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(Meiton: Kirudesuto)- Dark Release: Hungry Dragon
Type: Offensive/Attack
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Mid-Long Range
Chakra: 30 Chakra
Damage: 60 Damage
Description:
After having user convert the absorbed chakra from the Dark Release: Inhailing Maw from an A or lowered ranked Lightning/Fire technique or S rank and lower raw chakra, then releases a Dragon composed of Dark chakra with help of shape manipulation, from his left hand, the dragon if clashed against a B rank or lower Fire or lightning based technique it will "eat" the technique meaning it absorbs it and will simply grow bigger, faster and stronger meaning it becomes an S rank technique, however the user must keep the dragons tail attached to there left hand, meaning if he stops the chakra channeling the dragon will simply dissapear. It has enough strength to smash an opponent to the ground and break a few bones and whatnot.
- Can only be used 2 times per battle.
- Must wait 3 turns before using again.
- Must be a Dark user.
- Can only be taught by Kurotsuchi..
~Approved.~
(Fuuton: Uindo Kuruma) - Wind Release: Wind Wheel
Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Rank: B rank
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 20 Chakra
Damage: 40 Damage
Description:
The user releases a certain amount of wind through there mouth wich then is rapidly spun around the user and carries the person as inside a wheel. It is highly sharp on the outside, able to cut through solid objects such as C rank and lower earth techniques and slice through human flash with little to no trouble at all. Most comonly used for traveling.
- Can only be used by Kurotsuchi.
~Declined. You made this sound like a mode, so restrict the time you can use this technique move~
Summoning Animal: Dracos
Scroll Owner: Kurotsuchi..
Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
Summoning Boss if existing: To be Created.
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: To be Created.
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-Resubmitting Again
(Meiton: Kirudesuto)- Dark Release: Hungry Dragon
Type: Offensive/Attack
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Mid-Long Range
Chakra: 30 Chakra
Damage: 60 Damage
Description:
The user gathers Dark chakra in both hands and brings them together, he then releases a Dragon composed of Dark chakra with help of shape manipulation, from his left hand, the dragon if clashed against a B rank or lower Fire or lightning based technique it will "eat" the technique meaning it absorbs it and will simply grow bigger, faster and stronger, however the user must keep the dragons tail attached to there hand, meaning if he stops the chakra channeling the dragon will simply dissapear. It has enough strength to smash an opponent to the ground and break a few bones.
- Can only be used 3 times per battle.
- Must wait 1 turns before using again.
- Must be a Dark user.
- Can only be taught by Mihawk.
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Changed it back to A rank and explained how stronger it gets when it absorbs other techniqes.Resubmitting~
With the changes you pointed out, also made it S rank, and changed chakra & damage, aswell as decreased number of useage, and interval before using again.
(Meiton: Kirudesuto)- Dark Release: Hungry Dragon
Type: Offensive/Attack
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Mid-Long Range
Chakra: 40 Chakra
Damage: 80 Damage
Description:
After having user convert the absorbed chakra from the Dark Release: Inhailing Maw from an A or lowered ranked Lightning/Fire technique or S rank and lower raw chakra , then releases a Dragon composed of Dark chakra with help of shape manipulation, from his left hand, the dragon if clashed against a B rank or lower Fire or lightning based technique it will "eat" the technique meaning it absorbs it and will simply grow bigger, faster and stronger, however the user must keep the dragons tail attached to there left hand, meaning if he stops the chakra channeling the dragon will simply dissapear. It has enough strength to smash an opponent to the ground and break a few bones and whatnot.
- Can only be used 2 times per battle.
- Must wait 3 turns before using again.
- Must be a Dark user.
- Can only be taught by Kurotsuchi..
-Declined-
Keep it as it was, an A-rank. Also define how stronger the dragon gets when it absorbs other techniques.
(Meiton: Kirudesuto)- Dark Release: Hungry Dragon
Type: Offensive/Attack
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Mid-Long Range
Chakra: 30 Chakra
Damage: 60 Damage
Description:
After having user convert the absorbed chakra from the Dark Release: Inhailing Maw from an A or lowered ranked Lightning/Fire technique or S rank and lower raw chakra, then releases a Dragon composed of Dark chakra with help of shape manipulation, from his left hand, the dragon if clashed against a B rank or lower Fire or lightning based technique it will "eat" the technique meaning it absorbs it and will simply grow bigger, faster and stronger meaning it becomes an S rank technique, however the user must keep the dragons tail attached to there left hand, meaning if he stops the chakra channeling the dragon will simply dissapear. It has enough strength to smash an opponent to the ground and break a few bones and whatnot.
- Can only be used 2 times per battle.
- Must wait 3 turns before using again.
- Must be a Dark user.
- Can only be taught by Kurotsuchi..
~Approved.~
(Fuuton: Uindo Kuruma) - Wind Release: Wind Wheel
Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Rank: B rank
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 20 Chakra
Damage: 40 Damage
Description:
The user releases a certain amount of wind through there mouth wich then is rapidly spun around the user and carries the person as inside a wheel. It is highly sharp on the outside, able to cut through solid objects such as C rank and lower earth techniques and slice through human flash with little to no trouble at all. Most comonly used for traveling.
- Can only be used by Kurotsuchi.
~Declined. You made this sound like a mode, so restrict the time you can use this technique move~
Summoning Animal: Dracos
Scroll Owner: Kurotsuchi..
Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
Summoning Boss if existing: To be Created.
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: To be Created.
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