Naruto 427 Guess Script!

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Warning: this is a fanmade cover by me, and my guess script on the upcoming chapter! ENJOY!

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Konohamaru: Let go of him! *makes mad face*

Ebisu: *tries to scream but Pain is chocking him* Ko....no...ha..ma..ru....run!

Pain: Fool...now it will be your turn to face judgement... *throws ebisu to the ground*

Ebisu: *gasping for breath* no....RUN KONOHAMARU!!!! *grabs pains leg*

Pain: ? *turns around and kicks ebisu in the stomach and he goes rolling beside the other injured shinobi*

Konohamaru: WHY YOU!!!! *throws kunai at him*

Pain: *ducks and dodges the kunai*...you think a weak move like that will defeat me? *slowely starts walking towards konohamaru*

Konohamaru: *dazed in fear* shit.........!
*starts backing up*

Ebisu:......i failed...my mission to protect you...konohamaru...*tries to lift a hand but is to drained of chakra*

Pain: I thought you want to fight me huh? where are you going?

Konohamaru: *two hands are placed on konohamarus back*

Moegi: konohamaru dont worry weve got your back!

Udon:...uh...yeah we do... *wipes his nose*

Pain:....more weaklings!

Konohamaru: *smirks* lets do the Konohamaru Corps special on him guys!
*udon and moegi nod*

Moegi: LETSSSSSS DO IT *the three surround pain in a triangle*

Pain: ?

Udon: *spits out a giant fireball from his mouth at pain*

Moegi: my turn *spits out water from her mouth at pain*

Konohamaru: DIE! *creates a small rasengan like orb in his hand*

Pain: !? *fire and water hit him from left and right*
*pain lifts two of his arms and easily stops the water and fire with his bare hands* that weak level of fire and water wont hurt me.....

Konohamaru: BUT THIS WILL! *konohamaru appears behind pain and hits him in the back with a small rasengan*

Pain: what the!? *goes flying into house*

Moegi: WE DID IT!

Udon: yay!

Konohamaru: *runs to ebisu and lifts him*

Ebisu: *hardly breathing* nice one....konohamaru...your grandpa and uncle would be proud of.....you

Konohamaru: its all cause naruto taught me the rasengan! *smirks*

Ebisu: that naruto sure is something..... *suddenly you hear moegi and udon screaming*

Konohamaru: !?

Ebisu: No.....way...!?

Konohamaru: *carrys ebisu towards the scream* GUYS WHAT HAPP---
*his eyes covered in darkness as he sees his teamates souls being sucked out*

Pain:hm....it seems you two werent lying...but you will pay for hurting me...
*chokes udon and moegi as they cry in pain*

Udon:....*breathing heavily nearly dead*

Moegi: *trying to resist*

Ebisu:...no...i cant let this...happen *gets up takes out a small katana from his back and charges at pain*

Pain: This time you will die! *lets go of udon and moegi but they seem to be already dead*
*pain catches the katana with his bear hands and rips the katan out of ebisus hand*

Konohamaru: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!*runs with tears coming down his face but doesnt make it in time*

*The next panel shows ebisu with a katana through his chest on the ground*
*and the scene changes to naruto with a surprised face*

Naruto: THATS IT!!!!!!!

Fukasaku: what is it naruto?

Naruto: im going to try and talk to kyuubi!

Fukasaku: thats insane *hits naruto with his stick*

Naruto: *rubs his head* owww what the hell sensei....!
*gets up* ive talked to him before i can do it again.....*closes his eyes*

Fukasaku: its not gona work naruto just drop it already!

Naruto: *ignores him and starts growing a a tail*....argg...it works...when i think...about the bad stuff that happend to me.....*starts growing 2 tails and fox teeth*

Fukasaku: *surprised face*...alright then...*thinks and then says* YOU WILL NEVER BRING SASUKE BACK AND YOU WILL NEVER COMPLETE THIS TRAINING YOU FAILURE!

Naruto: ARGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH*opens his eyes and its covered in red as well as forming the 3rd tail*

*naruto appears to be infront of a cage and the next pannel the scene changes back to konohamaru*

Konohamaru: *staring at ebisu crying*

Pain: now its your turn!

Konohamaru: *makes a mad face and remembers his grandpa (the 3rd showing him enma when he was little*

*Flashback*

Sarutobi: *summens enma* this is enma you will be able to summen him once your strong enough and train hard konohamaru!

Konohamaru: cool!!!!! *jumps up and down* TEACH ME TEACH ME TEACH ME!

Sarutobi: *smirks* so you want to learn ehh? *turns enma into a staff and swings him around* alright then... get ready this isnt gona be easy!

*scene changes back to knohamaru crying with a mad face*

Konohamaru:....this is what i came here to do, i came here to avenge you grandpa and uncle asuma!!!!!!!!!!

Konohamaru: *suddenly he stops crying*
*unbuttens his shirt and the next thing you c is him looking like the front cover*

Pain: new outfit wont help you beat me kid! *stares at konohamaru*

Konohamaru:..this time im going to kill you *puts his hand to the ground and big poof happens*

The scene ends with
*him standing next to enma*

I made it a little long hoping for some reason the chapters will be a little longer, anyway tell me what you think?
U r beautilful no matter wat they say
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TC9 GREAT JOB!!!!! as always u come up wit som bang'n scripts bro..............dont mean to beat a dead horse, i'm sure u have seen my previous request.............

but plz bro finish "2m after pain"....and "sas vs naruto"...........i got all in to em and sh*t............and (hate to admit this cuz makes me sound like im ride'n your n*ts) but i check your threads almost every day to c if u have completed the next chapter/volume and its been like a month or 2 and nuthin!!!!

again....... no1 respex your work more than me........i would love it if u started your own branch of it "TC9 shippuden X" or sumthin where its not "predicted scripts",but your own version of it..............would be BA!!!!

neways.....good work.....hope you keep it up....but i know u got other sh*t to do beside make scpripts for our enjoyment so......hope you dont think i'm pestering you......i wont bugg ya again about it:D.........just had to ask;)
 

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TC9 GREAT JOB!!!!! as always u come up wit som bang'n scripts bro..............dont mean to beat a dead horse, i'm sure u have seen my previous request.............

but plz bro finish "2m after pain"....and "sas vs naruto"...........i got all in to em and sh*t............and (hate to admit this cuz makes me sound like im ride'n your n*ts) but i check your threads almost every day to c if u have completed the next chapter/volume and its been like a month or 2 and nuthin!!!!

again....... no1 respex your work more than me........i would love it if u started your own branch of it "TC9 shippuden X" or sumthin where its not "predicted scripts",but your own version of it..............would be BA!!!!

neways.....good work.....hope you keep it up....but i know u got other sh*t to do beside make scpripts for our enjoyment so......hope you dont think i'm pestering you......i wont bugg ya again about it:D.........just had to ask;)
lol thanks you are on of the best fans of my scripts lol, and also i would like to start a branch of my own shippuden or sumthin like that, i might start making something like that but i need some drawers to do panels for me but i might be able to do it on my own in a few months besides that i understand you wana c 2m after pein well ive decided to continue that and make a part 3to it, it will be released sometime in this week or the next :D;)
 
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