Naruto's Destiny

[Hiruzen Sarutobi]

OH! I'd forgotten about the Great Sage. This fic makes me excited about the upcoming chapters once again lol.. I had been getting bored with where the series was going. o_o

Story was freaking awesome, except for the golden sword part.. I would have used a different weapon, and I wouldn't have made it golden. In this day and age, we are drifting away from the whole mentality of "super cool and shiny object = uber powerful" ... xD

lol I just wanted it to make an impact on the reader. If it was the most precious object that the toads had, i had to make it look like it.

cheers

 

[SCaRFaCeD]

Wow awesome read right there.

Thanks!

 

[sandshark]

I'm not gonna lie I thought it was pretty awsome.

 

[konoha s beautiful beast]

well done!

 

[Saiga]

A good start to what could become a great fanfic. I look forward to more Sarutobi.

 

[9tailsSage]

it was good.

 

[Hiruzen Sarutobi]

2nd part

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[Bianca]

nicely done^^
i liked it XD

 

[Hiruzen Sarutobi]

nicely done^^
i liked it XD

Thanks!

 

[Xero]

Part two is out people!

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wrong link, I think o_o

 

[Hiruzen Sarutobi]

wrong link, I think o_o

Yeah my bad thanks for noticing!
Second part:

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[660049]

WOOOOOWWWWW it was terrific!!!!! you have to help Kishi in writing the next chapters, send it if you can find his e-mail!!!!!!!!!!!! BRAVOOOOOOO

 

[animekoi]

that was AWESOME!!!!!

 

[Goro Kaguya]

Hey this surprisingly was DOPE!!!( not a big fan of fanfics) Love the golden katana idea
Like it amplifies his wind element, making him Naruto of the Malestrom.
Love to see more

Long Live the Will of FIRE:naruto:

 

[Rei]

O_O very very good! i love it...and a golden katana? nice thinking!!
keep it up, i wanna read more

 

[Lara]

you're somethin like a kishi reloaded really
it was damn good
keep up the good job

 

[Scary Yamato]

awesome bro. I like the way you wrote it out so that we knew who was saying what. It looked like a spoiler script from the actual manga. Keep it up. I'd like to see another chapter

 

[Naruto..]

bro O_O that was awsome i liked it very much ^^

 

[NyCzFn]

awesome.

 

[TC9tails]

yeah i admit that was nice