wooohhh..... Ok
~render is poor... white dots around edges, it is also warped... squeezed down....and extremely saturated
~Background- I have no clue what that is, but it is taking away from the render...
~Text - what text... change the color, size and location....
~Depth.. there is none...
~Lighting - bad... his face is lit, but there is no visible light source.....
~Blending - none. the render sticks out too much from the background..... make it flow together
~Colors: kirito's colors are black, gray and dark blue... don't use light blue and green