Kenshin Himura's "The Past creates the Future"- Chapter* 3. "Thrill of a Psychopath"

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Kenshin Himura's "The Past creates the Future"- Chapter* 3. "Thrill of a Psychopath"

"The Past creates the Future"

Chapter 1​

Chapter 2​





Rated-R - Not recommended to readers who are under the age of 17.
Contains explicit descriptions and offensive language.
You are at your own risk by entering and reading my FanFiction.
I cannot be held responsible.


Chapter 3 " Thrill of a Psychopath "

Tommy concentrates his total attention on Rei..Tracking along side her for a few paces then.. He steps out from his hiding place.

Tommy - Hey, Rei.

Rei - Tommy what are you doing in the woods?

Tommy - Nothing

Rei - I heard you were bad today during the movie.

Tommy - Maybe... Hey you wanna see the Halloween candy tree?

Rei - There's no such thing as a Halloween tree.

Tommy - Oh yes there is. It only blooms one day a year at Halloween time. You can pick candy corn and candy apples off the branches.

Tommy pulls some candy corn from his pocket and shows Rei.

Tommy (CONT'D) - See i just picked these. I can show you. (Pointing into the woods)
It's right over there.

Rei - Alright.

We change Scenario

Int. Elementary School - Bathroom - Day ( Cont'd )

Kenshin furiously enters in the bathroom followed by Caliburn
Kenshin - What f*cking p*ssy!! I Told you he wouldn't fight..

Kenshin - I was all f*cking set up and pumped up but he only talks..

Kenshin - I wanted to fight. I mean, you were there. And he was like: "Ohh i'm not gonna fight!!"

Kenshin (Furiously) - Ohh no!! F*ck!! (Kicks a trashcan)

Caliburn - I know, where he lives. You wanna pass by his house?

Kenshin - We should totally do that..

Kenshin - F*ck man!! If i get one more f*cking detention i'll be f*cking expelled and my old man gonna beat my ass.

Caliburn - We must get that piece of Shit in the weekend to not get in trouble.

Kenshin - Yeah and also if i see that Tommy P*ssy, he's f*cking dead!!

The greasy brothers and handicapped Dante enter in the bathroom.

The greasy Brothers are The Pervy Dan (The pervy Sage) (16) a skinny, acne slighty Emo look a like freak with an intense odor.
His brother, the other half of the Greasy Brothers Michael who calls himself the Ruler (Ruler Michael) for whatever reason, a ugly, carrot-haired, pierced greasy freak much like his brother (16) and Tim Dante (My brother King Dante on the forums) (16) mentally retarded and on a wheelchair, who can only say his own name screming.

Kenshin looks amused.

Kenshin towards The Pervy Dan

Kenshin - Hey shit pants!! What's going on?

Kenshin - You know...

Kenshin (Pointing at Ruler Michael) - I heard you two f`ck each other in the *ss.. Ya know?? Incest.

Caliburn starts laughing

Kenshin - Someone told me you guys c*m on each other faces.

Caliburn now directs himself towards Tim Dante

Caliburn - Hey retard!! How's your mom doing?

Tim Dante responds euphorically

Tim Dante - DANTE!!! (This character is based on "Timmy" from South Park)

Caliburn to Kenshin

Caliburn - You know Ken. This retard really pisses me off. He only say his f*cking name

Tim Dante interrupts

Tim Dante - DANTE!!!

Caliburn - You see??

Kenshin -
Just beat the sh*t out of him. He can't defend himself
Caliburn - I'll do better.

Tim Dante is wearing a beanie

The Pervy Dan - Please man, let us go. Don't do nothing to him.

Ruler Michael - He's on a wheelchair. He's harmless to everybody, that's a really cowardly move.

Kenshin Punchs Ruler Michael in the face

Kenshin - Shut up, F*g!!

Kenshin towards Caliburn

Kenshin - Do it, Fatty!!

Caliburn - I'm not fat, i'm big boned, i told you a thousand times.

Kenshin - Whatever, chubby. Do it!!

Caliburn takes the beanie out of Tim Dante's head.

Tim Dante - DANTE!!!

Caliburn - You want it?? You want it??

Tim Dante - DANTE!!

Caliburn just spits a huge yellow greenish ball of saliva inside of Tim Dante's beanie and proceeds to put it right back on his head.​

Caliburn and Kenshin start laughing hysterically

The Pervy Dan - Shut up!!

Caliburn - What the f*ck did you said, F*ggot?

Kenshin (ironically)- Danny is upset.

The Pervy Dan - F*ck you!!

Kenshin slaps The Pervy Dan in the face

Kenshin - Hey tough guy..Show some respect

Both Kenshin and Caliburn start beating the sh*t out of Pervy Dan and proceed to leave the school leaving the three kids beated up laying down in the bathroom's ground.
Caliburn - That was badass. Gotta go dude.

Kenshin - Yeah, yeah!! Go screw the fatty. Ciao

Caliburn - See ya on Weekend.

Kenshin prooceds into the route of the HOLLOW'S WOODS

INT. HOLLOW'S WOODS - DAY - LATER

Tommy leads Rei deeper into the woods.

Rei - How much further is it?

Tommy - Not much.

Rei - I don't see anything. I wanna go home.

Tommy approaches an old burnt out tree. He reaches inside the hollowed out trunk and pulls out a DEAD CAT.
He holds the animal by it's BROKEN NECK and waves it at Rei.

Tommy - See my Kitty? I snapped his neck and he liked it. You wanna pet him? His name is EMPEROR.

Rei Begins to scream.​

Tommy (CONT'D) - Aw, don't be scared. He won't scratch you.

Tommy moves in CLOSER and begins PUSHING the cat in Rei's face.

Tommy (CONT'D) - Touch it... Touch it!

Rei - Get away...Freak! Stop it! I wanna go home!

Tommy throws the cat to the side.

Tommy - Alright ya big baby, I'll take you home.
Come on, i know a short cut.


INT. HOLLOW'S WOODS - DAY - LATER

Rei cautiously follows behind Tommy

Rei - How much longer?

Tommy - We're here.

Tommy stops at a rotted piece of plywood lying flat on the ground. A PRIMITIVE SKULL AND CROSSBONES IS SPRAY PAINTED ON THE ROTTING WOOD.

He flips the plywood over to reveal a deep grave sized hole.

Tommy (CONT'D) - This is a secret Indian tunnel that comes right up in front of your house. It's the fastest way.

Rei - I don't believe you.

Tommy - Go ahead take a look. You can see your house from here.

Rei slowly approaches the hole and peeks over the edge.

A voice is heard.
Voice - Hey!! F*ggot!!

Int. Elementary School - Hallway - Day ( Cont'd )

Castiel (57) a large Mexican man, pretty scarred face and long-black hair and Kisuke (32) a hulking jarhead type.

Both Janitors

The two men are walking towards a private room and talking.

Kisuke - You don't f*cking talk alot do you, Castiel?

Kisuke - God damnit!! I'm going to set one thing straight. I don't work for you.

Kisuke - You may have worked here for many years and done all type of sh*t.

Kisuke - I suppose cause you are an hard-worker. Most of you people are.. (Refering to Mexicans)

Kisuke - All your women keep your little bungalows clean and swip all the dirt floors, keep everything in order and all...

Kisuke - but i'm my own boss, alright?

Castiel - You know when i retire in 3 months, you still gonna be here for a long time.

Castiel - Now open the door. You Mr."I don't take no orders from anybody"

CLICK... The DEAD BOLT to The private room on the school DOOR UNLOCKS.. The door swings open.. Both man enters.

Int. Elementary School - DETENTION ROOM - Day ( Cont'd )

Kisuke - Let's go F*ck-Nut!! Time to go.

Kisuke starts touching in GEN'AI's drawings

Gen'Ai (Kuroi Honoo on our forums) (18) Gen'Ai is HUGE, six foot ten, two hundred and eighty pounds.
A student who has reprooved many times and has serious psychological problems, don't speak and everyone seems to think he's deranged and very dangerous, the rumors surrounding him and his background are enormous and every new day, a new fascinating story about him is created by random students amusing the entire school and entertaining the lunch breaks.

What a sh*thole school!!

The school has orders from the Police to chain him down everytime he's lead to his house leaving the school, that demonstrated how dangerous this "mute" kid can be when enraged.
He has private classes isolated from everybody on the Detention Room every day of the week.

Castiel (Right away in desperation) - Hey!!Hey!! Don't touch those.

Kisuke - What?

Castiel - He doesn't like it when people touch his drawings.

Kisuke - God damn, I wouldn't want to scare the freak out.

Castiel - Sorry about the Chains, Gen'ai.

On the SHACKLES being LOCKED around Gen'Ai's ANKLES.. From the ankles we follow the chains up to Gen'Ai's WRISTS..
Castiel securely locks them in place.

Kisuke - What do you mean you sorry about the chains?

Kisuke - You got feelings for this big idiot? Is that what this is? What's the d*ck deal going on Castiel? What the f*ck,men?

Castiel - You know what?? I have been taking care of this kid for almost 8 years.. And me and him..

Castiel - You know what? Nevermind, shut up!! Just keep your hands off his drawings.

Kisuke to Gen'ai.​

Kisuke - Don't look at me. I'll be the sh*t-storm in your worst nightmares, motherf*cker.

Kisuke - I'll come in here when you here and f*ck this place up one day, you watch!!

INT. HOLLOW'S WOODS - DAY - LATER

Kenshin has arrived the scene
Kenshin - Hey, F*ggot!! Perfect scenario.

Kenshin - I get to beat the sh*t out of you + i get no detention and avoid being expelled + Rei will know how
much of a badass i really am = Profit ...


Tommy seems emotionless

Kenshin - Hey sh*t-Head. You don't respond?

Tommy starts running furiously in high speed against Kenshin. Tackling him into the hole.
Kenshin lands with a thud hitting his head.

Kenshin (Almost crying) - Hey, what the f*ck? You're so f*cking dead.

Rei (Crying) - Tommy... Help him out. This isn't funny.

Tommy STARES down emotionless at the whimpering boy,, Then calmly opens his backpack.. removes his tape recorder.
He turns on the recorder.
Tommy (Speaking quietly into the microphone) - This is Tommy and this is Kenshin out in the woods.

He sets the recorder down next to the hole.

Rei (Screaming) - Help... Help!

Tommy slowly reaches down and picks up a HEAVY STICK.. Walks to the edge of the hole and begins POKING at Kenshin.

Kenshin (Screaming) - Stop it... Stop it!

Tommy now begins HITTING hiM HARD over the head.. Kenshin falls back as blood begins to seep from his head..
Tommy continues hitting him over and over and over until he is unconscious.

Kenshin stumbles over into a heap.. Blood GUSHES from his head.

JUMPING down into the hole and TOMMY begins savagely attacking Kenshin.. He beats him mercilessly until he is dead.

In one final act of humiliation.. Tommy unzips his fly and begins urinating on Kenshin's body.

Rei is speechless and scared.

Tommy climbs up and out of the hole.. He then proceeds to stare with a fixated and deranged look at Rei.


Who is this new character Gen'Ai?
What will happen to Rei now that Kenshin is dead?
Stay tuned for the next Chapter of "The Past creates the Future"




Enjoy!!!​
 
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Re: Kenshin Himura's "The Past creates the Future"- Chapter* 3. "Thrill of a Psychopa

WOW!!! Haven't read that last part in the scrapt.
That final of the chapter was just mind-blowing
 

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Re: Kenshin Himura's "The Past creates the Future"- Chapter* 3. "Thrill of a Psychopa

Oh No... Kenshin!!

Dammit!

Tommy is as real psycho!

I'm enjoying this!
 

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Re: Kenshin Himura's "The Past creates the Future"- Chapter* 3. "Thrill of a Psychopa

Genius chapter but holy shit at that final. Ouch!!!!
 

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Re: Kenshin Himura's "The Past creates the Future"- Chapter* 3. "Thrill of a Psychopa

I read the scrapt of this a few days ago in your computer but i have to say HOLY F*CK to the final version.
This is strong and intense shit.
I don't like Lawliet but thanks for approving this. I think i've changed my mind this even surpasses the geniality of Chapter 9 of Utopic Monkeys.
 

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Re: Kenshin Himura's "The Past creates the Future"- Chapter* 3. "Thrill of a Psychopa

You guys ain't seen nothing. This shit will be rising and rising till the grand Finale in Chapter 6.
 

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Re: Kenshin Himura's "The Past creates the Future"- Chapter* 3. "Thrill of a Psychopa

Holy sh*t:D That was some fu*king awsome shit:p

Damn you go hard on yourself:eek:

xd at my, Pervy`s and Dante`s characterxd Great job man!

That Gen`Ai character reminded me a little about the guy who sacrifises himself for Guren in the Three-tail arc of Naruto, but you arn`t watching the fillers are you?:p;)
 

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Re: Kenshin Himura's "The Past creates the Future"- Chapter* 3. "Thrill of a Psychopa

Holy sh*t:D That was some fu*king awsome shit:p

Damn you go hard on yourself:eek:

xd at my, Pervy`s and Dante`s characterxd Great job man!

That Gen`Ai character reminded me a little about the guy who sacrifises himself for Guren in the Three-tail arc of Naruto, but you arn`t watching the fillers are you?:p;)
LOL the bastard made a retard!!
 

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Re: Kenshin Himura's "The Past creates the Future"- Chapter* 3. "Thrill of a Psychopa

did Kenshin just save Rei from getting raped in this chapter?
 

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Re: Kenshin Himura's "The Past creates the Future"- Chapter* 3. "Thrill of a Psychopa

did Kenshin just save Rei from getting raped in this chapter?
I guess but at cost of his own life, plus i think she will be raped in the next chapter anyway, just seems likely because of the end of the chapter
 
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