Re: Custom Element's Jutsu
Type: Defense/Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user will be able to freely manipulate existing oil via the use of this jutsu and create blasts/waves/shapes/weapons or Create a huge reservoir of oil underneath or on the battlefield by spiting out the oil from the user's body or mining it from the ground.
Note:Must Know Oil release
Note:Can only be used by whom I teach
Note:A oil Battlefield will be oil which can't be manipulated by other but Tony Stark.
~Declined~ Incorrect chakra cost. Also I'd like you to clarify exactly how "huge" the reservoir can be. If you're looking to make the last part like swamp of the underworld then you'll have to submit it as a higher rank with some real restrictions.
(Oiru: shiroppu) Oil Release:Sticky oil
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: User creates oil in his mouth and then spits it with a mixture of water into the ground creating a field covered with oil which will form an adhesive trap or onto a person to inhibit their mobility.The user can control the oil to his or her will.
Note: Usable thrice per battle
Note: Controlling Counts as a move
~Declined~ Incorrect chakra info. Also you have yet to describe exactly what are the bending capabilities. For all I know you could take control of it and make a flying bird.
(Oiru: Oil bunshin) Oil release:Oil clone
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: User creates a Oil clone which will look like an exact replica of himself which the user can control,this clone can explode if the user decides to do so by warming up the chakra in the clones body.
Note:Can create oil clones five times
~Declined~ I've already answered via VM's why I will not be approving the exploding part.
(Oiru: Oiru/katon Dangan) Oil release:Grand Oil/fire bullets
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description:The User performs the snake handsign and then he creates a large amount of oil in his mouth and then he shapes it into a big bullet size and then spits it out while at the same time the oil gets release he can spit a fire at the oil bullets which will ignite.
Note:Can use four times per battle
Note:No oil release for a turn
Note: Fireball count as a move
~Approved~
(Oiru:Kirioiru Shiryoku Hakudatsu) Oil release:Oil ignition mist Technique
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60 (But N/A if the user doesn't ignite it)
Description:The user blows out a big mist which is consisted of gas oil from his mouth which can be ignited if the user uses any fire or by clicking his teeth.
Note:Must have used Oil syrup before using this Jutsu
Note:If the user is in mid range in the mist he will get burnt when the mist ignites causing a -10 damage.
Note:Opponent with a Sharingan Tomoe 1 and above can see through this as there is chakra everywhere and a byakugan user can aswell.
~Declined~ Include some hand seals and usage restrictions. At this rate a shinobi without a doujutsu would be oblivious to the gas.
PS: For the sticky oil part I can manipulate and create things from the oil which I released but things which I create from it are going to be submitted and the sticky oil is the jutsu called "Oil syrup", just in case you were wondering for the Mist Ignition jutsu. Also I don't see why my Oil clones can't be ignited since I can control my clone's chakra to make it get hot.
(Oiru no jutsu) - Oil technique(Oiru no jutsu) - Oil technique
Type: Defense/Supplementary
Rank: B-A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 20-30
Damage Points: 40-60
Description: The user will be able to freely manipulate existing oil via the use of this jutsu and create blasts/waves/shapes/weapons or Create a huge reservoir of oil underneath or on the battlefield by spiting out the oil from the user's body or mining it from the ground.
Note:Must Know Oil release
Note:Can only be used by whom I teach
Note:A oil Battlefield will be oil which can't be manipulated by other but Me
~Declined~ I will not accept multiple ranks in a single technique.
(Oiru: shiroppu) Oil Release:Sticky oil
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: User creates oil in his mouth and then spits it with a mixture of water into the ground creating a field covered with oil which will form an adhesive trap or onto a person to inhibit their mobility.The user can control the oil to his or her will.
Note: Usable thrice per battle
~Declined~ This one is very close to approval, however I want you to clear the "The user can control the oil to his or her will." Part. Are you saying you could use the oil for as an oil source for future oil techniques? Or that you can manipulate that same oil and create other things with the same technique? If that's the case then make the controlling to your will count as a jutsu per turn.
(Oiru: Oil bunshin) Oil release:Oil clone
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: User creates a Oil clone which will look like an exact replica of himself which the user can control,this clone can explode if the user decides to do so by warming up the chakra in the clones body.
Note:Can create oil clones five times
~Declined~ Make it short ranged and take away the exploding part.
(Oiru: Oiru/katon Dangan) Oil release:Grand Oil/fire bullets
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description:The User performs the snake handsign and then he creates a large amount of oil in his mouth and then he shapes it into a bullet size in a instant and then spits it out while at the same time the oil gets release he can spit a fire at the oil bullets which will ignite.
Note:Can use four times per battle
Note:No oil release for a turn
~Declined~ Make the fire ball count as one of the jutsu per turn if you decide to release it. Also I want you to the reword "instant" to something more suitable.
(Oiru:Kirioiru Shiryoku Hakudatsu) Oil release:Oil ignition mist Technique
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60 (But N/A if the user doesn't ignite it)
Description:The user spits out oil onto the ground where once the oil hits the ground the user can use the chakra in the oil he can cause the water to heat up causing the pressure of the water to increase and then causing the oil to heat up and create a oil mist which can be ignited if the user uses any fire or by clicking his teeth after the oil turns into mist.
Note:Must have used Oil syrup before using this Jutsu
Note:If the user is in mid range in the mist he will get burnt when the mist ignites causing a -10 damage.
Note:Opponent with a Sharingan Tomoe 2 and above can see through this as there is chakra everywhere and a byakugan user can aswell.
~Declined~ Regular shinobi would also be able to see it because the oil source is disappearing. On the re-submission I'd like you to post the approved "Oil syrup". But if you mean to tell me that with this technique you will be turning any of your oil sources into igniting mists then I will not approve of it.
Type: Defense/Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user will be able to freely manipulate existing oil via the use of this jutsu and create blasts/waves/shapes/weapons or Create a huge reservoir of oil underneath or on the battlefield by spiting out the oil from the user's body or mining it from the ground.
Note:Must Know Oil release
Note:Can only be used by whom I teach
Note:A oil Battlefield will be oil which can't be manipulated by other but Tony Stark.
~Declined~ Incorrect chakra cost. Also I'd like you to clarify exactly how "huge" the reservoir can be. If you're looking to make the last part like swamp of the underworld then you'll have to submit it as a higher rank with some real restrictions.
(Oiru: shiroppu) Oil Release:Sticky oil
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: User creates oil in his mouth and then spits it with a mixture of water into the ground creating a field covered with oil which will form an adhesive trap or onto a person to inhibit their mobility.The user can control the oil to his or her will.
Note: Usable thrice per battle
Note: Controlling Counts as a move
~Declined~ Incorrect chakra info. Also you have yet to describe exactly what are the bending capabilities. For all I know you could take control of it and make a flying bird.
(Oiru: Oil bunshin) Oil release:Oil clone
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: User creates a Oil clone which will look like an exact replica of himself which the user can control,this clone can explode if the user decides to do so by warming up the chakra in the clones body.
Note:Can create oil clones five times
~Declined~ I've already answered via VM's why I will not be approving the exploding part.
(Oiru: Oiru/katon Dangan) Oil release:Grand Oil/fire bullets
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description:The User performs the snake handsign and then he creates a large amount of oil in his mouth and then he shapes it into a big bullet size and then spits it out while at the same time the oil gets release he can spit a fire at the oil bullets which will ignite.
Note:Can use four times per battle
Note:No oil release for a turn
Note: Fireball count as a move
~Approved~
(Oiru:Kirioiru Shiryoku Hakudatsu) Oil release:Oil ignition mist Technique
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60 (But N/A if the user doesn't ignite it)
Description:The user blows out a big mist which is consisted of gas oil from his mouth which can be ignited if the user uses any fire or by clicking his teeth.
Note:Must have used Oil syrup before using this Jutsu
Note:If the user is in mid range in the mist he will get burnt when the mist ignites causing a -10 damage.
Note:Opponent with a Sharingan Tomoe 1 and above can see through this as there is chakra everywhere and a byakugan user can aswell.
~Declined~ Include some hand seals and usage restrictions. At this rate a shinobi without a doujutsu would be oblivious to the gas.
PS: For the sticky oil part I can manipulate and create things from the oil which I released but things which I create from it are going to be submitted and the sticky oil is the jutsu called "Oil syrup", just in case you were wondering for the Mist Ignition jutsu. Also I don't see why my Oil clones can't be ignited since I can control my clone's chakra to make it get hot.
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