Okay.
Miata uses her newfound power to open a small, black crack in the sky by spreading her hands apart (Don't think that is necessary, though? You can do it by just wanting it to open, right? No commands with hands or anything?), which opened in an oval shape, like an evil eye but eventually opened into a perfect black portal with a bright purple trim around it. It was deathly silent, to her surprise. She had opened it a few meters above her master's head. But that was the easy part. She used her angry and perhaps aggressive state to keep her connection to the keigoku alive. She calls it forth from the moon and it comes out of the portal but it was light and in an almost smoke-like state, although it was simply keigoku, just not enough as she wasn't of enough skill to summon a sufficient amount. However, she still completed the task her master gave her. Perhaps next time, she would be able to summon a more desired amount.
Better?
Miata uses her newfound power to open a small, black crack in the sky by spreading her hands apart (Don't think that is necessary, though? You can do it by just wanting it to open, right? No commands with hands or anything?), which opened in an oval shape, like an evil eye but eventually opened into a perfect black portal with a bright purple trim around it. It was deathly silent, to her surprise. She had opened it a few meters above her master's head. But that was the easy part. She used her angry and perhaps aggressive state to keep her connection to the keigoku alive. She calls it forth from the moon and it comes out of the portal but it was light and in an almost smoke-like state, although it was simply keigoku, just not enough as she wasn't of enough skill to summon a sufficient amount. However, she still completed the task her master gave her. Perhaps next time, she would be able to summon a more desired amount.
Better?