[Other] Manifestation of Awesomeness

[Waindo]

Manifestation of awesomeness,
Simple word monuments.
Like a hurricane in a glass of water,
Shattering membranes.
With it's sheer artfullness.

You're witnessing a freestyle;
Rhapsody.
When u see it, you go senile.
Meanwhile?
Your brain gets defiled,
By this manifestation of awesomeness,
I bid my farewell now;
I'm freaking marvelous.

 

[Kvothe Kingkiller]

Nice, but seems like you push a bit far for the rhyming

 

[Limbo]

whats with these poetry stuff today lmao

 

[ChrisWolf]

Nice, but seems like you push a bit far for the rhyming

theres no such thing as too far with the rhyming, you write whats in your soul, the imagination is the only limiter on the soul

 

[Waindo]

Thanks for the support.

 

[Darkdro]

Dope. IMO you could've of made it longer then 13 Sentences.

Make more Tho.

 

[Waindo]

...check the section...I'm tireless...:T_T:

 

[Ryóma]

It's nice. I like all the words you used.

 

[Waindo]

Thank you.