[CC] Hayabusa with Mirai

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You said it wouldn't last long for me. How long is not long? Because you said it costs 30 chakra to go back into this form/state so if I have to use basically 30 chakra every time to activate it, how would it be useful with such chakra expense when I might be able to do something else worthy of that 30 chakra? Also at what rank would this be more viable?
 

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"Genin and Chunin can only use Shequan for a single turn" this is where you are in terms of how long you can use it; so you can only sustain it for a single turn; and it becomes viable at Jounin honestly. And to answer you're question, Shequan really is a one and done type of technique rather than trying to keep it sustained honestly imo. That's really all its good for, a sneak attack when in close range.
 
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Right so Tiger Fist, it's pretty simple honestly as you can see below:
Huquan (Tiger Fist)

Hu Quan is the fundamental fighting form of Hayabusa Kobudo. The form is characterized as the most direct and offensive style of fighting. Hayabusa will use their lower dantian to draw physical essence from nothingness (Wuji) into their being. The essence reinforces the user’s being increasing their physical speed, strength, and awareness allowing them to heightened feats of physical combat. This essence is visualized as barely visible distortions in the air surrounding the user and their weapons. The user is able to perform taijutsu, kenjutsu, bukijutsu and other acrobatic movements at twice their normal speed as well as react to anything as long as it is within their range of sensory perception (five senses, taijin, etc). Alternatively, the user can move linearly three times their speed (chunin and above), however this level of movement cannot be maintained for longer than a single turn. As for their power, Hayabusa gain +20 to their taijutsu and weapon based techniques (swords, staffs, axes, etc) while using Huquan. The essence that surrounds the user and their weapons capable of erasing physical matter (Earth, Steel, etc) at the point of contact allowing the user's physical attacks to cut through anything destructible. The user can use Huquan fighting in successive turns depending on their rank which reflects their overall physical condition. Genin and Chunin can only use Huquan for a single turn. Jounin and Head Ninja can maintain it for 2 successive turns. Dragon Ninja are able to maintain it for 3 turns at a time and Masters 4 turns. The drawback to Huquan is that, the user can only use lower dantian based techniques and non-elemental techniques while they are using this form. If used for more than two successive turns, the user experiences a cooldown of one turn plus the number of turns over 2 they utilize this style. For those who are limited to two turns and below, they require a single turn cool down before re-use. Haquan can be used twice for genin - jounin, thrice for Head and Dragon Ninja, and four times for master ninja.
So what you do is utilize the lower dantian to draw upon physical essence from nothingness to in order to enhance the body. That allows you as an individual to empower yourself to move quicker but also increase you're physical strength towards your bukijutsu, kenjutsu , taijutsu etc. It's basically an empowering mode of sorts, but is a really nice.
 
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I actually love this form. I’m starting to notice a pattern of only being able use certain things while using these forms. Ex: if you draw from your lower dantian, you’re only able to synchronize more moves with lower dantian. However, I do have a question.

Although you may not be able to draw from your middle or upper dantian during this, would you be able to use other elements and things or the likes while in these forms (non-Hayabusa techs)? I am guessing no and I believe I read that you can’t but I felt the need to ask that anyway to clarify.
 

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I actually love this form. I’m starting to notice a pattern of only being able use certain things while using these forms. Ex: if you draw from your lower dantian, you’re only able to synchronize more moves with lower dantian. However, I do have a question.

Although you may not be able to draw from your middle or upper dantian during this, would you be able to use other elements and things or the likes while in these forms (non-Hayabusa techs)? I am guessing no and I believe I read that you can’t but I felt the need to ask that anyway to clarify.
You can use any other skill that is non elemental while within these forms yes but I intend to update this eventually cause its kind of overkill if you ask me personally but we'll see how it goes. SO yea for now you cant use any elemental technique, but you can do elemental kenjutsu, taijutsu etc as they aren't straight up just elemental ninjutsu. Understood?
 
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You can use any other skill that is non elemental while within these forms yes but I intend to update this eventually cause its kind of overkill if you ask me personally but we'll see how it goes. SO yea for now you cant use any elemental technique, but you can do elemental kenjutsu, taijutsu etc as they aren't straight up just elemental ninjutsu. Understood?
Roger that. I’m ready to continue.
 

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Wuquan ( No Fist)
Wu Quan is the fourth and final form of the Hayabusa Kobodo, and is the most defensive of the style. This form is characterized by its use of the Hayabusa's dantain to combat opponent's on a spiritual/mental battlefield as well as the physical one. This form starts with the user's surging Dragon chakra to every point in their body utilizing all three dantian. This greatly bolsters the user's physical and spirtual defense as the user is now capable of reducing 20 damage from physical and spiritual attacks while in this form. Defensive techniques preformed during this time are also empowered by one rank (does not apply to techniques that can also used offensively). The user can use Wuquan fighting in successive turns depending on their rank which reflects their overall physical condition. Genin and Chunin can only use Wuquan for a single turn. Jounin and Head Ninja can maintain it for 2 successive turns. Dragon Ninja are able to maintain it for 3 turns at a time and Masters 4 turns. The drawback to Wuquan is that, the user can only use lower, middle or upper dantian based techniques and non-elemental techniques while they are using this form. If used for more than two successive turns, the user experiences a cooldown of one turn plus the number of turns over 2 they utilize this style. For those who are limited to two turns and below, they require a single turn cool down before re-use. Wuquan can be used twice for genin - jounin, thrice for Head and Dragon Ninja, and four times for master ninja.
Right so Wu Quan is essentially the defensive form of all the stances. Utilizing this form, you basically fortify you're body and mental state, basically allowing you to damage shave attacks that manage to hit you. It also increase the rank of purely defensive techniques you utilize by an additional rank. So yea its a pretty nice ability; as allows you to shave off - 20 DMG from a technique that's hitting you i.e if you made a mistake in a move and got caught. This cushions some of the damage for you but that's about it honestly. The rank increase in defensive techniques is a nice touch. So bare warned as it mentions, defensive techniques that have an offensive part to it will not work with this. Any questions?
 

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Longquan (Dragon Fist)
Longquan is the third form of Hayabusa Kubodo. It is classified as the most ranged of the fighting forms and utilizes the Hayabusa's ability to erase objects from existence. This form starts with the user passively embedding their Dragon chakra from the lower and middle dantian into their ranged attacks such as kunai or shuriken. As the user throws the objects the Dragon Chakra activates when they are at least in a 2m range of foreign chakra sources. Instantaneously, the Dragon chakra activates and creates a short-range 2m wide distortion similar to Kamui. These distortions are capable of erasing objects up to A-rank and may be passively activated by the user if necessary to spawn the distortion at their discretion. Objects erased by this method are capable of being returned by utilizing Taji Dao using the respective dantian. The user can use Longquan fighting in successive turns depending on their rank which reflects their overall physical condition; attaching Wuji to their ranged attacks to erase other objects can be executed once per turn that the user is able to keep the form active. Genin and Chunin can only use Longquan for a single turn. Jounin and Head Ninja can maintain it for 2 successive turns. Dragon Ninja are able to maintain it for 3 turns at a time and Masters 4 turns. The drawback to Longquan is that, the user can only use lower and middle dantian based techniques and non-elemental techniques while they are using this form. If used for more than two successive turns, the user experiences a cooldown of one turn plus the number of turns over 2 they utilize this style. For those who are limited to two turns and below, they require a single turn cool down before re-use. Longquan can be used twice for genin - jounin, thrice for Head and Dragon Ninja, and four times for master ninja.
Alright here we are with the final stance, Dragon Fist. Talk to me about it.
 

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Okay, this one is also really cool. You basically apply your Dragon Chakra (do I call it wuji?) to a foreign object and throw and upon the user's release or in proximity to a foreign chakra, it can erase it use a field of distortion around the thrown object. As it states, this is the long range form of the Hayabusa fighting style. It reminds me of Obito's kamui shuriken but instead of teleporting the target, it erases it. Also, by using the respective technique(s), the object that has been erased can be returned to existence. It has the same drawbacks as most of these techniques, being that during this form you may only use lower and middle dantian based techniques. And of course, non-elemental jutsu. This is something I would probably use often as it seems that it would fit well in my overall arsenal and me being a fan of bukijutsu.
 

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Okay, this one is also really cool. You basically apply your Dragon Chakra (do I call it wuji?) to a foreign object and throw and upon the user's release or in proximity to a foreign chakra, it can erase it use a field of distortion around the thrown object. As it states, this is the long range form of the Hayabusa fighting style. It reminds me of Obito's kamui shuriken but instead of teleporting the target, it erases it. Also, by using the respective technique(s), the object that has been erased can be returned to existence. It has the same drawbacks as most of these techniques, being that during this form you may only use lower and middle dantian based techniques. And of course, non-elemental jutsu. This is something I would probably use often as it seems that it would fit well in my overall arsenal and me being a fan of bukijutsu.
Pretty much yea, its great for characters who like to use ranged weapons like archery and the sorts. Keep in mind Hayabusa erasure is based on chakra amount, not the DMG. You’ll see this once we go over Wuji Dao. Anyways; if you don’t have any questions, we can move onto the next one of your choice. That can be either Wuji Dao (Erasure) or Taiji Dao (Bringing Things from Nothing into Existence). Also do note with all the stances that mention passive abilities, you initially have to activate the stance first at the cost of a move then you can trigger the other effects with no moveslot being taken up. Just thought id make that clearer.
 

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I understand. No questions. And thanks for clarifying that last part for me. I didn't think about asking that however that is originally what I had thought so I was on the right track.

Continuing, we can go along with taiji dao.
 

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Type: Supplementary/Offensive/Defensive
Rank: D - Forbidden
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 10 - 60
Damage: 20 - 90
Description: Taiji Dao is the sister technique to Wuji Dao and its polar opposite. Where the latter returns existence to nothigness, Taiji Dao brings existence from nothingness. Fundamentally, the user creates physical, vital, and/or spiritual entities through the use of their Dantian. The user is also capable of returning enties they've erased with Wuji Dao back into existence in the condition they were erased. The constructs and creations that a user can conjure are limited to their imagination. These constructs, if appropriate, are capable of using Neidan techniques that coincide with the dantian used to create them (e.g physical constructs can use techniques with the lower dantian) ( the entities can, not constructs ). Like other techniques that possess the Chakra of the Dragon, the user is capable of keeping track of anything created with this technique via their Taijin ability. The basic application of this technique sees the use of one of the three dantian to create an entity. However, advanced users are capable of combining two or all three dantian to create entities with qualities of multiple dantian. Combining all three of the dantian is the equivalent to creating a sentient familiar. This technique is learned at genin rank and requires 5 hand signs for external uses. Each rank reduces the requirements for hand signs by 2. The upper echleon (Dragon, Head, Master) may use this technique B-rank and below without hand signs.

Lower Dantian: This application sees the creation of physical entities from Wuji (Nothingness). Entities created with this dantian may possess properties of any material state of matter (solids and liquids primarily) and can be created internal or external of the Hayabusa. Hayabusa are also capable of replacing or adding body parts to themselves (or others through direct contact A-rank usage) such as lost or additional limbs, appendages, or wings. Those with medical knowledge can even replace vital organs, tissues, and cells. The limitations of this technique are that: entities created must be 5 meters away from adversaries unless the user is within close range. Entities such as poisons, diseases, or composites of actual elemental natures cannot be created. Familiars created with this dantian alone are non-sentient. All created constructs possess a black reptilian scale like aesthetic pattern, representing Sokotsu.

Middle Dantian: This application sees the creation of vital/etheral entities from Wuji. Entities created with this dantian possess plasma like forms similar to lightning and fire and appear as translucent black energy. The versatility of this application is less than the lower dantian's application as it possesses no such maluable ability to be formed into multiple different states of matter. Entities created with this application is incredibly high energy giving them the capability to burn on touch or even ignite objects and beings within close proximity (ignition at A-rank and above must be within 2 meters of the entity). The user is immune to their own energy's burning effects. Like the previous application, familiars created with this dantian alone are non-sentient. Entities cannot be created within 5 meters of adversaries unless close range is already established between the user and opponent(s).

Upper Dantian: This application sees the creation of spiritual entities from Wuji. This application allows the user to create a seperate sentience within themselves, or others. This spiritual creation may appear however the user deems fit as it is only a mental representation of the consciousness. Unless created within the consciousness of another, these spiritual beings are only concievable, and communicable to the Hayabusa who created it. Unlike the previous two applications, the user may create this spiritual sentience within another as long as they are within appropriate range. However, their only function is to prevent opponents from using mental/spiritual techniques of certain levels (B-rank prevents enemies from using S-rank and above spiritual/mental techniques. Every rank above that decreases the enemy's use by 1-rank). If created inside the user, the entity acts as a partner capable of using upper dantian techniques without the need for the user's input and is unaffected by spiritual/mental techniques directed at the user. Likewise it can block spiritual techniques on the user's behalf as well (A-rank and below starting at B-rank creations and increasing by 1 rank for every rank above B). This application requires one to be chunin rank and is B-rank at minimum. B and A-rank uses require the user to be within mid-range to use against targets. S-rank requires short range and Forbidden rank requires direct physical contact.

Multi-Dantian: This sees the application of more than one of the dantian being used in one specific use. There are only 3 combinations that may arise from this; lower+upper, middle+upper, and all three combined. The former two applications are a minimum of A-rank. Creating an entity with all 3 dantian is S-rank at minimum and acts as an entirely independent existence.

Note: Genin may use this technique up to C-rank every two turns. Chunin may use this every other turn up to B-rank. Jounin may use this technique up to S-rank (A-rank for upper dantian), however S-rank usage requires a one turn cool down before re-use. Jounin are also capable of using Multi-Dantian.
Note: Dragon/Head Ninja/Master Ninja may use this technique up to Forbidden Rank but only Masters can use Forbidden Rank multi-dantian.
Note: Forbidden usage of any kind can only be used twice per battle and renders the user incapable of using any Neidan technique for two turns after use.
Note: All applications and familiars may be maintained with additional chakra per turn B-rank and below -5 chakra, A to S -10, -15 for Forbidden.
Note: Familiars consisting of multiple dantian last 4 turns if they are A-rank and 3 S-rank and above. However, only one multi-dantian familiar may exist at any given time from the user.

Right so here we go, tell me what you understand about from a brief start before we do in depth with. First impression type of thing haha.
 

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Okay, that ability is huge so I will sum it up to the best of my ability before you explain to me in depth. I'll try to leave it to where you don't have to explain what I have already summed up.

So basically, within each level of dantian can you create not only "things" with taiji dao, but you can choose what you make depending on the level of taiji dao.

That being said, lower dantian creates physical objects from nothingness. This includes but is not limited to, something like leaves, extra arms or limbs in general, or actual "sentient" constructs which are noted to have black scales making them unique in visuals. Middle dantian somewhat like the first however with translucent and non-malleable variations which take on their own properties as well as able to ignite burning other entities bar the user as we are immune to such abilities stemming from ourselves. Upper dantian is the completely spiritual part of this being able to not only bring forth projections but being able to inhabit themselves and others with this technique which affects mental and spiritual attacks as well.

Overall, this or these techniques can be combined depending on your rank, such as lower and middle, middle and upper, or all of lower, middle and upper to create basically a sentient and physical being or something along those lines. I do have a question or two but it might be in your in depth explanation so I will wait for that before any questions.
 

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Right; you have the gist of it but we can go a bit more in depth with it. We’ll take this from one dantian to the next, so we’ll start with the Lower Dantian. As I mentioned beforehand in training; each dantian represents a certain state we can control utilizing our clan techniques while also representing one of the three of the dragon spirits. Now in the Lower Dantian’s case this is of solid state. This allows the Haybausa the ability to basically bring anything “solid” into existence, this isn’t limited to of course just hard solids. You can also bring forth liquids and gases; since they all fall under the “solid” bracket. Now these can come into two forms, constructs/objects etc or familiars. These familiars are not sentient; but rather act on the user’s will/direction – so you are going to constantly need to control the creature. Now the this application is honestly the coolest to me cause you can do some neat tricks, such as i.e if you have medical knowledge, you can replace organs and other parts of the body like restoring an arm etc. However be careful as you can at times find yourself at odds with others. I’m saying this in regards that normally when you create something, i.e a wave of water that you can control, you have to constantly keep pouring chakra into it. Once you stop, the wave would cease as well. In our case however – it’s the same thing but it also depends, like for example if you created a wave of water with Taij, and then stop using it. The water wont just “disappear”, it will fall to the ground, just being a puddle of water now. In terms of like a wall of earth, the structure will remain but will no longer have the same defensive properties as it originally did, simply being free form wall. In the limbs and organs case, it will simply continue to function as intended, just wont have any chakra in it anymore. I believe that’s simple enough to explain it. Any questions pertaining to this or any further comments you have on it? Also remember that these all have internal and external usages as well.
 
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