Lightning with zoro

[Zoro..]

Performing it:*I hold my sword in my right hand and grip the sword tightly.I then Covering the sword in chakra and begin to relase more chakra from my hand around the sword and vibrate the chakra.As i begin to pour more chakra around the sword and vibrate my chakra the speed of the chakra begins to speed up.As the speed of my chakra continues sparks start to appear around the sword releasing sharp bits of lightning from the sword covering it entirely.I then grip the sword tightly and run towards the tree.As i approach the tree i sideways slash cutting straight through the tree*
How I would use it:To increase the strength and cutting ability of my sword meaning it can cut through objects with ease or i could throw the sword which is covering in lightning at the enemy
Weaknesses:Since the lightning covering the sword is only B rank if you went to cut through a S rank defence of earth the sword wouldn't go through.
Advantages:Can increase the strength of your sword making them able to cut through object with ease.The sword also becomes stronger meaning you would beat a normal swordsman in a fight.
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Performing it:*I raise my right hand in the sky and concentrate lightning chakra into my right hand.As my hand is in the air i concentrate my chakra into my hand and begin to vibrate my chakra that is in my hand speeding up the chakra in my hand.As the chakra speeds up sparks appear from around my hand.I then concentrate more of my chakra in my hand and thrust my hand in in the air releasing the chakra which was in my hand as lightning*
How I would use it:To attack the enemy from above making them have to move or create a shield.I could make them move into some spikes or make them create a shield above them meaning they coudnt weave hand seals making them open for a attack.
Weaknesses:The attack has to come down from the air to hit the enemy meaning if they saw you release the lightning they could anticapate the attack.
Advantages:Its only one handseal to perform the the attack is quick.The range of this attack is short to long range so you can attack the enemy from all distances.
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Sorry for the delay. I just couldnt get down to reading that >_< btw from now on just perform it.

(Raiton: Shuriken Seigyo no Jutsu) - Lightning Release: Shuriken Control Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user will take out two large shuriken or Windmill Shuriken and channel their raiton chakra into them. They will then throw them at their target to pin them down and maintain a connection with the shuriken through a electrical cable that delivers a numbing shock to paralyse the target and restrict their movements.
Note: Numbing Effect lasts for one turn.

For this technique I want you to draw a Windmill Shuriken and channel your raiton chakra into it. Then throw it at your opponent while channeling your raiton chakra into it and have a cable which will come in contact with your oppnent paralyzing him.

 

[Lysander]

Sorry for the late reply xd

*I pull out a Windmill Shuriken from my back pocket.I then hold the windmill in my right hand and look at your clone.I focus on the Windmill Shuriken and channel my chakra from my right hand into the shruiken.While my chakra is covering the Windmill Shuriken i vibrate my chakra surrounding the Windmill Shuriken and increase its speed.As the speed of my chakra steadily increase sparks comes from the Windmill Shuriken coating it in lightning.I then throw the Windmill Shuriken with my right hand aimed straight at your clone.As soon as i release it i keep a electrical connection to it.As it comes into contact with your clone it shocks him*

 

[Zoro..]

Sorry for the late reply xd

*I pull out a Windmill Shuriken from my back pocket.I then hold the windmill in my right hand and look at your clone.I focus on the Windmill Shuriken and channel my chakra from my right hand into the shruiken.While my chakra is covering the Windmill Shuriken i vibrate my chakra surrounding the Windmill Shuriken and increase its speed.As the speed of my chakra steadily increase sparks comes from the Windmill Shuriken coating it in lightning.I then throw the Windmill Shuriken with my right hand aimed straight at your clone.As soon as i release it i keep a electrical connection to it.As it comes into contact with your clone it shocks him*

Alrighty.
Do you have any questions?

 

[Lysander]

No,not yet.

 

[Zoro..]

o^o
Nothing >.>
Hmm
Alright tell me what you know about Shape Manipulation. Wiki it if you have to I want a wallo text.

 

[Lysander]

Shape manipulation is a advanced form of chakra control.It involves changing the form and movement of chakra, determining the size, range, and purpose of a technique.A example of it would be the rasengan,The Rasengan relies heavily on chakra control and does not require the use of hand seals only shape manipulation.It is is one of two necessary techniques for creating or modifying a technique with its counterpart being Nature Transformation.Shape Transformation changes the form and movement of chakra.A couple of great shape maniulation users would be minato,saskue and Naruto.

 

[Zoro..]

Shape manipulation is a advanced form of chakra control.It involves changing the form and movement of chakra, determining the size, range, and purpose of a technique.A example of it would be the rasengan,The Rasengan relies heavily on chakra control and does not require the use of hand seals only shape manipulation.It is is one of two necessary techniques for creating or modifying a technique with its counterpart being Nature Transformation.Shape Transformation changes the form and movement of chakra.A couple of great shape maniulation users would be minato,saskue and Naruto.

Alright.

Have you learned Rasengan or anything that requires shape manipulation yet?

 

[Lysander]

Alright.

Have you learned Rasengan or anything that requires shape manipulation yet?

Yeah i have learnt the rasengan

 

[Zoro..]

Alright.

Channel your lightning chakra to your hand and begin manipulating it to shape into a Chidori. Give it a try.

 

[Lysander]

*After hearing the instructions from Zoro i begin to remember the training from which i formed the rasengan from.I then begin to channel lightning chakra from my body and concentrate that lightning chakra into my right hand since its the dominate one.Once i have gathered enough lightning chakra into my right hand i begin to vibrate the lightning chakra in my right hand rapidly which increase the speed.Once the speed of my chakra has increased due to the chakra being vibrated rapidly lightning starts to cover my hand.Once lightning starts to cover my hand i use shape manipulation to make the lightning chakra only cover my hand.The lightning start to then give of the sound of birds chirping

 

[Zoro..]

*No birds chirp and nothing happens*

Oh yeah you gotta perform the following handseals. And practice them a few times first. Ox → Rabbit → Monkey → Dragon → Rat → Bird → Ox → Snake → Dog → Tiger → Monkey

 

[Lysander]

*After listneing to which handseals to perform i practise the Ox → Rabbit → Monkey → Dragon → Rat → Bird → Ox → Snake → Dog → Tiger → Monkey hand seals a couple of times to master the handseals.Once i have mastered the hand seals i begin to remember the training from which i formed the rasengan from.I then begin to channel lightning chakra from my body and concentrate that lightning chakra into my right hand since its the dominate one.Once i have gathered enough lightning chakra into my right hand i begin to vibrate the lightning chakra in my right hand rapidly which increase the speed.Once the speed of my chakra has increased due to the chakra being vibrated rapidly lightning starts to cover my hand.Once lightning starts to cover my hand i use shape manipulation to make the lightning chakra only cover my hand.The lightning start to then give of the sound of birds chirping*

 

[Zoro..]

"I then begin to channel lightning chakra from my body and concentrate that lightning chakra into my right hand since its the dominate one.Once i have gathered enough lightning chakra into my right hand i begin to vibrate the lightning chakra in my right hand rapidly which increase the speed.Once the speed of my chakra has increased due to the chakra being vibrated rapidly lightning starts to cover my hand.Once lightning starts to cover my hand i use shape manipulation to make the lightning chakra only cover my hand.The lightning start to then give of the sound of birds chirping*"

Copy pasta word for word :sy: I want you to re do it. And dont give me the result of the jutsu since succeeding at this isnt easy .-.

 

[Lysander]

*As nothing happens i once again perform the Ox → Rabbit → Monkey → Dragon → Rat → Bird → Ox → Snake → Dog → Tiger → Monkey hand seals.After performing the hand seals i channel my lightning chakra into my new found dominant left hand and begin to vibrate my chakra into my left hand.Once my chakra in my left hand begins to increase speed due to the vibrations lightning starts to flicker around my left hand.I then try and use shape manipulation to make it cover my hand but nothing happens

 

[Zoro..]

*As nothing happens i once again perform the Ox → Rabbit → Monkey → Dragon → Rat → Bird → Ox → Snake → Dog → Tiger → Monkey hand seals.After performing the hand seals i channel my lightning chakra into my new found dominant left hand and begin to vibrate my chakra into my left hand.Once my chakra in my left hand begins to increase speed due to the vibrations lightning starts to flicker around my left hand.I then try and use shape manipulation to make it cover my hand but nothing happens

What do the handseals do? You say they focus your chakra o-O
Also how do you have lightning chakra before vibrating it?

 

[Lysander]

*As nothing happens for the third time i once again perform the Ox → Rabbit → Monkey → Dragon → Rat → Bird → Ox → Snake → Dog → Tiger → Monkey hand seals which focuses my chakra.After performing the hand seals i channel my chakra into my new found dominant left hand and begin to vibrate my chakra into my left hand.Once my chakra in my left hand begins to increase speed due to the vibrations my chakra turns into lightning chakra, Immediately after this lightning starts to flicker around my left hand.I then try and use shape manipulation to make it cover my hand but nothing happens

 

[Zoro..]

If nothing happens then why do you post? O_O
Your suppose to end with a "..." and depending on how you describe it I shall tell you what happens.

 

[Lysander]

*As nothing happens for the third time i once again perform the Ox → Rabbit → Monkey → Dragon → Rat → Bird → Ox → Snake → Dog → Tiger → Monkey hand seals which focuses my chakra.After performing the hand seals i channel my chakra into my new found dominant left hand and begin to vibrate my chakra into my left hand.Once my chakra in my left hand begins to increase speed due to the vibrations my chakra turns into lightning chakra, Immediately after this lightning starts to flicker around my left hand.I then try and use shape manipulation to make it cover my hand...

I know I copied it but icant change it anymore since I have done it three times now.

 

[Zoro..]

*As nothing happens for the third time i once again perform the Ox → Rabbit → Monkey → Dragon → Rat → Bird → Ox → Snake → Dog → Tiger → Monkey hand seals which focuses my chakra.After performing the hand seals i channel my chakra into my new found dominant left hand and begin to vibrate my chakra into my left hand.Once my chakra in my left hand begins to increase speed due to the vibrations my chakra turns into lightning chakra, Immediately after this lightning starts to flicker around my left hand.I then try and use shape manipulation to make it cover my hand...

I know I copied it but icant change it anymore since I have done it three times now.

How did you just figure out your left hand was dominant? Chidori is the base of a dozen of lightning techniques. We will not move on till you get it right >.< Rewrite it and add more detail if you do not want to copy paste because I dont like seeing it. Ive done similar training and wrote out a technique ten times differently Im sure you can do the same.

Try again ^^

 

[Lysander]

*After failing again i am determined to do it more than ever.I once again quickly peform the short sequences of hand seals which are the Ox → Rabbit → Monkey → Dragon → Rat → Bird → Ox → Snake → Dog → Tiger → Monkey hand seals.Once i have perform the hand seals i focus my chakra into my dominant right hand and palm.Once my chakra is concentrated in my palm i vibrate the chakra which makes the particles bounce of one another creating small vibrations.As the vibrations increase the speed of my chakra slightly increases.I then pour and concentrate more of my chakra into my palm and keep on increasing the speed.Once the speed is high enough small sparks of lightning start to appear from around my palm.As soon as the lightning appears i use shape manipulation to make the lightning only surround the palm of my hand....