[Katon]-The JuubiGod

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The almighty great senpai has arrived. Now first I want you to perform the last technique to make sure I know you have a basic understanding in performing a jutsu. Then I ask you; do you want me to be straightforward in our training or shall we add RP in it? All up to you mate.
 

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I begin by focusing a small amount of fire chakra in my stomach. I use shape transformation to manipulate the chakra and shape it into a ball. It travels upwards inside my body up to my mouth. I exhale it as a bright ball of fire that flies towards my opponent and burns them as it collides with them.
( Katon: Kitsunebi ) - Fire Release: Fire Whisp
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user creates a small ball of bright fire from their mouth that shoots at the opponent burning on impact.

Lets just add RP to the training :p
 
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I'm not all that happy, my pupil. You lack descriptive ability. Do it again, with more emotion please. Don't be lazy.
 

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Forgive me, senpai. U_U
I begin performing the technique by gathering a large amount of chakra in my core. After I gather the chakra, I manipulate it and superheat it to transform it into fire chakra. I control the chakra and make it travel upward inside my body until it reaches my mouth I then use shape transformation to change the chakra into fire and shape it into a spherical ball of flame. Once I have done this, I exhale it from my mouth with great force, burning my opponent's body.
 

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Lemme give you a example.

I take a deep breathe, I concentrate on my chakra system revolving all around my body. I remain calm and focus on my chakra slowly building it up, while gathering the chakra I begin to manipulate its nature. I think of the warmth of the sun and the heat it gives off. I replicate that same warm but destructive heat in my body. I take one more deep breathe, take aim towards the wooden dummy and sends the fire chakra through my throat and with a intense and forceful push I exhale the fire chakra outwards, I continue to spew the fire since its a stream type jutsu and I notice the brightness of the stream. While it travels when it get in contact with the wooden dummy it burns it on impact.

Do you understand my student. I only want the best for you. From now on we will only be performing them since you have descriptive problems. When you get to a point where I know you are ready we will get to the less boring part.

Shall we continue?
 

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Senpai, let me ask you something. Why do I need to use all of that description? In battle, it would just be unnecessary to state the basic elements of the chakra nature when I am jut performing a specific technique. I have seen a very skilled shinobi (sensei)who does not use too much description in his battles, but is still a great and skilled ninja. I don't believe I have ''descriptive problems'', I just feel that too much description is not needed U_U. I will still try to be as descriptive as I can.

Neji becomes nervous, expecting his senpai to be angry at him.

Anyway, let's continue. :p
 
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Lancer is surprised by his students question, not angered.
I see, I will explain to you why.
I'm taking RP portion out of this to answer the question properly.
Description is everything especially in the RP today. Though you are right most of the time people don't describe much their performance for the technique, in the RP mostly what happens is people perform it and explains how. To an extent you are right and in my training you will soon get to that portion where you learn about it more then you actually perform it. To be honest performance will be taken out of the equation. The main purpose is to gain the habit to be descriptive and proper for when you get to the more complicated stuff you won't be overwhelmed. We can easily go to the tough stuff but I already know how that will end, if you can describe simple jutsus now how can you even talk about their main purpose? We are taught to walk before we run, right? I want to take it one step at a time so I can expect the best out of you. Also for senseis that don't describe jutsus as much, I question you this? Who are they fighting?
Here is the thing if two senseis or two very powerful ninjas fight each other then they barely need to write,Why? They already know how to perform each and every jutsu to an extreme extent. They don't need to add to much because well they already know the jutsu to its absolute limit.

Now I'm going to be going into a little bit of a rant. In today's RP especially in this Generation their is far to much complaint and annoyance. How do they start? By misusing, not understand, and not being as descriptive as possible. I understand in spars your less caring but in a official battle description is key some of the best RPers today are brilliant at description when they have to be.(Sharingdork, NK, Madara, Scorps) Though new RPers or less deserving just are to lazy to write a sentence or two more that confusion rises and arguments take place. I do not want neither like it, its a pet peeve of mine. So whenever I battle even if a spar I try to be as descriptive and good as possible so my opponent knows full well what I'm trying to do and arguments do not rise. Its not fun arguing and you just look stupid. Have fun with it and try not to be lazy.

So in short I teach you to describe almost as a warm-up to get you in the habit and enjoy to write. When I feel you are adequate enough we will talk and get much more in the thick of things with the jutsus. I only ask the best for you, I know how it is to be handicapped in the RP I want to be the pillar that helps you become a great RPer. I hope I answered the questions and explained myself the best I possible can.
 

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It seems as if you have finished C-rank and we shall begin B-Rank. Your performing them.

( Katon: Karyu Endan ) - Fire Release: Fire Dragon Flame Bullet
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user first performs seven handseals Ram ? Horse ? Snake ? Dragon ? Rat ? Ox ? Tiger and kneads chakra into flames, which are then manipulated and exhaled as a thin yet incredibly fast jet of flames that spread across the ground as it runs towards the enemy. Its temperature is such that it easily melts the ground as it travels and can reduce an enemy to ash.

Okay with 7 hand seals the user will send towards the opponent a stream of fire, the stream moves very fast through the ground, faster then normal techs on the B-Rank list. It has a large amount of condense heat so on contact it can severly burn an opponent to ash and can melt the ground. Its a stream technique so you must continue to send the stream until it hits the opponent.

Okay using examples previous perform this jutsu with all your mite.
 

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I first perform the six handseals needed for the technique's performance. Then I gather chakra inside my stomach while super-heating it to change its nature, transforming it into Katon chakra. I remain calm and inhale deeply and concentrate on the chakra, keeping it under control. When I exhale, the chakra slowly moves from my stomach up to my throat. When it is in my mouth, I use shape manipulation to change the form of the chakra, changing it into a fire. Once this is done, I spew out the chakra at my target, I exhale the chakra continuously to maintain it as a jet of fire. The stream burns everything in its path. Once it reaches Naruto, he becomes engulfed in the flames as the intense fire encases his body, reducing him to nothing more than a pile of ash.

Was that better, senpai?
 
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Very good my pupil you are starting to get the hang of it.

( Bakuhatsu Enhogan ) – Exploding Flame Shots
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user shoots multiple fire shots from their hands that are able to cause fiery explosions on impact with any object. The shots can't set the opponent on fire, though they can cause damage by exploding on him.

Okay fast technique, no hand seals and easy to perform. The user will send multiple fire shots though the more you send the more weaker they get each fireball. They do not act as normal fire that engulf but on contact will explode forcing the opponent back and burned in the area hit.

Perform a couple more, we are going one at a time.
 

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I start by kneading chakra inside my body and using my chakra control to change its chakra nature, transforming it into fire chakra. After creating the chakra inside my body I keep it inside my stomach in a focused, controlled manner by keeping calm and manipulating it. I then feel the chakra rushing through my body as I send it into my mouth. Once the chakra is in my mouth, I turn it into real fire and divide it into three separate fireballs. I complete the technqiue by exhaling the fireballs while aiming them at Sasuke. The fireballs explode upon collision with Sasuke's body, burning him greatly.
 

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getting better, we will do two more. One at a time. Lets do this!

( Katon: Hiendan ) – Fire Release: Soaring Flame Bullet
Rank: B
Type: Offense, Deffence
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user exhales a stronger yet shorter version of the Fire Release: Great Fireball technique.

This jutsu is must like the C-Rank jutsu you most likely learn, just a very large version with more fire, and attack potential. The description does not mention you do any hand seals like the previous one so you can say its quicker to perform. Also its a projectile based technique.
 

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I begin by accumulating a large amount of chakra in my stomach, then I transform it into fire natured chakra. I inhale and exhale deeply while keeping my calm, slowly building up the chakra inside of my body. The fiery chakra travels from my stomach to my mouth, where I transform it into real flames and use shape transformation to give it a sphercal shape. I spew the fireball out of my mouth, aiming it at my target. The large ball of flame travels up to short range from me, where it collides with my opponent and burns their entire body.
 

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Here is one more for ya. This one be as descriptive as you possible can. Make me proud!

( Katon: Goenkyu ) - Fire Release: Great Blaze Ball
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user after performing two hand seals Horse ? Tiger exhales a big-sized sphere of fire that carries the enemy away and causes a massive explosion on impact. The fire ball has a given solidity property to it, being able to punch through solid obstacles without exploding.

Okay now this jutsu is similar like the ones previous you learned. With two hand seals the user will send a large fire ball, roughly the same size as the fireball the Uchia's are most famous for. The ball is dense and when on contact will act to carry the opponent almost attaching itself to them, which will then continue to move some distance before it explodes. It moves in all ranges.
 

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I begin by performing the Horse and tiger handseals. Then I start kneading a large amount of chakra inside my body and using my chakra control to change its chakra nature, transforming it into fire chakra. After creating the chakra inside my body I keep it inside my stomach in a focused, controlled manner by keeping calm and manipulating it. I send the chakra into my mouth where I use shape transformation to shape it into a giant fireball. I exhale the fireball at my opponent and it pushes them back a large distance. The fireball then explodes, burning my opponent's body.
 

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Okay now we begin RP.
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Very good jump my student, you are suffice. Now we will be looking at the jutsus and you will be writing in a scroll for each technique. Got it, get it, good.

Throws hundreds of scrolls.

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[B]Weak points[/B]

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[B]Combinations-strategies[/B] 

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Lets get to it.

( Katon: Goenka ) - Fire Release: Great Flame Flower
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user jumps in the air and shoots three giant bullets of fire that come down like giant meteors, then erupt into a geyser of flame.

Okay jumping in the air, the user will send three giant bullets of fire that rain down upon the opponent. Their size is the same as the Uchia fireball they are known to use. When they come on contact with the ground they erupt like geysers super heating and burning the area as well as the opponent. They can be aimed anywhere and are projectile based attacks. They go long range, also though it sends you must jump in the air pretty much whenever you are mid-air you can use it, with no drawbacks.



( Katon: Haisekisho ) - Fire Release: Ash Pile Burning
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user spews superheated ash from their mouth after performing four handseals. The ash is hot enough to cause third-degree burns on the victim. Because it's composed entirely of ash, it stays in the air around the victim like a cloud. If the user clicks his teeth, the stagnant ash will ignite, creating a violent explosion.

A favorite and a great one to use. A user will send very thick and hot ash from their mouths to the opponent, the ash alone can cause serious burns. While the user is still sending the ash it right when it gets in the same area of the opponent you will click your teeth igniting the ash causing a sever explosion. It needs 4 hand seals and the ash moves rather slow. Explain this one with detail.



( Katon: Goryuka no Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Great Dragon Fire Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offense/Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user fires several large dragon-shaped fireballs at their opponent after performing one handseal. It is able to alter localized weather conditions to the point of making thunder clouds when shot into the air, enabling the user to perform Kirin.

Okay with no hand seals the user will send several large dragon shaped fireballs towards the opponent, they are of intense heat and burn on contact. It travels in all ranges and you can send more then one ball. Its fast to perform and simple. This technique is most famous for setting up Kirin.
 

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Neji takes the scrolls and starts writing on them...



Strong points

  • - It can reach up to long range -
  • - Doesn't require handseals -
  • - You could aim them in different directions so it is harder to avoid -
Weak points

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Combinations-strategies
You could infuse it with a wind jutsu to increase its power and the explosion would be larger and would be hard to escape.

Ways to counter this technique
You could go underground to escape
You could use a powerful water jutsu to extinguish the fireballs

Questions: Are there any disadvantages to this jutsu?





Strong points

  • - The ash can cause sever burns -
  • - The ash is easy to ignite -
  • - The ash would cloud the opponent's vision -
Weak points

  • - Requires four handseals -
  • - Cannot be used in long range battles -
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Combinations-strategies
You could use it to blind the opponent so they can't see you attack

Ways to counter this technique
You could use a wind jutsu to blow the ash away from you

Questions: None





Strong points

  • - Only requires one handseal -
  • - Since the technique says, ''multiple'' fireballs, you can choose how many fireballs you shoot -
  • - You could aim the direction of the fireballs so that they are harder to avoid -
Weak points

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Combinations-strategies
You could use it to perform Kirin

Ways to counter this technique
You could use a large water jutsu to extinguish the flames

Questions None

 
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