Learning suiton with Noni :)
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*She takes a deep breath*
"Suiton is one of the basic elemental nature transformation techniques that allow the user to manipulate pre-existing water, or create their own, by turning their chakra into water. It takes much more ability to create the water outside the body than to manipulate what is already available or expel it from their mouths. One of the most versatile of the five basic chakra natures, suiton techniques can not only change shape but state as well. Moreover, the water becomes more solid in the process as well. Offensive water techniques seem to inflict harm from the sudden force that they exert, which would cause massive internal damage to a human."
"Nailed it..." *She thinks*
"Suiton is one of the basic elemental nature transformation techniques that allow the user to manipulate pre-existing water, or create their own, by turning their chakra into water. It takes much more ability to create the water outside the body than to manipulate what is already available or expel it from their mouths. One of the most versatile of the five basic chakra natures, suiton techniques can not only change shape but state as well. Moreover, the water becomes more solid in the process as well. Offensive water techniques seem to inflict harm from the sudden force that they exert, which would cause massive internal damage to a human."
"Nailed it..." *She thinks*
PSHHHHHHHHH You ain't nail anything. You did below average of what I expect. But I don't like to stall. Here is my explanation on it.
The most fluid of all the elements its main properties vary with many things it can be free flowing and flexible, it can be used to create large amount of water to literally push back an opponent and make the suffocate, sharpen to impale a opponent on contact. Its calm nature makes it very easy to control unlike the other elements. But like mentioned its also a very destructive nature if used correctly. With it you can summon a large amount of water which can like I said, push a opponent back and hurt them. But its not all it can break in some cases if used with enough water can break many trees, plants, and cause serious terrain change. It can also out wait on the opponent making it hard for movement. Its ability to impale or pierce is also strong not as potent as lighting but it can still cause serious cuts and stabs which can seriously hurt a opponent.
Water is strong against fire because it naturally extinguishes the flames (though a sufficiently powerful fire technique can cause evaporation) but is weak against earth because earth structures can dissipate the force of water rendering the technique ineffective. it can be used with Wind Release to increase the speed and destructive power of a water technique.
The most fluid of all the elements its main properties vary with many things it can be free flowing and flexible, it can be used to create large amount of water to literally push back an opponent and make the suffocate, sharpen to impale a opponent on contact. Its calm nature makes it very easy to control unlike the other elements. But like mentioned its also a very destructive nature if used correctly. With it you can summon a large amount of water which can like I said, push a opponent back and hurt them. But its not all it can break in some cases if used with enough water can break many trees, plants, and cause serious terrain change. It can also out wait on the opponent making it hard for movement. Its ability to impale or pierce is also strong not as potent as lighting but it can still cause serious cuts and stabs which can seriously hurt a opponent.
Water is strong against fire because it naturally extinguishes the flames (though a sufficiently powerful fire technique can cause evaporation) but is weak against earth because earth structures can dissipate the force of water rendering the technique ineffective. it can be used with Wind Release to increase the speed and destructive power of a water technique.
Alright I want you to perform this techniques with detail.
(Suiton No Jutsu) - Water technique
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary/Attack/Defence
Range: Short-Mid
Damage Points:20
Description: Creates small waves of water,small blasts, and small shields of water.
Note: Doesn't require a water source but can be used to manipulate existing water.
Okay to start off we will begin very simple. I want you to gather your raw chakra and release the chakra forward while manipulating the nature of the chakra into suiton chakra. Summon a small wave of water and send it towards the dummy set up short range. It should wash up the dummy. Fairly simple nothing much to say here. Try though to be descriptive as possible for your sake.
(Suiton No Jutsu) - Water technique
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary/Attack/Defence
Range: Short-Mid
Damage Points:20
Description: Creates small waves of water,small blasts, and small shields of water.
Note: Doesn't require a water source but can be used to manipulate existing water.
Okay to start off we will begin very simple. I want you to gather your raw chakra and release the chakra forward while manipulating the nature of the chakra into suiton chakra. Summon a small wave of water and send it towards the dummy set up short range. It should wash up the dummy. Fairly simple nothing much to say here. Try though to be descriptive as possible for your sake.
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"Okay... Here we go..."
*Karui weaves a few hand seals and focuses. She puts her fingers in front of her mouth as if she was holding a straw and blows out an enormous amount of breath. An itty-bitty line of water squirts out of her mouth* "... Let's try this again..." *She mumbles to herself. She repeats the process, focusing even harder. She blows out a large stream of water and it pushes the dummy back quite a distance. Whilst still in the position of bending over and holding her imaginary straw, she looks over at her teacher and says*: "... Did I do it right?"
(Suiton No Jutsu) - Water technique
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary/Attack/Defence
Range: Short-Mid
Damage Points:20
Description: Creates small waves of water,small blasts, and small shields of water.
Note: Doesn't require a water source but can be used to manipulate existing water.
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary/Attack/Defence
Range: Short-Mid
Damage Points:20
Description: Creates small waves of water,small blasts, and small shields of water.
Note: Doesn't require a water source but can be used to manipulate existing water.
*Karui weaves a few hand seals and focuses. She puts her fingers in front of her mouth as if she was holding a straw and blows out an enormous amount of breath. An itty-bitty line of water squirts out of her mouth* "... Let's try this again..." *She mumbles to herself. She repeats the process, focusing even harder. She blows out a large stream of water and it pushes the dummy back quite a distance. Whilst still in the position of bending over and holding her imaginary straw, she looks over at her teacher and says*: "... Did I do it right?"
Their are no hand seals in that jutsu, everything else is fine.
(Kirigakure No Jutsu) - Hidding in Mist Jutsu
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This displacement technique creates a thick mist to spring forth by lifting up some water from either a pre-existing source or expelled from their mouth, then goes in and out of sight at will from within the pearly-white realm. The mist's thickness is controlled by the amount of chakra kneaded into it. It can't fool the Byakugan, but, due to the mist being created with the user's chakra, any Sharingan and Rinnegan-user will see the mist coloured by their opponent's chakra, which will effectively hide the user from the dojutsu.
Note: Can be created through releasing from mouth or manipulating a nearby water source.
A very famous water jutsu, I want you to gather your chakra in the pit of your stomach and manipulate the nature into suiton chakra. Thin out the suiton chakra to an extent and release from your mouth a thick mist all over the terrain. Release it in between us so when it covers the terrain we will lose vision of one another. Another simple tech nothing to much about it. I should tell you though using a water source to create the mist is much more faster, the opponent would have little to no time to stop the mist covering the area. Though for now use your own chakra source.
(Kirigakure No Jutsu) - Hidding in Mist Jutsu
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This displacement technique creates a thick mist to spring forth by lifting up some water from either a pre-existing source or expelled from their mouth, then goes in and out of sight at will from within the pearly-white realm. The mist's thickness is controlled by the amount of chakra kneaded into it. It can't fool the Byakugan, but, due to the mist being created with the user's chakra, any Sharingan and Rinnegan-user will see the mist coloured by their opponent's chakra, which will effectively hide the user from the dojutsu.
Note: Can be created through releasing from mouth or manipulating a nearby water source.
A very famous water jutsu, I want you to gather your chakra in the pit of your stomach and manipulate the nature into suiton chakra. Thin out the suiton chakra to an extent and release from your mouth a thick mist all over the terrain. Release it in between us so when it covers the terrain we will lose vision of one another. Another simple tech nothing to much about it. I should tell you though using a water source to create the mist is much more faster, the opponent would have little to no time to stop the mist covering the area. Though for now use your own chakra source.
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"No hand seals? Then what the hell was I doing with my hands?.." *Karui thinks to herself and almost misses her teacher's instructions*
"Alright! Gotcha!"
*Karui follows her master's instructions precisely and steps directly in front of him. She gathers her chakra in the pit of her stomach and closes her eyes and stands completely still. Slowly and gracefully, she opens her mouth, and little by little, mist forms in front of the two. Although slow, it eventually covered a good amount of the field and the two were completely hidden. They could not see eachother even though they were standing right in front of eachother*
"That wasn't as hard as I expected..." *She thinks to herself*
"Alright! Gotcha!"
(Kirigakure No Jutsu) - Hidding in Mist Jutsu
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This displacement technique creates a thick mist to spring forth by lifting up some water from either a pre-existing source or expelled from their mouth, then goes in and out of sight at will from within the pearly-white realm. The mist's thickness is controlled by the amount of chakra kneaded into it. It can't fool the Byakugan, but, due to the mist being created with the user's chakra, any Sharingan and Rinnegan-user will see the mist coloured by their opponent's chakra, which will effectively hide the user from the dojutsu.
Note: Can be created through releasing from mouth or manipulating a nearby water source.
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This displacement technique creates a thick mist to spring forth by lifting up some water from either a pre-existing source or expelled from their mouth, then goes in and out of sight at will from within the pearly-white realm. The mist's thickness is controlled by the amount of chakra kneaded into it. It can't fool the Byakugan, but, due to the mist being created with the user's chakra, any Sharingan and Rinnegan-user will see the mist coloured by their opponent's chakra, which will effectively hide the user from the dojutsu.
Note: Can be created through releasing from mouth or manipulating a nearby water source.
*Karui follows her master's instructions precisely and steps directly in front of him. She gathers her chakra in the pit of her stomach and closes her eyes and stands completely still. Slowly and gracefully, she opens her mouth, and little by little, mist forms in front of the two. Although slow, it eventually covered a good amount of the field and the two were completely hidden. They could not see eachother even though they were standing right in front of eachother*
"That wasn't as hard as I expected..." *She thinks to herself*
Blows the mist away. >_>
(Suiton: Mizu Kuri No Yaiba) - Water Style: Sword of Draining
Rank: D
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: A technique that utilizes water to create a sword. The sword can be wielded in the normal fashion, allowing the ninja to cut and stab like with a normal blade.
Note: Doesn't require a water source.
A nice suiton jutsu. Like always gather your chakra in your chakra system all over your body. Channel the chakra towards through your arm and stop at your hand. Then nature manipulate the chakra into suiton. Your hand will have suiton chakra in it, release it and shape the chakra into a sharp water sword. It has the same attack potency as a regular blade. I want you to stap the dummy that appeared right next to you out of nowhere.
(Suiton: Mizu Kuri No Yaiba) - Water Style: Sword of Draining
Rank: D
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: A technique that utilizes water to create a sword. The sword can be wielded in the normal fashion, allowing the ninja to cut and stab like with a normal blade.
Note: Doesn't require a water source.
A nice suiton jutsu. Like always gather your chakra in your chakra system all over your body. Channel the chakra towards through your arm and stop at your hand. Then nature manipulate the chakra into suiton. Your hand will have suiton chakra in it, release it and shape the chakra into a sharp water sword. It has the same attack potency as a regular blade. I want you to stap the dummy that appeared right next to you out of nowhere.
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"I guess he is a master in futon as well... Brilliant.... Still a jerk, but absolutely brilliant..."
"Yes, sir."
*Karui channels her chakra through her arm. She turns the chakra into water and starts to gracefully perform some sort of dance that looked absolutely fantastic. She waves her hand around slowly and skillfully and water starts to form from out of it. She continues to wave her hand around until enough water releases. She then suddenly stops her movement and the squiggly path of water forms into a straight, sharp water sword. Then dummy then appears near her*
"This guy is good..."
*She swings the sword sideways in an excellent form and instead of stabbing the dummy, she decapitates it in hopes of pleasing her teacher. She stays silent, waiting for her teacher's approval*
"Yes, sir."
(Suiton: Mizu Kuri No Yaiba) - Water Style: Sword of Draining
Rank: D
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: A technique that utilizes water to create a sword. The sword can be wielded in the normal fashion, allowing the ninja to cut and stab like with a normal blade.
Note: Doesn't require a water source.
Rank: D
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: A technique that utilizes water to create a sword. The sword can be wielded in the normal fashion, allowing the ninja to cut and stab like with a normal blade.
Note: Doesn't require a water source.
*Karui channels her chakra through her arm. She turns the chakra into water and starts to gracefully perform some sort of dance that looked absolutely fantastic. She waves her hand around slowly and skillfully and water starts to form from out of it. She continues to wave her hand around until enough water releases. She then suddenly stops her movement and the squiggly path of water forms into a straight, sharp water sword. Then dummy then appears near her*
"This guy is good..."
*She swings the sword sideways in an excellent form and instead of stabbing the dummy, she decapitates it in hopes of pleasing her teacher. She stays silent, waiting for her teacher's approval*
I see how it is doe >_>
It was fine good job...
( Suiton: Junsai no Jutsu ) - Water Release: Water Shield Technique
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary, Defence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will manipulate their water chakra and releasing it from their arm which is held outwards infront of them and they then create a shield of water that can aide in defence against projectile weapons and close combat techniques.
Gather your chakra in your chakra system all over your body. Channel the chakra towards both of your arms all the way through your hands. Manipulate the nature of the chakra into pure suiton chakra and hold your hands out ward in front of yourself. Release the gathered suiton chakra and manipulate the shape of the suiton chakra into a shield that has the power to take on projectile weapons and close range attacks.
throws kunai in attempt to kill you. (block with the shield)
It was fine good job...
( Suiton: Junsai no Jutsu ) - Water Release: Water Shield Technique
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary, Defence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will manipulate their water chakra and releasing it from their arm which is held outwards infront of them and they then create a shield of water that can aide in defence against projectile weapons and close combat techniques.
Gather your chakra in your chakra system all over your body. Channel the chakra towards both of your arms all the way through your hands. Manipulate the nature of the chakra into pure suiton chakra and hold your hands out ward in front of yourself. Release the gathered suiton chakra and manipulate the shape of the suiton chakra into a shield that has the power to take on projectile weapons and close range attacks.
throws kunai in attempt to kill you. (block with the shield)
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"Thank you, sensei." *She smiles at him*
"Holy shi..." *Karui quickly gathers her chakra, mimicking the start of her last technique. She frantically looks away, closing her eyes and putting her arms up. She releases the suiton chakra out of her hands and a medium-sized water shield forms. The kunai was stopped in it's tracks right in between the water shield. She succeeded. But barely, due to her teacher's expectations of her reflexes. She opens one eye and looks at the shield. It disperses and the kunai drops*
"You crazy!.. Gah! You almost killed me!" *She swings her fist at him and accidentally hits a nearby tree* "Yoooowwwwowww!.." *She rubs her hand and gives him an aggravated look* "Next lesson..."
( Suiton: Junsai no Jutsu ) - Water Release: Water Shield Technique
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary, Defence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will manipulate their water chakra and releasing it from their arm which is held outwards infront of them and they then create a shield of water that can aide in defence against projectile weapons and close combat techniques.
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary, Defence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will manipulate their water chakra and releasing it from their arm which is held outwards infront of them and they then create a shield of water that can aide in defence against projectile weapons and close combat techniques.
"Holy shi..." *Karui quickly gathers her chakra, mimicking the start of her last technique. She frantically looks away, closing her eyes and putting her arms up. She releases the suiton chakra out of her hands and a medium-sized water shield forms. The kunai was stopped in it's tracks right in between the water shield. She succeeded. But barely, due to her teacher's expectations of her reflexes. She opens one eye and looks at the shield. It disperses and the kunai drops*
"You crazy!.. Gah! You almost killed me!" *She swings her fist at him and accidentally hits a nearby tree* "Yoooowwwwowww!.." *She rubs her hand and gives him an aggravated look* "Next lesson..."
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O goodness don't hurt yourself.
Now we are on C-Ranks.
Use this template from now on.
(Suiton: Mizu Hari) - Water Release: Water Needles Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: By using their gentle fist chakra control, a hyuga member may condense nearby water and shape them into needles to launch at the target.
Note: Requires a nearby water source.
With water source next to you as well as have the opponent very close by. Manipulating the water source the user will create a water needle to rise from the water and speed towards the opponent in attempt to impale the opponent. Inflicting serious sharp pain. Its a straightforward technique and projectile based when you send the needle towards the opponent. Its similar to the jutsu above but is a needle instead which gives a different type of pain from the attack.
(Suiton: Suiben) - Water Release: Water whip
Rank: C
Type: Offensive, supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: After the user performs a series of 3 hand seals Rat ? Dog ? Ox, the user creates a whip of water that can be used to strike the opponent with a lashing action or wrap around the target to bind them. This technique can also have lightning techniques channeled through when they have bound their victim with the water whip.
After 3 hand seals the user will channel suiton chakra and release it creating a whip of water. It can be sent towards the opponent lashing at them, or wrapping the opponent with it to bind them. If you bind the opponent with it you can send a lightning technique through it to shock and paralyze the opponent. You have complete control over the whip as well as the whip being very fast and flexible. Though you are a walking target for lightning attacks. The whip stays on for only one turn by the way.
Now we are on C-Ranks.
Use this template from now on.
PHP:
[B]Perform the technique:[/B]
[B]Creative uses/strengths:[/B]
[B]Drawbacks/counters:[/B]Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: By using their gentle fist chakra control, a hyuga member may condense nearby water and shape them into needles to launch at the target.
Note: Requires a nearby water source.
With water source next to you as well as have the opponent very close by. Manipulating the water source the user will create a water needle to rise from the water and speed towards the opponent in attempt to impale the opponent. Inflicting serious sharp pain. Its a straightforward technique and projectile based when you send the needle towards the opponent. Its similar to the jutsu above but is a needle instead which gives a different type of pain from the attack.
(Suiton: Suiben) - Water Release: Water whip
Rank: C
Type: Offensive, supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: After the user performs a series of 3 hand seals Rat ? Dog ? Ox, the user creates a whip of water that can be used to strike the opponent with a lashing action or wrap around the target to bind them. This technique can also have lightning techniques channeled through when they have bound their victim with the water whip.
After 3 hand seals the user will channel suiton chakra and release it creating a whip of water. It can be sent towards the opponent lashing at them, or wrapping the opponent with it to bind them. If you bind the opponent with it you can send a lightning technique through it to shock and paralyze the opponent. You have complete control over the whip as well as the whip being very fast and flexible. Though you are a walking target for lightning attacks. The whip stays on for only one turn by the way.
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*Karui gives a thumbs up* "I won't!" *She smiles*
*She walks to a nearby small pool of water and does as her sensei instructs. She begins to wave her hands and a few thin strips of water rise from the pool. They take the form of senbon and with a wave of her hand, she sends them flying forward*
Creative uses/strengths: Quick, requires no hand seals, deals decent (?) damage, requires little chakra and might give you an advantage against a lightning attack/defense.
Drawbacks/counters: Can definitely be blocked, useless against a doton defense or attack, requires a water source and they are for short range.
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*Karui moves on to the next jutsu and does as instructed. She weaves three hand seals, rat, dog and ox and swings her hand out, releasing a long whip of water. Her sensei could see she is definitely getting the hang of the water techniques. She whips the water whip around, showing off a bit. What she had displayed with the whip was excellent and precise. After a while, it disperses*
Creative uses/strengths: Short - Mid attacks, decent (?) damage, requires little chakra, can be used in conjunction with lightning attacks, can bind your opponent, you are in complete control of the whip, it's very fast and flexible.
Drawbacks/counters: Not the ideal technique for long range, only usable for one turn then it disperses, requires 3 hand seals and it leaves you prone to lightning attacks.
*She walks to a nearby small pool of water and does as her sensei instructs. She begins to wave her hands and a few thin strips of water rise from the pool. They take the form of senbon and with a wave of her hand, she sends them flying forward*
(Suiton: Mizu Hari) - Water Release: Water Needles Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: By using their gentle fist chakra control, a hyuga member may condense nearby water and shape them into needles to launch at the target.
Note: Requires a nearby water source.
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: By using their gentle fist chakra control, a hyuga member may condense nearby water and shape them into needles to launch at the target.
Note: Requires a nearby water source.
Creative uses/strengths: Quick, requires no hand seals, deals decent (?) damage, requires little chakra and might give you an advantage against a lightning attack/defense.
Drawbacks/counters: Can definitely be blocked, useless against a doton defense or attack, requires a water source and they are for short range.
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*Karui moves on to the next jutsu and does as instructed. She weaves three hand seals, rat, dog and ox and swings her hand out, releasing a long whip of water. Her sensei could see she is definitely getting the hang of the water techniques. She whips the water whip around, showing off a bit. What she had displayed with the whip was excellent and precise. After a while, it disperses*
(Suiton: Suiben) - Water Release: Water whip
Rank: C
Type: Offensive, supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: After the user performs a series of 3 hand seals Rat ? Dog ? Ox, the user creates a whip of water that can be used to strike the opponent with a lashing action or wrap around the target to bind them. This technique can also have lightning techniques channeled through when they have bound their victim with the water whip.
Rank: C
Type: Offensive, supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: After the user performs a series of 3 hand seals Rat ? Dog ? Ox, the user creates a whip of water that can be used to strike the opponent with a lashing action or wrap around the target to bind them. This technique can also have lightning techniques channeled through when they have bound their victim with the water whip.
Creative uses/strengths: Short - Mid attacks, decent (?) damage, requires little chakra, can be used in conjunction with lightning attacks, can bind your opponent, you are in complete control of the whip, it's very fast and flexible.
Drawbacks/counters: Not the ideal technique for long range, only usable for one turn then it disperses, requires 3 hand seals and it leaves you prone to lightning attacks.
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I would like it if you can add as much creativity and description in the other two points then just the performance. I expect 3+ sentences for each.
(Suiton: Mizuame Nababara) - Water Style: Starch Syrup Capture Field
Rank: C
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user After performing the required hand seals Ram ? Tiger spits out high-viscosity, chakra infused water, aimed at a surface of wide scope. This is a stream of sticky liquid which can be used to form an adhesive trap that can inhibit a person's mobility. One can effectively reduce their enemy's area of activity with this technique, and has the effect of being able to take complete control over the battlefield. The normal scope of this technique is normally just a few metres, but if prepared, it is also possible to make an entire pond of starch syrup. Being caught in the technique can be avoided by channelling chakra to one's feet allowing one to walk upon it uninhibited, beforehand.
A very good jutsu the user after two hand seals will spew out a very slippery, sticky syrup substance. Its a trap which if a opponent is caught will not be able to move around since their feet will be stuck on the sticky substance. If you use the technique immediately it might just spew a small amount, if you take some time though to spew the syrup it can be a large pond. Its a great combo useful technique. If used correctly you can have complete control of the battlefield and keep opponents pushed back, especially fast opponent. Beforehand though make sure you channel chakra on your feet before you spew the syrup so you can walk on it without restriction.
(Mizu Bunshin) - Water Release: Water Clone
Rank: C
Range: Short
Type: Supplementary
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After performing the Tiger hand seal the user creates a clone of themselves made of water. These water clones have 1/10th of the users chakra. These clones are also limited in that they can only travel short range from the user without losing control. When a water clone take enough damage they revert back to normal water.
Note: Can only perform up to C rank Water techniques and requires a water source.
Okay with one hand seal the user will use a water source to create a exact clone out of themselves, made of water. They can only travel a short distance and can take damage easily until dispersed back into water. This water clone can only perform Water jutsus up to C-Rank. Clones are great for a extra man to take the advantage in number, use combos, and deceive your opponent. The clone is made short range of the user, and the clone acts on the will of the opponent.
(Suiton: Mizuame Nababara) - Water Style: Starch Syrup Capture Field
Rank: C
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user After performing the required hand seals Ram ? Tiger spits out high-viscosity, chakra infused water, aimed at a surface of wide scope. This is a stream of sticky liquid which can be used to form an adhesive trap that can inhibit a person's mobility. One can effectively reduce their enemy's area of activity with this technique, and has the effect of being able to take complete control over the battlefield. The normal scope of this technique is normally just a few metres, but if prepared, it is also possible to make an entire pond of starch syrup. Being caught in the technique can be avoided by channelling chakra to one's feet allowing one to walk upon it uninhibited, beforehand.
A very good jutsu the user after two hand seals will spew out a very slippery, sticky syrup substance. Its a trap which if a opponent is caught will not be able to move around since their feet will be stuck on the sticky substance. If you use the technique immediately it might just spew a small amount, if you take some time though to spew the syrup it can be a large pond. Its a great combo useful technique. If used correctly you can have complete control of the battlefield and keep opponents pushed back, especially fast opponent. Beforehand though make sure you channel chakra on your feet before you spew the syrup so you can walk on it without restriction.
(Mizu Bunshin) - Water Release: Water Clone
Rank: C
Range: Short
Type: Supplementary
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After performing the Tiger hand seal the user creates a clone of themselves made of water. These water clones have 1/10th of the users chakra. These clones are also limited in that they can only travel short range from the user without losing control. When a water clone take enough damage they revert back to normal water.
Note: Can only perform up to C rank Water techniques and requires a water source.
Okay with one hand seal the user will use a water source to create a exact clone out of themselves, made of water. They can only travel a short distance and can take damage easily until dispersed back into water. This water clone can only perform Water jutsus up to C-Rank. Clones are great for a extra man to take the advantage in number, use combos, and deceive your opponent. The clone is made short range of the user, and the clone acts on the will of the opponent.
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*Karui moves on to her next technique. She concentrates chakra onto her feet and weaves the Ram and Tiger hand seals. She then spits out a stream of the sticky goo until a small-sized pool of it covered the area before her. A few flies land on it and become immobilized showing the ability of this technique in action*
"Cool business..." *She thinks to herself*
Creative uses/strengths: This technique has the ability to immobilize your opponent. It can be used quickly and effectively at a short distance or can be prepped to cover a large area. This technique also has the advantage of controlling the battlefield, giving you the upper hand against a taijutsu-based opponent or an opponent that is quick.
Drawbacks/counters: In order for you to cover a large area with this technique, it must be prepped. It also requires two hand seals. Concentrating chakra in your feet is a must so that you do not get stuck in it yourself.
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*Karui prepares for her next technique and weaves the Tiger hand seal. She concentrates and a clone made of water appears beside her. She sends it forward to attack her sensei but it goes too far and breaks back down to a water puddle*
"So much for that idea..."
Creative uses/strengths: This actually looks like a really good technique to me. It can deceive the opponent, for starters. It only requires one hand seal as well. They can perform up to C rank suiton techniques and can give you the upper hand in battle.
Drawbacks/counters: There's a lot of drawback to this technique, though. It requires a water source. They can only be sent out a short distance. When they go too far, they revert back to a puddle. Although they can perform C rank suiton techniques, that's all they can perform. No higher. The clones also act on the will of the opponent so I assume the user doesn't have full control over the clone. It can only take up to so much damage before it reverts back to a puddle and it is also pretty weak.
(Hopefully I did it to your liking this time. I understood what you told me to do is be as descriptive with the pros and cons of the technique as I am with actually performing the technique.)
"Cool business..." *She thinks to herself*
(Suiton: Mizuame Nababara) - Water Style: Starch Syrup Capture Field
Rank: C
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user After performing the required hand seals Ram ? Tiger spits out high-viscosity, chakra infused water, aimed at a surface of wide scope. This is a stream of sticky liquid which can be used to form an adhesive trap that can inhibit a person's mobility. One can effectively reduce their enemy's area of activity with this technique, and has the effect of being able to take complete control over the battlefield. The normal scope of this technique is normally just a few metres, but if prepared, it is also possible to make an entire pond of starch syrup. Being caught in the technique can be avoided by channelling chakra to one's feet allowing one to walk upon it uninhibited, beforehand.
Rank: C
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user After performing the required hand seals Ram ? Tiger spits out high-viscosity, chakra infused water, aimed at a surface of wide scope. This is a stream of sticky liquid which can be used to form an adhesive trap that can inhibit a person's mobility. One can effectively reduce their enemy's area of activity with this technique, and has the effect of being able to take complete control over the battlefield. The normal scope of this technique is normally just a few metres, but if prepared, it is also possible to make an entire pond of starch syrup. Being caught in the technique can be avoided by channelling chakra to one's feet allowing one to walk upon it uninhibited, beforehand.
Creative uses/strengths: This technique has the ability to immobilize your opponent. It can be used quickly and effectively at a short distance or can be prepped to cover a large area. This technique also has the advantage of controlling the battlefield, giving you the upper hand against a taijutsu-based opponent or an opponent that is quick.
Drawbacks/counters: In order for you to cover a large area with this technique, it must be prepped. It also requires two hand seals. Concentrating chakra in your feet is a must so that you do not get stuck in it yourself.
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*Karui prepares for her next technique and weaves the Tiger hand seal. She concentrates and a clone made of water appears beside her. She sends it forward to attack her sensei but it goes too far and breaks back down to a water puddle*
"So much for that idea..."
(Mizu Bunshin) - Water Release: Water Clone
Rank: C
Range: Short
Type: Supplementary
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After performing the Tiger hand seal the user creates a clone of themselves made of water. These water clones have 1/10th of the users chakra. These clones are also limited in that they can only travel short range from the user without losing control. When a water clone take enough damage they revert back to normal water.
Note: Can only perform up to C rank Water techniques and requires a water source.
Rank: C
Range: Short
Type: Supplementary
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After performing the Tiger hand seal the user creates a clone of themselves made of water. These water clones have 1/10th of the users chakra. These clones are also limited in that they can only travel short range from the user without losing control. When a water clone take enough damage they revert back to normal water.
Note: Can only perform up to C rank Water techniques and requires a water source.
Creative uses/strengths: This actually looks like a really good technique to me. It can deceive the opponent, for starters. It only requires one hand seal as well. They can perform up to C rank suiton techniques and can give you the upper hand in battle.
Drawbacks/counters: There's a lot of drawback to this technique, though. It requires a water source. They can only be sent out a short distance. When they go too far, they revert back to a puddle. Although they can perform C rank suiton techniques, that's all they can perform. No higher. The clones also act on the will of the opponent so I assume the user doesn't have full control over the clone. It can only take up to so much damage before it reverts back to a puddle and it is also pretty weak.
(Hopefully I did it to your liking this time. I understood what you told me to do is be as descriptive with the pros and cons of the technique as I am with actually performing the technique.)
You can't kill me :| and yeah good job keep it like this.
(Suiton: Suigandan) - Water Release: Water Fang Bullet
Rank: C
Range: Short
Type: Offense
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: A technique that deals physical damage to the enemy with a liquid mass brought forth from underwater. Its power to kill and maim is augmented by adding a spinning motion to the compactly pressured water. During fights on water, taking advantage of its characteristic ability to attack from anywhere in a 360 degrees radius, in conjunction with other techniques for distraction, confusion and so forth, this technique has an extensive array of applications.
Note: Requires a water source.
Okay with a water source the user will summon a drill from the water, the drill will act to penetrate the opponent and give a serious intense pain. Its a quick jutsu and is performed quick. Right when the user summons it they can go onto the next technique, great for combos. Its great for distractions and attacking from areas the opponent might not expect. The drilling motion does make a sound as well as it being a basic technique easy to anticipate.
Suiton: Kirigakure Shiryoku Hakudatsu) - Water Release: Hidden Mist Eye Sight Deprevation
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15(-3 each turn to keep it active)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Using the hidden mist jutsu the user reflects the natural light an a way that it blinds there opponent temporarily as long as the opponent is in the mist.
Note: Must have already used hidden mist jutsu
A very effective supplementary jutsu. After you create hidden mist jutsu (D-Rank) the user will will manipulate the mist in a way where it will reflect natural light. The light will shine throughout the mist and blind anyone ahead of the user. That is why it can only extend short-mid, so it does not blind the user. The opponent will be blinded and distracted you can use the open window to send a large streaming attack through the mist to kill the opponent. It moves fast, and the light when set is released instantly. You can only use this with the hidden mist but its fast to perform.
(Suiton: Suigandan) - Water Release: Water Fang Bullet
Rank: C
Range: Short
Type: Offense
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: A technique that deals physical damage to the enemy with a liquid mass brought forth from underwater. Its power to kill and maim is augmented by adding a spinning motion to the compactly pressured water. During fights on water, taking advantage of its characteristic ability to attack from anywhere in a 360 degrees radius, in conjunction with other techniques for distraction, confusion and so forth, this technique has an extensive array of applications.
Note: Requires a water source.
Okay with a water source the user will summon a drill from the water, the drill will act to penetrate the opponent and give a serious intense pain. Its a quick jutsu and is performed quick. Right when the user summons it they can go onto the next technique, great for combos. Its great for distractions and attacking from areas the opponent might not expect. The drilling motion does make a sound as well as it being a basic technique easy to anticipate.
Suiton: Kirigakure Shiryoku Hakudatsu) - Water Release: Hidden Mist Eye Sight Deprevation
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15(-3 each turn to keep it active)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Using the hidden mist jutsu the user reflects the natural light an a way that it blinds there opponent temporarily as long as the opponent is in the mist.
Note: Must have already used hidden mist jutsu
A very effective supplementary jutsu. After you create hidden mist jutsu (D-Rank) the user will will manipulate the mist in a way where it will reflect natural light. The light will shine throughout the mist and blind anyone ahead of the user. That is why it can only extend short-mid, so it does not blind the user. The opponent will be blinded and distracted you can use the open window to send a large streaming attack through the mist to kill the opponent. It moves fast, and the light when set is released instantly. You can only use this with the hidden mist but its fast to perform.
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"I'm not trying to kill you, but by the time we're done, you will feel what you have taught me, sensei." *She smiles*
*With the water source she was already utilizing, Karui manipulates it and a small, spiky water pillar emerges. She tries the technique several different times and the spike comes out of several different directions each time, just as she planned*
"Are you watching this, sensei?" *She smiles whilst performing the technique*
Creative uses/strengths: This technique is really useful whilst on water or very close to a water source. If you are battling on top of a water source, this technique can emerge in any upward angle the user desires. It's also very quick, requiring no hand seals thus instantaneous upon the user's casting. It gives you the advantage of the element of surprise. Lethal.
Drawbacks/counters: Basic technique so it's easy to anticipate. Since it makes a drill-like motion, it makes noises so it can be heard, therefor it can be evaded if not used in conjunction with another technique. Exhausts chakra as long as it's active (I assume this means if your opponent is impaled on it therefor immobilized). Short ranged.
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*Moving on to the next technique, Karui performs Kirigakure No Jutsu (Hidding in Mist Jutsu). After the mist is thick enough, she moves on to phase two: Suiton: Kirigakure Shiryoku Hakudatsu (Water Release: Hidden Mist Eye Sight Deprivation)*
"Is it working?.." *She asks her sensei, unable to see him*
Creative uses/strengths: Very effective. Blinds anyone in front of the caster. Utilizing natural light meaning a third technique is not necessary. Distracts the opponent. Opens up opportunities to kill an opponent. Instantaneous. No hand seals needed.
Drawbacks/counters: Must be used in conjunction with Kirigakure No Jutsu. Can only be used at short to mid range to be sure the caster doesn't blind themselves. Exhausts chakra to remain active.
*With the water source she was already utilizing, Karui manipulates it and a small, spiky water pillar emerges. She tries the technique several different times and the spike comes out of several different directions each time, just as she planned*
"Are you watching this, sensei?" *She smiles whilst performing the technique*
(Suiton: Suigandan) - Water Release: Water Fang Bullet
Rank: C
Range: Short
Type: Offense
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: A technique that deals physical damage to the enemy with a liquid mass brought forth from underwater. Its power to kill and maim is augmented by adding a spinning motion to the compactly pressured water. During fights on water, taking advantage of its characteristic ability to attack from anywhere in a 360 degrees radius, in conjunction with other techniques for distraction, confusion and so forth, this technique has an extensive array of applications.
Note: Requires a water source.
Rank: C
Range: Short
Type: Offense
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: A technique that deals physical damage to the enemy with a liquid mass brought forth from underwater. Its power to kill and maim is augmented by adding a spinning motion to the compactly pressured water. During fights on water, taking advantage of its characteristic ability to attack from anywhere in a 360 degrees radius, in conjunction with other techniques for distraction, confusion and so forth, this technique has an extensive array of applications.
Note: Requires a water source.
Creative uses/strengths: This technique is really useful whilst on water or very close to a water source. If you are battling on top of a water source, this technique can emerge in any upward angle the user desires. It's also very quick, requiring no hand seals thus instantaneous upon the user's casting. It gives you the advantage of the element of surprise. Lethal.
Drawbacks/counters: Basic technique so it's easy to anticipate. Since it makes a drill-like motion, it makes noises so it can be heard, therefor it can be evaded if not used in conjunction with another technique. Exhausts chakra as long as it's active (I assume this means if your opponent is impaled on it therefor immobilized). Short ranged.
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*Moving on to the next technique, Karui performs Kirigakure No Jutsu (Hidding in Mist Jutsu). After the mist is thick enough, she moves on to phase two: Suiton: Kirigakure Shiryoku Hakudatsu (Water Release: Hidden Mist Eye Sight Deprivation)*
"Is it working?.." *She asks her sensei, unable to see him*
(Kirigakure No Jutsu) - Hidding in Mist Jutsu
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This displacement technique creates a thick mist to spring forth by lifting up some water from either a pre-existing source or expelled from their mouth, then goes in and out of sight at will from within the pearly-white realm. The mist's thickness is controlled by the amount of chakra kneaded into it. It can't fool the Byakugan, but, due to the mist being created with the user's chakra, any Sharingan and Rinnegan-user will see the mist coloured by their opponent's chakra, which will effectively hide the user from the dojutsu.
Note: Can be created through releasing from mouth or manipulating a nearby water source.
(Suiton: Kirigakure Shiryoku Hakudatsu) - Water Release: Hidden Mist Eye Sight Deprivation
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15(-3 each turn to keep it active)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Using the hidden mist jutsu the user reflects the natural light an a way that it blinds there opponent temporarily as long as the opponent is in the mist.
Note: Must have already used hidden mist jutsu
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This displacement technique creates a thick mist to spring forth by lifting up some water from either a pre-existing source or expelled from their mouth, then goes in and out of sight at will from within the pearly-white realm. The mist's thickness is controlled by the amount of chakra kneaded into it. It can't fool the Byakugan, but, due to the mist being created with the user's chakra, any Sharingan and Rinnegan-user will see the mist coloured by their opponent's chakra, which will effectively hide the user from the dojutsu.
Note: Can be created through releasing from mouth or manipulating a nearby water source.
(Suiton: Kirigakure Shiryoku Hakudatsu) - Water Release: Hidden Mist Eye Sight Deprivation
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15(-3 each turn to keep it active)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Using the hidden mist jutsu the user reflects the natural light an a way that it blinds there opponent temporarily as long as the opponent is in the mist.
Note: Must have already used hidden mist jutsu
Creative uses/strengths: Very effective. Blinds anyone in front of the caster. Utilizing natural light meaning a third technique is not necessary. Distracts the opponent. Opens up opportunities to kill an opponent. Instantaneous. No hand seals needed.
Drawbacks/counters: Must be used in conjunction with Kirigakure No Jutsu. Can only be used at short to mid range to be sure the caster doesn't blind themselves. Exhausts chakra to remain active.
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For the hidden mist, I expected much more detail. You see the opponent manipulates the mist around to reflect light and you did not even mention manipulation of shape nor how it would effect me. I expect better in the future. Also some of this techs are quite simple but I still expect 3+ sentences for everything in the points. When we get to more complicated you will already know what to say and how to explain in the future. Consider this warm up for what is to come.
(Suiton: Suishoha) - Water Style: Water Shock Wave
Rank: C-B-Rank
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 15-20
Damage Points: 30-40
Descripton: This technique allows the user after claping their hands together to make a spiralling vortex of water to form around them out of nowhere in a vortex like manner. The vortex then proceeds to cascade into an wave of water that rampages towards the intended target or all around. The size and power of the technique is dictated by the amount of chakra put into the technique, varying from C-rank to B-Rank.
A very flexible technique, the user will clap their hands together and create a vortex of water around themselves spiraling with great speed. The vortex is nice because it can act as a barrier and then after defending you can send the vortex towards the opponent as a exploding wave that dashes with great speed towards the opponent. After you send the wave it acts to push the opponent back, I like to send lightning towards it to increase potency of attack, it also covers a wide and long range. It can soak the opponent and change the terrain which you can use in your favor. The more chakra you add the stronger it gets as explained in the description. The wave moves fast and loud. Its easy to perform and does not need a water source nor any hand seals.
(Suiton: Ukojizai no Jutsu) - Water Style: Rain Tiger at Will Technique
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: A perception ninjutsu, allowing one to freely manipulate rain infused with the user's own chakra after waving the Bird ? Rat ? Ox ? Monkey ? Rat ? Snake hand seals. The rain falls from rain clouds, formed with the users own chakra. During this technique, the falling raindrops are closely linked to the users senses. When the rain is obstructed by a chakra belonging to someone the existence of the target can be detected. The rain will keep on falling until the user uses the seal to cancel it.
One of the most useful. After performing the required hand seals the area will begin to rain. The rain happens seconds after you perform the hand seals, the rain will begin to fall. The rain is connected with the users chakra. This allows the user to sense every movement that goes on instantly. Its great for a defense as well as anticipation of attacks. Its one of the best jutsus for defense so I recommend to always set it in the start of the battle. Don't be fool its sensory abilities is nice but you do not sense the opponent mold chakra, it does not go that far. You can though sense projectiles coming towards you since the rain is likely to hit them. Ways to stop this jutsu, is simply blow the clouds away.
(Suiton: Suishoha) - Water Style: Water Shock Wave
Rank: C-B-Rank
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 15-20
Damage Points: 30-40
Descripton: This technique allows the user after claping their hands together to make a spiralling vortex of water to form around them out of nowhere in a vortex like manner. The vortex then proceeds to cascade into an wave of water that rampages towards the intended target or all around. The size and power of the technique is dictated by the amount of chakra put into the technique, varying from C-rank to B-Rank.
A very flexible technique, the user will clap their hands together and create a vortex of water around themselves spiraling with great speed. The vortex is nice because it can act as a barrier and then after defending you can send the vortex towards the opponent as a exploding wave that dashes with great speed towards the opponent. After you send the wave it acts to push the opponent back, I like to send lightning towards it to increase potency of attack, it also covers a wide and long range. It can soak the opponent and change the terrain which you can use in your favor. The more chakra you add the stronger it gets as explained in the description. The wave moves fast and loud. Its easy to perform and does not need a water source nor any hand seals.
(Suiton: Ukojizai no Jutsu) - Water Style: Rain Tiger at Will Technique
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: A perception ninjutsu, allowing one to freely manipulate rain infused with the user's own chakra after waving the Bird ? Rat ? Ox ? Monkey ? Rat ? Snake hand seals. The rain falls from rain clouds, formed with the users own chakra. During this technique, the falling raindrops are closely linked to the users senses. When the rain is obstructed by a chakra belonging to someone the existence of the target can be detected. The rain will keep on falling until the user uses the seal to cancel it.
One of the most useful. After performing the required hand seals the area will begin to rain. The rain happens seconds after you perform the hand seals, the rain will begin to fall. The rain is connected with the users chakra. This allows the user to sense every movement that goes on instantly. Its great for a defense as well as anticipation of attacks. Its one of the best jutsus for defense so I recommend to always set it in the start of the battle. Don't be fool its sensory abilities is nice but you do not sense the opponent mold chakra, it does not go that far. You can though sense projectiles coming towards you since the rain is likely to hit them. Ways to stop this jutsu, is simply blow the clouds away.