Kenshin Himura's "The Past creates the Future"- Chapter* 3. "Thrill of a Psychopath"

[King Dante]

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Just explain me why in the hell i'm a retard on your fanfiction?

 

[Shunsui]

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did Kenshin just save Rei from getting raped in this chapter?

xd next chapter i think

 

[King Dante]

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xd next chapter i think

I don't think Lawliet will approve a raping scene and i do know my brother wanna do one "Irreversible" style.

 

[Zoro]

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I don't think Lawliet will approve a raping scene and i do know my brother wanna do one "Irreversible" style.

I seen the movie and if he writes something similar it's way to agressive and outrageous.

 

[John Constantine]

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I seen the movie and if he writes something similar it's way to agressive and outrageous.

Lol who started the rumour that Rei will be raped? xd​

 

[Shunsui]

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Lol who started the rumour that Rei will be raped? xd​

me and my m8....i was reading it out laud yesterday after blunt

 

[John Constantine]

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me and my m8....i was reading it out laud yesterday after blunt

I'm not gonna deny it that i do want to write an hardcore rapping scene ​

 

[-Mugen-]

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Epic.And the ending was cool.Didnt expect it.Nice work

 

[~Rerrando~]

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......this seems slightly familar yet completely different anyway awesome

 

[Kuroi Honoo]

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Let us begin with Tommy?s character who being psychosocial took a turn for the worse committing murder and Rei is a gullible young woman. Kenshin/Caliburn are evil corrupt young men lol The Pervy Dan?s persona is very fitting however, I was astonished with Michael?s character XD Your brother?s character is a mentally ill cripple and these three unfortunately get brutally badgered and battered. Kisuke/Castiel two janitors who are polar opposites, one being a low life dragoon, the other civilized and caring who bonded with an unstable student Gen?ai; my character. In which, you spelled somewhat a different way (don?t know if it was accidental or by choice which is perfectly fine by me as it is your Fanfic and I am just pleased to be in your work) I have to say left me flabbergasted. He is a huge psychotic danger to himself and others (so it apparently seems with all the shackles) mysterious adult.

You definitely know how to twist and turn your characters and the story with great precision that it kept me wanting to know more and more about these newly introduced characters, especially my own. As always you never cease to amaze with your exceptional talent and creations. I thought the chapter overall was done with brilliant, psychological, riveting and thrilling work waga no tomo ​

 

[Since yesterday]

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Brilliant author, brilliant writting.

 

[Kuroi Honoo]

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Brilliant author, brilliant writting.

Ne

 

[Since yesterday]

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Ne

Most of us agree and your post was very good by the way.

 

[Kuroi Honoo]

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Most of us agree and your post was very good by the way.

I know right? Arigatou and you are good yourself -_^​

 

[Since yesterday]

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I know right? Arigatou and you are good yourself -_^​

Thanks alot, hope to speak with you later.

 

[Pain..]

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Epic man it was pretty good. I can say this the best FF i ever read so far.

 

[John Constantine]

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Epic man it was pretty good. I can say this the best FF i ever read so far.

Thanks alot dude. And chapter 4 you don't even imagine ​

 

[King Dante]

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THe feedback has been nuts. I have to admit that i loved it too despite the fact that i'm a "mark" for Utopic Monkeys.

 

[Pain..]

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Thanks alot dude. And chapter 4 you don't even imagine ​

I can't wait when is going out ?

 

[King Dante]

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I can't wait when is going out ?

He usually only releases one chapter every 2 weeks or so.