Faster than a ray of light!-sin- trains choza!

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ok sinny! *I Concentrate raiton chakra in my right palm. Then, by focusing further chakra, I make the raiton energy grow wilder and stronger. I then place my hand on the ground, and i beign to release the raiotn energy through it to reach your clone. As it gets released, I utilize shape manipulation to make the raiotn energy devide in numerous streams of lightning that hit your clone in all possible angles.*

how was it sin-sensei?

P.S.: what happened to you name?
 

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(Raiton: Chidori Senbon) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Needle
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user reshapes the Chidori in their hand into the form of countless senbon. It has more specialized speed than the normal Chidori and can cause damage throughout multiple places on the body. Although it�s not stated, this technique probably takes on Chidori's characteristics such as its ability to cut through almost anything and numb parts of the body.

Now form the chidori and shape it into many lightning senbon with more speed and then throw them and make sure they are fast and focused!
 

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*I lift my right hand, wide open in the air. Then, I quickly concentrate another whole lot of raiton chakra into my palm. I focuse further to make the raiton chakra go wild and strong. Then, as I put my hand down, it leaves lightning traces in the air. I utilize shape manipulation to split this raiton energy into numerous lines. I apply special attention and focus on them to maintin their form and turn them into a whole lot of sharp, glowing, senbon. As I finish to put my hand down, my senbons get shot at next-to untraceable speed at a clone of your stabbing it from all angles and in each of his 361 tenketsu*

What's next sensei?
 

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(You have sharingan right? Otherwise you won't be able to aim at 361 without sharingan/byakugan)

Good but this time!

-Three clones come at you-

Use your senbon to cut into all the clones!
 

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I have sensory skills with chojuro but well, not xD

*The moment you made your clones, I manage to channel the raiton chakra in my hands and maintain it focused and powerful. As you're clones beign to run towards me, I quickly lift my hand and put it down,leaving raiton energy traces into the air. I quickly manipulate them in shape, to create numerous senbon, which I direct in 3 different waves to cut through each fo your clones.*

How was it sin-sensei?
 

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(Raiton: Chidori Eiso) - Lightning Release Chidori Sharp Spear
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user increases the range of their Chidori by using form manipulation to extend it into a blade up to 10 meters in length. This blade is capable of splitting into multiple additional blades upon contact with an enemy, drastically increasing the number of wounds it can inflict. Like other Chidori-related techniques, this jutsu will numb its target upon contact.

Now!

Chidori = 10 metres = hit clone
 

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ok! *I concentrate raiton chakra into my palm. Now, as soon as it is enough, I quickly insert further chakra and keep it focused to augment it's power. Now I manipulate the shape of the lightning stream in my hand to create a spear. By adding further chakra, it begins to elongate. Remebering my previous chidori training, I keep it focused for it not to disperse. As my glowing spear advances, I channel further raiotn chakra to strengthen it. As it pierces your clone, I manipulate its shape further to make smaller spear proturde from the tip, killing your clone.*

Got a question, only chidori it self needs handseals, right? or it's variants too?
 

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Well since it's variants are based on chidori when you create it, they do as you form the chidori then basically everything eles

Good!

(Raiton: Rairyu no Tatsumaki) - Lightning Release: Thunder Dragon Tornado
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user forms a whirling vortex of wind and electricity around themselves. The vortex will take on the form of a dragon�s head and will cover the area in front of them. Even if the attack doesn't directly connect with his foe, the lightning can jump from the vortex to hit a nearby target.

Whirling vortex = wind + lightning around you = vortex form dragon head = cover area in front of you = try and make the lightning jump to strike my clone
 

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hmm...I see...so i need handseals ot do nagashi or senbon?

*I concentrateraiton chakra into my body. I release it in a wild stream of bolts around me. By utilizing shape manipulation, I begin to make it spin around me. As it forms a vortex of lightning, it begins to pick up wind, becoming a whilrling vortex of lightning and wind. Now, I manipulate its shape further to create a lung dragon head on top of it. Once I make sure it is the right shape, I quickly release further chakra into it to strengthen and make the lightning wilder. Then, I simply direct it to your poor clone who was enjoying some dumplings.*
 

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All chidori variants

(Raiton: Gian) - Lightning Style: False Darkness
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Descripton: Two powerful lightning blasts.This strong attack can be defended against by an equally strong attack of the same element such as Raikiri.

Focus your lightning chakra into two powerful lightning blasts, then focus and shoot them out aim at two clones
 

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*I focus as much raiton chakra into my hands as I can until I can no longer hold it in. As I see your clone, I quickly direct my open palms to him as 2 humongous, glowing columns of lightning energy appear. As they come out, I keep them focused and infuse them with further raiton chakra in order to make them strong and wild.*
 

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(Raiton: Raikiri) - Lightning Release: Lightning Blade
Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: This jutsu is an advanced form of Chidori.

Now focus into a chidori but make it more concentrated and put more chakra into it!
 

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yes sonic sensei! *I do handseals for chidori and assume the typical charging stance. Now, I concentrate a huge deal of raiton chakra into my palm. Then I make the raiton chakra get more focused and stronger, creating an orb of lightning in my palm. As I focus furhter, the orb goes wildy and I add futher lightning chakra making it much stronger than the avarage chidori. I quickly run to a stone nearby and concnetrate futher chakra, in order to make the raiton stronger. As I stab the rock I go right through it*
 

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-As you charge the raikiri bursts into sparks of lightning in which you get cut by sparks and hit as I quickly create a large wind to take the bits of lightning away-

Do you know why it burst?
 

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not enough focus...sorry sin-sensei! I'll do my best now!

*I keep my mind clear and focused. I do the handseals for chidori and asumme the charging pose. I concentrate an enormous amount of raiton chakra into my hand, while keeping it focused and it begins to crackle. I then manipulate it's shape to creat a focused orb of raiton chakra around my hand. I send a constant wave of raiton power through it in order to make it crackel stronger and stronger while keeping it focused so that it does not disperse. Now I run as quikcly as I can towards a rock while concentrating on the raikiri and keeping it stable and focused. Now I drill right through the rock with all the power I can until I go right through it and the rock collapses to rubble.*
 

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Good but for a harder challange!

-15 large stone walls appear-

This is 1 test of 2 to see the true power!

Now smash through the 15 walls to prove your strength with Raikiri!
 

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hmph, sin-sensei I'll amaze you with my power of raiton! *I do handseals quickly and assumes stance(as usual). I beign to charge my palm with as much raiton chakra as I can while keeping my mind completly concentrated on my technique. Now I make it cover my hand in a focused, powerfully vibrating, cloak of raiton chakra. Now, as I manage to keep myself focused in my tech, I empower it further and beign to run as fast as I can. Hands first, I being to penetrate one wall. I feel it weakens just a bit, so I keep it fouces and empower it further. 5 walls fall, other 3 fall. I feel it weakens a bit more, again I charge it further and keep it in focus. The last 6 walls fall.*

*gasp* how was is sin of the crystal? ;)
 

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Thats 14.. :| -One wall is left then suddenly another 14 appear-

Try again! NOWWWWW! FOCCCCUUSSSS!
(if you count well, it sums 15 -__-. Don't forget the first wall, which after i wen through it i empowered it.)
Ok sin-sensei!

*with a feeling of failure, I quickly clear my mind and concentrate yet again as much raiton chakra as I can in my palm and keep it focused. Then, as infuse it with further chakra, it envelopes my right hand in a cloak of powerful, vibrating, focused raiton chakra. I then keep my mind cfocused only in the raikiri as I rush with all my speed and power to the line of walls. I break 5, and re-focuse my raiton chakra in order to keep the raikiri as stronger as at the begining. 9 More fall and, as I concentrate as much raiton chakra in my palm and keep it focused, I go through the last 15th wall epically.*

Focus, power and concentration, that's the point of the raikiri!
 

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-After you finish your sentance you fall to the ground while I spit out a water bullet covering you in water-

Right! Energise yourself!

Raiton: Chidori Raimei (Lightning Style: 1000 Birds Thunderstorm)
Type:Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost:40
Damage Points:80
Descripton: A chidori that spreads from the users palm into lightning bolts that cover a circular area destroying all thats in its way.

Chidori!

Then.. Use shape manipulation to force it into a spread of totally controlled lightning bolts then kind of make it spread around the circular area and make it destroy everything in that circular area like my clones..
 
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