For someone special

[Amaya Sayuri]

this is just some thread i thought could help me...

i really am feeling a lot of insecurities
dont really know what to do
so i would always come up with poems

here is my all time favorite:

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I’ll stop loving you
when diamonds never sparkle
and flowers cease to grow
when thunder doesn't echo
and rivers do not flow
when hearts no longer wonder
and hands are never held
when smiles are only memories
and hope is never felt
when trees no longer blossom
and the stars refuse to shine
when autumn has no falling leaves
and winter never dies
when time has no more tomorrows
and rainbows have no hue
when god alone commands me
then I’ll stop loving you

that was for my
best ever boyfriend

and here are some:

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dont just think about the past,
coz all that there is will never last
i know everything changes
but true love for sure surfaces

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its so dark and lonely
left alone with no path to take
its so cold and sad
being here for no one's sake

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the broken heart that still beats
no one knows why...
the broken clock that still ticks
every second till i die...

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anyone just anyone pls tell me.
i dnt knw wat else there is to see.
i have always been so lonely
filled with these insecurities.

so i thought if ur feeling the same way
you could post some of ur thoughts here

it can either be just like mine
some poems either happy or sad
even your drawings are fine

or just say ur problems out loud
and im sure i'll hear them out...

 

[k0n0hamaru]

1 ]its so dark and lonely
left alone with no path to take
its so cold and sad
being here for no one's sake

we both are on same path, yes i know its very hard to walk, what we need to do is find each others (find some one we can have faith in), it wont change everything but make the path a bit easier....

2] the broken heart that still beats
no one knows why...
the broken clock that still ticks
every second till i die...

it happens the same for me, i am in same dilemma , but each time the heart breaks and again gets well/repaired it becomes much more livelier, strong and large....


i cannot answer the 3rd thing u said, life is not a mystery to solve it is to live...

hope that was helpful!

 

[Amaya Sayuri]

1 ]its so dark and lonely
left alone with no path to take
its so cold and sad
being here for no one's sake

we both are on same path, yes i know its very hard to walk, what we need to do is find each others (find some one we can have faith in), it wont change everything but make the path a bit easier....

2] the broken heart that still beats
no one knows why...
the broken clock that still ticks
every second till i die...

it happens the same for me, i am in same dilemma , but each time the heart breaks and again gets well/repaired it becomes much more livelier, strong and large....


i cannot answer the 3rd thing u said, life is not a mystery to solve it is to live...

hope that was helpful!

ahaha thank you, u really do know how to give advices
i just added a new one its on the first spoiler

 

[aVague]

that's romantic.ok , i ll try:

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heroes are rare
that's why when they
turning in despair
everyone 's feeling lonely

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keep dreaming of a day
when you become like them
save your time to do the same
and don't waist yourself on a blame

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that's enougt of dreaming
way to go help them
fight against despair
and become like them

kinda bad but something

 

[Amaya Sayuri]

aha cool fan art
even i cant make something like dat

 

[Amaya Sayuri]

that's romantic.ok , i ll try:

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heroes are rare
that's why when they
turning in despair
everyone 's feeling lonely

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keep dreaming of a day
when you become like them
save your time to do the same
and don't waist yourself on a blame

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that's enougt of dreaming
way to go help them
fight against despair
and become like them

kinda bad but something

its not bad its cool
i really do get it
its about wat it feels
to save someone dear to u ryt?

 

[aVague]

its not bad its cool
i really do get it
its about wat it feels
to save someone dear to u ryt?

yes,that is...

 

[Gatsndshanks]

Might as well....

Although we try our hardest to succeed
Fate intervenes into a path, sure to mislead
Causing our lives to turn into turmoil
helplessly our feet are implanted under the soil.

 

[Amaya Sayuri]

Might as well....

Although we try our hardest to succeed
Fate intervenes into a path, sure to mislead
Causing our lives to turn into turmoil
helplessly our feet are implanted under the soil.

aww so sad,,, its like
wat fate gives us cant be changed
and in the end were gonna b stuck
at our path with nothing to guide us

 

[Amaya Sayuri]

yes,that is...

aha, if i get it wrong
u should say so..
i dont mind at all

poems are easily mis interpretd
but still no matter wat interpretation was given
that poem would still hold its true meaning
just waiting for people like me to understand more

 

[Gatsndshanks]

Here we go again....U_U


Whatever you've lost, their's more to gain
No matter the struggle, Despite the pain
Retrace you're steps, discover what's to be found
Then you'll understand that love is all around

 

[Amaya Sayuri]

Here we go again....U_U


Whatever you've lost, their's more to gain
No matter the struggle, Despite the pain
Retrace you're steps, discover what's to be found
Then you'll understand that love is all around

AWW! so cool! xd
its so heart <3 warming

yeah... i could understand
ur so great at making poems,

 

[Gatsndshanks]

AWW! so cool! xd
its so heart <3 warming

yeah... i could understand
ur so great at making poems,

Thanks, although yours are better...no doubt ^^

 

[Amaya Sayuri]

Thanks, although yours are better...no doubt ^^

ehhh??? i dnt think so..
i really like urs better!

its all about life
and so experienced

i could learn a lot
just by reading them

 

[Gatsndshanks]

ehhh??? i dnt think so..
i really like urs better!

its all about life
and so experienced

i could learn a lot
just by reading them

lol or just having an empty stomach makes me more intellectual xD
but god's honest truth, your an amazing poet yourself ^^

 

[Amaya Sayuri]

lol or just having an empty stomach makes me more intellectual xD
but god's honest truth, your an amazing poet yourself ^^

aha u think so? same goes for u. *thumbs up!* yeah!

aha yeah i know wat u mean bout being hungry
wen i wrote those poems i was pretty bored
and was also pretty hungry ahaha

i guess that's the secret to making great poems

 

[Amaya Sayuri]

i've just edited my poems
try my favorite one
the 1st spoiler,
its really romantic

 

[aVague]

last one was not misunderstood, for real
one more:

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do what you don't want to be done
kill sorrow with this one
try your best and the rest
will test what is settled when you're done

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now you 're in the game called "blind"
joy and happinies had become
your main missing one
so find them whatever it takes to your mind

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"this" poetries is bond with lonliess
so miss it with S

S means smile btw

 

[Amaya Sayuri]

last one was not misunderstood, for real
one more:

Spoiler

do what you don't want to be done
kill sorrow with this one
try your best and the rest
will test what is settled when you're done

Spoiler

now you 're in the game called "blind"
joy and happinies had become
your main missing one
so find them whatever it takes to your mind

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"this" poetries is bond with lonliess
so miss it with Smile

whoa! that's so deep!!! so cool
ok let me try,,,

1st one! it's bout writing ur deep pain away?'
like u cant do it or say it so just write it..

2nd, it's still about the poems ryt?
something like wat ur going to write from deep down
like wat is it u desire to find

3rd, something bout remembering
wat u wrote and how u should
appreciate wat u've done coz
this is letting go of the pain


again if im wrong pls correct me

 

[aVague]

whoa! that's so deep!!! so cool
ok let me try,,,

1st one! it's bout writing ur deep pain away?'
like u cant do it or say it so just write it..

2nd, it's still about the poems ryt?
something like wat ur going to write from deep down
like wat is it u desire to find

3rd, something bout remembering
wat u wrote and how u should
appreciate wat u've done coz
this is letting go of the pain


again if im wrong pls correct me

1) nop, it's not (but in fact it should be, just I don't accept the Reality)
and "not no" too, dunno how to say
2)in the end , rythm isn't that important , life itself gives me rythm (no wonder), still somehow i had troubles in 2 or 3 places
3)yes, i do agree, and besides it's helping you in the future (to remind)