Nothing Is What It Seems Chapter 16

[Seffy]

I have only one thing to say..Gotta red the whole fanfic again..*runs off to find chapter 1 again*...Man i xpct anything from you..No matter how much i xpct u surpass my xpctations...Thats it...I wnt expct anything..

lol well ty ^_^ Yeah I know I want to sit down and read it all again.

 

[iamkawaii08]

waaaaahhhhhhh!!!!
tis chapter is one hell of a roller coaster ride!!!
100/100!!
I.Am.Speechless.U_U
you've done it again sis!!

 

[Seffy]

waaaaahhhhhhh!!!!
tis chapter is one hell of a roller coaster ride!!!
100/100!!
I.Am.Speechless.U_U
you've done it again sis!!

:T_T: I'm sorry I didn't WANT to kill Anilla off!
At least Gabriel still has a father U_U
yay! ty so much little sis! <3
Truth be told, I had a hard time with this chapter.
Had so much I wanted to put into it but had to keep cutting things out because it was too long lol. :ghehe:
:hug: so glad you liked it! <3
Ty for reading it!

 

[iamkawaii08]

:T_T: I'm sorry I didn't WANT to kill Anilla off!
At least Gabriel still has a father U_U
yay! ty so much little sis! <3
Truth be told, I had a hard time with this chapter.
Had so much I wanted to put into it but had to keep cutting things out because it was too long lol. :ghehe:
:hug: so glad you liked it! <3
Ty for reading it!

it was perfectly written!!
waaahh!! I'm so impressed!!
I do not like this chapter.. I LOVE it..<3 kyaaa!! well done!! :hug:
can't wait for the next chapter,..>_>

 

[Seffy]

it was perfectly written!!
waaahh!! I'm so impressed!!
I do not like this chapter.. I LOVE it..<3 kyaaa!! well done!! :hug:
can't wait for the next chapter,..>_>

ty <3 ^_^
Hopefully I will continue to keep the suspense in my stories as it's reached it's climaxed (sort of)
It saddens me that it's almost over though :T_T:

 

[Reji]

Awsome..... I didn't read all of it I was at the bottom though

 

[Seffy]

Awsome..... I didn't read all of it I was at the bottom though

ty for reading it ^_^
Glad you liked it.

 

[Kuro Regal]

Ahh very good~

 

[Seffy]

Ahh very good~

ty! =DD

 

[Kuroi Honoo]

I love the action and he is something else as Vincent could not even touch him but instead is hit hard. It was nice to see Gabriel and his mother once again reunited. This chapter was somewhat surprising. Of course Oliver had it in for Anilla but I didn’t think she would become his first victim. Well, her death wasn’t entirely confirmed but it does appear as such. If anything I was thinking it would have been Vincent but the twist lied with his brother coming in to rescue him. However, even though he didn’t say it-I’m sure it was only because he would want his brother to die only by his hand. Its too bad that his interception came too late thus Anilla’s life supposedly being cut short. Well, this was the best by far cliffhanger you’ve presented and I wonder how this story will end. I’ve enjoyed this thrilling story and loved your exceptional use of grammar/spelling. I along with the others will await for the next chapter whenever it is released