Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±
(Mokuton/Fuuton: Kuikkusukōpu-shin!)- Wood/Wind Release: Quickscope Him!
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user grows a bullet shaped piece of wood the length and width of his index finger from his anywhere on his body and gathers wind chakra into his mouth. He then holds the wood up to his mouth and exhales S rank wind directly onto the wood blasting it at high speeds towards an opponent. The wood can be fired with pinpoint accuracy and has rifling on it in order to create spin and increase its velocity.
-Can only be tracked by 2t sharingan
-Can only be used 3 times per battle
- No S rank wind the turn this was used or the next one
-Can only be taught by Goku2000
Note: If you think 2t sharingan is too much then feel free to change it to 1T
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±± Declined ±± Don't resubmit. Something that small is neither an S-Rank nor can it be approved if it can only be blocked by a certain small number of users, in this case sharingan ones.
]Ikaku suru yōna nekkuresu: Menacing Necklace
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40 (to activate) 15 (every turn)
Damage: N/A
Description:
This necklace once belonged to an evil Emperor who ruled over his subjects with his power and intimadated his foes with his menacing appearance this necklace gave him. The necklace has a triangular shaped golden "main" piece with a blue diamond shaped pendant in the middle of it with a golden chain, the main piece spans the users chest as well. When the user puts this necklace on it immediately begins to drain some of their chakra and when activated gives them an "extended transformation" similar to Tsunades the chakra it drains fuels this transformation so that the user is able to take some damage before the transformation wears off, however if the user is heavily damaged then the transformation wears off. The user gains golden spikey hair, their muscles grow much larger, their pupils turn white, and they grow a foot taller. The necklace is also able to channel 4 elemental chakras and can channel them into the users hands and feet at will giving them increased abilities depending on which one is channeled.
Fire: The user's hands or feet get coated in fire and when an opponent is punched with this affinity channeled they recieve 3rd degree burns in the place they were punched
Wind: The user can move very quickly when this affinity is channeled to the point where the user looks like a blur when they move and their fists moves likewise in the same speed. However a dojutsu user can see the user move like they normally would.
Earth: The users punches and kicks do extra damage to the point where if an oponent is touched with this channeled that the punch or kick can break many bones at once and even can punch through b rank and below earth structures.
Lightning: The user can paralyze their opponent with a single punch or kick when this affinity is channeled and makes contact with them
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- The user can only channel one affinity per turn
-The user can only channel the affinities 3 turns before needing a 2 turn cooldown using it again
-Can only be used by Goku2000 and those he allows
-Activation of necklace counts as 1 of the 3 moves per turn
NOTE TO CHECKER if you feel it's too many abilities then delete the whole fire chakra part
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±± Declined ±± Don't resubmit.
Fuuton:Takoberu de supagetti yoru (Wind Release: Spaghetti Night at Taco Bell)
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user makes a single handseal and focuses small pockets of wind chakra into the earth all around the opponent. They then release the wind chakra upwards towards the opponent, making a shower of small sharp stones hit the opponent and damage him. The stones are sharpened by the wind and move fast so that they cause 1 inch stab like wounds in the places they impact. The shower continues as long as the user is making the handseal they used to activate the jutsu.
-Can only be used 4 times per battle
- Can only be taught by Goku2000
-can only be used once per turn
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±± Declined ±± Remove the part i colored and make it clear that the speed is still quite trackable.
(Mokuton/Fuuton: Kuikkusukōpu-shin!)- Wood/Wind Release: Quickscope Him!
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user grows a bullet shaped piece of wood the length and width of his index finger from his anywhere on his body and gathers wind chakra into his mouth. He then holds the wood up to his mouth and exhales S rank wind directly onto the wood blasting it at high speeds towards an opponent. The wood can be fired with pinpoint accuracy and has rifling on it in order to create spin and increase its velocity.
-Can only be tracked by 2t sharingan
-Can only be used 3 times per battle
- No S rank wind the turn this was used or the next one
-Can only be taught by Goku2000
Note: If you think 2t sharingan is too much then feel free to change it to 1T
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±± Declined ±± Don't resubmit. Something that small is neither an S-Rank nor can it be approved if it can only be blocked by a certain small number of users, in this case sharingan ones.
Ikaku suru yōna nekkuresu: Menacing Necklace
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40 (to activate) 15 (every turn)
Damage: N/A
Description:
This necklace once belonged to an evil Emperor who ruled over his subjects with his power and intimadated his foes with his menacing appearance this necklace gave him. The necklace has a triangular shaped golden "main" piece with a blue diamond shaped pendant in the middle of it with a golden chain, the main piece spans the users chest as well. When the user puts this necklace on it immediately begins to drain some of their chakra and when activated gives them an "extended transformation" similar to Tsunades the chakra it drains fuels this transformation so that the user is able to take some damage before the transformation wears off, however if the user is heavily damaged then the transformation wears off. The user gains golden spikey hair, their muscles grow much larger, their pupils turn white, and they grow a foot taller. This menacing appearance intimidates foes and also releases an A rank compressed omnidirectional chakra blast that goes into short range upon the activation of this necklace. If the user wants to deactivate the necklace it can be reactivated again in 3 turns. It stores the user chakra into the necklace at all times to use for more attacks. When the necklace is activated it coats the users fist and feet in the chakra it has stored giving him a +10 boost in all taijutsu attacks as well as giving a thin chakra layer around his body which protects him from minor injuries like falling debris and being wounded from kunai and shuriken
-Actvating necklace counts as 1 move in the users turn
Note: to whoever checks this feel free to take out the +10 or anything you like i really just wanted the transformation but i added in the other stuff to actually make it a weapon
~ Declined, many, many similar techniques exist ~
]Ikaku suru yōna nekkuresu: Menacing Necklace
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40 (to activate) 15 (every turn)
Damage: N/A
Description:
This necklace once belonged to an evil Emperor who ruled over his subjects with his power and intimadated his foes with his menacing appearance this necklace gave him. The necklace has a triangular shaped golden "main" piece with a blue diamond shaped pendant in the middle of it with a golden chain, the main piece spans the users chest as well. When the user puts this necklace on it immediately begins to drain some of their chakra and when activated gives them an "extended transformation" similar to Tsunades the chakra it drains fuels this transformation so that the user is able to take some damage before the transformation wears off, however if the user is heavily damaged then the transformation wears off. The user gains golden spikey hair, their muscles grow much larger, their pupils turn white, and they grow a foot taller. The necklace is also able to channel 4 elemental chakras and can channel them into the users hands and feet at will giving them increased abilities depending on which one is channeled.
Fire: The user's hands or feet get coated in fire and when an opponent is punched with this affinity channeled they recieve 3rd degree burns in the place they were punched
Wind: The user can move very quickly when this affinity is channeled to the point where the user looks like a blur when they move and their fists moves likewise in the same speed. However a dojutsu user can see the user move like they normally would.
Earth: The users punches and kicks do extra damage to the point where if an oponent is touched with this channeled that the punch or kick can break many bones at once and even can punch through b rank and below earth structures.
Lightning: The user can paralyze their opponent with a single punch or kick when this affinity is channeled and makes contact with them
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- The user can only channel one affinity per turn
-The user can only channel the affinities 3 turns before needing a 2 turn cooldown using it again
-Can only be used by Goku2000 and those he allows
-Activation of necklace counts as 1 of the 3 moves per turn
NOTE TO CHECKER if you feel it's too many abilities then delete the whole fire chakra part
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±± Declined ±± Don't resubmit.
Fuuton:Takoberu de supagetti yoru (Wind Release: Spaghetti Night at Taco Bell)
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user makes a single handseal and focuses small pockets of wind chakra into the earth all around the opponent. They then release the wind chakra upwards towards the opponent, making a shower of small sharp stones hit the opponent and damage him. The stones are sharpened by the wind and move fast so that they cause 1 inch stab like wounds in the places they impact. The shower continues as long as the user is making the handseal they used to activate the jutsu.
-Can only be used 4 times per battle
- Can only be taught by Goku2000
-can only be used once per turn
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±± Declined ±± Remove the part i colored and make it clear that the speed is still quite trackable.
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