Warning: this is a fanmade cover by me, and my guess script on the upcoming chapter! ENJOY!
Konohamaru: Let go of him! *makes mad face*
Ebisu: *tries to scream but Pain is chocking him* Ko....no...ha..ma..ru....run!
Pain: Fool...now it will be your turn to face judgement... *throws ebisu to the ground*
Ebisu: *gasping for breath* no....RUN KONOHAMARU!!!! *grabs pains leg*
Pain: ? *turns around and kicks ebisu in the stomach and he goes rolling beside the other injured shinobi*
Konohamaru: WHY YOU!!!! *throws kunai at him*
Pain: *ducks and dodges the kunai*...you think a weak move like that will defeat me? *slowely starts walking towards konohamaru*
Konohamaru: *dazed in fear* shit.........!
*starts backing up*
Ebisu:......i failed...my mission to protect you...konohamaru...*tries to lift a hand but is to drained of chakra*
Pain: I thought you want to fight me huh? where are you going?
Konohamaru: *two hands are placed on konohamarus back*
Moegi: konohamaru dont worry weve got your back!
Udon:...uh...yeah we do... *wipes his nose*
Pain:....more weaklings!
Konohamaru: *smirks* lets do the Konohamaru Corps special on him guys!
*udon and moegi nod*
Moegi: LETSSSSSS DO IT *the three surround pain in a triangle*
Pain: ?
Udon: *spits out a giant fireball from his mouth at pain*
Moegi: my turn *spits out water from her mouth at pain*
Konohamaru: DIE! *creates a small rasengan like orb in his hand*
Pain: !? *fire and water hit him from left and right*
*pain lifts two of his arms and easily stops the water and fire with his bare hands* that weak level of fire and water wont hurt me.....
Konohamaru: BUT THIS WILL! *konohamaru appears behind pain and hits him in the back with a small rasengan*
Pain: what the!? *goes flying into house*
Moegi: WE DID IT!
Udon: yay!
Konohamaru: *runs to ebisu and lifts him*
Ebisu: *hardly breathing* nice one....konohamaru...your grandpa and uncle would be proud of.....you
Konohamaru: its all cause naruto taught me the rasengan! *smirks*
Ebisu: that naruto sure is something..... *suddenly you hear moegi and udon screaming*
Konohamaru: !?
Ebisu: No.....way...!?
Konohamaru: *carrys ebisu towards the scream* GUYS WHAT HAPP---
*his eyes covered in darkness as he sees his teamates souls being sucked out*
Pain:hm....it seems you two werent lying...but you will pay for hurting me...
*chokes udon and moegi as they cry in pain*
Udon:....*breathing heavily nearly dead*
Moegi: *trying to resist*
Ebisu:...no...i cant let this...happen *gets up takes out a small katana from his back and charges at pain*
Pain: This time you will die! *lets go of udon and moegi but they seem to be already dead*
*pain catches the katana with his bear hands and rips the katan out of ebisus hand*
Konohamaru: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!*runs with tears coming down his face but doesnt make it in time*
*The next panel shows ebisu with a katana through his chest on the ground*
*and the scene changes to naruto with a surprised face*
Naruto: THATS IT!!!!!!!
Fukasaku: what is it naruto?
Naruto: im going to try and talk to kyuubi!
Fukasaku: thats insane *hits naruto with his stick*
Naruto: *rubs his head* owww what the hell sensei....!
*gets up* ive talked to him before i can do it again.....*closes his eyes*
Fukasaku: its not gona work naruto just drop it already!
Naruto: *ignores him and starts growing a a tail*....argg...it works...when i think...about the bad stuff that happend to me.....*starts growing 2 tails and fox teeth*
Fukasaku: *surprised face*...alright then...*thinks and then says* YOU WILL NEVER BRING SASUKE BACK AND YOU WILL NEVER COMPLETE THIS TRAINING YOU FAILURE!
Naruto: ARGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH*opens his eyes and its covered in red as well as forming the 3rd tail*
*naruto appears to be infront of a cage and the next pannel the scene changes back to konohamaru*
Konohamaru: *staring at ebisu crying*
Pain: now its your turn!
Konohamaru: *makes a mad face and remembers his grandpa (the 3rd showing him enma when he was little*
*Flashback*
Sarutobi: *summens enma* this is enma you will be able to summen him once your strong enough and train hard konohamaru!
Konohamaru: cool!!!!! *jumps up and down* TEACH ME TEACH ME TEACH ME!
Sarutobi: *smirks* so you want to learn ehh? *turns enma into a staff and swings him around* alright then... get ready this isnt gona be easy!
*scene changes back to knohamaru crying with a mad face*
Konohamaru:....this is what i came here to do, i came here to avenge you grandpa and uncle asuma!!!!!!!!!!
Konohamaru: *suddenly he stops crying*
*unbuttens his shirt and the next thing you c is him looking like the front cover*
Pain: new outfit wont help you beat me kid! *stares at konohamaru*
Konohamaru:..this time im going to kill you *puts his hand to the ground and big poof happens*
The scene ends with
*him standing next to enma*
I made it a little long hoping for some reason the chapters will be a little longer, anyway tell me what you think?
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Konohamaru: Let go of him! *makes mad face*
Ebisu: *tries to scream but Pain is chocking him* Ko....no...ha..ma..ru....run!
Pain: Fool...now it will be your turn to face judgement... *throws ebisu to the ground*
Ebisu: *gasping for breath* no....RUN KONOHAMARU!!!! *grabs pains leg*
Pain: ? *turns around and kicks ebisu in the stomach and he goes rolling beside the other injured shinobi*
Konohamaru: WHY YOU!!!! *throws kunai at him*
Pain: *ducks and dodges the kunai*...you think a weak move like that will defeat me? *slowely starts walking towards konohamaru*
Konohamaru: *dazed in fear* shit.........!
*starts backing up*
Ebisu:......i failed...my mission to protect you...konohamaru...*tries to lift a hand but is to drained of chakra*
Pain: I thought you want to fight me huh? where are you going?
Konohamaru: *two hands are placed on konohamarus back*
Moegi: konohamaru dont worry weve got your back!
Udon:...uh...yeah we do... *wipes his nose*
Pain:....more weaklings!
Konohamaru: *smirks* lets do the Konohamaru Corps special on him guys!
*udon and moegi nod*
Moegi: LETSSSSSS DO IT *the three surround pain in a triangle*
Pain: ?
Udon: *spits out a giant fireball from his mouth at pain*
Moegi: my turn *spits out water from her mouth at pain*
Konohamaru: DIE! *creates a small rasengan like orb in his hand*
Pain: !? *fire and water hit him from left and right*
*pain lifts two of his arms and easily stops the water and fire with his bare hands* that weak level of fire and water wont hurt me.....
Konohamaru: BUT THIS WILL! *konohamaru appears behind pain and hits him in the back with a small rasengan*
Pain: what the!? *goes flying into house*
Moegi: WE DID IT!
Udon: yay!
Konohamaru: *runs to ebisu and lifts him*
Ebisu: *hardly breathing* nice one....konohamaru...your grandpa and uncle would be proud of.....you
Konohamaru: its all cause naruto taught me the rasengan! *smirks*
Ebisu: that naruto sure is something..... *suddenly you hear moegi and udon screaming*
Konohamaru: !?
Ebisu: No.....way...!?
Konohamaru: *carrys ebisu towards the scream* GUYS WHAT HAPP---
*his eyes covered in darkness as he sees his teamates souls being sucked out*
Pain:hm....it seems you two werent lying...but you will pay for hurting me...
*chokes udon and moegi as they cry in pain*
Udon:....*breathing heavily nearly dead*
Moegi: *trying to resist*
Ebisu:...no...i cant let this...happen *gets up takes out a small katana from his back and charges at pain*
Pain: This time you will die! *lets go of udon and moegi but they seem to be already dead*
*pain catches the katana with his bear hands and rips the katan out of ebisus hand*
Konohamaru: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!*runs with tears coming down his face but doesnt make it in time*
*The next panel shows ebisu with a katana through his chest on the ground*
*and the scene changes to naruto with a surprised face*
Naruto: THATS IT!!!!!!!
Fukasaku: what is it naruto?
Naruto: im going to try and talk to kyuubi!
Fukasaku: thats insane *hits naruto with his stick*
Naruto: *rubs his head* owww what the hell sensei....!
*gets up* ive talked to him before i can do it again.....*closes his eyes*
Fukasaku: its not gona work naruto just drop it already!
Naruto: *ignores him and starts growing a a tail*....argg...it works...when i think...about the bad stuff that happend to me.....*starts growing 2 tails and fox teeth*
Fukasaku: *surprised face*...alright then...*thinks and then says* YOU WILL NEVER BRING SASUKE BACK AND YOU WILL NEVER COMPLETE THIS TRAINING YOU FAILURE!
Naruto: ARGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH*opens his eyes and its covered in red as well as forming the 3rd tail*
*naruto appears to be infront of a cage and the next pannel the scene changes back to konohamaru*
Konohamaru: *staring at ebisu crying*
Pain: now its your turn!
Konohamaru: *makes a mad face and remembers his grandpa (the 3rd showing him enma when he was little*
*Flashback*
Sarutobi: *summens enma* this is enma you will be able to summen him once your strong enough and train hard konohamaru!
Konohamaru: cool!!!!! *jumps up and down* TEACH ME TEACH ME TEACH ME!
Sarutobi: *smirks* so you want to learn ehh? *turns enma into a staff and swings him around* alright then... get ready this isnt gona be easy!
*scene changes back to knohamaru crying with a mad face*
Konohamaru:....this is what i came here to do, i came here to avenge you grandpa and uncle asuma!!!!!!!!!!
Konohamaru: *suddenly he stops crying*
*unbuttens his shirt and the next thing you c is him looking like the front cover*
Pain: new outfit wont help you beat me kid! *stares at konohamaru*
Konohamaru:..this time im going to kill you *puts his hand to the ground and big poof happens*
The scene ends with
*him standing next to enma*
I made it a little long hoping for some reason the chapters will be a little longer, anyway tell me what you think?
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