Faster than a ray of light!-sin- trains choza!

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attack fluffy attack!

*he trashes around with his hand and the hound gets crazy and tackles the clone on by one. He bites the first one on the neck, the second on it's arm and it's crashes onto the last one shocking him*

phew that was close, fluffy!
 

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-The hound dissapears after the last attack-

Fluffy? Seriously? :|

Anyway!

(Raiton: Gian Yari) - Lightning Style: False Darkness Spear
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user emits a spear of lightning from their mouth. The spear can then split apart to strike multiple enemies.

Focus lightning chakra in your gullet, try and focus it up into your mouth and shape it into a arrow like shape, then exhale and release all the lightning chakra into a spear shape
 

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yeah, fluffy, it was the first name that came up. what do want me to call it? eletro?

*concentartes as much raiton chakra as he can in his gullet(whatever that is). Then he releases a portion of it up his mouth and then out of it in an arrow like shape. afterwards(I use then too much lol), he releases the rest of his raiton chakra to make the arrow divide in a a great deal of spears, which stab a rock and leave it like a cheese*

how was it sin?
 

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Yay! It worked!

Oh and gullet, not really sure but I was told to focus in gullet in my training in elements

(Raiton: Raiton Kage Bunshin) - Lightning Release: Lightning Shadow Clone
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: User creates a Shadow Clone of himself infused with his lighting chakra. When the clone gets hit he will return to its previous state of pure lighting chakra. The clone has a physical substance and therefor is able to use ninjutsu and taijutsu techniques as well as he has all the normal moves the user has.

Now focus your lightning chakra, and do a normal clone like performance except focus your lightning chakra into creating the clone, thus creating lightning clone

-Sends clone at Lightning clone-

The lightning clone can use all moves you know!

Tai, Nin, Possibly gen!

Destroy!
 

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lol

*quickly concentartes his raiton chakra and begins to create a clone made out of sheer lightning essence*

"Now, let's take care of this guy!"

*we both use baika no jutsu and then...*

"Double human-meat tank!"*we cry as we both crash onto your clone impaling him from boths sides*

how was it sensei?(I would have make it with more jutsus, but I really think this is the most painful way to die).
 

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-The clone is impaled and crippled from lightning and death-

Good usage!

(Raiton: Chidori) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: A lightning jutsu that is concentrated in the user's palm and thrusted toward the opponent at high speed. The lightning in the user's palm sounds like birds chirping, hence the name.

This is a very awesome jutsu

Now I just want you to quickly perform the handseals required -shows you them-

Then try and focus lightning chakra in a chaotic orb of lightning make it crazy and try and keep it focused,

YOU NEED FOCUS!
 

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Hey, if you're sonic bio gets approved I'll teach ya this jutsu so you can curl up in ball!

*He quickly repeats the seals done by sin-sensei. As he does them, he concentrates his raiton chakra. Upon hitting the last handseal, he grabs his right wrist with his left hand, and leaves his right palm open.*

*eyes closed*I need focus*he concentrates as much raiton chakra he can on his palm, which begins to crackle in electrical energy. by concentrating an enormous amount of raiton chakra, he turns it into a crazy orb right in his palm. He then focuses further chakra to let it go crazy and it begins to chrip(spelling)*Focus, focus*the chriping continues, and he tries to keep it focused, as time goes, it continue chrping and stays stable.*

Now what, sin-sensei?*still keeps the raiton chakra constant and balanced, while concentrating on keeping it focused*
 

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-The chidori loses focus because you became focused on me for a second, losing your control over the chidori ending it in dispersing-

Right .. You'll need to take a step at a time,

If you want to, create a clone to help you

Now!

Perform the handseals, and gather chakra in your hand, focus in a orb shape of a lightning chakra, sparking around
 

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ack!*performs handseals again, and concentrates as much raiton chakra as he can in his right hand. then he, yet again, grabs his right wrist and begins to create and orb electricl energy in his right palm. By adding a tremendous amount of chakra while keeping focus on the chidor, it grows wilder and wilder and it begins to chirp like birds. The electrical energy crackles and begins to cover his hand. he then rushes onto a rock and stabs his right arm right through it. As he removes his arm from the rock, you can see a perfect hole*

how was it sensei?
 

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As you go to the rock and smash it, there is a small hole and I am dissapointed-

You need to add more chakra and certain amount of lightning power, control,

You also need speed... speed helps you in a certain degree

redo!
 

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speed, it's east to say for the blue blur...

*Does handseals. Just as soon as he finishes, he does his usal stance and begins to concentrate raiton chakra into a ball which he then sends a wave of furhter raiton chakra to make it go wild and cover his whole hand. Then he keeps control, and adds further chakra giving it more penetrating power. Also, he tries to concencetrate as much raiton chakra as he can onto his hand and keep it in it's peak. When he hears the chirping, he runs as fast as he can to another rock, and impales right through it.*

was it better?
 

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Good!

One final test!

1000 Thousand BIRDS! CHIDORI! -Charging a chidori in my right hand I quickly charge at you -

Use your chidori, describe the impact!
 

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yeah, final test!

*Does handseals, assumes charging stance. Concentrates as much raiton chakra as I can in an orb in my hand. As I concentrate further chakra into it, it goes wild, gain penetrative power and the lightning begins to chirp as wildy as ever. I keep it focused preventing it from dispersing or going too wild. I take a look at nearby blouder, as set my objective right through it. I charge as fast I can in fron of it and i thrust my arm charged with as much raiton power as never and cry*

One Thousand Birds! Chidori!

*As soon as my arm touches the rock it drills it with the power of raiton. As it goes throght it my body begins to accompany my arm. All ending in the raiton energy dispersing all around the rock and, as i go through it, reduces it to simple rubble*

how was it sensei?
 

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-_- hehe*does handseals again, concentrates raiton chakra into his palm while assuming his usual pose. Now he shapes into an orb in which he injects further raiton chakra to make it go crazy and chirp as it cover my whole right hand. As I make sure it's powerful enough, I keep it focused. Now I rush towards you and cry*

One thousand birds! Chidori!

*and our chidoris clash*
 

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*as my chidori tocuhes yours, an enormous amount of raiton energy chirps in the air. The quantity of chakra exuded is enormous, that even the air around us raises it temperatures. I keep my chidori stable as spakrs fly on the sky. The chirping gets more intese as we both concentrate further raiton chakra, until both of our chidoris, in a release of lightning sparks and bolts, disperse. We both lie around, without any wounds.*

That was wild sensei!
 

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Now!


(Raiton: Chidori Nagashi) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Current
Rank: A
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: This jutsu allows the user to generate non-focused electrically charged chakra from their body. Because the electricity isn't focused, it doesn't kill on contact, instead it only paralyzes. The lightning can be channelled through metal objects, as well as spread out into the air or ground.

The chidori now faces shape manipulation try and shape it into a current of chidori and try and make it spread in the air.
 

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*I quickly concentrate my raiton chakra in my right palm and it begins to chirp. As I make the typical orb for chidori, I manipulate it's shape further. Rather than an orb, I split it in mulitple trendrils or, better called, streams of lightining energy which I point to the sky in a burst of multiple, wild raiton streams*
 

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Thats good!

-As soon as they are released they disperse into sparks-

You have to make sure you place enough chakra to keep going! Try again!

aim for my clone!
 
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