[Adventure] Earth's Embrace

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*a long overdue poem request by Mis, in which I had to flow out the music in to words. Hope I did well xd Enjoy.*


[video=youtube;MqoANESQ4cQ]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MqoANESQ4cQ[/video]​



We attach ourselves,
To the Earth;
Along her curves,
Which our bodies move.

We enter her naked,
And taste the salt;
Of her wet ocean breath.

She bewilders us,
With desires of her
Round sweet fruits,
And alluring wines.

She caresses us softly,
With her whispers
Which are the wind.

Her love is reflected,
In the most menial things.
We're bathed in her beauty,
And washed in her springs.

Earth keeps us spinning,
And the gravity of her soul,
Keeps us close to her.

And when our bodies expire,
She will cover us;
Beneath the warm blanket of earth,
Embracing us forever.​
 

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The long overdue was a really important detail to mention U_U
Buuuut I forgive you for it, hehe~

This seriously has to be one of your best works. <3
Until now you've successfully (and awesomely) completed all the challenges!
I'm still laughing tho, can't stop. :leaf:
 

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Nice one dude.:) First the poems sensuousness hits you.( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°),( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
Then on it's beauty. A fine poem with solid ending.
That wordplay though.( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
 

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The long overdue was a really important detail to mention U_U
Buuuut I forgive you for it, hehe~

This seriously has to be one of your best works. <3
Until now you've successfully (and awesomely) completed all the challenges!
I'm still laughing tho, can't stop. :leaf:
Hahahaha...and the double deletion...smh. :T_T:
I'm glad you're satisfied with the final product Mis!<3
I see you're gonna fall asleep while laughing...hahahaha....
Nice one dude.:) First the poems sensuousness hits you.( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°),( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
Then on it's beauty. A fine poem with solid ending.
That wordplay though.( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
Ty my brotha from anotha motha! ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
 

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beautifully written :) as fiend mentioned, i loved the sensuality you incorporated in this poem. Quite seductive yet graceful at the same time <3

bravo ;) you never cease to amaze me
 

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beautifully written :) as fiend mentioned, i loved the sensuality you incorporated in this poem. Quite seductive yet graceful at the same time <3

bravo ;) you never cease to amaze me
Thank you so much! :)
It's good that I softened the poem up otherwise my name would be crossed out now. xd

That last line is so beautiful! I love love love love love it it fits the song so much
Aww you loved the sadest part the best (I mean , dying)
Thanks Nyanyanyan!
I'm glad you loved it! :)

I love the fourth and last stanza the most.
Glad to know you enjoyed! :)
 
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Thank you so much! :)
It's good that I softened the poem up otherwise my name would be crossed out now. xd



Aww you loved the sadest part the best (I mean , dying)
Thanks Nyanyanyan!
I'm glad you loved it! :)



Glad to know you enjoyed! :)
does that make me morbid thou o_O LOL
 
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