I'll try again. I hope this will be better (and sorry for the late reply)
*as you make a clone I take out my sword and start rushing towards your clone. as I reached your clone I push him backwards while slashing him quickly in many random parts in his whole body while my body is keeping the distance very small between us. suddenly I stop while he kept falling backwards and I slash his abdomen diagonally with my sword pushing him farther backwards while I'm standing in my place*
is it sasuke's kenjutsu move in this video?
Actually, it's the kenjutsu in this video.
[video=youtube;8cB4a_SG7fc]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8cB4a_SG7fc[/video]
At 1:49, Yugao begins it but Kakashi moves before she can deal the last blow, which can still be seen as she swings. Now, your move, while not being exactly the same as what she performed, while still work. One thing I should point out, however, is that you should be as specific and clear as possible when it comes to taijutsu and kenjutsu, meaning you should clarify which arm draws the sword, where you swing at, what part of the body you strike, etc. You don't have to redo your current attack, but I advise you to start doing this with the next step of jutsus.
(Ikari Nomikomu no Jutsu) - Fury Swallow Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 25
Description: The user punches the opponent a few times and finishes them with two final slashes with their blade or sword.
Now, this came from Asuma and his chakra blades. It was originally used in a game called Naruto Shippuden: Ninja Destiny 3 for the Nintendo DS, so there isn't a lot of mediums on how it should look and/or performed. Nonetheless, it should be simple to adapt for the RP and it's usage. You strike the enemy a few times and then, if you wield chakra blades like Asuma, you perform a crossing slash. If you don't and instead wield a sword, you then draw it and perform two alternating slashes one after the other.
Image of final slash(s):
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