Custom Akatsuki

[-Kisame-]

how many people do we have now...

 

[UchihaClan The ultimate]

how many people do we have now...

Idk, also tell me what u think of my character.

 

[Nefertari Vivi]

well ur character is nice uchihaclan
and i made an uchiha bio xd
its on page 3

 

[-Kisame-]

Idk, also tell me what u think of my character.

Uh where is it? what page.. and also look at my character (page 1)

 

[ChrisWolf]

Name: Blaze
Age: 27
Height: 6ft
Weight: 175
From: Cloud Village
Male

History: Blaze was always a talented young man, ever since he was born. His father was a really powerful Jonin that was respected by everyone. His father saved many lives and did the most difficult missions. Blaze was the son his father wanted, a talented young man who cud take his father's place. When Blaze was just 3 he was learning ninjutsu and graduated the academy, Blaze was very intelligent because he cud of talked when he was 1 and fully understood and responded to most things at age 2. He was a genius with a 210 IQ! At age 2 he had already learn how to read fast and perfectly. When he became 5 he became a chunnin and the youngest EVER in the village. Blaze had the most incredible powers, he had a Kekkei Genkai called the Dailegan! No one knew what this new Kekkei Genkai was and the powers of it. The true powers of the Dailegan is that they can freeze time to evade any attack, if you possess the Dailegan u can also learn any element and it boost every jutsu's power by 10x! It cud even make a normal C rank jutsu as strong or stronger than an S rank jutsu! Another power of this kekkia genkia is that the user can travel at incredible speeds such as the Raikage and can also defy gravity and fly if they want. His chakra was also unlimited, on par with the kyuubi. But even tho he had such powers, Blaze hated fighting and going on missions in which ppl die. What he really wanted to do was be the Raikage so he can run things his non violent way. When Blaze was a jonin at age 10 he was already stronger than his father, and by age 14 he was stronger than most Kages! He was in the clouds military force as an Anbu but the reason why the cloud wasnt the strongest was because Blaze hated fighting so he never liked killing people or being used as a military tool! He hated the idea that ninja are military tools! So he barely ever fought and at age 17 he was assigned a mission to take out an S rank rogue ninja. The ninja was no match for Blaze but he spared him because the ninja promised to stay away from the cloud village. But a couple years later, this ninja tried to attack again but was killed by A who then became the 4th Raikage! This killed Blaze only dream but the villagers didnt care becuz all they wanted Blaze to be is an Anbu that cud kill any other ninja. This made Blaze very angry and he fled the village, but the new Raikage along with the many anbu came to stop him and told him he had to stay. Blaze denied it so they tried to kill him becuz they were afraid he cud be a threat to them by joining another village. Blaze had to kill them all. The Raikage was the only survivor. After this event Blaze become an S rank wanted criminal and decided to join the Akatsuki.

Sry if its too long but plz read it! :no_ignore:

BTW this is kinda how he looks like-

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Ok well I really love your character and that was a great story but their are couple of things here. First of all when we actually turn this into a fan fic this is going to be a story that takes place hundreds of years after the current events of naruto shippuden soooo the story you told obviously wouldn't fit so you would have to change that but if you really want to keep that the same we could figure out a way to make it work like somehow after those events Blaze survived for hundreds of more years you can figure that out and write so it can fit in with the rest of our bios or if you want I could prob figure out a way to make it work so you can keep your original story but he is still a member of our organization in our time period.

second his powers are awsome but hes kind of totally invincible if he can control time and fly and like i stated before we need to keep our characters fairly equal until we collaborate our main story so how about he can only stop time for a few mili seconds but it takes time to work that jutsu and it uses a lot of chakra just so he cant just stop time and go around a stab everyone to death lol cuz that wouldnt be a very interesting manga so put some limitations on them ok. And one more thing what jutsus can he do specifically? good job though.

Name: Shinjiro Tanaka
Nick name: Jiro
Age: 17
Height: 6'1"
Weight: 182
Country: Fire Village

Background: Grew up in a small village and his parents died when he was born
he was adopted and had a bro and a sis
7 years later a war broke out with the neighboring village........ seeing the dead bodies of all his friends and family warped his mind and made him stronger
6 years later he massacred a tiny village for their resources and that is where he saw madara
madara trained him until he was 16 and took him into the akatsuki at the age of 17
Justus: he has 2 elements fire and lightning he also has sharingan(lol how in the world)
fire ball jutsu phoenix flower jutsu etc
kirin chidori and stuff like that
Goals: revenge

Ok well I don't think you read all of the posts before your posted yours, you don't really know what this thread is about do you? lol its ok Ill explained this isnt really the akatsuki and madara doesnt exist in this time period this in the future we are a group like the akatsuki called "Nengan Kohia" so come up with a very unique original character with back story of their life and a story of how they met my character Salem (who is detailed in the first post of this thread) and post it ok

how many people do we have now...

Well I definetly want to get Minatoflash's character worked out so that would make 8...thanks btw

 

[Shirohige]

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Name: Death
Age: ?
Nickname: Hades
Height: 8ft
Weight: ?
Country: ??

Nobody knows where death came from, his real age or even his real name.
He is a 8ft Tall Dark Hybrid of some sort, who finds villages and towns and destroys them for fun.
the then consumes the souls of those on their deathbed. Each soul makes him stronger, so Death strives for War hoping to consume as many souls as possible, making him achieve a 'Perfect Form' which is a triple hybrid. Part Demon, Part Undead And Part Human.

Only 3 people in the world know that Death's Goal is To 'become' Hell.
Nobody knows how he intends to do this, but all are sure he will find a way.
He is the Curse of this world. Some say he was born out of the 'Hatred' Of The SO6P, Which explains his Eyes being a Hybrid of The 3 Great Doujutsu. Death Says that once he becomes 'Hell' The world Will Spend an Eternity of Darkness. Death Recently Joined The Akatsuki and Met Salem and has taken a liking to him. Death says that when the world is thrown into chaos, he will let Salem live peacefully.

Jutsu: Tai - Guraton Techs, Forbidden Techs Of The Sage.
Doujutsu - Rinnegan, Sharingan Though he rarely uses Sharingan as it puts a strain on his body because he is not fully human.(which is why he trying to obtain human souls) Jutsu: The 6 Paths, Time-Space Migration, 3T sharingan Techs, All water, lightning and wind techs and a KG called Guraton Which is his most powerful moves.

Guraton Techs:

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Activation for most moves : Guraton - 'Death Crack'

Death uses a punch that literally cracks the air itself and sends devastating shock waves through the air in the direction it is facing. These shock waves are able to pass through and damage almost any substance, literally tearing it apart. If the shock waves are directed into the ground, the result is a devastating earthquake capable of generating huge tsunamis,(Sea Shaman). Because of its enormous offensive power and great quick speed, this attack makes for a very good defense, able to destroy or disrupt any attack before it hits Death. This technique can also be used for close range strike, causing severe damage, as some Giants suffered. The siege walls in Marineford are made of a special material that is able to resist damage and diffuse the power of this attack. Death is also able to passively summon vibrations around himself, which protects him from being frozen as vibrations cannot be frozen. It was also used to deflect cannon balls back to their source.

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'Sea Shaman' Two tsunami's can be summoned at will, but the activation method has to be used for this move.

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'Quake Bubble' - This allows Death to focus his great power to a single point, otherwise known as a hypocenter (given the appearance of a bubble of sorts), to make a concentrated, explosion-like attack. So far, he has been shown capable of using this attack through both his fist and the blade of a weapon. He first used this technique to defeat a giant with a single blow. He can also surround a weapon of any kind with the same bubble to greatly increase its striking power and range. Death also demonstrated the ability to stretch out a quake bubble to form a protective barrier capable of blocking bazooka fire. Death has shown he can create such bubble on his foot, making a devastating stomp.

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'Guraton - Impure World Shift' - lets Death "grab" an entire area, by grabbing the air around him as if it were tangible, and rapidly shift it. Using this, he was capable of tilting the entire island of Marineford and the sea around it. This technique was capable of destroying buildings and throwing a giant off of his feet.

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Mastery over

Lightning, Wind, Water Elements

But is weak to Fire and Earth Techs.

Goals: To Reduce The Earth To Nothing.

 

[ChrisWolf]

Name: Death
Age: ?
Nickname: Hades
Height: 8ft
Weight: ?
Country: ??

Nobody knows where death came from, his real age or even his real name.
He is a 8ft Tall Dark Hybrid of some sort, who finds villages and towns and destroys them for fun.
the then consumes the souls of those on their deathbed. Each soul makes him stronger, so Death strives for War hoping to consume as many souls as possible, making him achieve a 'Perfect Form' which is a triple hybrid. Part Demon, Part Undead And Part Human.

Only 3 people in the world know that Death's Goal is To 'become' Hell.
Nobody knows how he intends to do this, but all are sure he will find a way.
He is the Curse of this world. Some say he was born out of the 'Hatred' Of The SO6P, Which explains his Eyes being a Hybrid of The 3 Great Doujutsu. Death Says that once he becomes 'Hell' The world Will Spend an Eternity of Darkness. Death Recently Joined The Akatsuki and Met Salem and has taken a liking to him. Death says that when the world is thrown into chaos, he will let Salem live peacefully.

Jutsu: Tai - Gentle Fist, Forbidden Techs Of The Sage.
Doujutsu - Sharingan, Byakugan, Rinnegan Though he rarely uses Rinnegan as it puts a strain on his body because he is not fully human.(which is why he trying to obtain human souls) Jutsu: The 6 Paths, Amaterasu, Susano'o, Kamui, Tsukiyomi, Time-Space Migration.

Mastery over

Lightning, Wind, Water Elements

But is weak to Fire and Earth Techs.

Goals: To Reduce The Earth To Nothing.

Dude that is a totally unbelievably freaking awsome character! you are definetly a member of Nengan Kohia but just one thing, as I've had to tell people before we can't one person be too powerful! lol for now we need to be fairly equal until we get a good solid storyline for all these characters ok? so maybe your character has byakugan,rinnegan and sharingan but he doesn't have them mastered to their most powerful techniques like amatarasu and susanoo for sharingan for instance ok, because we want to make the story really interesting and the fights to be challenging but a character like that would just beat any1 easily and that wouldnt be much of a story, so with these corrections being made why don't you be Blaze's partner? you can see his bio about one page back I think, minato flash made that character

 

[Shirohige]

Dude that is a totally unbelievably freaking awsome character! you are definetly a member of Nengan Kohia but just one thing, as I've had to tell people before we can't one person be too powerful! lol for now we need to be fairly equal until we get a good solid storyline for all these characters ok? so maybe your character has byakugan,rinnegan and sharingan but he doesn't have them mastered to their most powerful techniques like amatarasu and susanoo for sharingan for instance ok, because we want to make the story really interesting and the fights to be challenging but a character like that would just beat any1 easily and that wouldnt be much of a story, so with these corrections being made why don't you be Blaze's partner? you can see his bio about one page back I think, minato flash made that character

Ok Then, He Cant use Sharingan and Mangekyo techs because he hasnt got enough human souls, so its a strain on his body. it could kill him. so right now he only has Complete Rinnegan and byakugan - gentle fist, Sage Taijutsu & Mastery over lightning wind and Water. + i dont care who my partner is as long as its not somebody like hidan or tobi xd

 

[ChrisWolf]

Ok Then, He Cant use Rinnegan and sage techs because he hasnt got enough human souls, so its a strain on his body. it could kill him. so right now he only has 3-tomoe sharingan and byakugan - gentle fist Mastery over lightning wind and Water.

Ok that sucks although if I were you I would of kicked sharingan out because we already have like 2 or 3 sharingan users and no rinnegans and I love rinnegan but thats ok that works for me

 

[ChrisWolf]

Ok that sucks although if I were you I would of kicked sharingan out because we already have like 2 or 3 sharingan users and no rinnegans and I love rinnegan but thats ok that works for me

I'm sorry I dont why I said "Ok that sucks" I meant to say "Ok that works" please dont report me for double posting I just had to clear that up quickly I want everyone to get along here

 

[Selendrile]

Name: Blaze
Age: 27
Height: 6ft
Weight: 175
From: Cloud Village
Male
Personality- Quite,cool,calm
History: Blaze was always a talented young man, ever since he was born. His father was a really powerful Jonin that was respected by everyone. His father saved many lives and did the most difficult missions. Blaze was the son his father wanted, a talented young man who cud take his father's place. When Blaze was just 3 he was learning ninjutsu and graduated the academy, Blaze was very intelligent because he cud of talked when he was 1 and fully understood and responded to most things at age 2. He was a genius with a 210 IQ! At age 2 he had already learn how to read fast and perfectly. When he became 5 he became a chunnin and the youngest EVER in the village. Blaze had the most incredible powers, he had a Kekkei Genkai called the Dailegan! No one knew what this new Kekkei Genkai was and the powers of it. The true powers of the Dailegan is that they can freeze time to evade any attack, if you possess the Dailegan u can also learn any element and it boost every jutsu's power by 10x! It cud even make a normal C rank jutsu as strong or stronger than an S rank jutsu! Another power of this kekkia genkia is that the user can travel at incredible speeds such as the Raikage and can also defy gravity and fly if they want. His chakra was also unlimited, on par with the kyuubi. But even tho he had such powers, Blaze hated fighting and going on missions in which ppl die. What he really wanted to do was be the Raikage so he can run things his non violent way. When Blaze was a jonin at age 10 he was already stronger than his father, and by age 14 he was stronger than most Kages! He was in the clouds military force as an Anbu but the reason why the cloud wasnt the strongest was because Blaze hated fighting so he never liked killing people or being used as a military tool! He hated the idea that ninja are military tools! So he barely ever fought and at age 17 he was assigned a mission to take out an S rank rogue ninja. The ninja was no match for Blaze but he spared him because the ninja promised to stay away from the cloud village. But a couple years later, this ninja tried to attack again but was killed by A who then became the 4th Raikage! This killed Blaze only dream but the villagers didnt care becuz all they wanted Blaze to be is an Anbu that cud kill any other ninja. This made Blaze very angry and he fled the village, but the new Raikage along with the many anbu came to stop him and told him he had to stay. Blaze denied it so they tried to kill him becuz they were afraid he cud be a threat to them by joining another village. Blaze had to kill them all. The Raikage was the only survivor. After this event Blaze become an S rank wanted criminal and decided to join the Akatsuki.

Sry if its too long but plz read it! :no_ignore:

BTW this is kinda how he looks like-

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Good concept, but its way overpowered. Just tone it down a bit, and see what happens.

 

[Shirohige]

Ok that sucks although if I were you I would of kicked sharingan out because we already have like 2 or 3 sharingan users and no rinnegans and I love rinnegan but thats ok that works for me

Ok then i swap the sharingan for the rinnegan. and i am fully complete with the rinnegan, like nagato in manga.

and nobody will report you here, only faggots report

 

[ChrisWolf]

Good concept, but its way overpowered. Just tone it down a bit, and see what happens.

Yeah i already explained that to him I think he will be ok with what I said, we only need two more members.

 

[MinatoFLASH]

Ok well I really love your character and that was a great story but their are couple of things here. First of all when we actually turn this into a fan fic this is going to be a story that takes place hundreds of years after the current events of naruto shippuden soooo the story you told obviously wouldn't fit so you would have to change that but if you really want to keep that the same we could figure out a way to make it work like somehow after those events Blaze survived for hundreds of more years you can figure that out and write so it can fit in with the rest of our bios or if you want I could prob figure out a way to make it work so you can keep your original story but he is still a member of our organization in our time period.

second his powers are awsome but hes kind of totally invincible if he can control time and fly and like i stated before we need to keep our characters fairly equal until we collaborate our main story so how about he can only stop time for a few mili seconds but it takes time to work that jutsu and it uses a lot of chakra just so he cant just stop time and go around a stab everyone to death lol cuz that wouldnt be a very interesting manga so put some limitations on them ok. And one more thing what jutsus can he do specifically? good job though.



Ok well I don't think you read all of the posts before your posted yours, you don't really know what this thread is about do you? lol its ok Ill explained this isnt really the akatsuki and madara doesnt exist in this time period this in the future we are a group like the akatsuki called "Nengan Kohia" so come up with a very unique original character with back story of their life and a story of how they met my character Salem (who is detailed in the first post of this thread) and post it ok



Well I definetly want to get Minatoflash's character worked out so that would make 8...thanks btw

There i edited him and made him in a different time period. Also yea my character can stop time, cast the most powerful jutsu, and is immune to poison so yea he is pretty much invincible. Thats the way he is supposed to be, i mean look at that character Death, he is bout as powerful as my character too. But anyways my character does have weaknesses by the way to make it realistic. He has a chakra limit so if you fight him as a large team u cud beat him by running him out of chakra or something and also he can stop time but it takes a lot of chakra, the longer he stops it the more chakra it takes, but at max he can stop it for around an hour but that wud run him out. He also has another weakness which is toad oil, so if u go to the mount myoboku and get some toad oil and touch him with it then his powers become 1/4 and so does his chakra. Same thing if he is ill, he is immune to poison but if he even catches the common cold his powers reduce to 1/4 or even 1/5 so he can then be killed. Also i edited and put down his jutsus, they are pretty tight! and btw i like this thread.

 

[ChrisWolf]

Ok then i swap the sharingan for the rinnegan. and i am fully complete with the rinnegan, like nagato in manga.

and nobody will report you here, only faggots report

Ok great I don't mean to be critical of everyones characters its just that it all has to work together you know. Thank you.

There i edited him and made him in a different time period. Also yea my character can stop time, cast the most powerful jutsu, and is immune to poison so yea he is pretty much invincible. Thats the way he is supposed to be, i mean look at that character Death, he is bout as powerful as my character too. But anyways my character does have weaknesses by the way to make it realistic. He has a chakra limit so if you fight him as a large team u cud beat him by running him out of chakra or something and also he can stop time but it takes a lot of chakra, the longer he stops it the more chakra it takes, but at max he can stop it for around an hour but that wud run him out. He also has another weakness which is toad oil, so if u go to the mount myoboku and get some toad oil and touch him with it then his powers become 1/4 and so does his chakra. Same thing if he is ill, he is immune to poison but if he even catches the common cold his powers reduce to 1/4 or even 1/5 so he can then be killed. Also i edited and put down his jutsus, they are pretty tight! and btw i like this thread.

Lol yea I know when death submitted his original post he was just as bad as you lmao but he toned it down a bit and I could be wrong but I don't think you mentioned those weaknesses before so yeah that works just fine then btw I was thinking you and death could be partnered if you don't want to be its ok although I did have a specific reason for partnering you that is relevant for the story it's if you would prefer it another way.

 

[MinatoFLASH]

Ok great I don't mean to be critical of everyones characters its just that it all has to work together you know. Thank you.



Lol yea I know when death submitted his original post he was just as bad as you lmao but he toned it down a bit and I could be wrong but I don't think you mentioned those weaknesses before so yeah that works just fine then btw I was thinking you and death could be partnered if you don't want to be its ok although I did have a specific reason for partnering you that is relevant for the story it's if you would prefer it another way.

Hehehe this is awesome but um i wud first like to see other ppl's bio then partner up. idk cuz if Death tries to take my soul then i am srysly gonna kick his ass lol. Also how many members do we have and how many are needed?

 

[Nefertari Vivi]

Lol u guys put so much description xd
And when Is the rp gonna start?
And this is just a suggestion that let's wait for more members and we can choose our partner ourselves xd

 

[ChrisWolf]

Hehehe this is awesome but um i wud first like to see other ppl's bio then partner up. Also how many members do we have and how many are needed?

We have 10 and we just need 12 by the way the name of our group is "Nengan Kohai" nengan means hearts desire and kohai means devastation so thats saying that our hearts desire is devastation, we are a group like the akatsuki but not the akatsuki. Also I read your jutsus and they are waaaay badass but you are a seriously powerful character lol but I think it still equals out because every technique takes up so much chakra that they are like one shot techs and you couldnt really use all of them in one battle so you gotta choose carefully thats just how I took it so that works out fine.

 

[Kikyo]

Way to much to read here >.<

 

[ChrisWolf]

Lol u guys put so much description xd
And when Is the rp gonna start?
And this is just a suggestion that let's wait for more members and we can choose our partner ourselves xd

Thats fine if you want I was just assigning partners because when I first started this thread it seemed like every1 expected me too and also some of you might argue and not come to mutual agreements on the partners thing, also sharingdork said he would make the social group and handle all that but he logged off for the day so whenever he gets back on he will do it, I would say someone else can go ahead and do it but I already told him he could so thats why we are waiting but he should be back on tomorrow so just be patient til' then ok