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*I focus suiton chakra under the clone, and surround it by water soon trapping it in an orb of water, without waiting i then create hundreads needles of ice to surround the orb of water from above, just to quickly pierce through the orb and pierce the clone from multiple angles, as the clone then falls injured to the ground, ice jags it from underneath trapping it in a pillar of ice*


(Suiton: Funshutsu Mizu Kinko) - Water Release: Gushing Water Imprisonment
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user creates a flow of gushing water under the opponent which traps them in a sphere of water. The user can perform an attack while the opponent is trapped. This jutsu is similar to Water Prison Technique, though the user doesn't need to keep his arm in the sphere of water.
Note: Technique creates its own water source

(Hyouton: Hyōrō no Jutsu) Ice Release: Ice Prison Technique

Rank: C
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage: 30
Description: The user will rise up what seems like a jagged pillar of ice from the ground, encasing their opponent and freezing them in place. The user can also use this on themselves, encasing themselves in ice to defend them from jutsu. Being an ice user, however, the user will still be able to move their arms and legs fluently while in the ice.

(Hyouton: Sensatsu Suishou) Ice Release: 1000 Needles of Death

Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage: 30
Description: The user will make needles surround the opponent from all sides. Directly above them, though, there is an opening. The user can jump away at the last second before the needles converge on their opponent, or they can simply perform the jutsu from a safe distance.
Acceptable move, I will give you a B- grade for that. The problem with that move is the use of second jutsu, you did well making a good initiation by using the orb, but surrounding the orb with needles still isn't a bad idea but not an extremely good one. What you might end up doing is somewhat crystalizing the orb providing a way to escape, or completely negating the the effect of needles because they will be unable to penetrate water. Anyways, good try lets move on to A-rank, but do you have any questions up till now?
 

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Acceptable move, I will give you a B- grade for that. The problem with that move is the use of second jutsu, you did well making a good initiation by using the orb, but surrounding the orb with needles still isn't a bad idea but not an extremely good one. What you might end up doing is somewhat crystalizing the orb providing a way to escape, or completely negating the the effect of needles because they will be unable to penetrate water. Anyways, good try lets move on to A-rank, but do you have any questions up till now?
Thanks, and yeah i had some doubts about it :)p), understood and ready to move on. ^_^
 

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(Hyouton: Aisu Disuku no Jutsu) Ice Release: Ice Disk Technique
Rank: A
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will gather particles into the air and change them into a disk of ice. The ice disks are transparent, and they are therefore nearly invisible at a distance, and difficult to dodge or see until they are very close. They can also be used as highly durable shields or can be used to allow the user to hover in the air by using standing on it. Because of their transparency, the ice disks can be used as a large lens to focus rays of heat from the sun into a powerful beam to capable of melting or exploding a pinpointed area.
GFX:

One of THE most amazing Ice jutsu, it has multiple uses and all are listed in the description. Your goal first is to make the jutsu be descriptive, then state three uses of the jutsu and how will you actually perform them together in one move?
 

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(Hyouton: Aisu Disuku no Jutsu) Ice Release: Ice Disk Technique
Rank: A
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will gather particles into the air and change them into a disk of ice. The ice disks are transparent, and they are therefore nearly invisible at a distance, and difficult to dodge or see until they are very close. They can also be used as highly durable shields or can be used to allow the user to hover in the air by using standing on it. Because of their transparency, the ice disks can be used as a large lens to focus rays of heat from the sun into a powerful beam to capable of melting or exploding a pinpointed area.
GFX:

One of THE most amazing Ice jutsu, it has multiple uses and all are listed in the description. Your goal first is to make the jutsu be descriptive, then state three uses of the jutsu and how will you actually perform them together in one move?

*I focus my hyouton chakra into the air infront of me and manipulate the particles to gather in one sole space, compressing each other to gain solid properties, and using shape manipulation to turn manipulate every single property into a very thin, transparent disk of ice infront of me, along with good chakra manipulation i then hover it around me.*


• Good to save one's self from falling.
• Good to attack the opponent.
• Good to block incoming weapons.

If i were falling from a large distance i would create the disk and stand on it, allowing me to hover in the air, then if the opponent where to throw a kunai towards me, i would shift my weight backwards, lifting the disk backwards aswell, making the kunai strike the bottom of the disk saving me from it's harm, i would then land on the ground and hold the disk in both hands, putting it at an angle where the sun's light reflects on it and re-directs a compressed beam towards my opponent, wich explodes on him
 

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Incorrect, it can be used to magnify a sun ray to create a blast, it can be used as a shield or slicing disc, and it can be used to fly. These are the three uses the discs are utilized. Now as for the next, create an ice dragon, but you will be using a special type of ice nature which is called the Black Ice. The dragon will be black colored crystalline dragon;... Such chakra control will also allow you to control the dragon in mid-air.

(Hyouton: Kokuryū Bōfūsetsu) Ice Release: Black Dragon Blizzard
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will make a giant ether-like dragon of black snow. The dragon is capable of turning while in mid-air, and is therefore unable to be dodged. If it hits the opponent successfully, they will be launched high into the air afterwards.
 

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Incorrect, it can be used to magnify a sun ray to create a blast, it can be used as a shield or slicing disc, and it can be used to fly. These are the three uses the discs are utilized. Now as for the next, create an ice dragon, but you will be using a special type of ice nature which is called the Black Ice. The dragon will be black colored crystalline dragon;... Such chakra control will also allow you to control the dragon in mid-air.

(Hyouton: Kokuryū Bōfūsetsu) Ice Release: Black Dragon Blizzard
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will make a giant ether-like dragon of black snow. The dragon is capable of turning while in mid-air, and is therefore unable to be dodged. If it hits the opponent successfully, they will be launched high into the air afterwards.
Oh, you meant the explanation of there useage, sorry. :p

*I gather a big amount of my hyouton chakra and add a special type of chakra that enchances the ice, giving it a black crystalline like color as its fully created and rushes towards a tree nearby by, the dragon easily rips through the tree, and then by manipulating it further, i make it turn directions and rush to yet another tree close by, doing the same damage as before.*
 

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Assaulting multiple opponents, one after another, of if the opponent tries to avoid the dragon for example using Hurricane Fist, i can make the dragon chande direction and follow the target.
 

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Assaulting multiple opponents, one after another, of if the opponent tries to avoid the dragon for example using Hurricane Fist, i can make the dragon chande direction and follow the target.
Good thinking, now we move on to finally the S-ranked, for the first jutsu of S-rank create two of the same dragons, mnipulate them to form a tornado and crash them into your opponent.

(Hyouton: Sōryū Bōfūsetsu) Ice Release: Twin Dragon Blizzard
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: This is an advanced version of “Ice Release: Black Dragon Blizzard,” in which the user makes two of these dragons instead of one. The two dragons then swirl upwards and converge into a massive tornado.
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Good thinking, now we move on to finally the S-ranked, for the first jutsu of S-rank create two of the same dragons, mnipulate them to form a tornado and crash them into your opponent.

(Hyouton: Sōryū Bōfūsetsu) Ice Release: Twin Dragon Blizzard
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: This is an advanced version of “Ice Release: Black Dragon Blizzard,” in which the user makes two of these dragons instead of one. The two dragons then swirl upwards and converge into a massive tornado.
GFX:
GFX Torando:

*Once done, i then proceed to gather a big amount of my hyouton chakra into both hands and release two instead of 1 dragons of the same type as before, and rush towards a training dummy that suddenly appeared, the first dragon to reach it blows it into mid air from where both dragons "fuse" with each other creating a Massive giant tornado wich roughly deals damage dummy*
 

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Mud techniques would be carried upwards by the tornado rendering them useless or atleast harmless towards me, Water techniques would aswell be carried around by the tornado to the point where it seperates and leaves water drops everywhere, well, the tornado itself when spinning i assume create a big gust of wind, so it would simply overpower the wind technique and make it a part of itself.
 

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Mud techniques would be carried upwards by the tornado rendering them useless or atleast harmless towards me, Water techniques would aswell be carried around by the tornado to the point where it seperates and leaves water drops everywhere, well, the tornado itself when spinning i assume create a big gust of wind, so it would simply overpower the wind technique and make it a part of itself.
Wrong, think about what ice does to all three of those, what it does to water? what happens with wind? and what happens with mud?
 

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Wrong, think about what ice does to all three of those, what it does to water? what happens with wind? and what happens with mud?
I say it could work in a fight <_>

It's neutral to mud, since it consists of water and earth, earth shatters ice but in a soft liquid-like state it's weak against ice.
Twice as powerful than Water, so it overpowers it.
Wind would only decrease the ice temperature, meaning it would be overpowered by ice aswell.
 

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You should know this by now. Ice freezes water, and mud, leaving water as ice and mud as basic/frozen earth. Wind just decreases the temperature so it won't be very effective.
 

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You should know this by now. Ice freezes water, and mud, leaving water as ice and mud as basic/frozen earth. Wind just decreases the temperature so it won't be very effective.
But the dragons turn into a tornado, i doubt it's a tornado of pure ice. In there dragon form yes, but i was reffering to the Tornado, in the end ice powers them. And the wind stuff, that's exactly what i said. ._.
 

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But the dragons turn into a tornado, i doubt it's a tornado of pure ice. In there dragon form yes, but i was reffering to the Tornado, in the end ice powers them. And the wind stuff, that's exactly what i said. ._.
Wind was correct. Pure ice is that what you need to freeze water? No. You need the temperature created by the tornado, that is the difference between a regular wind tornado and black ice dragon tornado.
 
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