Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The Aurora brothers are warrior candidates and as their name suggests are siblings. They are smaller than the normal ocelot warriors (hardly reach an average dog’s size) and they are also weaker than them in raw strength. However due to their smaller size and the hard training they get, they can move way faster than any other ocelot (like Lee without weights). They also fined their hunting abilities and become extremely good at scouting and tracking. There are 2 of them in total: Setsuna and Havoc and both of them share the same abilities as well as their affinity to use lightning jutsus.
- can only be summoned 1 time and for 5 turns per battle
- can use lightning up to B-rank that do no require hand seals/body gestures or weapons to perform.
- can only be summoned if signed the Ocelot contract
contract ->
X-Approved-X Added the bolded part. It counts as 2 of the total 4 summons you can have in a battle.
Decreased their number to 2 and raised their speed. Btw that expression you laughed at is exactly what Izuna added to my boss summoning... <_<
Type: Attack / Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid (nearby the user)
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: After a short sequence of 3 hand seals the user creates a human body from wind which has similar characteristics (shape) as a real person. However being made from only wind it can't be hit by average physical attacks. It's attack pattern is similar to a real human being when he is using free form taijutsu moves, but the actual attack is a concentrated wind blast generated upon contact. These attacks doesn't have any cutting ability, but instead blunt force which makes it more similar to a human being, but with increased strength. Any attack has the potential to send the opponent flying.
- can only be used 5 times per battle
- can only last 1 turn
- can only be taught by Frozenstein
X-Approved-X Changed the range, you dont form it long range behind the opponent.
Rewrote almost the whole description, hope it makes more sense now.
Blade of Resentment, Archenemy
Type: Attack/Defense/Supplementary (Weapon)
Rank: S-rank
Range: Short (+ Mid)
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: Archenemy is a unique katana made for special order. It is extremely light and resistant, way more than any ordinary sword. It also has a hidden device, a sort of "launcher", which allows the user to shoot the blade out from the hilt and attack the enemy in mid range. The blade also has an extremely resistant wire on it's end (on the part which is inside the hilt), what still connects it with the hilt. Inside the hilt has a secret reel and a device what allows the user to pull back the blade and re-attach it or to pull the user toward the blade with high speed, if it's stabbed inside an object or solid area. This "launcher" and the reeling device is similar to Sasori's, but much smaller.
Archenemy is also able to hold several chakra natures just like Asuma's special blades, but especially fire and lightning. When fire chakra is channeled into the blade, it will be coated with fire and leaves a flame trail when swinging, making the attacks more dangerous. When lightning chakra is channeled into the blade, it can emit bolts of lightning and/or small static balls, up to short range.
- the blade can only be shooted up to mid range and really quiet when launched
- both the flame coat and the lightning strikes count as 1 of the 3 moves, and considered as an A-rank jutsu
- the wire can withstand attacks even in a strained state, but only S-rank or lower ones
X-Approved-X The weapons blade extends to Mid range while the fire and the bolts are short, wouldn't you be able to increase their reach my launching the blade? Its fine however just make better descriptions.
Note: This better be your first weapon, im in a rush i couldn't bother to look, if you do have a existing weapon youre dropping link it to a mod.
(Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Aurora Douhou) – Summoning Technique: Aurora Brothers(Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Aurora Douhou) – Summoning Technique: Aurora Brothers
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The Aurora brothers are warrior candidates and as their name suggests are siblings. They are smaller than the normal ocelot warriors (hardly reach an average dog’s size) and they are also weaker than them in raw strength. However due to their smaller size and the hard training they get, they can move way faster than any other ocelot (like Lee with weights). They also fined their hunting abilities and become extremely good at scouting and tracking. There are 6 of them in total: Narumi, Gin, Ren, Setsuna, Rei, Havoc and all of them share the same abilities as well as their affinity to use lightning jutsus.
- can only be summoned 1 time and for 5 turns per battle
- can use lightning up to B-rank
- can only be summoned if there’s an existing contract
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±± Declined ±± 6 summons with one tech? Can only be summoned if there is an existing contract? Duh... I would understand "User needs to have signed the XX contract" but this expression? Lol..
contract ->
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Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The Aurora brothers are warrior candidates and as their name suggests are siblings. They are smaller than the normal ocelot warriors (hardly reach an average dog’s size) and they are also weaker than them in raw strength. However due to their smaller size and the hard training they get, they can move way faster than any other ocelot (like Lee without weights). They also fined their hunting abilities and become extremely good at scouting and tracking. There are 2 of them in total: Setsuna and Havoc and both of them share the same abilities as well as their affinity to use lightning jutsus.
- can only be summoned 1 time and for 5 turns per battle
- can use lightning up to B-rank that do no require hand seals/body gestures or weapons to perform.
- can only be summoned if signed the Ocelot contract
contract ->
You must be registered for see links
X-Approved-X Added the bolded part. It counts as 2 of the total 4 summons you can have in a battle.
Decreased their number to 2 and raised their speed. Btw that expression you laughed at is exactly what Izuna added to my boss summoning... <_<
(Fuuton: Youkai Masurao) - Wind Style: Phantom Warrior(Fuuton: Youkai Masurao) - Wind Style: Phantom Warrior
Type: Attack / Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: After a short sequence of 3 hand seals the user creates a human body from wind which has similar characteristics as a real person. However being made from only wind means it is quite transparent and can't be hit by physical attacks. It's able to attack almost like a real human being with free form taijutsu moves and able to hold simple weapons like kunais, shurikens and swords. Naturally this body can only attack with a single movement or a short sequence of hits before it fades away. However with a 4th hand seal the user could maintain this body and keep attacking, but that requires constant concentration. These attacks doesn't have any cutting ability, but instead blunt force which makes it more similar to a human being as well as giving similar strength.
- can only be used 5 times per battle
- can only be taught by Frozenstein
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±± Declined ±± makes little sense. It lacks tangibility to be attacked but it can attack? How does that work? Besides, the transparency part for me is a pain. It can be misused easily. How long does it last?
Type: Attack / Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid (nearby the user)
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: After a short sequence of 3 hand seals the user creates a human body from wind which has similar characteristics (shape) as a real person. However being made from only wind it can't be hit by average physical attacks. It's attack pattern is similar to a real human being when he is using free form taijutsu moves, but the actual attack is a concentrated wind blast generated upon contact. These attacks doesn't have any cutting ability, but instead blunt force which makes it more similar to a human being, but with increased strength. Any attack has the potential to send the opponent flying.
- can only be used 5 times per battle
- can only last 1 turn
- can only be taught by Frozenstein
X-Approved-X Changed the range, you dont form it long range behind the opponent.
Rewrote almost the whole description, hope it makes more sense now.
Blade of Resentment, Archenemy
Type: Attack/Defense/Supplementary (Weapon)
Rank: S-rank
Range: Short (+ Mid)
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: Archenemy is a unique katana made for special order. It is extremely light and resistant, way more than any ordinary sword. It also has a hidden device, a sort of "launcher", which allows the user to shoot the blade out from the hilt and attack the enemy in mid range. The blade also has an extremely resistant wire on it's end (on the part which is inside the hilt), what still connects it with the hilt. Inside the hilt has a secret reel and a device what allows the user to pull back the blade and re-attach it or to pull the user toward the blade with high speed, if it's stabbed inside an object or solid area. This "launcher" and the reeling device is similar to Sasori's, but much smaller.
Archenemy is also able to hold several chakra natures just like Asuma's special blades, but especially fire and lightning. When fire chakra is channeled into the blade, it will be coated with fire and leaves a flame trail when swinging, making the attacks more dangerous. When lightning chakra is channeled into the blade, it can emit bolts of lightning and/or small static balls, up to short range.
- the blade can only be shooted up to mid range and really quiet when launched
- both the flame coat and the lightning strikes count as 1 of the 3 moves, and considered as an A-rank jutsu
- the wire can withstand attacks even in a strained state, but only S-rank or lower ones
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X-Approved-X The weapons blade extends to Mid range while the fire and the bolts are short, wouldn't you be able to increase their reach my launching the blade? Its fine however just make better descriptions.
Note: This better be your first weapon, im in a rush i couldn't bother to look, if you do have a existing weapon youre dropping link it to a mod.
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