Custom Akatsuki

[ChrisWolf]

What do u mean different from Itachi?
I seriously dont get u guys U_U

Never mind actually I read your susanoo and I think the claws were a great idea so now your characters good

 

[Selendrile]

What do u mean different from Itachi?
I seriously dont get u guys U_U

It seems like he means, dont just make your character a female version of Itachi. Give her something in her background or abilities, that makes her different, but still connected to him. Do you see what I mean?

 

[Sharingdork]

when you guys refere to rain, is that my character? because i spelled it Rayne, but i like normal Rain better

I believe that's who we were talking about. At least that's who I assumed we were talking about. xd I'll be sure to call him by his real name, now.

So, does my custom character look acceptable for right now? Ill update later.

for right now? absolutely! if you don't want to change it, that's fine, but we may have a few questions about the full extent of his abilites.

Damn thats a good idea to explain susans nagato thing I think we will go with that and by the way angel I do really like your idea of a female itachi because they were no major female uchiha characters in naruto shippuden, but still just try to think of something that makes he uniquely different like one thing at least that makes her different then Itachi.

And yeah I'm glad you don't mind being Rains partner and I love the way you described your characters powers.

Now heretic passage i really love your character! I have no criticism or ideas to add to that really I think its awsome so angel I think that he will be your characters partner because I think those strong physical abilities of rascal will parallel well your calm cool collective and genjutsu style character

I agree; she should have at least one unique thing, like how Sasuke can control the Amateratsu flames (taking that just makes you a Sasuke rip-off, -Angel-. xd)

I just realized that one of the jutsu I created for my character is a lot like the jutsu Itachi's susano'o used when Itachi, Naruto and Bee destroyed Nagato's jutsu. O_O Kishi's spying on me.

Agreed. Motion passed. Now, time for my motion.

荒廃-Kohai
Translation: Devastation

Any takers on this name? I'd like to hear everyone elses ideas.

 

[ChrisWolf]

It seems like he means, dont just make your character a female version of Itachi. Give her something in her background or abilities, that makes her different, but still connected to him. Do you see what I mean?

Yeah thats what I meant but I think her new idea for susanoo having claws is unique enough thanks for explaining though and btw I really like your character

 

[-Kisame-]

I believe that's who we were talking about. At least that's who I assumed we were talking about. xd I'll be sure to call him by his real name, now.

for right now? absolutely! if you don't want to change it, that's fine, but we may have a few questions about the full extent of his abilites.

I agree; she should have at least one unique thing, like how Sasuke can control the Amateratsu flames (taking that just makes you a Sasuke rip-off, -Angel-. xd)

I just realized that one of the jutsu I created for my character is a lot like the jutsu Itachi's susano'o used when Itachi, Naruto and Bee destroyed Nagato's jutsu. O_O Kishi's spying on me.

Agreed. Motion passed. Now, time for my motion.

荒廃-Kohai
Translation: Devastation

Any takers on this name? I'd like to hear everyone elses ideas.

I personally think thats an awesome name.

 

[Bad Luck Brian]

wait so I can just be as creative as I want here? not a real bio just something for fun right?

 

[Sharingdork]

I guess I should've clariffied.

His genjutsu ability didn't come until he started training in the Kinjutsu, as well as the Scyth.

He learned Kusarigamajutsu from his father and through that chakra based/non-elemental jutsu (generates jutsu through his weapons, which increases to long range I guess)

He knows known elemental jutsu (example, shuriken shadow clone jutsu, rasengan, needle jizo...he doesn't know these perticulars these are just examples)

And he knows the Hidden technique Minds Eye of Kagura (Karin was from Kusagakure so I assumed that was a village jutsu) giving him sensory abilities.

I edited my original post to fit in his appearance.

Thank you for understanding, and for the clarification. Now, for my final question. Taijutsu without his scyth/Kusarigamajutsu; is he any good at 100% unarmed, chakraless combat?

I personally think thats an awesome name.

Thanks.

wait so I can just be as creative as I want here? not a real bio just something for fun right?

not a real bio; just for fun. Be as creative as you wish here!

 

[Nefertari Vivi]

I believe that's who we were talking about. At least that's who I assumed we were talking about. xd I'll be sure to call him by his real name, now.

for right now? absolutely! if you don't want to change it, that's fine, but we may have a few questions about the full extent of his abilites.

I agree; she should have at least one unique thing, like how Sasuke can control the Amateratsu flames (taking that just makes you a Sasuke rip-off, -Angel-. xd)

I just realized that one of the jutsu I created for my character is a lot like the jutsu Itachi's susano'o used when Itachi, Naruto and Bee destroyed Nagato's jutsu. O_O Kishi's spying on me.

Agreed. Motion passed. Now, time for my motion.

荒廃-Kohai
Translation: Devastation

Any takers on this name? I'd like to hear everyone elses ideas.

Its not sasuke its susan and my susano have claws and a shield and ameterasu and tsukyomi is for every uchiha

Yeah thats what I meant but I think her new idea for susanoo having claws is unique enough thanks for explaining though and btw I really like your character

and mine or his?

 

[~Hebi Terumi~]

I'll give it a try, if you're still accepting members

Name: Youton Terumi

Nickname: "The Boy with no Home"

Age: 18

Village: Kirigakure
History: I was born in Kirigakure during Yagura's reign as the Fourth Mizukage. During that time everyone who had a Kekkai Genkai were being exterminated. So, I escaped with my mother, a woman who held two Kekkai Genkai. We were able to leave the village safely, but to our shock a Kiri Jounin found us. My mother was able to fight him off, but she told me to run away, and to return to Kiri one day. She said to me things would change by then. I returned a year later, but nothing changed. I looked for her my entire life but I was never able to find my mother, Mei Terumi. When I found out she was Mizukage, I was happy to discover that she was still alive. A ninja I have known for awhile said she was in the Land of Snow. So I embarked on a journey to the Land of Snow. To my surprise, there was a strange ninja who asked me to follow him into this cave. Before I could even react he froze me in a block of ice. The next thing I knew, I saw a man who said his name was Salem. He freed me and I told him my story. When he said that he knew where my mother was and that he would take me to her I was ecstatic, but he said that I would have to join his organization first. So, I did just that and here I am a member of Akatsuki.

Abilities: I posses the Kekkai Genkais of my mother (Lava Release and Boil Release). I possess an enormous amount of chakra. Using my Lava Release (which has it's own unique color that color is blue) I can create a massive continuous river of water amongst other things. With my Boil Release I can create a large mist or compact it into a sphere to shoot at my opponents while affecting only them.

Note: I possess a somewhat strategic mind, though my intellect is far from that of a genious.

Goal: My goal is to find my mother and for that I have joined the Akatsuki, so the common goals of this organization have become goals of my own in order to be reunited with her again.

 

[Sharingdork]

Its not sasuke its susan and my susano have claws and a shield and ameterasu and tsukyomi is for every uchiha



and mine or his?

Whatever; yeah, yours is good.

and he was talking about his.

 

[Selendrile]

荒廃-Kohai
Translation: Devastation

Any takers on this name? I'd like to hear everyone elses ideas.

The first three, because we are kind of the "ancestors" of the original Akatsuki?

Ancestor - Sosen
Heritage - Isan
Breed - Hinshu

 

[ChrisWolf]

Ok Angel your charcater is the great the way it is now I love the claws Idea and as for a name...Nengan means hearts desire in japanese and Kohai means devastation so since our organizations main goal is to achieve peace through devastation, devastation is our hearts desire so how about: "Nengan Kohai" thats our name what do you think?

 

[Nefertari Vivi]

Well not bad name and sorry for troubling everyone xd

 

[Reborn]

Thank you for understanding, and for the clarification. Now, for my final question. Taijutsu without his scyth/Kusarigamajutsu; is he any good at 100% unarmed, chakraless combat?

Thanks.


not a real bio; just for fun. Be as creative as you wish here!

Well I know Kobudo (not my character, myself in real life) and although Kusarigamajutsu and the use of weapons isn't the same as unarmed combat, you need to know the fundimentals of basic blocks, stances, and attacks to use them, so that's where I imply the use of weapons, goes hand in hand with unarmed combat. Seeing as using a scyth is like using a bo essenscially with a big blade at the end that would play into affect, and as he is heavily influenced in his weapons he is also well put in unarmed combat as well...

Short version yeah he's a bamf at 100% unarmed combat, he'll give you a run for your money, but he's not say...Gai, but he could give Gai a hard time.

 

[Reborn]

Ok Angel your charcater is the great the way it is now I love the claws Idea and as for a name...Nengan means hearts desire in japanese and Kohai means devastation so since our organizations main goal is to achieve peace through devastation, devastation is our hearts desire so how about: "Nengan Kohai" thats our name what do you think?

Our Heat's Desire Devestation...either way that sounds alright, my character doesn't think of the future so just the now so

Shinigami: *shrugs* It's cool with me, where's the Kool-Aid

 

[Selendrile]

So after we get enough people, and the recruiting is closed, we need to organize each bio, cause its pretty annoying looking through 5 pages for everyone bios.

 

[ChrisWolf]

wait so I can just be as creative as I want here? not a real bio just something for fun right?

I'll give it a try, if you're still accepting members

Name: Youton Terumi

Nickname: "The Boy with no Home"

Age: 18

Village: Kirigakure
History: I was born in Kirigakure during Yagura's reign as the Fourth Mizukage. During that time everyone who had a Kekkai Genkai were being exterminated. So, I escaped with my mother, a woman who held two Kekkai Genkai. We were able to leave the village safely, but to our shock a Kiri Jounin found us. My mother was able to fight him off, but she told me to run away, and to return to Kiri one day. She said to me things would change by then. I returned a year later, but nothing changed. I looked for her my entire life but I was never able to find my mother, Mei Terumi. When I found out she was Mizukage, I was happy to discover that she was still alive, but I always wondered why she never came to look for me. The only memories I have of her.... are the two Kekkai Genkais she passed down to me. Every time I use it, it reminds me of her. One day I'll return to Kirigakure to see her and hopefully she will remember who I am.

Abilities: I posses the Kekkai Genkais of my mother (Lava Release and Boil Release). I possess an enormous amount of chakra. Using my Lava Release (which has it's own unique color that color is blue) I can create a massive continuous river of water amongst other things. With my Boil Release I can create a large mist or compact it into a sphere to shoot at my opponents while affecting only them.

Note: I possess a somewhat strategic mind, though my intellect is far from that of a genious.

Goal: My goal is to see her at least one more time and to show her that I am still alive.

Yes be as creative as you want and you can think of totally original ideas example: dragon summoning and a dragon sage mode.

and Hebi terumi I love your character that is great the only thing is this is taking place 100's of years after naruto shippuden so its kind of hard to convey your mom being the mizukage unless you write a way to explain it here is my proposal:

One day you were following a lead that you that your mother was in that snow place that had all the ice using ninja in that one naruto movie I don't remember what its called but anyway you got into a battle with an ice shinobi and ended up getting frozen for the next hundred an somehting years, and my character Salem found you frozen and freed you and promised you I would help you re-unite with your mother even though its been centuries so your goal to be with her is the same but you have a clear reason for joining my organization.

 

[Nefertari Vivi]

Lol create a social group forum and everyone should post their bio in the thread in the group

 

[Reborn]

Lol create a social group forum and everyone should post their bio in the thread in the group

There will be one eventually we have to get everything preped first.

 

[~Hebi Terumi~]

Yes be as creative as you want and you can think of totally original ideas example: dragon summoning and a dragon sage mode.

and Hebi terumi I love your character that is great the only thing is this is taking place 100's of years after naruto shippuden so its kind of hard to convey your mom being the mizukage unless you write a way to explain it here is my proposal:

One day you were following a lead that you that your mother was in that snow place that had all the ice using ninja in that one naruto movie I don't remember what its called but anyway you got into a battle with an ice shinobi and ended up getting frozen for the next hundred an somehting years, and my character Salem found you frozen and freed you and promised you I would help you re-unite with your mother even though its been centuries so your goal to be with her is the same but you have a clear reason for joining my organization.

Thanks And I'll edit it I forgot that it's 100 years after xd.

And thanks for giving me that idea it sounds great