[Suiton] Finally some training

[Corazon]

Okay, I guess I am learning how things work and thanks

1ST JUTSU

Ryu starts channeling chakra throughout his body before forming the Dog->Horse->Monkey->Ram hand seals and using nature transformation to turn his raw chakra into Suiton chakra. Once he has properly molded his chakra, he releases it from his body and sends it into the nearby lake. After infusing his chakra with the water, he manipulates it to make a giant wolf creature made of water to rise up by using shape manipulation and gestures for it to charge at his opponent before sending a powerful stream of water at his opponent

ADVANTAGES
• The wolf is able to move up to long range of the user which makes it very useful
• It is able to produce up to B rank streams of water

DISADVANTAGES
• You have to maintain focus on the wolf while it is active or else it would disperse into a puddle of water
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COUNTER
• Attack your opponent from below so he would be forced to lose focus and this would cause the wolf to disperse

I can see why its 1 of your favorites, there's not a lot of disadvantages to this jutsu

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2ND JUTSU

Ryu claps his hands together before slamming them on the ground to summon a pool of water under his opponent which launches him into the air and while his opponent is airborne, several bullets are shot at his opponent from the pool of water as he forms the Bird->Dog->Snake->Rat hand seals in conjunction with the bullets being shot. After forming the hand seals and the bullets hit his opponent, Ryu uses shape manipulations to form a dragon made of water from the bullets to appear behind his opponent which grabs him and brings him crashing into the ground

ADVANTAGES
• The jutsu can be used for any range of battle
• Once your opponent is airborne then he is open to attacks from anywhere so I would have a clone ready before this so I would block out all his options

DISADVANTAGES
• The jutsu has quite a few steps so it isn't guaranteed your opponent will be hit with the full damage of it because he could escape mid way through the jutsu
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COUNTER
• As I feel the water beneath my feet, I will channel chakra into my feet and as the water pushses me up(without me falling or flying due to the chakra in my feet)I would use the Doton jutsu Rock Scale Slab which is me making a slab of earth fall on the pool of water, essentially stopping anything from shooting out of it

1) Did I perform the 2nd jutsu right?
2) Does a pool of water appear under my opponent or do we have to be on the water source?(I think its the 1st but I'm just making sure)
3) Is my counter valid?

 

[Shady Doctor]

1) Yes
2) creates the water under them
3) Counter wouldn't work imo. I'd say use something that will destroy the bullets, thus having nothing to form the dragon from.

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( Suiton: Arekuruu Hayase ) - Water Release: Raging Rapids
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: Using their skills with Water Release, the user generates a powerful vortex of water around their enemy with a swing of their arm that sends them flying upwards and then dispels it with another hand gesture. (Requires a water source).
Note: Tobirama and Mei terumi can perform this without a water source.

Similar to previous techniques. While the opponent is on a water source or close to it, short to mid range to be exact. The user will simply swing their arm and cause a water vortex to appear around the opponent. The water will then shoot the opponent high into the air, the impact it gives off when it sends the opponent in the air is where the damage happens. Certain combos can be when the opponent is in the air to send a air attack like dropping lid to crash them back down onto the ground. After they are sent in the air though you must do one more swing of the hand to stop the vortex releasing it so you can move onto the next jutsu.

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[Corazon]

Okay, I will use another counter

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1ST JUTSU

Ryu focuses chakra throughout his body and after gathering enough chakra, he uses nature transformation to turn his raw chakra into Suiton chakra. Once his chakra is properly molded, he releases it from his body and into the lake they are standing on, he then manipulates his chakra by raising his hand in the air which causes a vortex of water to form around his opponent and launches him into the air, Ryu then performs another hand gesture to stop the vortex of water and proceeds to weave the Snake hand seal while channeling his Doton chakra, he then slams his hand on the ground which causes a portal to open above his opponent and release a giant lid that is flat to fall on his opponent and pushes him into the ground, crushing him to death

ADVANTAGES
• The jutsu requires no hand seals so it is fairly quick to perform
• This is a great set up jutsu for follow up techniques

DISADVANTAGES
• You are required to be on/near a water source
• The range of the jutsu is fairly limited

COUNTER
• As the water launches me into the air, I would use the Wind Stream Technique to push myself away from my opponent

1) Would the counter work? O_O

 

[Shady Doctor]

Yesh. Now LoK will take over to do the S-rank..

 

[Corazon]

We are done with A ranks? O_O thank you senpai for taking me this far

 

[Lord of Kaos]

Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii. So, we meet again. What have you learned about water release so far?

 

[Corazon]

Lol yes we do

hmm I've learned how versatile it is due to its many forms and the ways in which you can use it, also a lot of the jutsus are combo friendly

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I wasn't sure what you wanted xd

 

[Lord of Kaos]

65 posts and that's all you learned? :| Try again.

 

[Corazon]

Lol I said I didn't know exactly what you wanted so I just gave you the safe answer, obviously that isn't all I've learned

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I've learned that water is probably 1 of the most versatile elements, in the beginning of my training you asked me to combine it with Doton(which is its weakness) which taught me that even though an element is weak againt another, that doesn't mean you can't use it to your advantage. From what I've learned so far, water can be combined in some way with each element to use it as an advantage. It can be combined with Katon to create steam which could hide your location, it is apart of the storm release KG along with lightning so it combines well with it, Fuuton can be used to speed up Suiton attacks so that's my reason why I think its very versatile. I also learned how many forms water has eg. Sticky syrup, oil cloud thingy, solid walls, etc which makes it 1 of my favorites.

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Let me know if there's anything I should add

 

[Lord of Kaos]

Well, that is much better. Water in my opinion is the most versatile of the elements, able to be used with all others in an offensive way, even earth as I had you learn in training. That being said, I should let you know of an updated jutsu that received a new rank recently.

The old version was:

(Suiton: Suiryū Kōbaku ) - Water Release: Water Dragon Biting Explosion
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The will clap his hands and slam them on the ground, creating a large pool of water that gushes upwards lifting the opponent into the air. After firing the enemy into the air, pool of water shoots numerous water bullets at the (now airborne) enemy while the user does the Bird → Dog → Snake → Rat hand seals which forms the water in the pool into a water dragon which attacks the target, grabbing it and forcefully bringing it crashing into the ground. Tobirama Senju does this technique with his own specific hand seals, similar to how he does some other water techniques.

New version is:

(Suiton: Suiryū Kōbaku ) - Water Release: Water Dragon Biting Explosion
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user will clap his hands and slam them on the ground, streaming an incredibly rapid stream of water through it, creating a large pool of water beneath the opponent to form, that gushes upwards in a burst, lifting the opponent high into the air. The user does the Bird → Dog → Snake → Rat hand seals after his opponent is mid air, using the water pool to shoot up to 8 small water bullets, designed to further raise the opponent into the air, disorient him and damage him. The water bullets gather above the opponent after hitting and passing through his position and form into a water dragon which then attacks the target, grabbing it in its jaws and forcefully bringing it crashing into the ground. The dragon comes down from above the target, bites the target and coils down, towards the ground, crushing the target between the ground and the now incredible mass of falling water. Tobirama Senju does this technique with his own specific hand seals, similar to how he does some other water techniques. Despite long and seemingly complex, the technique is quite fast to perform and trigger.

Do you understand the updates?

 

[Corazon]

Well, that is much better. Water in my opinion is the most versatile of the elements, able to be used with all others in an offensive way, even earth as I had you learn in training. That being said, I should let you know of an updated jutsu that received a new rank recently.

The old version was:



New version is:



Do you understand the updates?

Yes I do, the rank is higher and it is explained a lot better than the older version.

Do you want my analysis on it?

 

[Lord of Kaos]

Sure, that will be fine. It's essentially the same as the older version. Shady explained it correctly so it's basically the same.

 

[Corazon]

hmm should I use the template I was using with Shady or is there another 1 you would like me to use?

 

[Lord of Kaos]

Lol, just explain for now, no template. We're not going to continue like this, we're just reviewing a jutsu you already know.

 

[Corazon]

Lol okay my bad

Well, the jutsu is basically set into stages

1st stage - is launching your opponent into the air
2nd - stage is shooting the the bullets from the pool of water
3rd stage - is forming the Dragon from those bullets and slamming your opponent into the ground

Even though there a few steps to complete the jutsu, it is quick to perform and the only time your are required to form any hand seals is when you shoot the bullets at your opponent while he is airborne so there's low risk involved. It is also a bit of a surprise attack because even if your opponent avoids the bullets, the Dragon would form behind him and he wouldn't know so that means you have to completely make the bullets disappear if you want to avoid being severely injured. You are able to combine this jutsu with certain techniques but you will need to form the dragon before moving on to the next jutsu

 

[Lord of Kaos]

Alright, that's done well. ^^ Now, it's time to start RPing I'll be using my old Percy bio.

Coming into the grounds, Percy rushed quickly, looking for the man he was supposed to be meeting. Arriving, he sees a ninja standing with Jio.

Oi! Have you seen a satyr come through here?! He's about 2 foot 3, has small horns, eating a toaster, the usual stuff.

Seeing Jio, dawning begins to show on his face.

Ohhhhhhh, you're that guy that wanted me to take you to Seaworld and talk to the whales?

As the two ninja stared at him, Jio responded by informing Percy that the man was their student. Looking at the student, Percy tilted his head to the side, trying to figure out where he knew him from.

Im pretty sure I met you at the museum. Didn't I give you my sword? Or did I met you in the Underworld? You look like you could be related to a Hellhound, those things sure are ugly. Maybe one of them is your mom or a Harpy. One can only think about what your dad looks like lol.

Jio began reprimanding Percy for saying "lol" in his every day speech, to which Percy begins ignoring him and speaks to the student.

Blah, blah, blah. Whatever. I don't know who's worse, you or the narrator here. Shoo, I'll take over

Looking at the student, I begin to wonder where he shopped at. Those shoes looked 3 sizes too little and his clothes were so ugly, I thought he was trying to scare me away. No wonder he's still a virgin. Where was I? Oh yeah

SO! Water Release, eh? Nice, I love Water, being the son of Poseidon and all. Yeah, I get the ladies wet. Hozukis pwn!

Laughing at my dirty joke (is it really dirty though? I'm a Hozuki so I'm all water and I shower a lot, so it's probably a clean joke), I begin walking up to the Ninja, sizing him up. Looks like a kids meal, extra toy.

Ready to get your ass kicked? I'll show you why Water owns.

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Here, we're going to have a small battle. You can use only water and earth jutsus, and one S rank every 2 or 3 turns. When you use them, I want you to explain them thoroughly, this it to test your knowledge and see if you are able to decipher how jutsus work yourself without outside help. This will help you in battles in the future. ^^

 

[Shady Doctor]

Jio walks a few meters away, spotting a nice sized boulder which he swiftly hopped upon. When Jio is up there, he takes out a sake bottle and awaits the show between his student and his sensei. Should be a good sight.

Go Lee!!

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Lee, make sure you take into account:

Range
Timeframe
Elemental interactions
Detail

Those are the basics things you need to have a grasp on in battle. Gotta make sure you keep track of where you are on the terrain, can't be 20m away from your opponent attempting mid range jutsu that wouldn't reach. Don't try squeezing in jutsu where they don't fit; it's a turn based rp, so it's your tech > His > yours > his. Take note of what would happen when your elements clash, most of the time there Is something in the aftermath whether it be a light steam, dust, water on the ground etc. And finally, give as much detail as possible. What hand your using to do things, exactly how far you are, how you take note of your surroundings (sounds, smells etc). Little things that could help you in a battle.

Back to watching I go. 0_0

 

[Corazon]

I will be using my Ryu bio that just got dropped O_O

As Ryu stands beside his senpai, he looks over to the approaching nerd who is trying to act cool while talking about something called a satyr that was supposedly eating a toaster, Ryu looks over to him and says

Did you just say eating a damn toaster?

As the rude nerd answered Ryu's question, he commented that Ryu is ugly and that his mother may be a Hellhound or Harpy and how ugly his father may be. Ryu simply said to the nerd

Its funny because your mother doesn't think I'm ugly, in fact, she tells me I'm handsome everytime I'm with her especially the night you were being made xd

After responding to the man, Ryu is shocked when he hears Jio senpai talk to the nerd and he finds out that this is actually his new sensei who will be teaching him the most powerful of water techniques, Ryu says to the nerd

I am sorry I insulted your mother but she asked, I mean you asked for it

Once he apologized to his new sensei, Ryu was surprised to learn that he will be having a small battle with him to test his knowledge of the jutsus, Ryu jumped back a few times until he was mid range(15 meters) away from his new sensei while Jio senpai decided to sit on a rock, encouraging him

Ryu gathers chakra into his body and weaves the Ram->Snake hand seals, he then slams his hands on the ground(would make my opponent think an attack from the ground is going to happen) while releasing his chakra into the atmosphere, causing a opening in the sky from which a thick mud falls upon his sensei, restricting his movements

Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user does 2 handseals (Ram → Snake) and creates an opening within the sky, which drips down onto the opponent a large amount of sticky mud (in all similar to that of Swamp of the Underworld Technique), covering them. The mud is very heavy and thick as well as adhesive, making it impossible to move if caught and easily crushing an enemy underneath. It’s normally followed up by Lightning release: sixteen pillar bind to create a giant oven around the opponent and then using Fire release: Firing biscuit technique to ignite the oven, hardening the mud and immobilizing the enemy target.

As his sensei is trying to get out, Ryu inhales and gathers chakra into his lungs while forming the Tiger hand seal, he then uses nature transformation, turning his raw chakra into Suiton chakra and begins exhaling his chakra as a powerful stream of water that moves rapidly towards his sensei while cotinuously streaming chakra into the jutsu and maintaining focus just in case his sensei escaped, he would be able alter the movements of the water stream

Type: Offensive
Rank: S-rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description:
After doing the Tiger hand seal, the user will quickly exhale a very thin stream of pressurized water that will be able to cut even rock. The most noteworthy feature of the technique is how fast the stream is and how sharp it can be. By moving his head, the user can alter the jet's cutting path, creating longer cuts or affecting bigger targets.

My analysis of the jutsu

Spoiler

Its a very quick jutsu to perform as it requires just a single hand seal which wouldn't really take time, the stream of water is also quick when it is moving and it can cover any distance in a battle so it is very versatile, you are also able to change the trajectory of the stream by tilting your head so it makes it hard to evade it. The down side is that your have to continuously stream chakra into the jutsu which means you can't perform any jutsus while using this, you also become vilnerable to Raiton jutsus because you are in constant contact with the stream of water and over a longer distance(long range), its destructive capabilities will become less powerful. Counters could be a a solid earth wall or knocking your opponent of balance. I would say it is a really nice jutsu but would be most effective if you had a clone performing it while you attack from other directions.

 

[Lord of Kaos]

Jeez, why does he have to talk in Purple? It's such an ugly color. At least he doesn't talk in blue like me, it'd get pretty confusing. Whatever, I still think he's an idiot. Looking at him, he doesn't look like he'll be a tough fight.

As the mud begins to fall from above (he must be a son of Hades, that'd explain the ugly face and the dirty clothes), I keep cool. Sons of Poseidon know that water beats earth regardless of what any thread that says otherwise and approved by mods say. Channeling water chakra, I turn into a massive roll of water, flowing forward towards the dude, preparing to totally **** him up.

As I roll in like a boss, I then make a handseal and release a massive water dragon from it (S rank, as is "Super KickAss rank"), aiming to rip through the weak water the man used, clashing into one another but being a demigod of water, I don't worry about anything: I got this.

When the water clashes and begins to fall and fill the area with water, I form a single handseal, causing the water to quickly reform into yet another Water Dragon that raises around the ninja, crushing his body greatly as I began rushing towards him, preparing to wash that ugly mug of his off his face.

Spoiler

(Suiton: Kyūryū: Suika no Jutsu) - Water Release: Torrent: Water Transformation Technique
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: After performing the snake hand seal suigetsu transforms into a wave of water by his unique ability to turn his body into this very element. Then he manipulates the water wave to crash into his opponent, , immediately following it up by rushing behind him only to finish with a powerful slash while he’s offguard. This is all done by reforming the top half of his body back into a solid form. Whilst doing this technique, the user is subsequently weakened against lightning based techniques.
Note: Must have a suigetsu bio to use.

(Suiton: Suiryuudan no Jutsu) - Water Style: Water Dragon Bullet Technique x2
Rank: B-S-Rank
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20-40
Damage Points: 40-80
Description: After performing a long series of hand seals Ox → Monkey → Hare → Rat → Boar → Bird → Ox → Horse → Bird → Rat → Tiger → Dog → Tiger → Snake → Ox → Ram → Snake → Boar → Ram → Rat → Yang Water → Monkey → Bird → Dragon → Bird → Ox → Horse → Ram → Tiger → Snake → Rat → Monkey → Hare → Boar → Dragon → Ram → Rat → Ox → Monkey → Bird → Yang Water → Rat → Boar → Bird the user then shapes a large amount of water into a giant, powerful dragon, which hits the opponent with formidable might, dealing physical damage. The ideal place to use it is near a body of water, but if the user's skill allows it, it is possible to use it even in a place where there is none. The amount of water used will be in proportion with the user's skill as well as its power which can vary. Ninjas with a primary water specialty will be able to produce up to an S-Rank technique; ninjas with a secondary water specialty will be able to produce up to an A-Rank technique; normal water masters will produce the basic B-Rank technique. Tobirama was able to use this technique with a single hand seal showing testiment to his skill in water ninjutsu.
Note: Requires a water source to use.

 

[Corazon]

Sons of Poseidon know that water beats earth regardless of what any thread that says otherwise and is approved by mods say

Lmao I rather not say anything about this xd

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Seeing his sensei turn into a wave and move forward towards him while easily avoiding his Doton jutsu, Ryu thinks to himself turning into a wave of water huh? Well I heard he liked water but turning into it just to try and kill me is insane. hmm I wonder if he ever goes to the beach Lol

Shifting his attention back to the task at hand, Ryu watches his stream of water collide with his senseis Water Dragon and as the water from the collision continues to fall like rain, he gets a surprise when the Dragon reforms again and heads towards him, he makes the Tiger hand seal and places his hand on the ground while releasing his Doton chakra into the ground, making the ground(flat surface) underneath him rise high enough to be above the Dragon

Rank: B
Type: Defence/Supplementary
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: By performing the Tiger hand seal the user then makes a gigantic rampart rise up beneath the user's feet, by shaping the ground and increasing the amount of earth with chakra. Depending on what the user imagines, the shape of the rampart can be anything from level ground to a steep, needle-like mountain. If the user increases the volume of earth too much, he can be forced to keep his chakra consumption down. The user can combine this jutsu with Water Style: Waterfall Basin Technique to create a waterfall.

Just as the Dragon is a few feet from hitting cliff, Ryu leaps into the air while channeling chakra into his feet and just as the Dragon hits the cliff, he lands on it and runs along the Dragon towards his incoming sensei who is a bottomless body . While still running on the Dragon, he gathers Suiton chakra into both his hands and swings them in an arc Left->Right, releasing crescent shaped blades of water that head straight for his senseis head and body

Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user creates crescent shaped blades of water, which follow the arcs of their hand movements attacking opponents infront of them or they can twirl around while generating the crescent blades to attack all around them.

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Lol I was confused by your 1st jutsu because you don't have a Suigetsu bio but I figured its just worded wrong and can be used by all Hozuki clan members, you guys should fix that O_O
I hope the move works because I can't really try it anywhere else