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Only one more. The strongest of all. The defensive stance.

Genkotsu Namakemono: Sono Odori No Hebereke Moya | Lazy Fist: The Dance of the Drunken Haze
Type: Defensive
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description:
The masters of Lazy Fist developed this technique as an ability to defend against stronger taijutsu enemies and long range weapons. This technique uses the basic Chu Gar (Southern Praying Manthis) open stance, with arms close to the torso but slightly extended forwarded and either their fists directed down or with their open hands (fingers upwards and palms directed to himself), while having the legs in a strong, wide and grounded stance, mimicking the Praying Mantis. By using this stance the user is able to use his hands in wide, fluid movements to deflect incoming projectiles or taijutsu attacks directed at him. He must keep his hands coated in a layer of chakra that protects them while he deflects the projectiles or attacks. When used to defend against taijutsu attacks, each time the user deflects a punch or kick, upon contact with the enemy, he induces a B-Rank Genjutsu that produces a drunken haze-like effect. This numbs the enemies' senses and slows his movements at each blow deflected. Because of Lazy Fists inherent speed, this defensive stance is slightly faster than regular Taijutsu, enabling the user to counter multiple projectiles thrown at him. However, this is a purely defensive stance as it doesn't do damage to the enemy, only deflects his attacks.

Note: Requires Lazy Fist training
Note2: Can only be taught by Scorps
Note3: Can deflect any same or lower ranked Taijutsu attack (except gates)
Note4: Can be used to deflect or block Kenjutsu moves of the same or lower rank
Note5: Can be used to defend against C-Rank or lower elemental projectiles
Note6: Can be used to defend against basic weapons even if infused with chakra or poisoned (chakra coated hands protect the user)
Note7: Requires Genjutsu Mastery

This is the strongest defensive taijutsu move out there. You can basically defend against almost anything. And, while defending against taijutsu or kenjutsu, you actually slow the enemy down. The more he tries to hit you, the slower he gets. He begins to feel as if he's drunk and everything begins to feel hazy. I'd say that to make a Strong Fist Master really sluggish you need to connect with him between 5 to 7 times.

This stance can also be used to block incoming ninja weapons, like, for example, a cloud of kage bushin shurikens. Or poisoned weapons or even low rank elemental projectiles. (i taught this would actually be very dramatic, to simply block things with your hands so i add that up ^^).

Using Lazy phsylosophy, Lazy Fist is actually designed to be used in counter attack mode. This stance serves as the basis for the attack stances and moves and sets everything up. In 3 simple moves you can leave an opponent sluggish and almost drunk-like, stuck with painful needles and having a heart attack. All in a single counter attack, very hard to dodge or block.

The disadvantage of this move is that its easier for the opponent to figure it out. However, if he doesn't, the sluggish haze keeps in play until released. And, if that wasn't enough, all A-Rank and below Lazy Fist moves can actually be used without restriction. ^^

Now, i know that regarding this one you must have at least one or two questions ^^
I actually don't have any doubts. You explain your jutsus pretty well. I still think it's stupid that you're not a sensei yet.
 

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Idea for a jutsu:

This is a stance breaker. You charge chakra on your hands and aim for the vital points, as always, but the changes are that your opponent will block your punches before you are able to fulfill your gold. At that point, it is easier to shift your target to the hands, elbows or arms, than to the vital points, likewise, your opponent is less tempted to block those hits, since thy would cause no damage at all, than he would be if you were trying to strike the vital points. But using the Lazy Fist, my idea is to drop a genjutsu where your enemies feels like the point of impact immediately acquires tremendous weight, forcing the enemy to drop the arm (thus dropping the defense) maybe even fall on his knees. Another way of doing it is, isntead of making the opponent feel the arms gain weight, make it so the opponent feels the arm melts down, thus achieving the same results and would make people less tempted to say "i has superz strengh soo i pull teh hand upp". Though following the flow of your previous techniques, increasing the weight would work much better.
O_O Genius! I'll work on it and submit it tomorrow. I also taught of a on touch burning effect or freezing effect with the same principle. I have two pending CJs awaiting Izuna's re-checking:

Genkotsu Namakemono: Sono Bukotsu Zou No Sochi | Lazy Fist: The Clumsy Stomp of The Elephant
Type: Attack
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description:
One of the most dangerous moves in Lazy Fist but also one of the simplest. The user focus a big amount of chakra on his palms or foot and does either a strong double open palm trust or a full strong single foot stomp into the opponents body sending him flying backwards. This disturbs the enemy's chakra flow and produces a deep, strong S-Rank illusion. This painful illusion makes the enemy feel an intense pain, as if his chest/body part was completly crushed. The enemy may even faint from the agonizing pain if he doesn't release the genjutsu. If the enemy looks or tries to feel his torax/chest/body part he'll see/feel as if it was indeed completely crushed, making it hard to decipher/see through the illusion.

Note: Requires Lazy Fist training
Note2: Can only be taught by Scorps
Note3: Impact stance can be used without limit but, if connected, illusion only works twice
Note4: Requires Genjutsu Mastery

Genkotsu Namakemono: Sono Tonsou No Ranningu Panda | Lazy Fist: The Escape of the Running Panda
Type: Defensive
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description:
Perhaps the strongest of all of the Lazy Fist stances, this technique is a more advanced form of The Dance of The Drunken Haze, using the same Chu Gar (Southern Praying Manthis) stance with the same basic abilities but used to a much higher caliber. By using this stance the user is able to use his hands in wide, fluid movements to deflect incoming projectiles or taijutsu attacks directed at him. He must keep his hands coated in a layer of chakra that protects them while he deflects the projectiles or attacks. Upon contact with the enemy, the user induces a powerful S-Rank Genjutsu. This Genjutsu affects all of the enemy's senses, making him see the user disappear into a burst of bamboo leafs and even hear him run away. The enemy will even see and hear small signs of movement in the ground around him, further fueling the illusion that the user has ran with a full burst of speed away from him. This technique serves as the ultimate defense/escape for Lazy Fist Masters.

Note: Requires Lazy Fist training
Note2: The illusion effect only connects twice but the stance can be used without limit
Note3: Can only be taught by Scorps
Note4: Requires Genjutsu Mastery
Note5: Can deflect any S-Rank or lower Taijutsu attack (except gates)
Note6: Can be used to deflect or block Kenjutsu moves of the A-Rank or lower.
Note7: Can be used to defend against C-Rank or lower elemental projectiles within reason
Note8: Can be used to defend against basic weapons even if infused with chakra or poisoned (chakra coated hands protect the user)
 

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I love the Elephant one, I was about to suggest something like that too xd
The last one seems useful yet I'm a little iffy about the genjutsu.


Oh, I had another idea for a different stance. Everytime the we strike the opponent, he will hear a very loud buzzing/shrieking sound. The more we strike him, the higher the sound is, causing extraordinary pain to the user's brain, and preventing him from concentrating. I'd say about 3-4 strikes before the opponent is unable to keep fighting, and a couple more until he looses consciousness.
 

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I love the Elephant one, I was about to suggest something like that too xd
The last one seems useful yet I'm a little iffy about the genjutsu.


Oh, I had another idea for a different stance. Everytime the we strike the opponent, he will hear a very loud buzzing/shrieking sound. The more we strike him, the higher the sound is, causing extraordinary pain to the user's brain, and preventing him from concentrating. I'd say about 3-4 strikes before the opponent is unable to keep fighting, and a couple more until he looses consciousness.
Lazy Fist: The Morning Bells Are Ringing o_O

I so made the right decision in teaching you Lazy Fist! You have just given me ideas for about 5 or 6 new moves. And the style will be complete. Awesome Lili. Tks!!!

The escape one was Sy idea. A Genjutsu that makes you disappear from the users sight. However, we won't' be using this to run, will we? Specially when we have a Rasengan in hand for example. Or, in my case, when i have a CJ that enables me to, without hand seals, create any consctrut of chakra i desire (spike!).

Well, this concludes the Style so far. Everytime i make a technique i'll notify you and you get it auto. You also have my permission to submit cjs for Lazy fist if you want. I only ask that you don't teach it to anyone. ^^

I hope you liked the training. It was short but productive i think.
 

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Lazy Fist: The Morning Bells Are Ringing o_O

I so made the right decision in teaching you Lazy Fist! You have just given me ideas for about 5 or 6 new moves. And the style will be complete. Awesome Lili. Tks!!!

The escape one was Sy idea. A Genjutsu that makes you disappear from the users sight. However, we won't' be using this to run, will we? Specially when we have a Rasengan in hand for example. Or, in my case, when i have a CJ that enables me to, without hand seals, create any consctrut of chakra i desire (spike!).

Well, this concludes the Style so far. Everytime i make a technique i'll notify you and you get it auto. You also have my permission to submit cjs for Lazy fist if you want. I only ask that you don't teach it to anyone. ^^

I hope you liked the training. It was short but productive i think.
Very productive ;)

Btw:

Or, in my case, when i have a CJ that enables me to, without hand seals, create any consctrut of chakra i desire (spike!).
Which you will teach to me, yes?
 

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Lol! ^^

Kougu no Pangu | Tools of the Creator
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: B-Rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description:
Using basic chakra shape manipulation, the user is capable of making small, simple and "solid" chakra constructs like cubes, spheres, kunais, pillars, etc. These are manifested and visible in a light blue color, although remaining quite transparent. These chakra constructs are weaker than Elemental Jutsu that require advanced Shape and Nature Manipulation but are as strong as normal, unfocused Elemental Jutsus.

Note: Can only be taught by Scorps or Zenryoku
Note2: Constructs are created within short range of the user
Note3: Can only be used once per turn, up to 4 times.

Well, with this technique you can materialize any solid shape you want made of pure chakra short range around you using only shape manipulation. They manifest themselves in great speed and don't require hand seals. These constructs can be used for support (like pillars, etc) much like Doton No Jutsu. Or to complement Taijutsu moves. For example, making chakra spikes/needles were your opponent is about to punch or on your palm as you are about to punch him :roll eyes:

However, one thing you need to bear in mind is that these constructs will always be weaker than elemental jutsu that have advanced shape manipulation. For example, this is as strong as a Desctruction Torrent but weak against a Water Bullet. According to the new rules set by Izuna, elemental and shape manipulation > than only shape manipulation. However, certain simple elemental jutsu are actually almost just nature manipulation.

One of those precious low rank jutsu that with a good description is actually deadlier than many S-Rank jutsu around. ^^ Enjoy. don't teach to anyone.

PS- you are one of the few fighters that almost all the experienced fighters respect, so you must do something right in your fights... lol
 

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Lol Yeah, boobs have that effect. Lol

Well, i guess we are done with training ^^ As i submit new cjs of lazy fist and they get approved, i'll post them here, so keep this thread subscribed ^^
 

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Oh, I was thinking about some jutsu in classe and I came up with this idea:


You strike your opponent randomly (you can pimp this part up) and with every strike, the opponent's vision darkens. After 2-3 strikes, the opponent vision is completely black, without discerning any light at all.


Also another one, you retrieve a strike on the opponent which will then turn the opponent's perception of direction into the total opposite, making right, left, making back,front and making up, down. But this one is harder to apply in battle
 

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I submitted this in the CJ thread with the ideas gathered today. Made it a free style double stance.



Hum...the vision one is cool. Really. Imagine your field of vision right? then at each hit its like a splash of black paint covers some part of it. As more hits, more paint is spread until it covers the whole vision. The paint is an analogy but it wouldn't look bad either. humm....have to work on that.

The right and left one has a problem: its a genjutsu version of tsunade's jutsu and its also a copy of sorts of a bleach illusion.

well, i was thinking of more organic things. To try and explore that boundry between reality and illusion. I can't make anyone feel a certain emotion...however, with the same principle of inducing pain, i can still make a person vomit...or soil himself...or get nauseated...or lose balance like if his inner ear was affected...I like the ringing idea...It would actually be cool...as the ringing ups the volume, more and more unbalanced would the person be and such...

There is so much to do with Lazy Fist. The potential is somewhat limitless O_O

PS->Although not really needed since you have both an MS and a Bartolomew bios, you should check my Ao bio. I updated it as a Lazy Fist Master bio. I think i forgot to say to you that a Lazy Fist Master can move faster and with more agility than any Strong Fist Master and its something you can put in a bio. Alhtough it's not the highest bonus a bio can have in speed, it, unlike other ones, can be stock pilled with others. My Ao bio can do genjutsu with only one hand seal, Earth and Fire much faster, Easily recognize Genjutsu and also move faster than a Strong Fist Master. So my style adds some stats to the bios which is nice. ^^
 
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I submitted this in the CJ thread with the ideas gathered today. Made it a free style double stance.



Hum...the vision one is cool. Really. Imagine your field of vision right? then at each hit its like a splash of black paint covers some part of it. As more hits, more paint is spread until it covers the whole vision. The paint is an analogy but it wouldn't look bad either. humm....have to work on that.

The right and left one has a problem: its a genjutsu version of tsunade's jutsu and its also a copy of sorts of a bleach illusion.

well, i was thinking of more organic things. To try and explore that boundry between reality and illusion. I can't make anyone feel a certain emotion...however, with the same principle of inducing pain, i can still make a person vomit...or soil himself...or get nauseated...or lose balance like if his inner ear was affected...I like the ringing idea...It would actually be cool...as the ringing ups the volume, more and more unbalanced would the person be and such...

There is so much to do with Lazy Fist. The potential is somewhat limitless O_O

PS->Although not really needed since you have both an MS and a Bartolomew bios, you should check my Ao bio. I updated it as a Lazy Fist Master bio. I think i forgot to say to you that a Lazy Fist Master can move faster and with more agility than any Strong Fist Master and its something you can put in a bio. Alhtough it's not the highest bonus a bio can have in speed, it, unlike other ones, can be stock pilled with others. My Ao bio can do genjutsu with only one hand seal, Earth and Fire much faster, Easily recognize Genjutsu and also move faster than a Strong Fist Master. So my style adds some stats to the bios which is nice. ^^
Very cool. I need to update my bios, been a while since I last did it.
 

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Another one ^^

Genkotsu Namakemono: Sono Bukotsu Zou No Sochi | Lazy Fist: The Clumsy Stomp of The Elephant
Type: Attack
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description:
One of the most dangerous moves in Lazy Fist but also one of the simplest. The user focus a big amount of chakra on his palms, fingers, fists, feet, elbows or knees and hits the opponent up to 6 times. This disturbs the enemy's chakra flow and produces a deep, strong S-Rank illusion. This painful illusion makes the enemy feel an intense pain, as if the hit area was completly crushed. The enemy may even faint from the agonizing pain if he doesn't release the genjutsu. If the enemy looks or tries to feel the affected area he'll see/feel as if it was indeed completely crushed, making it hard to decipher/see through the illusion.

Note: Requires Lazy Fist training
Note2: Can only be taught by Scorps
Note3: Impact stance can be used without limit but, if connected, illusion only works twice
Note4: Requires Genjutsu Mastery
 
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