[CC] Bartholomew Training- Sherlock

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I thrust my palm towards a nearby tree, which is my target, and in doing so utilize my paws ability to repel the friction that would otherwise hinder motion in the area from where I am to a little beyond where the tree stands. I repel the friction from a wide enough area creating a frictionless region of about 5m width between the tree and myself.In this space I would be able to maneuver almost effortlessly and incredibly fast whiles the same isn't so for an opponent. I then run at blazing speed towards the tree. I reach it in the blink of an eye and jab a chidori I created in motion into its trunk as I reach it.



For questions I don't really have any as I've scouted former trainings and the questions I might've had have already been answered. I understand if can be made to cover a substantial area up to mid range and within reason, and cannot be utilized by opponents in the area. You've also specified the speed, something that will be useful in applying the technique in combat.
 

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Secret Paw Art: Embrace of the Grotesque Martyr - Nykyu Hijutsu: Houyou no Igyou Junkyousha
Rank: C-S Rank
Type: Offense/Defense/Sup
Range: N/A
Chakra: 10-40
Damage: 20-80
Description: The Pinacle of Paw arts that the Bartholomew uses their paw art in a more supplementary and steathly way and at the same time augments their own offensive and defensive capabilities to its maximum. The technique itself which requires the use of a single paw or both paws follows 3 simple principles which dictates is usage offensively, defensively and its supplementary build up. The ability to repel matter as a whole and its inverse(absorb) are as well inbued together into one massive use though they now seem miniscle, they augment the simplest of things and increase their capabilities to the climax.
♦White Priest | Shiro Sou: Having a pure and a subtle state of mind, the White Priest is not aggressive and not able to harm someone so He prefers to stay and recieve/endure attacks. This is thus the defensive variation of the Martyr hands where the user uses his hands to absorb the impact in an inverse repel fashion, however, he is not directly using his paws like "Impacto Daiaru", he will only absorb the impact of a technique, through anything that he touches be it tools, weapons, clothes/attire, solid matter, etc and not the technique itself. Techniques that have no physical impact are immune to this ability. Having placed his paw/paws on the object, he creates a barrier that is fused with and surrounds the object and with this he can use inverse repel which is able to contain force within it. Though the user is not able to infuse himself directly to be able to absorb said force, he is able to use the technique on a clone by placing his paws on him and likewise, his clone can also fortify him. Since the force is not directly absorbed into the user's paws, it can not add up damage to a following paw art jutsu but the absorbed force can be used in conjuction with "Black Priest". In the situation where a clone/body is used as the absorber, it would increase their physical force for a one time usage thus adding the said amount of absorbed damage to their taijutsu, and this stays until they use it once and then its no more, although this does not in any way increase their speed. Apart from Bartholomew legends that can use "White Priest" on an S-Rank level, a bartholomew member with lower rank can only use it up to an A-rank level. If A normanl bartholomew uses it on an A-rank level, he has to wait 2 turns before he can used it again, however, using it for B-rank and below only requires a one turn wait. If a Legend uses this on an S-rank level, He has to wait 2 turns before reuse, however, using it on A-ranks requires one turn wait while B-ranks and below requires no wait.
♦Black Priest | Kuroi Sou: The Black Priest is known for his tyranny, an aggressive one coupled with his unrelenting hunger and thirst for blood. He is often found in horrific scene as he delights in his own evil demeanour basking in the gore of his enemy be it weak or strong. Thus this is the offensive variant where the user instead of using the inverse repel ability, focuses mainly on fortifying something using his repel ability. By simply touching something with his paws, the user is able to increase the lethality of the simplest of tools to the maximum by adding physical momentum and power to them by creating a repelling "aura" around them. The power of it is related to the chakra spent (varying from 20 to 80 damage points added by repelling effect). This can be used in conjuction with "White Priest" where the user after absorbing an attack with a said tool, he can then use the tool to attack with the absorbed damage however this also requires the user to use "Black Priest" spending a move but without spending chakra. Apart from Bartholomew legends that can use this on an S-Rank level, a bartholomew member with lower rank can only use it up to an A-rank level. If A normanl bartholomew uses it on an A-rank level, he has to wait 2 turns before he can used it again, however, using it for B-rank and below only requires a one turn wait. If a Legend uses this on an S-rank level, He has to wait 2 turns before reuse, however, using it on A-ranks requires one turn wait while B-ranks and below requires no wait. Once per battle though, legends and above can use this on a forbidden level but this makes them unable to use their paws for 4 turns after. Fortified weapon's power last 3 turns (if not used) or until when used once.
Restrictions and Drawbacks:
† Only a variant can be used per turn for a normal member but a batholomew legend is able to use at most 2 variants in one turn and that's if their individual restriction allows it although this does not apply to tools that combines the ability of the White and Black Priest as one which can be used by normal member but that is all that is to it. However using 2 variants in a turn(apart from the "White and Black Priest Combo") takes a toll on the user thus he can not use any paw art in the next turn.
† Black Priest carries up to S-rank damage(80 Damage Point) for Bartholomew legends and above while it carries up to A-rank damage(60 Damage point) for Normal members.
† A-Rank and above usages can only be done 4 times per battle.
† Can't use Ninjutsu above S-rank the next turn in which any variant is used.


This is quite easy and complex at the same time.
White Priest is the defensive part of it while Black Priest is offensive.
You can use white priest and black priest together. Enough talk. The techniques is well explained.

Now tell me In details everything you understand about the jutsu.
Tell me how you'll use it in battle and possible combinations.
Questions.
 

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Alright. Initially I was a bit unclear about the technique but after reading through Mako's training I think I fully understand it now. First and foremost the White Priest variation is very similar to Impact Dial. The significant difference between the 2 is that with this one the ability to stop a force by absorbing its momentum is propagated indirectly through a suitable object other than the user's palm. Meaning I could touch a pillow and make it strong enough to literally cushion a powerful kick.

The Black Priest variation is for fortification of an object, adding an additional strength to whatever it is used on. When used in conjunction with White Priest it serves the same function as Impact Dial just that with this technique gears more towards harnessing the force of an attack into an object or person and/or strengthening them.

Possible combinations:
I foresee using white priest a lot through kenjutsu. I imagine using it when I'm about to clash swords with someone. I presume the technique would absorb the force of my opponent's slash as soon as it makes contact with my sword unbeknownst to my opponent. This would mean that in the moment of contact only my sword would have any force while my opponent's sword would be equivalent to a sword that has just been held up with no momentum, allowing me to slash right through it(as in knock it backwards since it can't stand the force of my slash) and cut the foe. If my second assumption true then this would be a perfect scenario to use the white and black combo as well.

Scenario 2: I make a stone dragon and ride on its head in a nosedive towards an opponent. Opponent launches a defensive attack aimed at the dragon. In this case I'd use one of either variations, depending on the element the opponent uses, to simply nullify his attempt at destroying my creature leaving him with less time to conjure another defense before my creature strikes.

I don't really have questions; I'm just gonna state a few things I think are valid so you correct my if I'm wrong.
1When you use the White and Black Priest Combo the damage is essentially doubled. As in the damage absorbed is added to the black priest damage.
2-Since the White and Black Priest Combo requires spending chakra only once, it stands to reason that the combo fundamentally requires only one activation(as in both are activated when the move is performed but the effects occur consecutively) despite taking two move slots.

If the above assumptions are accurate, then no questions;on to the next one
 

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You are correct on both grounds.

-The white Priest absorbs impact and like impact dial, the impact damage can be send back using the object. Now when you add black priest, you are essentially fortifying it more.

-Yes again. However since the stored force of the white priest takes a few turn to end when not used, you can just activate black priest in another turn to fortify the white priest though you will need to post the technique once more. It does count as a move but it does not count as another usage as it a fusion of white and black priest.

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Welcome to the final phase of your training.

Okay, getting to the second part of the trainwreck technique. I want you to analyse it for me and tell me how you'll execute it in battle

Paw Arts: Train Wreck (Nykyujutsu: Tore-n Keigei)
Rank: S
Type: supplementary
Range: short-mig-long
Chakra: 40 (short rang movement=+10 mid range=+20 long range=+40)
Damage: n/a
Description: This is a very complex jutsu the bartholomew clan members use, The jutsu itself has two variates. The first is simpler but harder to use, so hard in fact that only bartholomew clan legends can perform it. The user will place his paw on his own body, using the power of the paws he will literally repel his own body to a desired location. Because of the immense speed of the repelling, it appears that the user is literally teleporting to a desired location. However this is not the case, the user is actually repelling himself, thus moving(not actually walking like the second variate of the jutsu) at extremely fast speeds to the desired location. Almost as fast(but not quite as fast) as madara's teleportation. The second variate of the jutsu is more complex but easier to use, The user will use the powers of the paws and repel the friction in the air. They then simply run without friction. Despite their weight most Bartholomew clan members are surprisingly fast, so if they were to run without friction, in fact if anyone were to run without friction their speeds would be insanely fast.
~both variates of the technique can only be used 2 times per battle (meaning overall 4 times). 2 for the near-teleportation and 2 for running without friction)
~The first variate of the technique can only be used by bartholomew legends
~only one paw arts jutsu in the same turn
~after usage the user must wait 3 turns before he can use it again
~running without friction can only be used in mid range as it requires immense concentration
~no S ranks in the following turn
 

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Ok so this application seems easy enough. We place a paw on our body and repel ourselves to a location. Basically we push our bodies from point A to point B. Kinda reminds me of how quicksilver broke magneto out of prison in that one x-men movie. He held magneto and ran with him literally pushing him across space. We aren't running ourselves, but actually being carried across the distance by the technique we used. Also the technique is pretty fast as it has been likened to teleporatation jutsu. Tbh I've always wanted to use this lol. Especially as a counter to moves that appear from my sides(most earth jutsus). Since the technique only moves the person in a straight line, I guess it shouldn't be used in a direction that is obstructed.

I've been thinking about this for a while now. Suppose I'm standing mid range from an enemy and I use this in the opponent's direction but up to long range. Would I smash right into him and carry him to long range? I realize I'd have to brace myself in some way but let's say I do that. Is it allowed?I feel the name itself-train wreck- is indicative of such a stunt but I want to be sure.
 

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Hmmm, I never thought of that though its possible but you have to take some things into consideration.

The moment you touch the target, your speed decreases due to the added weight as the paw power only applies to you and not the extra luggage. If only you are holding the person before you use this technique, then you are able to transport with him. Also, it can work with decreased speed but the moment you touch the opponent, he'll know and may use nagashi if not worse.
 

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Yeah. I was thinking about using it while holding a kunai slightly in front that way as I smash into him the kunai would pierce into him first. It'd be like how Sasuke blitzed to 'hug' naruto in an attempt to stab him in shippuden ep 48. Like the image but with a lot more stabbing and a lot less interception
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I figure that way it's be a good defense to offense tactic
 

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That would be a very nice combo.

Paw Arts: Pulsus Coration (Nykyujutsu: Chiyu Oshi)
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary/attack
Range: Short-long (If the bubble is directed at the opponent)
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: Bartholomew legends will put their hand on themselves or their kinsmen and using the power of their KG, they "push" any pain and exhaustion that they have endured through the entire battle. Once done, a huge red air bubble in the shape of a paw appears behind the person, containing all the pain and exhaustion extracted, which can be then redirected to a new person. If the bubble happens to burst without touching anyone (if hit with a strong enough power [S rank and above]) the bubble explodes violently and the damage inside the bubble will cause a catastrophic shockwave that can level a large area.
~This jutsu can only be done 1 time per battle, and the chakra strain will only allow the user to perform 2 jutsus in the next turn.
~If the user pleases he can direct the bubble at anything, whether it be the opponent or even a simple tree, once the bubble comes in contact with it, depending on the bubbles size, it will explode.
~Can only be used after the two turns have passed.
~No Paw jutsu for the next 2 turns
Note: Pulsus Coration means Healing Push, in Latin.


The above. So you are able to deprive yourself of pain and exhaustion. please cleanly analyse it for me and tell me the idea behind it, how its possible and its relation to our power
 

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A rather helpful technique in the absence of medical techniques. In the case of injury or fatigue, we are able to expel said conditions from our bodies using Google our paws. How is see it, a bubble is created to pass through our physical body like a sieve and strains out the said detrimental physical conditions leaving us refreshed. Additionally, the paws containing the extracted "damage " can be directed at someone else. This is very advantageous since just this single move then serves as a sup as well as an attack.

I think the idea behind is as follows: due to our ability to repel technically anything, we are able to create a bubble that functionally only repels or pushes pain and fatigue. I guess the technique can be viewed as a specialized application of the basic abilities we have.

Am I right to assume the bubble create moves as fast as pressure cannon?

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Yes and if you want, you can even direct the bubble to move in any direction you want.

Paw arts: Ursus Shock (Nykyujutsu: Urususu Shokku)
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 50
Damage: 100
Description: Bartholomew Legends gather air with their palms and compress it into a giant bubble which resembles a paw-print. Once the bubble is compact enough to fit within their hands, they releases the compressed air and sends it toward his opponent. The air quickly decompresses, causing a massive explosion in the form of a bear paw. This technique has the power to destroy entire islands near instantly. However the drawback is that it takes a considerable amount of time to compress the air and the user must remain completely still, But once the technique is launched it is nearly unavoidable, as the size and speed of the explosion is great, if the opponent isn't able to block it during the Compression time, he/she has only few instants to preform a jutsu to counter it. Nevertheless, the jutsu itself is basically a chakra explosion.
~Takes 1 turn to compress the air
~Once the user sends out the bubble, it travels to the opponent extremely fast. Furthermore it has been compressed so much that it is invisible to the naked eye(due to it being so small). Any doujutsu can easily see it though. And chakra sensor.
~While the user is compressing the air he must remain completely still
~does 40 damage to the user as it requires extreme concentration.
~Only one other paw jutsu for the rest of the battle
~Only 2 jutsu in the following turn
~No more forbidden rank techniques for the rest of the battle

The final technique you need to learn. You basically use a whole turn to compress a large bubble of pressure into a tiny bubble, then you release it at incredible speed towards the target in the second turn.

Tell me the what you think about it, how you'll be able to pull it off and questions.


also this needs updating.
 

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Our most powerful technique. But the restrictions are too much lol. I feel it's a bit easy to counter though, if the person can sense it. Also I agree it needs massive updates cuz the "the jutsu itself is basically a chakra explosion" part kinda makes it seem weaker according to elemental S/W when I'm sure this wasn't what was in mind when it was made. Tbh there's a ton of other stuff in the description that makes using it seem like a waste. Anyways, I think the only time I'd use this is if a clone was present.

Question, can a clone use it? If yes then I have a sick combo in mind using repel xD
 

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Yes a CLone can use it.

Yea there was a mistake here, its not chakra explosion but explosion of compressed air which does not contain chakra at all thus does not have elemental weakness. The beauty there also is that its fast and convers a very wide area like that large scale shinra tensei.
 
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