Naruto's Destiny

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A Fanfic that follows the plot where we are at in the Manga. This is what I would have liked to see happen. Wait for new sequels soon! enjoy and leave your comments please!

Naruto's Destiny


Naruto was concentrated in his training, trying desperatly to gather natural energy while moving. The clone-look-right-and-left technique didn't work this time. For the first time in his life, Naruto started to believe that some things were actually impossible...

*starts turning into a frog*
*smack on the head!*

Naruto: Ouch that really hurt, *pant, pant*

Fukusaku: Well kid, you've been on this thing for days now... Some things are just impossible. Even with hardwork.

Naruto *looking at the floor*: ...

Ma Frog *running towards training grounds* : Pa! Hey Pa! Get here!

Ma and Fukusaku started whisphering while looking both at Naruto. He could understand his frog-sensei agreeing with Ma, and say at the end ?I understand?.

Fukusaku: Hey Naruto! Hey kid! Pay attention! The old man inside wants to see ya.

Naruto: Old man? What old man.

Fukusaku: The Great Toad Sage now get moving!

Naruto (to himself): Great Toad Sage?

Naruto followed Pa and Ma into a frog-shaped temple and stepped into the large room, where in a chair, sat a huge old looking frog that smiled when he saw that blond spike-haired child. He had before him the destined child he had made a prophecy about a long time ago. He had seen him so many times in his dreams, and now he stood right before his eyes.

The one that would bring peace and not destruction. He knew it, he never was wrong.

Great Toad Sage: So you are little Jirayia's student eh? What's you're name again?

Fukusaku: *madly* It's Naruto, Great Sage! Naruto.

Great Toad Sage: Oh yes! Naruto! Now I remember... So boy, how's you're training been?

Naruto: *looking at his feet, disappointed* Not so good Great Sage... I'm not able to enter Sage Mode while moving... And I can't fuse with pa either. It seems I'll never master the Sage techniques... I might as well leave this Mountain.

Great Toad Sage: *Staring at Naruto with interest* I see...

That was when the Great Toad Sage made his decision. He would give him "that" gift. The most precious item the toads had. ?The time has come, he thought, to entrust this to someone...?.

His eyes started glowing like fire, and an intense light came from inside his mouth, lighting the entire room. Pa and Ma rushed to his side trying to help him in some way but it was useless. The Great Toad opened his mouth wide making the light shine even stronger, and wrapped in the tip of his tongue, that came out slowly was a large, shining, golden katana.

It had at the bottom two frogs with their mouths open, where the large golden blade came out. A yellow aura surrounded it, making it shine, reflected in Naruto's eyes. It was beauty as he had never seen before. He was speachless, he couldn't understand what was going on. The toad's long tongue left it gently on the floor where Naruto stood, completly paralised with what he had seen.

Great Toad Sage: Uzumaki Naruto, the Toads of this sacred mountain entrust to you The Sword of Myobokuzan and along with it all of our powers. Use them wisely, and don't bother any longer about gathering Natural energy, as long as you keep that sword on your back, you are more than a Sage my boy. Our power is now yours Naruto.

Naruto looked around him, still not understanding what had happened. All around him were dozens of frogs bowing before him, Pa, Ma, Gamakichi, even Gamabunta smiling and winking at him, while smoking his pipe in the back. The Great Toad Sage had gotten up from his chair to kneel before him.

Naruto: *shocked* Wh-why me?

Great Toad Sage: That my boy, is something you will understand one day.

Naruto grasped the sword firmly and looked at it. He felt that the path of his destiny had just begun.
 
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A Fanfic that follows the plot where we are at in the Manga. This is what I would have liked to see happen. Wait for new sequels soon! enjoy and leave your comments please!

Naruto's Destiny


Naruto was concentrated in his training, trying desperatly to gather natural energy while moving. The clone-look-right-and-left technique didn't work this time. For the first time in his life, Naruto started to believe that some things were actually impossible...

*starts turning into a frog*
*smack on the head!*

Naruto: Ouch that really hurt, *pant, pant*

Fukusaku: Well kid, you've been on this thing for days now... Some things are just impossible. Even with hardwork.

Naruto *looking at the floor*: ...

Ma Frog *running towards training grounds* : Pa! Hey Pa! Get here!

Ma and Fukusaku started whisphering while looking both at Naruto. He could understand his frog-sensei agreeing with Ma, and say at the end ?I understand?.

Fukusaku: Hey Naruto! Hey kid! Pay attention! The old man inside wants to see ya.

Naruto: Old man? What old man.

Fukusaku: The Great Toad Sage now get moving!

Naruto (to himself): Great Toad Sage?

Naruto followed Pa and Ma into a frog-shaped temple and stepped into the large room, where in a chair, sat a huge old looking frog that smiled when he saw that blond spike-haired child. He had before him the destined child he had made a prophecy about a long time ago. He had seen him so many times in his dreams, and now he stood right before his eyes.

The one that would bring peace and not destruction. He knew it, he never was wrong.

Great Toad Sage: So you are little Jirayia's student eh? What's you're name again?

Fukusaku: *madly* It's Naruto, Great Sage! Naruto.

Great Toad Sage: Oh yes! Naruto! Now I remember... So boy, how's you're training been?

Naruto: *looking at his feet, disappointed* Not so good Great Sage... I'm not able to enter Sage Mode while moving... And I can't fuse with pa either. It seems I'll never master the Sage techniques... I might as well leave this Mountain.

Great Toad Sage: *Staring at Naruto with interest* I see...

That was when the Great Toad Sage made his decision. He would give him "that" gift. The most precious item the toads had. ?The time has come, he thought, to entrust this to someone...?.

His eyes started glowing like fire, and an intense light came from inside his mouth, lighting the entire room. Pa and Ma rushed to his side trying to help him in some way but it was useless. The Great Toad opened his mouth wide making the light shine even stronger, and wrapped in the tip of his tongue, that came out slowly was a large, shining, golden katana.

It had at the bottom two frogs with their mouths open, where the large golden blade came out. A yellow aura surrounded it, making it shine, reflected in Naruto's eyes. It was beauty as he had never seen before. He was speachless, he couldn't understand what was going on. The toad's long tongue left it gently on the floor where Naruto stood, completly paralised with what he had seen.

Great Toad Sage: Uzumaki Naruto, the Toads of this sacred mountain entrust to you The Sword of Myobokuzan and along with it all of our powers. Use them wisely, and don't bother any longer about gathering Natural energy, as long as you keep that sword on your back, you are more than a Sage my boy. Our power is now yours Naruto.

Naruto looked around him, still not understanding what had happened. All around him were dozens of frogs bowing before him, Pa, Ma, Gamakichi, even Gamabunta smiling and winking at him, while smoking his pipe in the back. The Great Toad Sage had gotten up from his chair to kneel before him.

Naruto: *shocked* Wh-why me?

Great Toad Sage: That my boy, is something you will understand one day.

Naruto grasped the sword firmly and looked at it. He felt that the path of his destiny had just begun.
that is awesome dude i wana see another chapter :D
 

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*Wipeing the tear from my eyes*

Bro you a the man!!! this was awesome... it left me hanging for more... You have out done yourself... every nice...

Peace bro...:glomp::eek::cool:
 

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dude iamazing!! its perfect!!! if he actually does learn how to gain energy without a clone while moving it would be 10X better but its perfect!!!! lol
 

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OH! I'd forgotten about the Great Sage. This fic makes me excited about the upcoming chapters once again lol.. I had been getting bored with where the series was going. o_o

Story was freaking awesome, except for the golden sword part.. I would have used a different weapon, and I wouldn't have made it golden. In this day and age, we are drifting away from the whole mentality of "super cool and shiny object = uber powerful" ... xD
 
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