[Doton] Doton with the future sage of clay

[Sominus]

Never have used that technique in my RP career. xd

That doesn't surprise me at all ._.

Next..

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(Doton: Doro Hōshi) - Earth Release: Mud Spore
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This technique lets the user summon a river of mud infront of them. This technique can have water added to it to speed up the flow and increase its power.

Summon a river of mud far in front of you. Then use an appropriate water technique to speed up the flow of the river if you have learned any. Extend it all of the way to long range, to trap my clone. However, I doubt you have any water training, so just say you "add water" to it.

-Creates clone-

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As soon as you creat your clone I use my Doton chakra to summon a large scaled river of mud in front of me. The river travels, rather slowly, towards your clone. If the mud reaches your clone he well be thrown off balance.

(Doton: Doro Hōshi) - Earth Release: Mud Spore
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This technique lets the user summon a river of mud infront of them. This technique can have water added to it to speed up the flow and increase its power.

As soon as I created the mud I channel Suiton chakra down my right arm and while doing so I quickly perform a row of 3 hand seals, Boar → Dog → Ram. I then release said chakra in form of a spiralling vortex of water. The water will combine with the mud, speeding it up, and create a strong B-Ranked double elemental combo. The combination deals serious impact damage to your clone as he gets hit and after he got knocked back several meters he disperses.

(Suiton: Hahonryuu) - Water Style: Destruction Torrent
Rank: B
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: After waving the Boar → Dog → Ram hand seals, a water vortex created in the palm of the user’s hand that can then be blasted forward creating a spiraling wall of water which can then be used to attack or defend.
Note: No water source required

You see Sempai, I actually underwent Suiton training up to the first two B-Rank Jutsu under Dan.

 

[Selendrile]

That doesn't surprise me at all ._.



As soon as you creat your clone I use my Doton chakra to summon a large scaled river of mud in front of me. The river travels, rather slowly, towards your clone. If the mud reaches your clone he well be thrown off balance.

(Doton: Doro Hōshi) - Earth Release: Mud Spore
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This technique lets the user summon a river of mud infront of them. This technique can have water added to it to speed up the flow and increase its power.

As soon as I created the mud I channel Suiton chakra down my right arm and while doing so I quickly perform a row of 3 hand seals, Boar → Dog → Ram. I then release said chakra in form of a spiralling vortex of water. The water will combine with the mud, speeding it up, and create a strong B-Ranked double elemental combo. The combination deals serious impact damage to your clone as he gets hit and after he got knocked back several meters he disperses.

(Suiton: Hahonryuu) - Water Style: Destruction Torrent
Rank: B
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: After waving the Boar → Dog → Ram hand seals, a water vortex created in the palm of the user’s hand that can then be blasted forward creating a spiraling wall of water which can then be used to attack or defend.
Note: No water source required

You see Sempai, I actually underwent Suiton training up to the first two B-Rank Jutsu under Dan.

Adv/dis. o__o

 

[Sominus]

Adv/dis. o__o

Oops, sorry.

Actually I got like no advantages. I need to perform another technique to let the Jutsu have any impact at all. One good thing is that it goes up to long range and well if my enemy was close to me I could easily thorw him off balance with this Jutsu but still I'd rather do other stuff than that. I might add that I could change my surroundings with this Jutsu but well...

Dis:
- Needs another Jutsu
- Doesn't really deal any damage by itself
- Slow (in points of motion)

 

[Selendrile]

Oops, sorry.

Actually I got like no advantages. I need to perform another technique to let the Jutsu have any impact at all. One good thing is that it goes up to long range and well if my enemy was close to me I could easily thorw him off balance with this Jutsu but still I'd rather do other stuff than that. I might add that I could change my surroundings with this Jutsu but well...

Dis:
- Needs another Jutsu
- Doesn't really deal any damage by itself
- Slow (in points of motion)

Now..

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(Doton: Retsudo Tenshō) - Earth Release: Tearing Earth Turning Palm
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: After performing the required hand seals Boar → Ox → placing hand on the ground, the user causes the ground surrounding the enemy to spiral inwards on itself, burying them alive or crushing them. This technique is capable of causing quite a bit of damage to the area. This technique is much more damaging if used in rocky mountainous areas, or inside a cave.

Perform the required hand seals, Boar → Ox, and release your chakra into the ground under my clone. Use your present chakra spiral and twist the ground inwards on him, burying him alive. Make it deep enough to completely bury him.

-Creates clone-

 

[Sominus]

Now..

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(Doton: Retsudo Tenshō) - Earth Release: Tearing Earth Turning Palm
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: After performing the required hand seals Boar → Ox → placing hand on the ground, the user causes the ground surrounding the enemy to spiral inwards on itself, burying them alive or crushing them. This technique is capable of causing quite a bit of damage to the area. This technique is much more damaging if used in rocky mountainous areas, or inside a cave.

Perform the required hand seals, Boar → Ox, and release your chakra into the ground under my clone. Use your present chakra spiral and twist the ground inwards on him, burying him alive. Make it deep enough to completely bury him.

-Creates clone-

*As you create your clone I quickly peeform a row of two hand seals, Boar - Ox, while doing so I begin channeling dozon vhakra down my right arm. After I performed the second hand seal I slam the palm of said arm on the ground and channel the gathered chakra into the ground. The surroundings under your clone spital inwards on your vlone and bury him completely.*

Adv:
- Up to long range
- Again good if my target encounters a frontal attack

Dis:
- I need to slam my palm on the ground which makes it obvious that I use aDoton technique or at least channel something in the ground.

 

[Selendrile]

*As you create your clone I quickly peeform a row of two hand seals, Boar - Ox, while doing so I begin channeling dozon vhakra down my right arm. After I performed the second hand seal I slam the palm of said arm on the ground and channel the gathered chakra into the ground. The surroundings under your clone spital inwards on your vlone and bury him completely.*

Adv:
- Up to long range
- Again good if my target encounters a frontal attack

Dis:
- I need to slam my palm on the ground which makes it obvious that I use aDoton technique or at least channel something in the ground.

Nice job..

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(Doton: Dochū Eigyo no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Underground Projection Fish Technique
Rank: C
Type: Defence/Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Using this jutsu, a person can hide underground until they're ready to attack an opponent. By utilizing earth-chakra, the person can stealthily emerge from the ground without disrupting the ground around him. This jutsu can also be used to avoid incoming jutsus.

Focus your earth chakra throughout your body, and then disappear underground by phasing through the earth. Move rapidly behind my clone to attack him. Then launch a move to kill him as he cant see you.

-Creates clone-

 

[Sominus]

Nice job..

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(Doton: Dochū Eigyo no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Underground Projection Fish Technique
Rank: C
Type: Defence/Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Using this jutsu, a person can hide underground until they're ready to attack an opponent. By utilizing earth-chakra, the person can stealthily emerge from the ground without disrupting the ground around him. This jutsu can also be used to avoid incoming jutsus.

Focus your earth chakra throughout your body, and then disappear underground by phasing through the earth. Move rapidly behind my clone to attack him. Then launch a move to kill him as he cant see you.

-Creates clone-

*As you create your clone I quickly channel Doton based chakra down my feet into the ground. I use said chakra to quickly change the earth's consistency and sink underground. I emerge behind from where I assume your clone to be, based on what I saw before I went underground. As I emerge behind your clone I take out a Kunai and cut his carotid artery. He disperses as I slash his thorat.*

Adv:
- The description says that i emerge stealthily as I get back on the ground, which is good, because my enemy couldn't claim to hear me emerging.

Dis:
- I don't know what's going on on the surface like I would with Hiding Like A Mole. This means I could only use this technique effectively if I were a Hyuga or had a Chakra sensing rain or something similar running.

Questions:
- Could I stay underground and use something like Stonespikes on the position I saw him last instead of re-emerging on the surface (I'm not asking if that's a wise move just if it's possible)?

 

[Selendrile]

*As you create your clone I quickly channel Doton based chakra down my feet into the ground. I use said chakra to quickly change the earth's consistency and sink underground. I emerge behind from where I assume your clone to be, based on what I saw before I went underground. As I emerge behind your clone I take out a Kunai and cut his carotid artery. He disperses as I slash his thorat.*

Adv:
- The description says that i emerge stealthily as I get back on the ground, which is good, because my enemy couldn't claim to hear me emerging.

Dis:
- I don't know what's going on on the surface like I would with Hiding Like A Mole. This means I could only use this technique effectively if I were a Hyuga or had a Chakra sensing rain or something similar running.

Questions:
- Could I stay underground and use something like Stonespikes on the position I saw him last instead of re-emerging on the surface (I'm not asking if that's a wise move just if it's possible)?

Its debatable, ive heard arguments for both sides. Some say you cant use techniques underground as you travel because your chakra is being utilized to phase through the earth. Others say you can use only low ranking techniques. Ask a mod for an official opinion.

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(Doton: Tsuchi Douyou no Hira) – Earth Release: Earth Shaking Palm
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: After performing snake hand seal the user slams their hand on the ground. The result is that the ground becomes heavily turned up with chunks of rubble popping out of the ground. This technique is used as a means to distract opponents to either create an escape or follow through with a surprise attack.

Perform the Snake hand seal, and then slam one of your hands onto the ground. Force enough chakra into the ground where a large amount of rubble is upturned into the air, distracting my clone momentarily.

-Creates clone-

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[Sominus]

Its debatable, ive heard arguments for both sides. Some say you cant use techniques underground as you travel because your chakra is being utilized to phase through the earth. Others say you can use only low ranking techniques. Ask a mod for an official opinion.

Next..

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(Doton: Tsuchi Douyou no Hira) – Earth Release: Earth Shaking Palm
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: After performing snake hand seal the user slams their hand on the ground. The result is that the ground becomes heavily turned up with chunks of rubble popping out of the ground. This technique is used as a means to distract opponents to either create an escape or follow through with a surprise attack.

Perform the Snake hand seal, and then slam one of your hands onto the ground. Force enough chakra into the ground where a large amount of rubble is upturned into the air, distracting my clone momentarily.

-Creates clone-

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Does this guy perform any effective Jutsu? ._.

*As you create your clone I quickly gather Doton based chakra in the palm of my right hand. While doing so I perform a single hand seal, Snake. As I slam my palm on the ground I channel said chakra into the ground to cause the ground infront of your clone to break up a bit and rubble pops out of it. Your clone, assuming that my Doton Jutsu will harm him, will focus on the ground completely and ignore his other surroundings for a few moments untill he realises that nothing bad happens.*

Adv:
- N/A

Dis:
- Not an attack
- Not even long range
- I need to keep channeling the Chakra into the ground which means I can't attack my foe if I don't have two bios/clones/summonings
- Again it is obvious that I channel something into the ground
- I could distract my opponent with any Jutsu that really IS designed for killing him

When hell freezes over I probably use this Jutsu in combat for the first time.

 

[Selendrile]

Does this guy perform any effective Jutsu? ._.

*As you create your clone I quickly gather Doton based chakra in the palm of my right hand. While doing so I perform a single hand seal, Snake. As I slam my palm on the ground I channel said chakra into the ground to cause the ground infront of your clone to break up a bit and rubble pops out of it. Your clone, assuming that my Doton Jutsu will harm him, will focus on the ground completely and ignore his other surroundings for a few moments untill he realises that nothing bad happens.*

Adv:
- N/A

Dis:
- Not an attack
- Not even long range
- I need to keep channeling the Chakra into the ground which means I can't attack my foe if I don't have two bios/clones/summonings
- Again it is obvious that I channel something into the ground
- I could distract my opponent with any Jutsu that really IS designed for killing him

When hell freezes over I probably use this Jutsu in combat for the first time.

Dont think he does.. o_o Never used that technique yet either.

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(Doton: Kengan no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Fist Rock Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: After performing the snake → Seal of Confrontation and then by encasing their arm in rock, the user can deal a powerful hardened punch against an opponent while being protected from direct contact with their target. If necessary, the weight of the rock can be increased to further increase the punch's destructive power through the Earth Release: Added Weight Technique or the Earth Release: Super Added Weight Technique.

Perform the snake hand seal, and then encase your arm in a thick layer of rock. Run towards my clone, and punch him in the chest, crushing his ribcage.

-Creates clone-

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(Doton: Doryūkatsu) - Earth Release: Earth Flow Divide
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will first perform the required hand seals Rabbit → Boar → Rat → Horse → Tiger → Snake and then by flowing concentrated chakra from one's palms into the Dragon Veins flowing underground, one can tear the earth apart, creating large chasms by firstly raising the earth in the desired location and then splitting that peice of earth through the center. The length, width, direction, and curve of the chasm are all up to the user. Manipulating the Dragon Veins requires fine chakra control, but if one has such skill, they can use this technique to divide the space between the enemy and their own team in two, destroy enemy camps or defences, and even to attack.
Note: This does not split the earth appart directly to cause opponents to fall in the fissure.

Perform the required hand seals, and then release the chakra into the ground via one of your palms. Maniupulate your chakra in the ground, and raise the earth up straight, then split it down the middle, forming a V-shape in the ground. This does not create an actual fissure for the opponent to fall into though. Use it to separate my group of clones.

-Creates clone-

 

[Sominus]

Dont think he does.. o_o Never used that technique yet either.

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(Doton: Kengan no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Fist Rock Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: After performing the snake → Seal of Confrontation and then by encasing their arm in rock, the user can deal a powerful hardened punch against an opponent while being protected from direct contact with their target. If necessary, the weight of the rock can be increased to further increase the punch's destructive power through the Earth Release: Added Weight Technique or the Earth Release: Super Added Weight Technique.

Perform the snake hand seal, and then encase your arm in a thick layer of rock. Run towards my clone, and punch him in the chest, crushing his ribcage.

-Creates clone-

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(Doton: Doryūkatsu) - Earth Release: Earth Flow Divide
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will first perform the required hand seals Rabbit → Boar → Rat → Horse → Tiger → Snake and then by flowing concentrated chakra from one's palms into the Dragon Veins flowing underground, one can tear the earth apart, creating large chasms by firstly raising the earth in the desired location and then splitting that peice of earth through the center. The length, width, direction, and curve of the chasm are all up to the user. Manipulating the Dragon Veins requires fine chakra control, but if one has such skill, they can use this technique to divide the space between the enemy and their own team in two, destroy enemy camps or defences, and even to attack.
Note: This does not split the earth appart directly to cause opponents to fall in the fissure.

Perform the required hand seals, and then release the chakra into the ground via one of your palms. Maniupulate your chakra in the ground, and raise the earth up straight, then split it down the middle, forming a V-shape in the ground. This does not create an actual fissure for the opponent to fall into though. Use it to separate my group of clones.

-Creates clone-

*As you create your clone I quickly gather a fair amount of doton chakra into my arm and wave a single hand seal, Snake. Using said chakra I create a thick layer of rock around my arm, covering the whole part from my shoulder to my fist. As this is done I rush towards your clone and deal an all-out-punch at his chest. As I hear his ribs break, the clone disperses.*

Adv:
- With the right timing I could break the arm or leg of my opponent in a Taijutsu battle as he'd block the hit slightly after the rock forms and got no time to react to it, because of the momentum of his movements.
- I could probably defend my self from a frontal water Jutsu with this, using my arm as shield (although I wouldn't recommend it).

Dis:
- I need to perform a hand seal, which means it's rather difficult to use if the Taijutsu already started and if I create it befoerhand my foe would just need to use a Chidori or something similar to kill me.


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*As you create your clones I quickly perform a row of 6 hand seals, Rabbit → Boar → Rat → Horse → Tiger → Snake, and while doing so I gather Doton based chakra into the palm of my right arm. As I waved the last hand seal I slam my palm on the ground and channel the gathered chakra into the ground. Using said chakra I let the earth around them raise and split it in two afterwise to create a large chasm between your two clones which separates them from each other. The earth drives them further apart and they end up mid range from each other with a really big and deep chasm inbetween. This whole process happens rather fast and your clones will be thrown off balance while the surroundings change their appearance.*

Adv:
- If my foe would rush towards me I could use this to throw him off balance first and let him fall into the chasm due to the momentum of his movements.
- I could split the earth apart to prevent him from going underground or to find him when he's underground.
- If my enemy has to encounter a frontal attack I could use this to let him crush into the earth, which raises before splitting apart, if he wanted to escape via movement.

Dis:
- It doesn't directly attack my opponent, which gives him time to counter.

 

[Selendrile]

*As you create your clone I quickly gather a fair amount of doton chakra into my arm and wave a single hand seal, Snake. Using said chakra I create a thick layer of rock around my arm, covering the whole part from my shoulder to my fist. As this is done I rush towards your clone and deal an all-out-punch at his chest. As I hear his ribs break, the clone disperses.*

Adv:
- With the right timing I could break the arm or leg of my opponent in a Taijutsu battle as he'd block the hit slightly after the rock forms and got no time to react to it, because of the momentum of his movements.
- I could probably defend my self from a frontal water Jutsu with this, using my arm as shield (although I wouldn't recommend it).

Dis:
- I need to perform a hand seal, which means it's rather difficult to use if the Taijutsu already started and if I create it befoerhand my foe would just need to use a Chidori or something similar to kill me.


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*As you create your clones I quickly perform a row of 6 hand seals, Rabbit → Boar → Rat → Horse → Tiger → Snake, and while doing so I gather Doton based chakra into the palm of my right arm. As I waved the last hand seal I slam my palm on the ground and channel the gathered chakra into the ground. Using said chakra I let the earth around them raise and split it in two afterwise to create a large chasm between your two clones which separates them from each other. The earth drives them further apart and they end up mid range from each other with a really big and deep chasm inbetween. This whole process happens rather fast and your clones will be thrown off balance while the surroundings change their appearance.*

Adv:
- If my foe would rush towards me I could use this to throw him off balance first and let him fall into the chasm due to the momentum of his movements.
- I could split the earth apart to prevent him from going underground or to find him when he's underground.
- If my enemy has to encounter a frontal attack I could use this to let him crush into the earth, which raises before splitting apart, if he wanted to escape via movement.

Dis:
- It doesn't directly attack my opponent, which gives him time to counter.

Well done. Everything looks good.

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(Doton: Ton'neru chika no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Tunneling Technique
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user after performing the required hand seals Ram -> Dog -> Rat -> Bird is able to create a wide tunnel in the ground, this cannot travel through rock though or anything with a high density. The large tunnel that is created allows the user to transport others without detection.
Note: The initial entry of the technique is short range.

Perform the required hand seals, and then channel your earth chakra into the ground in front of you. Create a tunnel large enough for you and my clone to travel through. After you reach the end of the tunnel, come back up.

-Creates clone-

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(Doton: Dāchiganshō) - Earth Release: Ground Bedrock
Rank: C
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: After forming the necessary seal Snake, the user creates two walls of earth and traps their target in between them.

Focus your chakra, and then perform the Snake hand seal. Release your focused chakra into the ground, under my clone. Pull and raise the earth upwards, forming two walls. Trap my clone in-between these walls. Position them however you'd like to.

-Creates clone-

 

[Sominus]

Well done. Everything looks good.

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(Doton: Ton'neru chika no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Tunneling Technique
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user after performing the required hand seals Ram -> Dog -> Rat -> Bird is able to create a wide tunnel in the ground, this cannot travel through rock though or anything with a high density. The large tunnel that is created allows the user to transport others without detection.
Note: The initial entry of the technique is short range.

Perform the required hand seals, and then channel your earth chakra into the ground in front of you. Create a tunnel large enough for you and my clone to travel through. After you reach the end of the tunnel, come back up.

-Creates clone-

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(Doton: Dāchiganshō) - Earth Release: Ground Bedrock
Rank: C
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: After forming the necessary seal Snake, the user creates two walls of earth and traps their target in between them.

Focus your chakra, and then perform the Snake hand seal. Release your focused chakra into the ground, under my clone. Pull and raise the earth upwards, forming two walls. Trap my clone in-between these walls. Position them however you'd like to.

-Creates clone-

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First of all I want to apologize for the late reply. RL is very hectic lately and that probably won't change for the next few weeks.

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*As you create your clone I channel a fair amount of Doton based chakra, from my feet, in the ground infront of me. While doing so I quickly perform a set of 4 hand seals, Ram -> Dog -> Rat -> Bird, to help me mould the chakra. Using said chakra I create a tunnel short range infront of me. The tunnel reaches up to mid range infront of me. As I wave your clone to follow me, we enter the tunnel, now out of your sight until we reach the end of the tunnel and reappear on the surface.*

I highly doubt we need an adv/dis here ._.

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*As you create your clone I wave a single hand seal, Snake. While doing so, I Doton chakra into the ground I'm standing on to raise two massive walls of earth behind your clone, which attach to each other and form a large scaled V, making it impossible for him to escape to either side but the front.*

Adv:
- If my foe wanted to avoid my previous Jutsu I could use this to crush his body, if he used hurricane fist for instance.
- I simply perform a single hand seal and channel the chakra into the ground, no need to slam my hand on the ground or something, so it's not TO obvious that I'm using a Doton Jutsu.

Dis:
- Not a direct attack
- Mid range only

 

[Selendrile]

Im thinking we do need adv/dis. >_>

 

[Sominus]

Im thinking we do need adv/dis. >_>

Oh come on, this is another pointless Doton Jutsu D: ... Fine, you're the sensei.

Adv:
- None, plain and simple.
- Okay probably that my partners can use it too.

Dis:
- I create a tunnel and enter it afterwise, which means it takes more time than Hiding like a mole for example.
- I need to perform hand seals
- The description even states that I can't use it in rocky terrain...
- I got no clue what's going on on the surface

Edit:

About RL and stuff: It seems like I'll be busy until the begining of November, I'll try to respond more frequently though.

 

[Selendrile]

Oh come on, this is another pointless Doton Jutsu D: ... Fine, you're the sensei.

Adv:
- None, plain and simple.
- Okay probably that my partners can use it too.

Dis:
- I create a tunnel and enter it afterwise, which means it takes more time than Hiding like a mole for example.
- I need to perform hand seals
- The description even states that I can't use it in rocky terrain...
- I got no clue what's going on on the surface

Edit:

About RL and stuff: It seems like I'll be busy until the begining of November, I'll try to respond more frequently though.

You can transport all your clones in that tunnel you know. :sy: And okay to being busy. I am rather occupied myself at this time.

So moving on..

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(Doton: Dāchiganshō) - Earth Release: Ground Bedrock
Rank: C
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: After forming the necessary seal Snake, the user creates two walls of earth and traps their target in between them.

Focus your chakra, and then perform the Snake hand seal. Release your focused chakra into the ground, under my clone. Pull and raise the earth upwards, forming two walls. Trap my clone in-between these walls. Position them however you'd like to.

-Creates clone-

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And this one..

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(Doton: Hokoriheki no Jutsu ) - Earth Release: Dust Wall Technique
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary, Defense
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will manipulate their chakra releasing it into the ground and with a wave of their arm or through the application of a weapon can cause a small wall of dust particles and sand to rise up from the ground and thrusting forwards. This technique can be used to push back enemy targets or defend against thrown projectiles.

Focus your chakra, and then channel it into the ground around you. Swing your arm forward, and raise a thick "wall" of dust and dirt from the ground using your chakra, knocking back the kunai that I throw at you.

-Throws three kunai-

 

[Shinta]

These are the current forms of the jutsu Selendrile was teaching you:

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(Doton: Dāchiganshō) - Earth Release: Ground Bedrock
Rank: C
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: After forming the necessary seal Snake, the user creates two walls of earth and traps their target in between them, crushing them.

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This jutsu crushes your opponent in the process.

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(Doton: Hokoriheki no Jutsu ) - Earth Release: Dust Wall Technique
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will manipulate their chakra releasing it into the ground and with a wave of their arm or through the application of a weapon can cause a small wall of dust particles and sand to rise up from the ground and thrusting forwards. This technique creates a simple dust screen that will fade away after 3 turns.

Do as Selendrile stated, note that the dust screen will fade to nothing after three turns. Essentially you waving your arm (after releasing chakra into the dust) to create a temporary structure out of the dust/sand nearby.

 

[Sominus]

Do you require an adv/disadvantage part?

These are the current forms of the jutsu Selendrile was teaching you:

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(Doton: Dāchiganshō) - Earth Release: Ground Bedrock
Rank: C
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: After forming the necessary seal Snake, the user creates two walls of earth and traps their target in between them, crushing them.

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This jutsu crushes your opponent in the process.

As you finish with your explanation I gather a fair amount of doton based chakra and channel it in the ground I'm standing on. While doing so I perform a single handseal, Snake. I use said chakra to raise two walls of earth mid range in front of me, which close in on each other. The walls are massive enough to crush anything standing in between.

Adv:
- Versatile jutsu, I see multiple situations in which I could use it
- I choose how I raise the walls which means I can limit my opponents vision
- Explained correctly this jutsu can drown out the sound of a follow up technique
- I can attack from multiple angles at once

Dis:
-Well... actually I don't see disadvantages here except it's only C-Rank

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(Doton: Hokoriheki no Jutsu ) - Earth Release: Dust Wall Technique
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will manipulate their chakra releasing it into the ground and with a wave of their arm or through the application of a weapon can cause a small wall of dust particles and sand to rise up from the ground and thrusting forwards. This technique creates a simple dust screen that will fade away after 3 turns.

Do as Selendrile stated, note that the dust screen will fade to nothing after three turns. Essentially you waving your arm (after releasing chakra into the dust) to create a temporary structure out of the dust/sand nearby.

As I see 3 Kunai comming at me (that was Selendrile's example) I release chakra in the ground I'm standing on. I use said chakra to manipulate dust and sand particles in the surrounding area. After doing so I swing my arm and a small "wall" of said dust rises from the ground and thrusts forward up to mid-range. The cloud repels the Kunai on contact and stays for a little while before it fades away.

Adv:
... not really a great Jutsu imho, maybe I could use it to partially block my foes vision of me.

Dis:
- It's a cloud so it could be blown back at me with a simple futon jutsu, blocking my vision further
- Neither a direct attack nor a real defence
- If I used this solely to hinder my foe's vision over a certain area it would work but I could creat a similar dust cloud with pretty much ANY doton jutsu of adequate size and a foe would need to defend from those techniques

 

[Shinta]

I only wanted you to finish those last two as Selendrile asked, to save me a little bit of time ;P

Anyway, the way I want you to do things is: Follow any instructions, perform the jutsu and discuss your thoughts on the jutsu including things like advantages/disadvantages, uses, as well as the answers to any questions I pose etc.
I don't want lists, instead I want coherent sentences... seeming as this is a text-based RP, building this skill is of more benefit than templates etc. You'll learn more through discussion, sometimes I'll address points you make, other times I won't.

Now, moving on...

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( Doton: Rokkuhanmā ) - Earth Release: Rock Hammer
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user manipulates their chakra and creates a huge rock from the ground that will rise up, hammering the opponent by slamming it down from above them.

The term huge is not really a good term to use when the range is short, however this is one of Oonoki's jutsu so... Huge as in bgger than he is xD

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Essentially earth bending (If you know of the Avatar series), you channel your chakra into the ground near you, lifting up a chunk of rock about four times the size of you, before slamming it down on your target. You lift and cause the rock to levitate using your earth chakra, not physical contact. In order for you to control the earth, both hands must be extended towards the rock ie it moves where your hands direct it to move.

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( Doton: Iwa Dangan ) - Earth Release: Rock Bullet
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user manipulating their chakra will point their palm or fist at the opponent, creating a large rock on it which he then sends at the opponent. Alternatively, the user can "spit" the rock. In this case he will spit a large globule of mud which hardens mid way towards the opponent into a large rock.

Creating a similar sized rock, this time by materialising a rock in front of your extended first or open palm. You then use your chakra to propel it towards your target, having no control over the direction once you fire it.
Or... or... you can spit a large amount of mud, using shape manipulation to keep it in a rough spherical shape where it hardens on the way to your target... again you would have no control over the trajectory after you fire it off.

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[Sominus]

I only wanted you to finish those last two as Selendrile asked, to save me a little bit of time ;P

Anyway, the way I want you to do things is: Follow any instructions, perform the jutsu and discuss your thoughts on the jutsu including things like advantages/disadvantages, uses, as well as the answers to any questions I pose etc.
I don't want lists, instead I want coherent sentences... seeming as this is a text-based RP, building this skill is of more benefit than templates etc. You'll learn more through discussion, sometimes I'll address points you make, other times I won't.

Now, moving on...

Spoiler

( Doton: Rokkuhanmā ) - Earth Release: Rock Hammer
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user manipulates their chakra and creates a huge rock from the ground that will rise up, hammering the opponent by slamming it down from above them.

The term huge is not really a good term to use when the range is short, however this is one of Oonoki's jutsu so... Huge as in bgger than he is xD

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Essentially earth bending (If you know of the Avatar series), you channel your chakra into the ground near you, lifting up a chunk of rock about four times the size of you, before slamming it down on your target. You lift and cause the rock to levitate using your earth chakra, not physical contact. In order for you to control the earth, both hands must be extended towards the rock ie it moves where your hands direct it to move.

While listening carefully to your explanation I already start channeling chakra into the ground I'm standing on. Now extending my arms, I lift up a (rather) huge rock without ever making physical contact. By moving my arms upwards the rock starts to levitate above the ground. Looking for a target to crush I notice a carefully piled up stack of stones just a few meters to my left. Still directing the floating rock with my hands I let it rush into said pile. The outcome is a medium sized dustcloud that fades after a few seconds and a small crater in the ground partially filled with rocks.

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Here I actually got a question to begin with. Can I use this jutsu while not beeing in direct contact with the ground? I'm asking this because in the picture we see Oonoki levitate as he uses it. As far as my understanding of doton goes I need to be in contact with the ground to use a jutsu unless it's created from my body (like with the next jutsu) or it was shown that you don't need direct contact (for example swamp of the underworld).

I don't think that this jutsu is too effective 'cause it's only short ranged and I need to use both of my hands to actually land the hit which means I'm rather bound in things I can do at the same time.

Spoiler

( Doton: Iwa Dangan ) - Earth Release: Rock Bullet
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user manipulating their chakra will point their palm or fist at the opponent, creating a large rock on it which he then sends at the opponent. Alternatively, the user can "spit" the rock. In this case he will spit a large globule of mud which hardens mid way towards the opponent into a large rock.

Creating a similar sized rock, this time by materialising a rock in front of your extended first or open palm. You then use your chakra to propel it towards your target, having no control over the direction once you fire it.
Or... or... you can spit a large amount of mud, using shape manipulation to keep it in a rough spherical shape where it hardens on the way to your target... again you would have no control over the trajectory after you fire it off.

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I channel my doton based chakra down my arm, into my open palm which I point at a group of trees located mid range of me. I manipulate said chakra to create a (again rather ) huge sized rock. I fire the rock with tremendous momentum forward which easily uproots the trees on contact.

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That one seems to be halfway decent. I can attack up to long range and use it to block my enemies vision partially. As I create it from my body I could even use it in the air/on top of a summoning. Also the possibility to spit it out of my mouth is great because I'd have my hands free. The only real drawback that I see is that it's only a frontal attack which won't be too hard to counter.