For someone special

[Amaya Sayuri]

1) nop, it's not (but in fact it should be, just I don't accept the Reality)
and "not no" too, dunno how to say
2)nop, rythm isn't that important , life itself gives me rythm (no wonder), still somehow i had troubles in 2 or 3 places
3)yes, i do agree, and besides it's helping you in the future (to remind)

ohhh!!! i get it now ahaha
it really is deep! yeah great
hope to understand more bout life
and poems made by others

 

[morsoe]

beautiful lil sis .... you have a talent for writing i can tell keep nurturing your gift....

well heres mine ... (the lines might not come out right)

these memories
relating through my sensory
never letting go
always trying ta get a hold of me!


ummm

part of a rap/ chat/spit/ poem i wrote when i was 15 for a girl i was seeing and how i met her and how we were.

girl i remember the first time i heard your voice,

dont know if it my choice or destiny
because me and you seem like where meant to be
your meant for me
your voice is so sweet and soft and so complimentary.
never met a girl who acts so elegantly
i dont what people think of me
when i say your like a queen to me
mean everything to me.
being with you is like bliss for me
looking gently into your eyes
theres no suprise
that they sparkle like a couple of fire flies in the sky
brown like a chocolate milky way in the sky.

theres more but im writing using a playstation 3 control and its kinda long lol xD

awww memories lol

 

[Amaya Sayuri]

beautiful lil sis .... you have a talent for writing i can tell keep nurturing your gift....

well heres mine ... (the lines might not come out right)

these memories
relating through my sensory
never letting go
always trying ta get a hold of me!


ummm

part of a rap/ chat/spit/ poem i wrote when i was 15 for a girl i was seeing and how i met her and how we were.

girl i remember the first time i heard your voice,

dont know if it my choice or destiny
because me and you seem like where meant to be
your meant for me
your voice is so sweet and soft and so complimentary.
never met a girl who acts so elegantly
i dont what people think of me
when i say your like a queen to me
mean everything to me.
being with you is like bliss for me
looking gently into your eyes
theres no suprise
that they sparkle like a couple of fire flies in the sky
brown like a chocolate milky way in the sky.

theres more but im writing using a playstation 3 control and its kinda long lol xD

awww memories lol

thank you thank you
i will try harder aha

ahahha so great!
my majesty of the world king bro!!!
i also like rap really!!!
try this song sometimes
it might bring back memories
awww. hahaha

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here's the link. its really great

 

[Roxane]

this is just some thread i thought could help me...

i really am feeling a lot of insecurities
dont really know what to do
so i would always come up with poems

here is my all time favorite:

Spoiler

I?ll stop loving you
when diamonds never sparkle
and flowers cease to grow
when thunder doesn't echo
and rivers do not flow
when hearts no longer wonder
and hands are never held
when smiles are only memories
and hope is never felt
when trees no longer blossom
and the stars refuse to shine
when autumn has no falling leaves
and winter never dies
when time has no more tomorrows
and rainbows have no hue
when god alone commands me
then I?ll stop loving you

that was for my
best ever boyfriend

and here are some:

Spoiler

dont just think about the past,
coz all that there is will never last
i know everything changes
but true love for sure surfaces

Spoiler

its so dark and lonely
left alone with no path to take
its so cold and sad
being here for no one's sake

Spoiler

the broken heart that still beats
no one knows why...
the broken clock that still ticks
every second till i die...

Spoiler

anyone just anyone pls tell me.
i dnt knw wat else there is to see.
i have always been so lonely
filled with these insecurities.

so i thought if ur feeling the same way
you could post some of ur thoughts here

it can either be just like mine
some poems either happy or sad
even your drawings are fine

or just say ur problems out loud
and im sure i'll hear them out...

Poem fanatics kid.xd

 

[Amaya Sayuri]

Poem fanatics kid.xd

aha really?

 

[-Ventus-]

mmm many poems there hon