Continuing my Fire Training - Sasora

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Thank you for taking the time to do it :)

My previous thread for training is here

*bows*

I hope we have fun.
My pleasure. :) So every sensei has a teaching method they prefer. I've created an original one that is listed below with the criteria you should complete for every technique..

Selendrile's Training Method

1. Explain yourself performing the technique in a well detailed description. Necessary hand seals, nature and shape manipulation should be included as well.
2. List advantages and disadvantages of the technique.
3. I will post a counter to each technique you learn. Depending on what I post, tell me if it is a good or bad counter, and the reasons why. Disregard ranking for this, just focus on the properties and characteristics of each technique.
4. Rate the technique's speed of use, and why you rated it so:
1. Fast
2. Medium
3. Slow​

Complete my template for the last technique you learned.
 

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Understood sensei.

The last technique is ( Katon: Kitsunebi ) - Fire Release: Fire Whisp

I begin to gather up chakra in my mouth, as I take a deep breathe in. I the look forwards and compress and compact the chakra my mouth. I purse open my lips slightly, forming a small ring, and expel the chakra in a tight ball, which ignites upon hitting the wind from friction. A bright ball of fire is launched from my mouth up and outwards. Being a long range technique gives you the ability to hit targets at long range.

The disadvantages of this technique, is that it isnt very large. It is a small ball of fire, which can be easily avoided. It is also very weak, because of its small size.being long range as well can be a weakness as it gives time for the opponent or react and counter effectively.

I would rate this technique as Fast, as it doesnt require handseals, is spat from the mouth, and can be easily manipulated.

The advantages of this technique, is that it is a small fast and projectile technique. Because it doesnt require handseals or channeling a large amount of chakra it can be quickly used, and in close quarters. Its a projectile technique so doesnt require hand to hand combat either, freeing up your hands.
 

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Understood sensei.

The last technique is ( Katon: Kitsunebi ) - Fire Release: Fire Whisp

I begin to gather up chakra in my mouth, as I take a deep breathe in. I the look forwards and compress and compact the chakra my mouth. I purse open my lips slightly, forming a small ring, and expel the chakra in a tight ball, which ignites upon hitting the wind from friction. A bright ball of fire is launched from my mouth up and outwards. Being a long range technique gives you the ability to hit targets at long range.

The disadvantages of this technique, is that it isnt very large. It is a small ball of fire, which can be easily avoided. It is also very weak, because of its small size.being long range as well can be a weakness as it gives time for the opponent or react and counter effectively.

I would rate this technique as Fast, as it doesnt require handseals, is spat from the mouth, and can be easily manipulated.

The advantages of this technique, is that it is a small fast and projectile technique. Because it doesnt require handseals or channeling a large amount of chakra it can be quickly used, and in close quarters. Its a projectile technique so doesnt require hand to hand combat either, freeing up your hands.
@Red: The process of giving your chakra certain characteristics in order to change it into a certain elemental nature. Do you know what that term is called?
 

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I believe it is Nature tranfsormation?
My bad, I think I may have misunderstood how that technique worked, in terms of the activation.

Instead is it ment to be fire transformation within the mouth?
 

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I believe it is Nature tranfsormation?
My bad, I think I may have misunderstood how that technique worked, in terms of the activation.

Instead is it ment to be fire transformation within the mouth?
You turn your chakra into fire once it is released from your mouth, not within. So as you release it, turn it into fire. Just redo your description real quick for me, using the nature transformation/manipulation term within it.
 

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I begin to gather up chakra in my mouth, as I take a deep breathe in. I the look forwards and compress and compact the chakra my mouth. I purse open my lips slightly, forming a small ring, and expel the chakra in a tight ball. As I expel it from my mouth, I then transform it to fire nature chakra, to the chakra ball ignites into a small bright ball of fire. The bright ball of fire is launched from my mouth up and outwards. Being a long range technique gives you the ability to hit targets at long range.
 

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I begin to gather up chakra in my mouth, as I take a deep breathe in. I the look forwards and compress and compact the chakra my mouth. I purse open my lips slightly, forming a small ring, and expel the chakra in a tight ball. As I expel it from my mouth, I then transform it to fire nature chakra, to the chakra ball ignites into a small bright ball of fire. The bright ball of fire is launched from my mouth up and outwards. Being a long range technique gives you the ability to hit targets at long range.
@Red: I want you to actually use the term, "nature transformation." Try it again.

Example: "I transform my chakra into fire chakra upon release through nature transformation.."
 

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Ohhhhh *sheepish look* My bad, thank you I understand now!

I begin to gather up chakra once more in my mouth, as I take a deep breathe in. I the look forwards and compress and compact the chakra my mouth. I purse open my lips slightly, forming a small ring, and expel the chakra in a tight ball. As I expel it from my mouth, I then with using nature transformation I transform it to fire nature chakra, to the chakra ball ignites into a small bright ball of fire. The bright ball of fire is launched from my mouth up and outwards. Being a long range technique gives you the ability to hit targets at long range.
 

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Ohhhhh *sheepish look* My bad, thank you I understand now!

I begin to gather up chakra once more in my mouth, as I take a deep breathe in. I the look forwards and compress and compact the chakra my mouth. I purse open my lips slightly, forming a small ring, and expel the chakra in a tight ball. As I expel it from my mouth, I then with using nature transformation I transform it to fire nature chakra, to the chakra ball ignites into a small bright ball of fire. The bright ball of fire is launched from my mouth up and outwards. Being a long range technique gives you the ability to hit targets at long range.
Much better. So, C-rank fire is completed. Now, perform a 3 move combination attack using 2 fire techniques you have learned, and a third technique of your choice. We are mid-range.
 

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Understood.

*I first begin to gather chakra up in my mouth, as I make a Tiger seal with my hands. Then I compact my chakra, and then expell it from my mouth, and transform it to fire with nature transformation. The when the fire if out of my mouth, I use nature transformation to form two rings that fly up over our heads, and then proceed to fly down to you.

Next I then again gather up chakra into my mouth and compressing it with more chakra. I then bring my hands together, making six seals, Rat → Tiger → Dog → Ox → Rabbit → Tiger. From my mouth I spit forth covering a wide wide range of chakra, igniting them with nature transformation to fire nature one after the other.

To finish I begin to Channel chakra into my hand and by using nature transformation I begin to charge it with electricity as it begins to crackle and spark. I then proceed to launch a lightning chakra attack, by forming it into a ball with shape transformation towards you.

( Katon: Hibashiri ) - Fire Release: Running Fire
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: After performing the Tiger hand seal by utilizing their fire chakra, the user will create a stream of fire that can be manipulated into several forms (rings of fire that runs on the ground or a circle of fire flying through the air) before striking the target. It can also be used in combination with a suitable wind technique to release a massive inferno.

( Katon: Hōsenka no Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Phoenix Sage Fire Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user first performs six hand seals Rat → Tiger → Dog → Ox → Rabbit → Tiger and they create a volley of small fireballs, which are sent flying in an unpredictable manner assaulting the enemy. In addition, the flames are controlled one by one with chakra, so avoiding them all is extremely difficult. Shuriken can also be concealed within the flames, creating an unexpected secondary surprise attack. Like the flames, the shuriken can be controlled with chakra. For the most part, however, this technique is used as a distraction.

(Raiton: Raikyu) - Lightning Release: Lightning Ball
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: By gathering chakra in their hands, the user can create a ball of electrical energy and launch it at the enemy.
 

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Understood.

*I first begin to gather chakra up in my mouth, as I make a Tiger seal with my hands. Then I compact my chakra, and then expell it from my mouth, and transform it to fire with nature transformation. The when the fire if out of my mouth, I use nature transformation to form two rings that fly up over our heads, and then proceed to fly down to you.

Next I then again gather up chakra into my mouth and compressing it with more chakra. I then bring my hands together, making six seals, Rat → Tiger → Dog → Ox → Rabbit → Tiger. From my mouth I spit forth covering a wide wide range of chakra, igniting them with nature transformation to fire nature one after the other.

To finish I begin to Channel chakra into my hand and by using nature transformation I begin to charge it with electricity as it begins to crackle and spark. I then proceed to launch a lightning chakra attack, by forming it into a ball with shape transformation towards you.

( Katon: Hibashiri ) - Fire Release: Running Fire
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: After performing the Tiger hand seal by utilizing their fire chakra, the user will create a stream of fire that can be manipulated into several forms (rings of fire that runs on the ground or a circle of fire flying through the air) before striking the target. It can also be used in combination with a suitable wind technique to release a massive inferno.

( Katon: Hōsenka no Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Phoenix Sage Fire Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user first performs six hand seals Rat → Tiger → Dog → Ox → Rabbit → Tiger and they create a volley of small fireballs, which are sent flying in an unpredictable manner assaulting the enemy. In addition, the flames are controlled one by one with chakra, so avoiding them all is extremely difficult. Shuriken can also be concealed within the flames, creating an unexpected secondary surprise attack. Like the flames, the shuriken can be controlled with chakra. For the most part, however, this technique is used as a distraction.

(Raiton: Raikyu) - Lightning Release: Lightning Ball
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: By gathering chakra in their hands, the user can create a ball of electrical energy and launch it at the enemy.
Your second technique does not reach me because of its range. o_o
 

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*I first begin to gather chakra up in my mouth, as I make a Tiger seal with my hands. Then I compact my chakra, and then expell it from my mouth, and transform it to fire with nature transformation. The when the fire if out of my mouth, I use nature transformation to form two rings that fly up over our heads, and then proceed to fly down to you.

Then I again gather up chakra into my mouth and compressing it with more chakra. I then spit forth the chakra, and using nature transformation change it to fire chakra, A thick stream of fire. The fire launches over towards your and then begins to wrap around your waist pinning your arms to your side, while the two rings of fire come down to you.

To finish I begin to Channel chakra into my hand and by using nature transformation I begin to charge it with electricity as it begins to crackle and spark. I then proceed to launch a lightning chakra attack, by forming it into a ball with shape transformation towards you.

( Katon: Hibashiri ) - Fire Release: Running Fire
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: After performing the Tiger hand seal by utilizing their fire chakra, the user will create a stream of fire that can be manipulated into several forms (rings of fire that runs on the ground or a circle of fire flying through the air) before striking the target. It can also be used in combination with a suitable wind technique to release a massive inferno.

( Katon: Honoo no Saigai Hi Kagayaku no Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Flame of Disaster Fire Shine Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user releases a flame of fire chakra that converges on the opponent wrapping around them and burning them.

(Raiton: Raikyu) - Lightning Release: Lightning Ball
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: By gathering chakra in their hands, the user can create a ball of electrical energy and launch it at the enemy.


god im an idiot some times -__-'
 

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*I first begin to gather chakra up in my mouth, as I make a Tiger seal with my hands. Then I compact my chakra, and then expell it from my mouth, and transform it to fire with nature transformation. The when the fire if out of my mouth, I use nature transformation to form two rings that fly up over our heads, and then proceed to fly down to you.

Then I again gather up chakra into my mouth and compressing it with more chakra. I then spit forth the chakra, and using nature transformation change it to fire chakra, A thick stream of fire. The fire launches over towards your and then begins to wrap around your waist pinning your arms to your side, while the two rings of fire come down to you.

To finish I begin to Channel chakra into my hand and by using nature transformation I begin to charge it with electricity as it begins to crackle and spark. I then proceed to launch a lightning chakra attack, by forming it into a ball with shape transformation towards you.

( Katon: Hibashiri ) - Fire Release: Running Fire
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: After performing the Tiger hand seal by utilizing their fire chakra, the user will create a stream of fire that can be manipulated into several forms (rings of fire that runs on the ground or a circle of fire flying through the air) before striking the target. It can also be used in combination with a suitable wind technique to release a massive inferno.

( Katon: Honoo no Saigai Hi Kagayaku no Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Flame of Disaster Fire Shine Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user releases a flame of fire chakra that converges on the opponent wrapping around them and burning them.

(Raiton: Raikyu) - Lightning Release: Lightning Ball
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: By gathering chakra in their hands, the user can create a ball of electrical energy and launch it at the enemy.


god im an idiot some times -__-'
Better. B-ranks now? :D
 

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Yesssss :D

Ok ive just finished my coffee, expect my brain to keep up now :p
Onwards!
Yay. ~_~ First up..

( Katon: Karyū Endan ) - Fire Release: Fire Dragon Flame Bullet
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user first performs seven handseals Ram → Horse → Snake → Dragon → Rat → Ox → Tiger and kneads chakra into flames, which are then manipulated into a genuine-looking dragon. The flames are divided to launch a left side, right side, and frontal assault in all three directions at once, turning the enemy into ash in a matter of seconds.

Perform the required hand seals, and release flames which you shape into a real-looking dragon. Spread the fire dragon along the ground in front, to the left, and to the right side of my clone. Get em!

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(Suiton: Mizu Kamikiri) - Water Release: Rising Water Slicer
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: After performing the Tiger hand seal the user creates a fast jet of water running through the ground that is powerful enough to slice through solid rock.
 

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Yay. ~_~ First up..

( Katon: Karyū Endan ) - Fire Release: Fire Dragon Flame Bullet
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user first performs seven handseals Ram → Horse → Snake → Dragon → Rat → Ox → Tiger and kneads chakra into flames, which are then manipulated into a genuine-looking dragon. The flames are divided to launch a left side, right side, and frontal assault in all three directions at once, turning the enemy into ash in a matter of seconds.

Perform the required hand seals, and release flames which you shape into a real-looking dragon. Spread the fire dragon along the ground in front, to the left, and to the right side of my clone. Get em!

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(Suiton: Mizu Kamikiri) - Water Release: Rising Water Slicer
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: After performing the Tiger hand seal the user creates a fast jet of water running through the ground that is powerful enough to slice through solid rock.
I begin to gather up chakra into my mouth and begin to weave the seals, Ram → Horse → Snake → Dragon → Rat → Ox → Tiger. I then compact and quickly spit out the chakra from my mouth, using nature transformation as it leaves to turn it into fire nature. Then, controling it, and using shape manipulation, I form my flames into a dragon, that spreads out, taking off onto my left side, followed my my right side, and finally infront of me, along the ground. The flames on the outside, go around your water projectile and proceed towards to burn your clone, as the front fire dragon clashes with the water exploding, creating a lot of steam as the cencel out.

The advantages of this attack is that it is a wide bore attack, with three angles of attack. It can be used in a tight space to cover the entire area making it difficult to avoid.
Another advantage is that because it runs along the ground, it can also clash with earthen techniques as well.

The disadvantages is that because it goes along the ground, it cannot counter attacks from from above.
This technique also seem to be primarily an offensive technique, as it would be hard to use in a defensive state apart from wind attacks, using to power it up.

The technique you used is a good counter if used early enough to catch the first dragon, however isnt the best as it doesnt take care of the side attacks.

I would rate this technique as medium in terms of speed because it only takes seven handseals, which can be slow, but makes up for it by having three points of attack which can counter attack putting the opponent back under pressure.
 

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I begin to gather up chakra into my mouth and begin to weave the seals, Ram → Horse → Snake → Dragon → Rat → Ox → Tiger. I then compact and quickly spit out the chakra from my mouth, using nature transformation as it leaves to turn it into fire nature. Then, controling it, and using shape manipulation, I form my flames into a dragon, that spreads out, taking off onto my left side, followed my my right side, and finally infront of me, along the ground. The flames on the outside, go around your water projectile and proceed towards to burn your clone, as the front fire dragon clashes with the water exploding, creating a lot of steam as the cencel out.

The advantages of this attack is that it is a wide bore attack, with three angles of attack. It can be used in a tight space to cover the entire area making it difficult to avoid.
Another advantage is that because it runs along the ground, it can also clash with earthen techniques as well.

The disadvantages is that because it goes along the ground, it cannot counter attacks from from above.
This technique also seem to be primarily an offensive technique, as it would be hard to use in a defensive state apart from wind attacks, using to power it up.

The technique you used is a good counter if used early enough to catch the first dragon, however isnt the best as it doesnt take care of the side attacks.

I would rate this technique as medium in terms of speed because it only takes seven handseals, which can be slow, but makes up for it by having three points of attack which can counter attack putting the opponent back under pressure.
Great job..

(Katon: Bakuhatsu Enhogan) – Fire Release: Exploding Flame Shots
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user shoots multiple fire shots from their hands that are able to cause fiery explosions on impact with any object. The shots can't set the opponent on fire, though they can cause damage by exploding on him.

Concentrate your fire chakra to your hands, creating hot shots of fire. Then throw the shots from your hands in rapid succession at my clone. When they hit, they should explode on his skin, delivering serious burns.

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(Doton: Domu) – Earth Release: Earth Spear Technique
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A (+10 to physical attacks)
Description: After performing the Snake hand seal the user will channel their chakra throughout their entire body, which then hardens their skin to a steel-like quality. This increases their defensive power to the utmost limits. The user’s skin also becomes much darker, an almost black colour. The destructive power of physical attacks is increased, making this a great, all purpose technique. But this technique when activated leaves the user vulnerable to lightning based techniques.
 

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I nod as I begin to gather chakra in both my hands, and clench my fists. I then move the chakra into the palm of my hands, and hold my chakra. I then change it into fire nature with nature transformation, holding obs of fire, as I compress more chakra into them. I then use shape manipulation transformation to form them in to ball and obs of fire. I the wind my right arm back, as I then quickly fling it forward, aiming for the chest of your clone, and following through with my left arm, using the momentum the launch the left ball. As they connect they explode, instead of igniting, causing smoke around you.

Advantages: This technique is very quick as it doesnt take any handseals and can be quickly launched from the hands.
It also is amid range projectile which can be used safely from a distance.

Disadvantages: This technique doesnt burn, but explodes instead, which mean that it wouldnt do any burn damage or ignite anything.
Also, because it is projectiles and not a stream it has to be repeated.
I also see that it is only a mid range attack, which cannot be done in short range because of the explosion.

Your counter is effective as it protects you from the explosion and minimizing the damage done to you. It would also cover you in smoke and dust covering your movements for a counter

I would rate this technique a fast because it can be done very quickly and is easy to do with no handseals.
 

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I nod as I begin to gather chakra in both my hands, and clench my fists. I then move the chakra into the palm of my hands, and hold my chakra. I then change it into fire nature with nature transformation, holding obs of fire, as I compress more chakra into them. I then use shape manipulation transformation to form them in to ball and obs of fire. I the wind my right arm back, as I then quickly fling it forward, aiming for the chest of your clone, and following through with my left arm, using the momentum the launch the left ball. As they connect they explode, instead of igniting, causing smoke around you.

Advantages: This technique is very quick as it doesnt take any handseals and can be quickly launched from the hands.
It also is amid range projectile which can be used safely from a distance.

Disadvantages: This technique doesnt burn, but explodes instead, which mean that it wouldnt do any burn damage or ignite anything.
Also, because it is projectiles and not a stream it has to be repeated.
I also see that it is only a mid range attack, which cannot be done in short range because of the explosion.

Your counter is effective as it protects you from the explosion and minimizing the damage done to you. It would also cover you in smoke and dust covering your movements for a counter

I would rate this technique a fast because it can be done very quickly and is easy to do with no handseals.
The shots would still have heat, so they could probably ignite explosive tags and the like. The explosion isn't so big that it'll harm you, it's more comparable to a firework, albeit a bit deadlier.

Also for the counter, yes, it'll protect you from the attack. But, you'll still feel the impact of each fireshot against your hardened skin. It'll be like getting hit with a multitude of baseballs. Nothing too serious though.
 
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