Naruto 437 Guess Script

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Really good! I love the sound effect u mix with ur story! It's more immersive in the story!

And by the way good flash back with jiraiya conversation with pein. This is defianatly like the manga would do!.

Great work again!
 
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Sicck script.

It'd be amazing if Naruto not only could use Flying Thunder God, but add maybe an elemental config to it, idk like zapping everyone with lightning or something lol. It'd work with the whole "each generation > than the next" mojo.

Anyway, keep up the awesome work. By the looks of my post count, imma
n0ob, but I've been around as a guest for awhile, and your writing is mad interesting.
 

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Sicck script.

It'd be amazing if Naruto not only could use Flying Thunder God, but add maybe an elemental config to it, idk like zapping everyone with lightning or something lol. It'd work with the whole "each generation > than the next" mojo.

Anyway, keep up the awesome work. By the looks of my post count, imma
n0ob, but I've been around as a guest for awhile, and your writing is mad interesting.
youve read other stuff of myne before? yeah that be cool like it he could set up a circle of special kunais and the rasengan a person from each angle with clones or sumthing:eek::rolleyes:
 

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lol I don't believe that exactly will happen but I'll be verry happy if somehow it happens ... :D So dude I like your side of thinking :D Nice music there :D
 

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This is a guess script i wrote for chapter 437 enjoy!

listen to this while you read its more exciting this way:


Chapter 437 "Naruto's Resolve"

*scene starts with naruto forced on the ground looking down*

Pein (god realm): so now do you see my resolve to all this?

Naruto:....

Pein:!?
*a long tongue appears as it wraps around peins legs and lifts pein high and smashes pein on the ground*

Shima: YOU NO GOOD AKATSUKI ILL SHOW YOU WHAT TRUE PAIN IS!!! *runs toward where pein landed and screams* THIS IS FOR FUKA!!!!! *INHALES AND SCREAMS HERMIT'S ART DEEP FRYER, AS A GIANT FLAME CONSUMES THE AREA PEIN LANDED*

Pein (god realm): *gets up*...shit...that was to quick even for me to counter at that point...no matter ill destroy you as well *gets in fight stance*

Shima: ILL SHOW YOU!!!!! *CHARGES AT PEIN*

Naruto: God damn it...am i still to weak...I couldnt even protect Fukasaku...*stares at fukasaku*

*flashbacks to jiraiya*
(now listen to this):

Jiraiya: naruto..i think its time I gave you something that you shouldve recieved long ago

Naruto:huh? *thinks and then replys* it better not be one of your stupid books again!

Jiraiya: *twicthes* im going to ignore you said that...*looks at naruto seriously* now, this is a weapon that belonged to my student..he had given me it right before he died....actually the night the kyuubi was sealed in you

Naruto: *makes curious face*...this must be one strong weapon?

Jiraiya: yup, it has takin down a over hundreds of shinobi who fought against him...and they all trembled at the might of his power, they called him "Konoha's Yellow Flash".

Naruto: *makes shocked face* isnt that the 4th hokages nickname!?

Jiraiya: *nods* yeah..i never got the hang of how to use it..you would need an insane amount of chakra, and the only person i know who has enough chakra to use this...is...

*naruto snaps back to reality as he hears fukasaku's voice*

Fukasaku:n...ar..uto...*spits blood*

Naruto:FUKASAKU! *looks behind him as he sees fukasaku crawling to him*

Fukasaku: ugh...*bleeds rapidly but continues to crawl to naruto*

Naruto: dont sensei YOUR GONA KILL YOUR SELF! *CRYS*

Fukasaku:..*continues to crawl and reaches naruto*..nar....uto...*lifts peins rod off of narutos hands*

Naruto: AHHH! *screams in pain*

Fukasaku: naruto its up to you now jiraiya believed in you since day one and so do I...NOW GET UP AND SNAP OUT OF IT!

Naruto: *gets up in pain*.......*picks fukasaku up and places him somewhere safe*

Fukasaku:...you have to defeat him naruto, i know you can!

Naruto: but im out of chakra..

Fukasaku: *chuckles in pain* WHAT HAPPEND TO THAT WILL AND DETERMINATION!? FIGHT EVERY SECOND LIKE ITS YOUR LAST NARUTO YOU CAN DO IT!....and one last thing....

Naruto:!?

Fukasaku:..i know you dont want to use that power...but now its your only option....dont let it consume you...take cont-- *faints*

now this music:

Naruto:*shocked face* FUKASAKU!!!!!

Pein: *appears behind naruto as he lets go of shima and she falls to the ground* I believe you understand now the way I feel...just come with me and I wont hurt anyone else..

Naruto: the way you feel!? you...are a murderer! your way of peace...is not true peace....*starts to tear in anger*..pervy...sage...told me...TRUE PEACE IS WHEN PEOPLE TRUELLY UNDERSTAND EACHOTHER! and ill achieve it by protecting my friends and get rid of people like you! *the ground starts to rumble and shake*

Pein (god realm): *makes shocked face and remembers what jiraiya said on first left panel* ( )

Naruto: *grows 1 tail and reaches into his pocket* the real fight begins now!

Naruto: *takes out from his pocket "Flying Thunder God" Kunai* Come!*stands in fight stance*

*scene ends with naruto holding the "Flying Thunder God" Kunai in fight stance*

The End

Tell me what you think?:)
kinda nice but flying thunder of god is not a kunai its a techinique a jutsu like kaga bunshi or anyother.....................
but i like the way ya think
 
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