I got my internet back... Sorry for the wait guys
I have to admit i was pretty pissed and turned off at the beginning of ya verse to start off with a lack of confidence but then i saw what you did.. The Btch please.. That wasnt bad.. You give a false sense of insecurity and go right in to bragging and such.. But i wasn't a fan of all the bragging.. I was hoping you'd go in for the attack alot sooner but you just went on and on about yourself..
Then when you did start attacking I noticed your predicted him predicting and I was fond of the "haki" line... Good
how you made it to the finals is actually pretty shocking
but dont worry the siege is here to expose any bullsh*t you start talking
for instance,
don't say that you are great or that you're better than me
when you have to explain every rap the judges are forced to read
and then when they vote against you, you b*tch a little fit
saying "look at this line riker accidentally bit!"
god im surprised the judges actually deal with this sh*t
if you're just gonna cry after every little crit-
tique
cuz it's just f*ck in-
weak
the way your inst-
inct
is to cry like a faucet sink!
"and omg gingka stole a few lines!"
"how is he supposed to judge mine??"
easily.
no vote for you and one for the siege
you don't need to worry cuz imma win this with ease
in fact for the judges, this decisions a breeze!
so it's your turn now, but there's no way you'll come back
cuz just like shade, no one reads your raps
This is when ya rap started to get really good.. I could personally do away with all the other stuff you said before.. This is when you started to really attack him and diss him, this is what I had been waiting for throughout ya whole first rap.... Saying you were shocked to see him in the finals lol that was pure gold. Really dissing him on how he conducts himself when his raps arent understood and he throws a btch fit really good. and I liked the Shade comment lol it fit so perfectly. These series of disses were done real well and personally I wasn't impressed at all with the stuff before this part, in a battle i wanna see how battle rappers attack and diss and how they attack their opponents and what do they use against their opponents.. I dont care for the cyphering bragging or the lyricism or even the "flow" i wanna see what type of disses a rapper uses and how he executes them, how clever can he be with his attacks not how clever he can be at rhyming..
Iknow NG loves all the figurative stuff and Amani gets a hard on for "flow" but I'm very keen on how a rapper attacks and disses...
It's time to open up the gates and sound the blitzkrieg sirens,
And it's time to shut your mouth and cause this siege to suffer silence
It's time to teach this f*ckin kid some Elementry f*ckin science
Cuzz I also guaged your flow, and here the results its time to face it,
According to the pH, your rhymes are nothing more than basic.
I'm also a real keen on how a rapper opens a rap and finishes it.. This opening caught my attention with Blitzkrieg.. The "time to face it" seemed forced to rhyme the punchline "basic" but it was a good punchline indeed.. a line like this would have been great agaisnt Elementalist.. But again this was one of the most cleverest punchlines in the battle "according to ph your rhymes are nothing more than basic"...
Now looky here, Its "siege the lyrical dragon".
Came looking for a battle, but didnt think this would happen
Im the rapper of prophecy, you're a lizard with a horn.
This battle bout turn to Rap Dragon 'gainst Dragonborn,
I didnt get the Dragonborn until i looked it up and saw it was related to Skyrim.... i never played that game.. But i liked everything you did here.. Thing i hate is the future tence here "This battle bout turn to"... Dont tell me whats bout to happen please just do it already...
Simply put, ive come here to steal your soul.
To turn your flesh into ash, and leave your bones ina hole.
To take your essence, and use it to further my greatness.
But to say itll do me much, now that would be gracious.
You be baking your rhymes, straight outta Naru's f*ckin kitchen
You faced him and he beat you, you moving on was contradiction.
You're riding his win, he left you keys in the ignition,
You didnt win by skill, you only won by situation.
This was a good personal.....
Me? I went all out, won with 0 hesitation.
Trapped my opponents, in a state of mental isolation.
Da fuq does that even mean? "state of mental isolation"??? seemed forced...
You called youself a gymnist
I wish you would have elaborated more on dissing him on being a gymist.. seems like nobody except Wrida went on to take this route.. But then again that didnt work for Wrida.. But still such an easy target, so much material, you can expand on how this guy is a gymnast but nobody wanted to go that route with Siege smh.. It would have been better then everything you wrote.. Besides mentioning his battle with NaruGoku everything was a general diss to Siege that could be applied to anyone.................
You called yourself a gymnist but cant flip..what a ruse.
I think this is the only and last diss you had to Siege about him being a gymnist... smh
You think i wasnt ready, son you fell for my trap
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This picture came into mind.. That line just made me think that you made this exact face and said it in a nerdy way and was about to pull out a Yugioh card or something.. The reason i am mentioning this is cuz i am keen on "what you say and how you say it".. "son you fell for my trap" just didnt sound hard and made me think of 2 things: yugioh and NarutAwesome when he's battling no offense and I know Im being harsh about just one line in a whole rap verse but every line matters and counts and you have to know how to word every line to make it hard!! The way you word a phrase means everything.. It counts how people perceive your message and if they can catch on to ya punchlines and jokes and references and etc.. Its really not even what you say, its how you say it..
Pullin fake quotes out the air,
Tryna act like they worth somethin
NvG made this on the base so Siege could get a public thumpin'
Because similar to Minato with FTG, its Halfmoon Siege wont be touchin.
1. i love how you addressed him misquoting you "pulling fake quotes".. good job.. without that people will just assume you really said what Siege claimed you said in his raps.. I found this to be ya best flip, the other flips were meh i didnt bother quoting them or addressing them like the Riker and Shade thing and making it seem like Siege was gay was meh...
2. putting this line in favorite rap quotes...
You said
"my rhymes are nothing more than basic"
meaning they're low on the Ph Scale
In your words I couldn't face it
But herein lies your fail
If my rhymes are lower than a base then that means their acidic
So I'm shootin poison in your face whenever I spit it
And I don't HAVE to admit it cuz I got HALF to admit it
Great flip.... and great play on words with HAVE and HALF...
If he had half a mind he'd see that
I already Shot him through the knee cap!
Halfmoon used to be a rapper like me
I didnt have to look this up to recognize the Skyrim reference.. Good job... Taking his reference and using it agaisnt him.. Using the infamous "arrow to the knee" and also "I used to be a rapper (-Hlaf)" basically is what you were saying in ya lines..
You say you're dragonborn which means ur born from me!
oh using the wordplay to flip.. ooooh
And it's rich, coming from a b*tch
That I'm riding Narus win while ur riding on his d*ck
Asking for advice every chance that you can get
You're the dog at his kitchen table, begging for a lick!
Your egos been swelling
Since NG started telling
You
what to do
from your rhymes to ur spelling
And then after the match
Youd roll onto your back
And let him give you a pat
On the underside of your belly
Good boy!!
You can do what your told!
But it still wont be enough if you wanna go for the gold
I've been rolling in that Au,
Ever since the sieges debut,
Undefeated motherf*cker
You think I cannot take you?
Im rising to the top
And I'm never gonna stop
I'll be bashin your skull in
While singing Blitzkrieg Bop
This whole part was crazy..... First off telling Half he rides NGs dck and asking for help reminds me of my battle with Digits lol... Second that was an awesome flip and diss on him.. Then the synonymous imagery to him being a obedient dog lmaoo that was gold.... third speaking of Gold oh my gawd the Au line was "Au" yay more chemstry.. wait no thats physics right?! that line would have been great agaisnt Elementalist.. anyways i loved the "Au" line liked how you followed up that youve been undefeated since your debut.. Very very good piece of work right here but i could care less for the Blitzkrieg Bop i honestly dont even know what it is..
DrProof certified, mad respect to you doc.
The smartest dude on the base said you lost, its time to check the clock-
Scratch that- Kid check the facts, it's like you're f*ckin retarded,
Its like you went to wikipedia and X'd out fore the page even started
My pH joke went right over your head,
I called you basic, not acidic, it's like im rappin a sped.
its like your just rhyming just to rhyme... i dont see the point in you saying "check the clock" instead but to rhyme with doc... didnt see the point in the line "Its like you went to wikipedia and X'd out fore the page even started" cuz i dont see how thats retarded... did you really just call him a "sped"? i feel like you only said that cuz it rhymed with head.. but real talk the fck is a "sped"?!?!
And its funny you mention my tutelege under NaruG,
And its funnier that he told me you was doing the same thing
You was getting some coaching,prolly more than I was.
I went only to him for advice, bounced sh*t off him for op-in-ions
This wasnt a good flip.. It sounded like you were trying to cop a plea... Or make excuses.. I mean you actually confirmed Sieges diss to you saying you do recieve "tutelage" (horrible choice of word it just sounds soooo soft) and you just go to him to receive help.. I mean if your going to confirm a diss, and try to flip it, you gotta make it sound understanding, like what you tried here, and flip it and make your opponent look stupid for using it or use it agaisnt him like what you tried by saying "you were getting some coaching, prolly more than I was".. remeber choices of words.. This flip would have been solid if you didnt say "prolly".. you sound unsure, uncertain, unconvincing... You should have said "yea NG taught me some shiit.. I go to him for some tips.. But fact is you've been going to NG for help/ way longer then I have more times then Half and NG told me that himself.." Not in those exact words but look at the choice of words.. Your start off with confirming his diss but flip it to make it not seem that bad but turn it on him to make him look like a hyprocrite and pathetic and validate your statement by confirming that NG himself told you...
And now youre sinkin, like H9 i sunk your battleship
Battleship reference FTW....
Everything after that was meh..... A whole bunch of references to WW2 and Nazi Germany, Aryan Race (rap Master race) and blah blah ya ending was meh not impressive... You should have came more with the attacks on Siege its almost like after you addressed the NG thing you had nothing else to say to him and ranted on with Nazi Germany punchlines and hit him with "generals" (as opposed to personals)
Forgive me for what I'm about to say
But his names dr. Proof, he's not f*cking Dr. Dre
So I really don't give a damn who he is on the base!
To me he's just one more hater standing in my way
Insta flip discrediting one of his fans... Love it..
But I'm cruising in the fast lane and I ain't touching the brake
And if I run-a-f*cka-ova it won't be a mistake
I'm pushin down on full throttle
And you know i swear to God I'll
throttle this b*tch until he wobbles
And like an empty bottle he topples
and shatters on the floor
da fuq was this shiit?!?! What is the point of this?!? i like it i do and i like the imagery and allusion to car speeding and whatever but all this seemed unneccessary and it just went nowhere.. It doesnt transition into the next line you just end this with an empty bobttle topples and shatters..? I feel like this whole battle between both of ya were filled with unneccesary stuff like this i mean why arent you guys focused on attacking each other and revert to wasting lines with stuff like this.?!
And there you go again, trying to explain your raps
I got the basic thing the first time, you wannabe chemist!
lol prediction came true...
You tried to hit me with your knowledge but you couldn't leave a blemish
Rap is an apartment and I'm the f*cking tenant
You cant pay the bills, so leave the f*cking premise
You don't get the sick acidic sh*t I spit
You're just a cocky bitch stuck in a trip
*You think NG is the one who raised me?
Up from noobtown where you have been staying?
In his latest messages all he's been doin is praise me
I don't need advice on this trail that im blazing
Cuz I can burn through any game this child starts playing
First its Skyrim, and now it's battleship
Reality: get into it cuz half seems like he's*losing it
He seems to think that we're in World War 2
Because he got his ass kicked then and he's losing now too
His coaching leader is gone so he doesn't know what to do
Love what was going on here... "Burn any game this child starts playing" your eluding to the fact that you can take Halfs references and use them agaisnt him.. Then you make a double entendre with "losing it" meaning that Half is losing his grip on reality and losing at reality meaning he fails at life.. I loved how you addressed the WW2 references and you connect that hes like Nazi Germany cuz they lost that war.. and you end it with that he doesnt have NG to help him so he is clueless lol... Maybe i saw more into what you intended with this here but nonetheless I liked how you attacked him in this segment here..
Youve got three fans! God damn, you're famous!
How much did you pay for them to stick their dicks in ur anus?
Now I know what you're gonna say,
"where's your fanbase?"
Does anyone want you to win first place?
Why yes they do!
You can see their names in the space
Where it says "Match 16 Judges"
And that's just a little taste!
Everyone in the rap group
Wants me to smack you
For thinking ur the sh*t cuz you got proof to rep you
And made alts to help you
You could say that hells blue
It doesn't mean it's all true
Your "girl" is probably a recluse
A dude who wants to get loose
Or just a random guy that's just tryna get a rep boost
And you'll also prolly talk about how I took so long
And say that thts the only reason why my rap is so strong
The truth is, I'm doin it to spite you...............
....One more prediction before my last round stops
Half will start bitchin when the judgements drop
And when the judges start tellin him why he lost
He'll sit down and cry out purple tear drops.
This went HAM.. i deleted the fluff that was inbetween..
[video=youtube;Q0WLFpIQ0o0]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q0WLFpIQ0o0[/video]
First off this video was freakin sick and i dont mean that in a good way.......
Alts? I dont need them. Its f*ckin clear that youre outclassed.
Thats three votes for me, meaning you are stuck in last.
I think siege is forgettin that the base counts as two judges
Its and pretty safe to say that they all think that Siege is rubbish.
"rubbish"......? smh I liked the flip here but rubbish?
I aint even gonn get into the sh*t NG said to me bout you,
FACEPALM!!!!!!!!
.....and i have nothing to say about the rest of ya third round.....
Summary:
Siege won....
ya both disappointed me though with the amount of fluff in ya raps so much unnecessary bull and lines that just didnt make sense its like ya just stuck em in the middle of ya raps cuz ya thought it was convienant.. If i didnt address lines its cuz i thought it wasn't worth addressing its cuz i most likely skimmed it looking for an "ooohhhh" moment " or a "ohhh shoot" moment..
Fact is both of ya didnt give me an "ohhh" moment i dont get it cuz both of ya had great battles previously before in this tourn Siege agaisnt NG and wrida.. Half you had a great battle with Rikerslade but ya came at each other soo weak.. Siege wins cuz i actually remember more of his lines at the end of the battle then Half like the stuff he said against ya fan base, he called you out on NG, and his line about people wanted him to smack you lol stuff like that showed aggression and superiority I like that but Siege you had a ridiculous amount of fluff in ya raps.. Half ya flip about him addressing NG was not well addressed imo, you didnt bring up what NG said about him, you brought up Siege being a gymist only twice and only in ya first rap, Siege said something along the lines he was shocked that you were in the finals did you even address that?!?
I dont think both of ya performed at the level that got you to the finals.. Ya both had some good stuff here and there but it was almost overshadowed by unnecessary stuff.. Too much general attacks.. not enough personals.. Too much self bragging, not enough bullying your opponent.. Half dont even hold anything back.. You freaking said "im not even gunna bring up what NG said about you.. im not a lame"... Man i felt like i just watched a strip tease when you said that!!! i felt Frustrated and highly disappointed... You pulled a punch!! You could have devastated Siege, murdered him!! But you held a punch.. Thats that shiit i dont like!! and Half dont rhyme just to rhyme.. Hell if you dissed Siege and non of ya words rhymed at all I would be more prone to voting for you cuz as much as i like clever rhymes, wordplay, internals, etc i mostly value the MESSAGE in a rap. How you get your message across, how you diss and attack, what you say and how you say it, how you deliver a punchline and set it up, how clever you were and all that. I dont care about flow cuz technically I can never know what type of flow you have unless i heard you audibly spitting.. How i read ya raps and how i make it flow may not be how you flow. I know real rappers with some ill lyrics but they have no flow.. Their timing is off, they cannnot rap on a beat to save their lifes, then I know some rappers with awesome flow but horrible lyrics, even real life rappers for example like Gucci Mane and even Lil Wayne sometimes will say the dumbest shiit but it sounded HOT just cuz of the way he said it or timing.. Im not a fan of Gucci but i am of Wayne but thats besides the point... What matters to me is substance.. ya both were lacking but Siege had more and better substance, better attacks, more attacks..
