Lightning with zoro

[Lysander]

*Sits and waits*
Heres my previous training

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I just describes the technique so I need to know if I did it right

 

[Zoro..]

Hello Fox ^_^

Okay,
So what I would like you to do is perform the last technique you learned using my template.

For every jutsu that we will do I always want you to reply with the following template:

Performing it: 
How I would use it:
Weaknesses:
Advantages:
Picture or Clip:

This will show me you actually know the technique and know how to use it.

 

[Lysander]

Performing it *I close my eyes and begin channeling my lightning chakra all around the outside of my body until I can feel it circulating all around my body.When I open my eyes there is a flickers if lightning coming from all around the outside of my body forming a shield around my body i then keep the chakra circulating around my body making sure its spread out evenly all the way around then run at your clone then stan next to him as the lightning shield explodes it sends your clone flying and hitting a wall*
How I would use it I would use this if I was attacking my oppent if they were only using taijutsu or to destroy clones which are behind/near me
Weakness if someone sprayed water on you
Advantage When used to make it explode it requires no Handseals
Picture N/A

 

[Zoro..]

Performing it *I close my eyes and begin channeling my lightning chakra all around the outside of my body until I can feel it circulating all around my body.When I open my eyes there is a flickers if lightning coming from all around the outside of my body forming a shield around my body i then keep the chakra circulating around my body making sure its spread out evenly all the way around then run at your clone then stan next to him as the lightning shield explodes it sends your clone flying and hitting a wall*
How I would use it I would use this if I was attacking my oppent if they were only using taijutsu or to destroy clones which are behind/near me
Weakness if someone sprayed water on you
Advantage When used to make it explode it requires no Handseals
Picture N/A

Pretty good try and be more detailed in the advantages and disadvantages for instance the speed of this jutsu is tremendous thus you could use it when an opponent is swinging at you and such.

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Thats a picture...

Next jutsu:

(Ration: Ikazuchi Kashou) - Lightning Release: Thunder Burn
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user fires a wave of lightning bolts at the opponent.

Pretty simple. Its self explanatory and has the same concept as the first technique you learned.
Use the template ^_^

 

[Lysander]

Performng it I focus my lightning chakra into both palms of my hand I then keep the chakra into my hand and concentrate it into bolts o lightning which a thrust forward using my hands just missing you on purpose*
how would I use it When my enemy is in water or just to attack with when they are behind earth
Weakness If the oppent was a distance away from me the attack woudnt reach them since it's short range
Advanatage It has a great effective if the oppent is using a water move or hiding behind earth and you don't need to use hand seals
Picture

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this bult slighlt different since it's the closest I could find

 

[Zoro..]

Performng it I focus my lightning chakra into both palms of my hand I then keep the chakra into my hand and concentrate it into bolts o lightning which a thrust forward using my hands just missing you on purpose*
how would I use it When my enemy is in water or just to attack with when they are behind earth
Weakness If the oppent was a distance away from me the attack woudnt reach them since it's short range
Advanatage It has a great effective if the oppent is using a water move or hiding behind earth and you don't need to use hand seals
Picture

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this bult slighlt different since it's the closest I could find

Be more descriptive...

(Raiton: Jibashi) - Lightning Release: Electromagnetic Murder
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30 (+5 if used in conjunction with a water jutsu)
Description: This jutsu allows the user to create a wave of electricity from the user's hands. This jutsu can vary in power from a small surge to shock an opponent to a powerful stream of lightning capable of ripping through solid rock. It is ideal to use in conjunction with a water jutsu.

Focus your lightning chakra into your hands and then create a wave of electricity with it.

 

[Lysander]

Performing it: *I close my eyes and focus all my lightning chakra into my hands.When i open my eyes there is a spark of electricity coming from my hands,i then imagine a wall of lightning in front of my and lower my hands to the floor and raise them quickly,this then creates a wall of lightning in front of me*
How I would use it:To defend from a attack thats coming towards me or use it as a distraction while i go underground
Weaknesses: The enemy could jump over or go around the wall to attack you
Advantages:Can stop small scale attack and if someone shot a blast of water at the wall it would just make i stronger i think
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Note:Not much to describe what happens during this move

 

[Zoro..]

Performing it: *I close my eyes and focus all my lightning chakra into my hands.When i open my eyes there is a spark of electricity coming from my hands,i then imagine a wall of lightning in front of my and lower my hands to the floor and raise them quickly,this then creates a wall of lightning in front of me*
How I would use it:To defend from a attack thats coming towards me or use it as a distraction while i go underground
Weaknesses: The enemy could jump over or go around the wall to attack you
Advantages:Can stop small scale attack and if someone shot a blast of water at the wall it would just make i stronger i think
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Note:Not much to describe what happens during this move

First off the lightning is a wave not a wall. The lightning is mean to be used in conjunction with a water attack, for instance if I used Storm Upheaval I could use this with it to increase the power of the Storm Upheaval. This jutsu is extremely open ended, try it again ^_^

 

[Lysander]

Performing it: *I close my eyes and focus all my lightning chakra into my hands.When i open my eyes there is a spark of electricity coming from my hands,i then imagine a wave of lightning in front of my and lower my hands to the floor and raise them quickly,this then creates a small wave of lightning in front of me.I then repeat the move but this time keep my lightning chakra into my hand and the wave and thrust it forward towards you*
How I would use it:To defend from a attack thats coming towards me or use it as a distraction while i go underground
Weaknesses: The enemy could jump over or go around the wall to attack you
Advantages:Can stop small scale attack and if someone shot a blast of water at the wall it would just make i stronger i think
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Note:Not much to describe what happens during this move

 

[Zoro..]

Performing it: *I close my eyes and focus all my lightning chakra into my hands.When i open my eyes there is a spark of electricity coming from my hands,i then imagine a wave of lightning in front of my and lower my hands to the floor and raise them quickly,this then creates a small wave of lightning in front of me.I then repeat the move but this time keep my lightning chakra into my hand and the wave and thrust it forward towards you*
How I would use it:To defend from a attack thats coming towards me or use it as a distraction while i go underground
Weaknesses: The enemy could jump over or go around the wall to attack you
Advantages:Can stop small scale attack and if someone shot a blast of water at the wall it would just make i stronger i think
Picture or Clip:

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Note:Not much to describe what happens during this move

How does the lightning appear in your hands? Its not just magic. And you need to add lightning properties to the chakra to have lightning chakra. And if you channeled all your chakra you would die
How you would use it, is wrong as well. You could not use it as a distraction to go underground. Since the opponent can see through the tendrils.
And lightning is not strong against water, on the other hand the water could push through your lightning creating a water/lightning combo back at you.
It is not a wall so they cant jump over it.
Try again :/

 

[Lysander]

Performing it: *I close my eyes and focus SOME of my lightning chakra into my hands.When i open my eyes there is a sparks of electricity coming from my hands i then imagine violent fast movements and characteristics of lightning,i then imagine a wave of lightning in front of my and lower my hands to the floor and raise them quickly sending lightning out of my hands as i do this, then this then creates a small wave of lightning in front of me which like is spirals of lightning streams.I then repeat the move but this time keep my lightning chakra into my hand and the wave and thrust it forward towards you*
How I would use it:To defend from a attack thats coming towards me or to use as a short range attack when the enemy was very close or as a water combo
Weaknesses: The enemy could send a wave of water to go through it
Advantages:Can stop small scale attack and could be combined with a water move to make it stronger when you push it towards someone
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If its not right this time can you explain it to me

 

[Zoro..]

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19:01-19:15
That is the technique you are learning. Basically it is almost always used in conjuction with water. I hope when you see it it clears stuff up.

 

[Lysander]

Thanks you did clear it up and i can see how to do it now

Performing it: *As i see you in front of me i place my hands out in front of me and concentrate my lightning into my hand and and picture the characteristics of lightning and the violent and fast manner of it.I then concentrate that and the lightning chakra into my hand and there are tiny spark emerging from the palms and tips of my hand.I then thrust my hands out towards you then closing them releasing that lightning chakra from my hands which comes out into streams of lightning going in all direction towards you.
How I would use it: I would use this jutsu if my oppent was in a water prism where i could shock them or just a normal attack.
Weaknesses: If the enemy sent a higher rank water attack at me the same time i sent my electric attack the water would combine with the water sending it back at me
Advantages: Can shock the enemy and requires no hands seals and its a fast attack
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You know where it is lol
I think this better

 

[Lysander]

Thanks you did clear it up and i can see how to do it now

Performing it: *As i see you in front of me i place my hands out in front of me and concentrate my lightning into my hand and and picture the characteristics of lightning and the violent and fast manner of it.I then concentrate that and the lightning chakra into my hand and there are tiny spark emerging from the palms and tips of my hand.I then thrust my hands out towards you then closing them releasing that lightning chakra from my hands which comes out into streams of lightning going in all direction towards you.
How I would use it: I would use this jutsu if my oppent was in a water prism where i could shock them or just a normal attack.
Weaknesses: If the enemy sent a higher rank water attack at me the same time i sent my electric attack the water would combine with the electric sending it back at me
Advantages: Can shock the enemy and requires no hands seals and its a fast attack
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You know where it is lol
I think this better

 

[Zoro..]

Thanks you did clear it up and i can see how to do it now

Performing it: *As i see you in front of me i place my hands out in front of me and concentrate my lightning into my hand and and picture the characteristics of lightning and the violent and fast manner of it.I then concentrate that and the lightning chakra into my hand and there are tiny spark emerging from the palms and tips of my hand.I then thrust my hands out towards you then closing them releasing that lightning chakra from my hands which comes out into streams of lightning going in all direction towards you.
How I would use it: I would use this jutsu if my oppent was in a water prism where i could shock them or just a normal attack.
Weaknesses: If the enemy sent a higher rank water attack at me the same time i sent my electric attack the water would combine with the electric sending it back at me
Advantages: Can shock the enemy and requires no hands seals and its a fast attack
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You know where it is lol
I think this better

Goo enough. Now tell me with what water techniques you would use it with, and why.

 

[Lysander]

Well i havent learn past d rank in water but i think
(Suiton: Suikōtoppa) – Water Release: Water Shark Breakthrough
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: short
Chakra cost 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will create a water shark to jump into the air and bolt towards the opponent, striking them.
Note: Requires a water source.

This can be timed to land the same time as the lightning and also

(Suiton: Mizu No Tatsumaki) - Water Style: Water Tornado
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Descripton: Utilizes water to create a spinning water vortex around the ninja. The water acts both as a barrier and attack mechanism. The power of the vortex is enough to knock an opponent unconscious.
Note: Can only be performed if there is a water source near by.
To make a water lightning combo

 

[Zoro..]

Okay fair enough.

(Raiton: Raikyu) - Lightning Release: Lightning Ball
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: By gathering chakra in their hands, the user can create a ball of electrical energy and launch it at the enemy.

I want you to channel your chakra to your hands. Once there you will add lightning properties to turn your chakra into lightning and manipulate it into electrical energy and launch it at a nearby tree.

 

[Lysander]

Performing it: *I walk up to a nearby tree and focus on one specific spot in the middle of the tree as a target.I then concentrate chakra into my hands and imagine the characteristics of lightning the fast and violent manner.Sparks them come out of my hands i then concentrate the lightning chakra into my hands until i can see the lightning sparks appear more visibly i begin to manipulate the lightning into a ball by distributing the volume of chakra evenly.This then forms a ball of lightning which a thrust at the tree*
How I would use it: I would use it to pierce through a lightning wall which is in front of me or just as a overall attack or in some circumstances to to use it as a water combo
Weaknesses: The overall attack is a small scale one so the enemy could dodge the lightning easily.
Advantages: Requires no handseals and the attack is quick and can be used in conjunction with other elements like water to make it more powerfull
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looks something along the lines of this

 

[Zoro..]

I want you to write more and imagine more scenarios. Also the properties of lightning also include high frequency and high vibrations.


(Raiton: Raigeki no Yoroi) - Lightning Release: Lightning Strike Armour
Rank: C
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user surrounds themselves with electricity. The intense electric field protects them by electrocuting anyone who comes into contact with it, but only works for one attack.

I want you to write a ton for this one and be extremely imaginative since this is an extremely useful jutsu.

 

[Lysander]

I will try never been good at the wall o text.

Performing it: *I close my eyes and circulate all of my chakra around my body and concentrate and increasing the speed of it,i then vibrate my chakra at high speeds and at this moment the hair on my arms begin to stick up and i can hear a high pitched noise coming from all around my body like a whistle and i increase the frequancy of my chakra and make it more violent and fast.As i do this sparks form around some of my body so i even out the chakra distribution around my body evening it all out then when i open my eyes there is a sheet of lightning covering all around my i then begin to walk and make sure to keep concentration to keep the lightning covering around me*
How I would use it: I would use this as a technique when fighting in close combat with someone when they are about to throw a punch or kick.I could also use this to stop week scale attacks
Weaknesses: I think that if someone shot water at me it would electrocute me (Tell me if i'm wrong)
Advantages: No hand seals and can be used whenever and can be used for every type of fighting like long range or close combat
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Like this but dosent make the faster and dosent last as long