Naruto Criticism: The Ootsusuki Clan Ruined This Story

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Re: Naruto Criticism Chapter 2: The Ootsusuki Clan Ruined This Story

For me Kaguya and Hagoromo is enough, no need Hamura

The Hamura part that become complicated here not Kaguya, actually Kishi change many thing because of Hamura not Kaguya. Kaguya as Juubi still OK, it because Hagoromo that spread the Ninshuu, not Hamura, because of Hamura the yin and yang for two peoples is needed.

Kishi must stick with Hago that defeated Kaguya, because he is the one invented Yin and Yang seals not with Hamura, and also he need to make Hago a pinnacle of both yin and yang master, no needed to be a twin or pairing here.

Kaguya is not the problem, juubi to her, or her to juubi is still the same that is juubi also. But even in Juubi form Kaguya is underwhelming, got pinned by Hashirama, cant killed fodders ninja, and so on. But when she turn to human , she got nerf hard by Kishi.

There are many mistake Kishi have done here
 

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I agree that Sakura should have remained useless. Kishi cares too much about stupid fan service.

How Salura got into the fight made no sense.

First off, why would Sasuke think that Naruto would be affected by Infinite Tsukuyomi? He's seen/told first hand that genjutsu doesn't affect Jinchuuriki and there is no logical way for him to know that his Susanoo can block the genjutsu as even Black Zetsu didn't know that himself. This was just a contrived way to get the original Team 7 to save the world because they are the main characters. If Kishi had used logic Sakura would have been caught in the Genjutsu along with the rest of the world.
 

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I would just like to say that people saying Kaguya was a a terrible main villain are wrong. She wasn't a main villain, the main villain of the Kaguya arc lived in her sleeves.
 

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I would just like to say that people saying Kaguya was a a terrible main villain are wrong. She wasn't a main villain, the main villain of the Kaguya arc lived in her sleeves.

Databook says that Sexy Reverse Harem no Jutsu is D rank.

Kaguya getting owned by a D rank Jutsu makes her a fodder.
 

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Databook says that Sexy Reverse Harem no Jutsu is D rank.

Kaguya getting owned by a D rank Jutsu makes her a fodder.

Yes the fodder that can destroyed the earth, vaporise peoples with Ash bone, can change a dimensions, and the strongest being in NV

Its better be this kind of fodder than a real fodder.
 

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Databook says that Sexy Reverse Harem no Jutsu is D rank.

Kaguya getting owned by a D rank Jutsu makes her a fodder.
The really sad thing is that it is now an official jutsu, or it wouldn't have a rank.
 

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The really sad thing is that it is now an official jutsu, or it wouldn't have a rank.

Normal sexy Justu was E-rank. I guess woman in the Narutoverse are more vulnerable to *** appeal.
 

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Glad you make this thread and i agree with you i still love Naruto but Kishi failed with the Kaguya thing, he is a great mangaka but he can still improve a lot, Naruto had so much potential and he didn't take advantage of that
 

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Glad you make this thread and i agree with you i still love Naruto but Kishi failed with the Kaguya thing, he is a great mangaka but he can still improve a lot, Naruto had so much potential and he didn't take advantage of that

He's not a great mangaka. The reason why Naruto was ever good was because of his first editor. Once he left the series went to shit.
 

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What made the story good then? Naruto? Minato and Kushina's love that was out of this world - he loved her wig and she thought he was a gelding when they were young? Hinata's secret wetness inducing repeated chanting of the same words? Naruto's special reasoning that people who want to be Hokage are so cool? Obito throwing away his balls to fall to Naruto's level? Pein killing himself over Jiraiya's bad fan-fiction? Take your pick.
I don't see a disagreement in your comment Lol
 

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He's not a great mangaka. The reason why Naruto was ever good was because of his first editor. Once he left the series went to shit.

He is not that bad, IMO he should have taken a break after the Pain arc to recover energy and to start the rest of the story fresh
 

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Here is something to prove my point about Kaguya's purpose.

 
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