How It Should've Ended: Fixing Naruto

Yasopp

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Infinite Tsukiyoumi is successful and Naruto realizes that maybe it was the only way for peace to blossom.

I would've loved that ending. :elmo:
 

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How would you do it?

When did it go sour for you and how would you fix it?
It crumbled the moment Naruto was depicted as the destined hero rather than the underdog who rose above the crowd and became the hero that destiny believed was insurmountable for him. With this in mind, I'd rectify the manga by having Ashura having fallen to his knees against Indra and perpetuates this issue for the consecutive fueds until Naruto actually overcomes this; rewrites history and manages to defeat Sasuke who was the prodigy destined to win.

It would've complemented the "underdog" theme that pervaded Part 1. This was honestly my only gripe with the manga because the whole Transmigrant plotline would've really developed that theme perfectly.
 

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Your undercover fangirling.
not really , I am fine with Sakura being the Heroine, I find her a better female lead than Hinata , if only Kishimoto didn't shit her character , and I've already told you why

but I just hate how the yaoi relationship between Naruto and Sasuke was the main thing in the Manga
 

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Honestly, the biggest thing for me was poor pacing in the last arc and drawn out end villains, minus Kaguya of course. The time and effort Kishi put into Obtio was heinous and the time Madara spent toying with his opponents as an Edo and alive with no eyes was just a waste of time.

Kishi wanted to hold back Obito's identity for as long as possible and that became painfully obvious toward the end. Obito had such a strong will to survive as long as he did, but yet he was so easily manipulated and corrupted by Madara? His whole story lacks logic and is quite disappointing. Granted, Tobi being anyone else would have been just as illogical, but Kishi literally made it impossible for Tobi to be anyone until he revealed Obito's screwed up past. The whole thing was a trainwreck.

As for Madara.... we get like 2 chapters of him at full power, 2-eyed, Juubi-jin epicness. This is after over a hundred chapters of edo Madara and no eyed-Madara. It was a real travesty considering the build-up the villain got. I could take or leave Kaguya taking his place, but either way Madara needed more Juubi-Jin screen time and less Edo/ no eye screen time.
 
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