him an idea for another technique.
He began to explain it. The intricacies of it were rather mundane. It was just a construct of poison that allowed the user to use it as such. He did realize that it was a technique he based another off of and decided that was a good thing to point out, the property it had that is. Its symptom damage was cool that was another point he could bring up as he continued to speak in a slowed tone as the excitement faded slightly. Sado would bite his thumb while speaking drawing blood and pooling the blood into his palm before forming the required hand seals showing his student and then clapping his hands. As he did so an orb of poison, dark and stick was released.
It traveled forward a way and slammed into the ground as it expanded rapidly into the guise of a massive three-headed Hydra-like creature. It was made of generic poison and was about ten meters in height. Sado controlled it to shamble forward and roar outward as each head blasted a C-rank bullet of poison forward away from them and up into the sky.
All of the bullets of poison collided with the potential to create damage comparable to an A rank. Sado yawned slightly. He knew it was a cool technique it just wasn't his style. He hoped it was at least interesting for his student and hit home the idea that anything could become a poison if she applied the knowledge to do it. Dopamine for example he thought. Not many people would assume the "pleasure" neurotransmitter could create terror, but in the wrong parts of the brain in high quanities it was invasive and detrimental.

This one is the Poison Hydra Barrage Technique, and by using our very blood as a template we can create a generic poison or we can use our own sources of poison. Med Toxin for you or Shadow of the Bat for me to create the creature. It shows us just like the Nerve Agent Technique that we can use just about any substance in our bio to create poison, in this case, our blood. So, with the creature formed, remember the process I used, obtain blood, form hand seals, release chakra and poison and then form it into a Hydra. From there it has a few abilities. you are able to spend chakra every time it takes damage that doesn't destroy it to grow another head. It can move and act stretching outward to attack in a freeform way, and as I showed you it can shoot out poison bullets. These are a C-rank each and each head can fire off a single bullet per turn, so the more heads, the more bullets, the more power you can muster. It's poison deals damage for a while and can kill if exposed to the symptoms for a long enough time. Do you have any closing thoughts?

(Dokuton: Doku Hebi Rendan no Jutsu) - Poison Release: Poison Hydra Barrage Technique
Rank: S-Rank
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 70 (-20 per turn)
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Using the users blood as a template, this technique creates a gargatuan, 10 meter tall Hydra, completely made of thick poison. The user will draw blood in one of his palms and do 3 handseals (Hare, Ox, Tiger) clapping his hands and opening them. As he does, a thick guey orb of poison falls to the ground. As it touches the ground it expands rapidly and seemingly out of control into a gigantic 3 headed Hydra. This enormous familiar will be entirely made of either a generic poison (which will cause increasingly severe muscular pain, sensory numbness and damage if absorbed through the skin (30 damage per turn, effects last 5 turns after exposure), death if the poison is vaporized and inhaled) or a unique poison of the user (requires the user to have a liquid custom poison approved) and will be able to act and move through the users command. The enormous familiar can regrow body parts (if the user pays 20 chakra points) if attacked by techniques bellow S-Rank, each attack creating a new head. It not only can attack a target physically by making contact with it (it can move, stretch, deform, etc in various ways to attack the enemy in a freeform manner) but can also shoot from each of its heads a C-Rank bullet of the poison its made off (using this ability counts as a single move). The drawback of such a technique is sustaining it which drains the users chakra but also his focus and stamina.
Note: Can only be used once every 5 turns, lasting 4 turns each time
 
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Ah right, I guess I figured like it was something like 20 over X turns instead of the actual rank. that would be pretty broken to go to 80 per turn over X turns.
I feel that youre very much in character, instead of teaching it how you are. Im not sure if that works better for you, or thats just something youre trying.
I think that because youre doing RP training, your posts are lengthy as well. While not an issue for me, they may put off other newer students. I dont think its a bad thing to put a lot of detail into explaining your method, but I guess something to be wary of?
However Im enjoying the training and the RP aspect.




As her teacher explained the one of the last techniques, a question rose to her mind.

So is there a limit on how long this poison will stay in the opponents body?

He was right, after listening to the technique, it seemed like a straight forward attack, like easily to detect. However as stated it damage potential was pretty extreme.
Her sensei was talking about the last technique, she could see behind his eyes that his mind was elsewhere, but still slightly paying attention. He talked about the technique, and she thought of another question that popped into her mind.

Is there a limit to how many heads that the technique can regrow? say you attack it with 2 techniques yourself can you grow two more heads to make it 5?
 

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Sorry I got distracted and forgot about this so I'll make my last post OOC for simplicities sake so you can end this and move on. The poison would remain in their body until nullified and cured as it doesn't have a turn limit. For the Hydra question, you could, and I even asked Nathan about it a while back when I was learning poison. The only problem is, it's a lot of set up for not all that much payoff. Each extra head can only shoot off a C-rank poison bullet so it would take 8 heads to just get a singular S rank out of the numerous bullets. If you don't have any more questions we're finished here and you're done with poison. GL;HF.
 
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