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Aertes

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There's too much goind on there.
Try using different blend modes that blend in better. Also try to use colors that match your render. A little blur here and there wouldn't be bad too. And the text, I would prefer it to be on one side and a lil biger.
Keep practising *_*
 

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wooohhh..... Ok
~render is poor... white dots around edges, it is also warped... squeezed down....and extremely saturated
~Background- I have no clue what that is, but it is taking away from the render...
~Text - what text... change the color, size and location....
~Depth.. there is none...
~Lighting - bad... his face is lit, but there is no visible light source.....
~Blending - none. the render sticks out too much from the background..... make it flow together
~Colors: kirito's colors are black, gray and dark blue... don't use light blue and green
 

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wooohhh..... Ok
~render is poor... white dots around edges, it is also warped... squeezed down....and extremely saturated
~Background- I have no clue what that is, but it is taking away from the render...
~Text - what text... change the color, size and location....
~Depth.. there is none...
~Lighting - bad... his face is lit, but there is no visible light source.....
~Blending - none. the render sticks out too much from the background..... make it flow together
~Colors: kirito's colors are black, gray and dark blue... don't use light blue and green
This, dude no offence but i think you should learn a thing or 2 about blending :p
 
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