How It Should've Ended: Fixing Naruto

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Naruto and Sasuke dying when Madara killed them.
The others using the sealing pot and strategy to trick madara and seal him. No need for kaguya (fodder). SAs ukr reviving the Uchiha Clan. Hinata dying and saving Neji breaking the old tradition.
The world then teaches about sacrifice of those who wanted peace and what war led to and could lead too.
 

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Kaguya would be fine as a final villain if she got the right build up (I mean she is the God of chakra) , instead she appeared before 22 chapters before the end of the manga , which is really lame
She cant have the right bbuild up because she was clearly a after thought and plot device to kill Madara because Kishi wrote himself into a corner. Her whole concept as a villain in this story is fuked no way it could have turned out right.
 

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She cant have the right bbuild up because she was clearly a after thought and plot device to kill Madara because Kishi wrote himself into a corner. Her whole concept as a villain in this story is fuked no way it could have turned out right.
not really , her backstory explained the existence of Ninjutsu and Doujutsus and KKG and the existence of chakra itself , besides she was foreshadowed before Madara was even a JJ
 

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the problem is Kishimoto totally forgot about the NV , and he focused on the yaoi relationship between Naruto and Sasuke and how they are going to fight in the end , he started giving it an ass pull after an ass pull , he even added moronic parallels to use "fate" as an excuse , and don't get me wrong Vote 2 was epic and all , but it didn't really worth all these ass pulls

and the whole Manga was screwed after the Five Kage Summit arc (which BTW was the worst arc) ,

(long read , you can skip)
Naruto (after he was the badass that defeated Pain) started to Humiliate himself again , he got beaten up by Karui , bowing his head for the Hokage , and all that for the sake of Sasuke's ass ,

Sakura was a total dumb ***** in this arc

and Sasuke was a total maniac , he wanted to slaughter everyone in the village because of a decision made by 3 people , Sasuke should've only sought the 3 elders and leave the innocents out of this , but nope they have just to turn him to a maniac .
as if they were trying to force the fight between Naruto and Sasuke to happen

and yeah when Sasuke was about to kill Sakura and Kakashi , Naruto was like
"hey bro , even though you were about to kill my sensei and my friend and you admitted that you are wanting to kill me and to slaughter every one in my village , I still love you and I will die after you "

Sasuke : why is that

Naruto : because I am your friend

logic :sdo:

ugh , I think the manga have lost it's potential since that shity arc

if you ask me

well Kishimoto could've simply focused more on the NV , and give it the right build up rather than focusing about the Yaoi relationship between Nardo and Sauce

he could've explained the backstory of every clan specially the Uchiha and the Hyuga and the Uzumaki . and he should've been more focused on the Otsutsuki clan , because their backstory explains the existence of Ninjutsu and Doujutsus and KKG and even the Chakra itself

he should've given Konaha 11 their rightful amount of screen time

keep Neji alive , and made him the successor of Hamura

stopped shitting on Sakura's character

and Kaguya would've made a great villain if she got the right build up , I mean she is the God of Chakra

giving a better reasons for VOTE 2 to happen , rather than adding moronic parallels to use "fate" as an excuse

focusing more on the Organization like the 7 mist Ninja sword-men , and of course focusing more on the Akatsuki

no white zetsu army bullshit ,

changed the lame design of the Juubi
 
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not really , her backstory explained the existence of Ninjutsu and Doujutsus and KKG and the existence of chakra itself , besides she was foreshadowed before Madara was even a JJ
She still comes out of nowhere no matter what because she has no room for buldup in the story. That little info on her is barley qualified to be called build up and its not like you can have her the focus of the story either when the main story has nothing to do with her.

She would have been better as a villain in Boruto not Naruto. Naruto story has nothing to do with her being the origin of chakara and jutsu doesn't make her relevant. is about

Lets face it she is just trash. She cant work in the main story, should have been a spinoff villain or boruto villain.
 

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the problem is Kishimoto totally forgot about the NV , and he focused on the yaoi relationship between Naruto and Sasuke


Naruto (after he was the badass that defeated Pain) started to Humiliate himself again , he got beaten up by Karui , bowing his head for the Hokage , and all that for the sake of Sasuke's ass ,

Sakura was a total dumb ***** in this arc

and Sasuke was a total maniac , he wanted to slaughter everyone in the village because of a decision made by 3 people , Sasuke should've only sought the 3 elders and leave the innocents out of this , but nope they have just to turn him to a maniac .
as if they were trying to force the fight between Naruto and Sasuke to happen

and yeah when Sasuke was about to kill Sakura and Kakashi , Naruto was like
"hey bro , even though you were about to kill my sensei and my friend and you admitted that you are wanting to kill me and to slaughter every one in my village , I still love you and I will die after you "

Sasuke : why is that

Naruto : because I am your friend

logic :sdo:

ugh , I think the manga have lost it's potential since that shity arc

if you ask me

well Kishimoto could've simply focused more on the NV , and give it the right build up rather than focusing about the Yaoi relationship between Nardo and Sauce

he could've explained the backstory of every clan specially the Uchiha and the Hyuga and the Uzumaki . and he should've been more focused on the Otsutsuki clan , because their backstory explains the existence of Ninjutsu and Doujutsus and KKG and even the Chakra itself

he should've given Konaha 11 their rightful amount of screen time

keep Neji alive , or at least gave him a proper death

and Kaguya would've made a great villain if she got the right build up , I mean she is the God of Chakra

giving a better reasons for VOTE 2 to happen , rather than adding moronic parallels to use "fate" as an excuse

focusing more on the Organization like the 7 mist Ninja sword-men , and of course focusing more on the Akatsuki

no white zetsu army bullshit ,

changed the lame design of the Juubi
Lmao.,,
 

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Eh, its fine as it is. If I could change anything at all, I just would have made it so that Itachi lost at least once to shut up his fanbase.
He did against the GOAT ... and we all know he not beating Sauce now so.

OT:

Sasuke stayed devilish.. well not entirely.. nvm yes entirely.

Sasuke could of been the ultimate villain by never being defeated by the main character but Kishi and his childish happy endings... there are no such thing as happy endings.
 

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She still comes out of nowhere no matter what because she has no room for buldup in the story. That little info on her is barley qualified to be called build up and its not like you can have her the focus of the story either when the main story has nothing to do with her.

She would have been better as a villain in Boruto not Naruto. Naruto story has nothing to do with her being the origin of chakara and jutsu doesn't make her relevant. is about

Lets face it she is just trash. She cant work in the main story, should have been a spinoff villain or boruto villain.
yes , she does have a place in the story , the whole story was about Ninjas having mysterious thing called chakra and they were using Ninjutsu by it , and her existence just explain it all , the doujutsus , the KKG , the chakra

do you what was really the trash , the Toxic relationship between Naruto and Sasuke that the whole Manga was revolving about
 
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The nations war with one another.

The Uchiha aren't wiped out.

Naruto is no longer naive and overly idealistic.

The shinobi and the spoiled Konoha 11 finally learn true pain by experiencing a ninja war.
 
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-Kaguya not happening or having an actually good build up and foreshadowing and not coming out of nowhere for 20 chapters
-Sasuke not going crazy. That made no logical sense.
-No Edo Tensei or at least greatly limit its use
-Otsutsuki clan actually having good relevance through out the story
-Sakura not being forgotten about(really Kishi?)
-The other Jinchuriki's having more screen time & relevance
-The Akatsuki catching the Jinchurikki
-Orochimaru being a Otsutsuki
-Tobi not being Obito. In fact, Obito not even being alive as he was predictable and had sh!!ty motivation
-The story not evoling around Naruto & Sasuke at expense of the other characters
-Naruto not going against everything he stood for in Part 1 like hard work & changing destiny
-The title of Hokage maintaining its weight
-Neji death. It wasn't necessary and did nothing
 

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Here we go:

1. No SasuSaku. Sakura would actually get over her stupid feelings for Sasuke, stop being a damsel, and end up with Rock Lee, instead of a guy that tried to kill her three times.

2. NaruHina and ShikaTemi would be canonized. SaiIno too. I would've at least gave Choji x Karui some development during the war. Speaking of that:

My dude Choji loves him dat chocolate.

:snick:

3. Sasuke will leave the village forever and never return. He would explore the world, achieve wisdom and knowledge, before settling down with Karin. With the Uzumaki and Uchiha standing together, their clans would strive and become more powerful by mixing their genetics.

4. Naruto is happy as Hokage and would pay more attention to his family.

5. Orochimaru and Kabuto would be sealed.

6. Kakashi and Gai would run their own spa to run "ALL KINDZ" of game on the females that come through. They would make bets to see who can get the most booty in one night.
 

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Itachibase rustled me like President Trump rustled the world.

If I see stupid people saying stupid shit I'm bound to get annoyed. Though that on itself is only half of the problem with Itachi anyway.
Somthing tells me that Lyke probably is the one responsible for this bad case of butthurtitis you're suffering from.

As of lately, when I see you post it's almost certinally has you taking a shot at Itachi in some way.
 
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