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We have 10 and we just need 12 by the way the name of our group is "Nengan Kohai" nengan means hearts desire and kohai means devastation so thats saying that our hearts desire is devastation, we are a group like the akatsuki but not the akatsuki. Also I read your jutsus and they are waaaay badass but you are a seriously powerful character lol but I think it still equals out because every technique takes up so much chakra that they are like one shot techs and you couldnt really use all of them in one battle so you gotta choose carefully thats just how I took it so that works out fine.
So before we start to partner people up, lets get all the applications in first. THEN we can partner up, to see who fits in best with each other.

Also, on my bio, do you want specific jutsu he can use? (Rascale)
 

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So before we start to partner people up, lets get all the applications in first. THEN we can partner up, to see who fits in best with each other.

Also, on my bio, do you want specific jutsu he can use? (Rascale)
What you have on your bio is fine don't worry and yeah we still gotta get just two more members first and sharingdork will handle the rp when he gets back on probably tomorrow so we will worry about that then, we can't get too impatient or we will get disorganized people! lol btw does evry1 like my character it was the first post in this thread and no1 has commented much on it.
 

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Well ur the leader so u should be strong more xd
My susano will kill u xd
lol no way girl I got 20 sharingan puppets you know what that means? that means I can copy any justu you got 22 times the only reason I didnt let my character have susanoo is cuz then I would have 22 susanoos running around and that would just be unfair.
 
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Name: Blaze
Age: 27
Height: 6ft
Weight: 175
From: Cloud Village
Male
Personality- Quite,cool,calm
History: Blaze was always a talented young man, ever since he was born. His father was a really powerful Jonin that was respected by everyone. His father saved many lives and did the most difficult missions. Blaze was the son his father wanted, a talented young man who cud take his father's place. When Blaze was just 3 he was learning ninjutsu and graduated the academy, Blaze was very intelligent because he cud of talked when he was 1 and fully understood and responded to most things at age 2. He was a genius with a 210 IQ! At age 2 he had already learn how to read fast and perfectly. When he became 5 he became a chunnin and the youngest EVER in the village. Blaze had the most incredible powers, he had a Kekkei Genkai called the Dailegan! No one knew what this new Kekkei Genkai was and the powers of it. The true powers of the Dailegan is that they can freeze time to evade any attack, if you possess the Dailegan u can also learn any element and it boost every jutsu's power by 10x! It cud even make a normal C rank jutsu as strong or stronger than an S rank jutsu! It also immunes u from poison. Another power of this kekkia genkia is that the user can travel at incredible speeds such as the Raikage and can also defy gravity and fly if they want. His chakra was also unlimited, on par with the kyuubi. But even tho he had such powers, Blaze hated fighting and going on missions in which ppl die. What he really wanted to do was be the Raikage so he can run things his non violent way. When Blaze was a jonin at age 10 he was already stronger than his father, and by age 14 he was stronger than most Kages! He was in the clouds military force as an Anbu but the reason why the cloud wasnt the strongest was because Blaze hated fighting so he never liked killing people or being used as a military tool! He hated the idea that ninja are military tools! So he barely ever fought and at age 17 he was assigned a mission to take out an S rank rogue ninja. The ninja was no match for Blaze but he spared him because the ninja promised to stay away from the cloud village. But a couple years later, this ninja tried to attack again but was killed by Rocky who then became the 40th Raikage! This killed Blaze only dream but the villagers didnt care becuz all they wanted Blaze to be is an Anbu that cud kill any other ninja. This made Blaze very angry and he fled the village, but the new Raikage along with the many anbu came to stop him and told him he had to stay. Blaze denied it so they tried to kill him becuz they were afraid he cud be a threat to them by joining another village. Blaze had to kill them all. The Raikage was the only survivor. After this event Blaze become an S rank wanted criminal and decided to join the Akatsuki.

Jutsu- Water dragon jutsu, kirin, summoning (dragon which can destroy mountains in a roar), fire ball jutsu, dark hole( a jutsu in which you get sucked in a hole that crushes u with its gravitational powers, but very chakra consuming), meteor shower ( a jutsu in which meteors rain down on your opponent), galaxy beam ( a light beam which travels faster than light and hits the target, whatever it hits it pierces through, a lot of chakra must be used), time freeze jutsu. And a couple more common jutsu but these are the main ones.

Sry if its too long but plz read it! :no_ignore:

BTW this is kinda how he looks like-

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Nice character i will like to be partnered with. This is my character


Age: 26
Height: 8ft 11in
Weight: 400pounds
From: Leaf Village
Male
Personality- Confident
History: Izuma was the kind of guy who hated doing anything, kind of like shikamaru he was lazy. He was always an average fighter and really wanted to be the strongest but was too lazy to try. He really loved his mother, but 1 day when he was training with friends his father killed his mom, and entire family. His dad was very strong and going to be the leaf's next kage until he lost the votes and then fled the village killing everyone he knew in it! Izuma was too weak to do anything and was left helpless. He resembled his father so anyone who's parents had been killed trying to stop Izuma's father (many anbu tried to stop Izuma's dad) saw Izuma with disgust. So Izuma left the village only to chase the path of revenge. He then ran into Death who noticed that Izuma is powerful and tried to take his soul. But Salem stopped Death and fought Izuma to test these powers and Salem awakened this power in him. It turned out that Izuma has a special power, he can absorb ninjutsu! So Salem recruited him and told him that if he works with his organization he will become stronger fighting and will evntually become strong enough to kill his father.
Jutsu- Giant vortex, fire bombs, water wave, water prison, because he has both water and fire. He summons a whale! He luks like this

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Im actually writing mine right now and im almost finished so if anything try to save a spot. lol i just want to hav a little imaginable fun.
 

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Name: Kasmis Yokushi

Nickname: The Flame

Age: 34

Village: Takigakure "Village hidden in a Great Waterfall"

History: Kasmis was a highly successful ninja, a joinin to be exact. He achieved that status at the age of 17, nothing special, but a success none the less. He was praised for his potential, and some urged him to take the tests earlier, but he waited. His special ability was deadly, if not handled correctly. His anger being flowed his combat, and him being a peace loving man, didn't match well. Add on to the fact to was dating a girl named Natsuki, he never was angry. He lived a normal life with no problems, until one day Natsuki was kidnapped in a raid via rogue ninjas. Hunting them down, his anger began to boil. Fire marked the ground as he chased for her. Finding the ninjas, and having to watch his love being killed, drove him to inanity. He shattered and unleased pure hell via his fire techniques. His potential was mastered. He burned the tree village down, and left no survivors. Nobody could stop him due to his special ability. His in-sanity eventually gave him a name, The Flame. A fire that never dulls, but only grows more violent. The group Akatsuki searched for him. Using the Impure Ressurection Jutsu as a ploy, the leader quickly gained his alliance.

Abilities: He uses fire and magna techniques. However, what makes him special is his near-immortality. If he looses a limb, it is replaced by flames, which he then bandages up with bandages and uses a scroll to surpress it. The flames cause great pain, but since he has no real state of mind anymore, he doesn't mind. If he is beheaded, he grows a fire like structure to support it. That is his final act. His "awakening" is wrapping his arms in fire.

Note: He can die. His weakness is water and ice attacks. The only way to beat him is to have more than one Ice user (both at a Jonin+ rank) freeze him. One will not be enough.

Goal: Chaos, but in his lost mind, he wants to find someone to best him, and kill him so he can reunite with his lost lover.



*Sorry if it sucks and for the typos. Just came up with everything on the fly, except the ability and name. The past and all, was on the go.*
 
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So can i join?????
You got some interesting jutsu and you can absorb jutsus kinda of like pain right? and I'm assuming that also replenish's your chakra too...yeah I like your character but you might want to consider giving him a few more unique powers just because we got a lot of super powerful ninja in our group just for example: maybe he also studies medical ninjutsu and is a very skilled medic or something like that you know. I don't mean to criticize but look at Minato flash's character by comparison yours is weak so build him up a little! lol then you are in
 

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Hey Chris im gonna change my characters powers. im going to erase byakugan completely and gentle fist and give him a KG called Guraton - Tremor Release, its basically whitebeards powers in naruto. :)
 
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Name: Kasmis Yokushi

Nickname: The Flame

Age: 34

Village: Takigakure "Village hidden in a Great Waterfall"

History: Kasmis was a highly successful ninja, a joinin to be exact. He achieved that status at the age of 17, nothing special, but a success none the less. He was praised for his potential, and some urged him to take the tests earlier, but he waited. His special ability was deadly, if not handled correctly. His anger being flowed his combat, and him being a peace loving man, didn't match well. Add on to the fact to was dating a girl named Natsuki, he never was angry. He lived a normal life with no problems, until one day Natsuki was kidnapped in a raid via rogue ninjas. Hunting them down, his anger began to boil. Fire marked the ground as he chased for her. Finding the ninjas, and having to watch his love being killed, drove him to inanity. He shattered and unleased pure hell via his fire techniques. His potential was mastered. He burned the tree village down, and left no survivors. Nobody could stop him due to his special ability. His in-sanity eventually gave him a name, The Flame. A fire that never dulls, but only grows more violent. The group Akatsuki searched for him. Using the Impure Ressurection Jutsu as a ploy, the leader quickly gained his alliance.

Abilities: He uses fire and magna techniques. However, what makes him special is his near-immortality. If he looses a limb, it is replaced by flames, which he then bandages up with bandages and uses a scroll to surpress it. The flames cause great pain, but since he has no real state of mind anymore, he doesn't mind. If he is beheaded, he grows a fire like structure to support it. That is his final act. His "awakening" is wrapping his arms in fire.

Note: He can die. His weakness is water and ice attacks. The only way to beat him is to have more than one Ice user (both at a Jonin+ rank) freeze him. One will not be enough.

Goal: Chaos, but in his lost mind, he wants to find someone to best him, and kill him so he can reunite with his lost lover.



*Sorry if it sucks and for the typos. Just came up with everything on the fly, except the ability and name. The past and all, was on the go.*
Eh, not bad
 
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You got some interesting jutsu and you can absorb jutsus kinda of like pain right? and I'm assuming that also replenish's your chakra too...yeah I like your character but you might want to consider giving him a few more unique powers just because we got a lot of super powerful ninja in our group just for example: maybe he also studies medical ninjutsu and is a very skilled medic or something like that you know. I don't mean to criticize but look at Minato flash's character by comparison yours is weak so build him up a little! lol then you are in
OK lets say he has medic experience and can heal as well in very little time. He also was born with godlike chakra so he can almost never run out. His abilites arent so great but since he can use all of them at least 4 times in one fight it should make up for that and btw i think every character is weak compared to FLASH's character but my chakra reserves are the highest and plus with some medic my character is beast right! Also his personality is very beast now and arrogant which makes him intresting. His only weakness is taijutsu since he cant absorb that and is kind of a slow fighter. Also i just gave him a new jutsu which is called Tsunami and is as strong as an actual tsunami that is 100 ft high!!
 
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