Nothing Is What It Seems Chapter 16
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ty so much bod! Yes I actually did have trouble at first, which I'm sure you noticed when you looked over it. Once I stopped trying to think and just write, it came natural though, also your helpful comments and tips worked wonders. Thank you love! :kisss:
ty my fave student! ^_^
Bodhisattva
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Done^^
I had somekind of adrenalin rush from the begining.
Then as the story progressed It started to fade away slowly..
But then it came back , Suddenly wat was a surprise for me.
Also Ani was ment to be a side character for the story?
Since I could honestly say , that the support factors in the story are chained up to a decent degree.
And the excitement level is properly controlled , you dont throw the fine ideas randomly , you throw them piece by piece and sometimes pick one up ,move somewhere or change it a little bit , that's a good trait , that I respect.
Are you going to add something more about Ani in the next chapter?
And did I felt some Psychological change in Vinc behavior?Yes I did
and I liked it
Reading this I think I could be able too Predict the next chapter "Maybe"
Well Again Nicely Done + Rep , Looking forward for more^^
I had somekind of adrenalin rush from the begining.
Then as the story progressed It started to fade away slowly..
But then it came back , Suddenly wat was a surprise for me.
Also Ani was ment to be a side character for the story?
Since I could honestly say , that the support factors in the story are chained up to a decent degree.
And the excitement level is properly controlled , you dont throw the fine ideas randomly , you throw them piece by piece and sometimes pick one up ,move somewhere or change it a little bit , that's a good trait , that I respect.
Are you going to add something more about Ani in the next chapter?
And did I felt some Psychological change in Vinc behavior?Yes I did
and I liked itReading this I think I could be able too Predict the next chapter "Maybe"
Well Again Nicely Done + Rep , Looking forward for more^^
Anilla yes, she's just Gabriel's mom.Done^^
I had somekind of adrenalin rush from the begining.
Then as the story progressed It started to fade away slowly..
But then it came back , Suddenly wat was a surprise for me.
Also Ani was ment to be a side character for the story?
Since I could honestly say , that the support factors in the story are chained up to a decent degree.
And the excitement level is properly controlled , you dont throw the fine ideas randomly , you throw them piece by piece and sometimes pick one up ,move somewhere or change it a little bit , that's a good trait , that I respect.
Are you going to add something more about Ani in the next chapter?
And did I felt some Psychological change in Vinc behavior?Yes I did
Reading this I think I could be able too Predict the next chapter "Maybe"
Well Again Nicely Done + Rep , Looking forward for more^^
I try to link everything together, however Sophia is just there lol xd (one of the pieces I picked up on the way).
I ty ^_^ I'm honored that you respect it.
Sort of it will mostly be about Gabriel's psychological point of view since it will...oops xd almost let it slip
Vincent is just the strong silent type, until it comes to Elizabeth. <3
I will try to get Chapter 17 done quickly, but as it's coming to a close with a handful of chapters left, I want it perfect and not rushed
That's the spirit and i'm slowly starting to get where it's leading , but I gonna keep it for myself for time beingAnilla yes, she's just Gabriel's mom.
I try to link everything together, however Sophia is just there lol xd (one of the pieces I picked up on the way).
I ty ^_^ I'm honored that you respect it.
Sort of it will mostly be about Gabriel's psychological point of view since it will...oops xd almost let it slip
Vincent is just the strong silent type, until it comes to Elizabeth. <3
I will try to get Chapter 17 done quickly, but as it's coming to a close with a handful of chapters left, I want it perfect and not rushed
Wait till the next chapterFinally read it and it was awesome...Trevor is the coolest
Hopefully I can start writing again when these Migraines soothe.
Yeah I had to have Trevor do a little damage to save his little bro. :izuna:
He maybe arrogant and selfish, but he still loves his little bro...and Elizabeth lol
Rand al'Thor
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I have only one thing to say..Gotta red the whole fanfic again..*runs off to find chapter 1 again*...Man i xpct anything from you..No matter how much i xpct u surpass my xpctations...Thats it...I wnt expct anything..